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Teaching Her A Lesson, Part 21 (Patreon)

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2020-09-10 14:50:42
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And as promised, a little something to tide y'all over while I'm away on vacay. I'll be back home next Monday and getting to work on part 22, but for now, here's this, and enjoy! More to come.

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WDB

GODDAMMIT YOU NEED TO TELL ME AHEAD OF TIME IF THESE ARE GOING TO STRESS ME OUT

WDB

Whoof! That ending! I'm very excited to see how/if/with-how-many-new-mind-controlled-victims Canon escapes this. It's a really fun chapter up until that cliffhanger, too. I like how... I don't know, *poorly* things are going for Canon? For a guy with a half-dozen (and counting) mind-controlled sex slaves? It's funny, how the unique pressure of juggling all of these women with their weird compulsions has created a reality where Canon can't even get a good night's sleep. Real interesting tone for the chapter. Great work!

Sagesse

Hah! You gave us that ending on purpose knowing you'd be on vacation. Damn you for your cliffhanger! :)

Ferrum1

Can't say I'm surprised by the ending. Throughout the entire story, Canon has been the quintessential bitch, taking no control of anything, really. As a teacher and a grown adult, he should have known what would happen with a bunch of idiotic teen girls trying to get sexy with him in such a public place like the school. Did he put the hammer down on that kind of behavior? Nope. He just hoped that nobody would walk in on something.... and hope is a bad strategy. Honestly, he reminds me of the protagonist from TIOS -- bumbling, weak, always one step behind on things or clueless to what's going on. In that story, the interesting things seemed to be centered around the antagonist, including a wonderful side-story. Of course, his security guard and enslaved teacher can corner the principal and give her a dose of Serenex, but I fear that'll only lead to more of the same in the coming chapters. For not being a pussy, Canon sure is pussy-ish. Like in TIOS, it's up to the secondary character to serve as antagonist and make the tale interesting. Canon doesn't seem to be doing much at all.

Adam Safran

Well, looks like he has managed to end his own story here..

cuzimhavingagoodtime

Canon is way better than what's his name from TIOS. Canon makes bad decisions, and even more frequently overlooks potential vulnerabilities, but he does learn from his mistakes and unlike TIOS lad is capable of thinking longer term than the next 20 seconds. Unlike his counterpart, He is empirically capable of not immediately confronting enemies with no plan and acting completely suprised when this does in fact work outpoorly for him! Plus, did the girls ever spring something like this on before? As far as I remember, everyone always started fully dressed and he always locked the door.

Will Orlando

LMAO why did his friends think it was ok to post that on Instagram if they thought the girl was jail-bait? Can't wait for the next chapter. How will they get out of this? Hope its not just Abbie dosing the principal

Ferrum1

Bob, I'd say the evidence doesn't support your assertion. Canon's a grown adult working at a school..... and he never thinks that maybe the girls shouldn't be getting all sexy in the building? In what world does that make sense? The girls are routinely doing sexy stuff in the classroom, and Canon has had quite a few encounters with them either in his room or in the SRO's office. In a school setting even the suggestion of impropriety can cause serious problems, so I'd think that Canon, Isa or Candy would have brought that up somewhere along the line. It's never a good idea no matter that he has paper over his window and locks the door. You're right about the TIOS lad. I remember him getting a lot of hate during that story's run, and rightfully so. Even after a year or so, I still hate that character! :D

Ferrum1

Abby is going to spray the principal and turn her into a willing participant much like Cassie's mom. Quick, simple, effective use of the last little bit in the can. Plus, it would allow Canon and the girls a lot more opportunity to play. Honestly, it's the only way to clear the situation because without the Serenex being used, they are all in deep trouble.

cuzimhavingagoodtime

I mean all my assertion is is that Canon is better than TIOS lad! Like getting naked behind a locked door in the school is dumb, it is not as dumb as getting naked behind a not locked door, which is the thing that his harem did to really destroy him.

