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Teaching Her A Lesson, Part 28 (Patreon)

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2020-10-23 08:20:06
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2020-10-23 08:20:28
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Meanwhile, in posts that aren't student essays...

Here we are, Part 28. We're finally closing in to a point where I think I can see the way to the ending of THAL. (It is NOT this piece, so I don't shoot myself in the foot again with bad phrasing.) I know there is a lot of enthusiasm for additional pieces in this universe, and whether it's folks using their commission winnings or just me doing it on my own, I'm sure we're not Done done. In fact, I am sure there is way more to do with our cast, so they WILL be showing up in days to come. Anyway, for now, here's a thing.

We also have a very special treat this post. Fellow writer Somnophile, a.k.a Griz, whom you've probably seen around in some of the same spaces I occupy, did an awesome thing that he shared with us on the discord. We have, for the first time, some nifty digital imagery of most of our young cast, who should need no introduction. (If you saw his stuff on discord, this is newer and awesomer!) He's given me a few samples to work with, but so we have even more to look forward to, I'll post a couple here, and a couple more on the next post. If you're not familiar with him (or are, but want more), check out his page! Lots of good stuff over yonder. Support the good ones, yo.

Last but not least, after a little grace period, we're firming up basic expectations on discord (if you're not discordant (?), you're done with this post - go read/look!). It's pretty simple:1) Don't be a butt - no politics, no religion, no personal attacks, no spam.2) Spoiler tags are required where appropriate for 48 hours after a new story goes live. 3) Keep it in the right channel, so folks can follow and not follow as they prefer.

That's it! It's been lots of fun times so far, so keep it going.

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Red Panda Seven

Having missed ending on 28 the sun of the first 5 prime numbers If you end on 29 it's a sexy prime 30 is the product of the first 3 primes 31 is also sexy prime 36 is a great square being a product of squares as well as a perfect square. Also it's implications with rolling the dice 37 is double sexy prime being 6 from 31 and 43

skinnyrandompatron

Hoho, the Bear brings new chapters, just when i think about it :D Grandios writing and a good talk that was coming up for some time. Damn, no iam even more anxious to find out how it ends :D

Cae_sar

Welp that's certainly one artist interpretation of the four fantasy sluts...

WDB

Fantastic, fantastic chapter. The telescoped out A Wonderful Life Without Taylor sequence was cute and funny, destined to be someone's commission pick. The additional twists and clarifications (extra Serenex, why Taylor dosed Tabitha) were nice to get from Taylor's own mouth, so reined in by Serenex that we don't have to guess if she's playing us. That was, honestly, a good way to use Serenex for this chapter. I was afraid it'd be one-sided, with Canon dosing Taylor to finally get her honest feelings out, but I like it better that they're on a level playing field. The whole chapter's about establishing trust, or highlighting its absence, and that means there needs to be parity. That ending, though. Jesus! A dagger in my goddamn *heart*. It's fair, and it's honest, and it's deserved, Canon's final decision ("final" decision) to close the door on Taylor. He can't trust her. While she's somewhere between a lover and an obsession, she's not really a partner right now. But, man, that last line! That is a girl who used her words to land a fucking *knockout punch*! That is someone who can make an english teacher proud!

Ice Bear

Do bear in mind he is a writer who is, as I understand it, dabbling in some 3D art for fun. Purely fan art!

Ice Bear

I was certain there would be a term for it, but as I was in the process of researching, I thought... no freaking way our narrator would know that term. :)

WDB

As Canon is a lover of words, an instructor in language, I like to think there'll be some point in the future where he'll be like That Thing I Fantasized About Has To Have A Name and he'll Google it.

Ice Bear

I did consider whether or not Taylor could still get off after he casually dropped "multitudinous" as she neared climax. What a trooper she is.

Ferrum1

Glad Canon finally ditched the crazy, even it if was a long roundabout way of doing it. Also liked that we got to see more of Taylor's reasoning for why she chose Tabitha. That was actually pretty slick thinking. Now, the real question is what is Isa doing with Abby while she's under guard? If I had my pick of things, and I know it's totally off the wall, I'd like to see Isa give Abby some kind of command to be more dominating with her. Considering Isa's penchant for humiliation, wouldn't it be funny if she