Carson90

I'm curious about Amy Cook- Burfield who actualy notified principal Horen , will she become another slave of Canon's harem and how she will be silenced

Ferrum1

Better maybe by a hair, but that's about it, imo. The TIOS kid was always stumped by Jordan and one step behind the girls. Canon is always stumped bested by Abby (?) and one step behind his girls. Even though he was made to "don't be a pussy", he sure isn't seen standing up for himself and ruling the roost. The Stern sisters don't seem to have any need or desire to obey any commands, and actually do things that seriously jeopardize his standing in the community -- like showing up at the bar or getting sexy in the school. I think the "it's dumb" part is really the problem. Isa, Candy and Canon should all have known better, and Isa is actually programed to keep the guy safe.... but never mentions anything about how doing stuff at school is a real threat. As the adults in the equation, you'd think that the three of them would be very aware of how dangerous doing things at the school would be, yet they seem to only ever do things at the school or at home. The scene in the bar was a refreshing change, but that kind of public outing was every bit as dangerous as doing things in the school.... and Canon just went with it. Granted, I'm likely biased because I despise the Stern sisters as characters. I was really hoping that one of them would turn out to be more like Jordan in TIOS and we'd see some interesting use of the Serenex as part of the side-stories not yet published. I would love to know what she was up to when she has the drug and no adult supervision. Just look at how a simple command turned her own sister into her subservient? That was hot and it implies that more is happening behind the scenes, or at least more COULD be happening. I'd also like to see how are poor SRO is dealing with being a cop now that she's been turned into a submissive. Does that carry over? Only apply to Canon? Does she have to obey Abby, Candy or anyone else? That relationship could have lots of fun things going on when Canon and the rest aren't around - like wearing the maid's outfit all week long or how Candy likes to participate.

Addiction

I'm also in the pro-canon camp and quite like him as a character. I think most of the issues you bring up are because we're reading a story that has some twists and turns. For the sake of the story Canon has to be Interesting to read about and leave some mystery. I also feel that Ice bear (and definitely correct me if I'm wrong) wants Canon to be likable and actually a good teacher dragged into stuff. These two bits collide and create some of the issues you bring up. I'll start with likability. Canon cannot be a sex-terminator, zoning in on the primest pieces of pussy and going for it in the most efficient way possible. There are a ton of stories with these types of protagonists on the internet and there are very few where they come off as good people or doing the right thing. To try and keep the air of decency, Ice Bear has gone to great lengths to not actually have Canon as the source for the whole situation. Yes, there were moments of Grey but these were after the initial push had been made and he had a human failing. To add to this, I actually like that he didn't turn into some macho man but gives his own spin to 'don't be a pussy'. Yes, he's not pro-active and he's been taken for a ride quite a bit, but he's doing his best to contain the situation believably. That he didn't put the kibbosh on... a lot of stuff can be attributed to how full his schedule is and human failings instead of story failings. Also we get A TON of dialogue of him thinking about containing this disaster, the man's just distracted by being drowned in pussy. Then there's the part about this being interesting to read about. Ice Bear is writing this like a pulp story, with cliffhangers at the end of every chapter that make you want to read more. It takes unexpected turns and the only way to have these surprises is by having the protagonist (who is the only focal character we have) in the dark as well. This necessitates shit being done behind Canon's back and secrets being kept. I would honestly say that the believable way that things escalate is one of my favourite bits of the story as a whole. Aside from the way that Canon doesn't know, the story also glosses over things that Canon DOES know to keep us in the dark, like not mentioning the exact commands Abby had him write down immediately after his initial dosing. Out of the two methods, I vastly prefer the first method of people doing their own thing and fucking up because it shows that there is a world outside of what Canon wants and experiences and showcases the girls' personalities so well (Verisimilitude, if you will). Aside from that, every story needs obstacles and antagonists and conflict, stories without any of that get boring very fast. (for me at least, I get tired of episodic enslavement stories very fast these days unless they give me a good reason to care about the characters). The Sterns are great for this, creating conflict while still being part of the in-group. So I'd have to say I'm all in on Team Canon, honestly. What you describe as him being 'weak', I see as a feature of a good and interesting story. Though don't get me wrong, I understand if it's not your thing but I doubt the story's going to shift direction suddenly.

Addiction

To add to this, Canon's interpretation of 'not being a pussy' doesn't include 'ruling the roost'. He's not being a pussy by going for things he otherwise wouldn't think were in his power or he wouldn't dare to. The man doesn't want to be king fuck of pussy mountain, he wants these girls and women to be real people and be the best they can be. Hence why Abbie dosed people at the the party to be attentive and studious, because that's one of his big dreams. Yes, Isa and Candace should have known better and should have helped him. HOWEVER, they're not themselves anymore and their judgement and other faculaties aren't as reliable anymore after Abbie scrambled their priorities. Again, believable consequences. I think the story would honestly be boring if Canon contained the girls to the house and had total paranoia and a will of Iron. If Canon was like that, the story would have never branched out after recruiting Taylor and Abbie. He'd have had them stay indoors, away from windows and the rest of the chapter would have just been them having rendezvous in Canon's house for 5 chapters, after which they graduate. Because Iron Canon does not allow deviation and will never slip up. A boring story honestly, in my opinion.

Ferrum1

I'm curious about that "don't be a pussy" thing because you just don't see it until there's an obvious writer-insertion of it. From my perspective, it seems like the Serenex causes permanent psychological changes that are always at the forefront for the girls. For Canon, though, he comes across as very pussy-ish until he reminds himself to not be a pussy. When that happens, he becomes rather domineering, controlling, etc. That tattoo Candy got, for example, was purely because he could. Same for Isa's treatment. Maybe I'm not seeing it from the right angle. One thing's for sure, though, IB writes stories that really get the readers involved. :D

Ferrum1

Yea, she'd have to be sprayed too. Sounds like a nebby-nose busybody. The two of them fully indoctrinated and given the same type of commands as Cassie's mom.... then they start bringing other hot school girls to Abby so she can spray them with Serenex... I still don't think either Stern sister would just spray hotties to get Canon a harem. While that might fit with some of the indoctrination they received, we've seen that they can act very independently. Seems to me that Abby would definitely have used the spray to better her circumstance, even if it was more of that "I'm the boss" totalitarianism.

Addiction

If the solution is just 'more spraying' I'll be a bit dissapointed honestly. I think there might be some extra consequences to this, but we'll see what the ice bear bringeth. I do see abbie bringing him a buffet of hotties if that fit into Canon's idea of being 'his fantasy slut' though. But Abbie also absolutely used the spray for purposes she shouldn't have used them on. There's also the inevitable problem of making more serum after this runs out, which is probably nearly there after Abbie's stunt and Isa and Candace's coup.

Ice Bear

Teaser from chapter in progress, opening lines: “There’s not enough.” And that was that.

Addiction

I feel vindicated.

WDB

I think you could explain some of Canon's switches of A Pussy/Not A Pussy as down to how the command was phrased. Phrasing is absolutely crucial in an Ice Bear story, where a misused word can create a loophole that dooms a protagonist. Here, the ingrained command is I Am Not A Pussy. Okay, simple enough. It should make him not be a pussy 100% of the time, in the same ways the girls' commands seem to be motivating them. Except, how often do you think about what you're *not*? How often do you have to remind yourself you don't like mustard, or that you aren't from Canada, or that you can't drive stick shift? Probably only when you're confronted with those things. I'm not going to get that sandwich, because it has mustard on it, and I don't like mustard. That concert is happening in Toronto, but I don't live in Canada. I can't borrow my friend's car, because I don't drive stick. And so on. For Canon, it's only when he realizes he's acting like a pussy that he ends up changing his behavior. If Abbie's command had been I'm An Alpha Bad-Ass, this story probably would've had a completely different arc. Sorry I'm dredging this all up after a few days! Have not been checking in as often as I'd like!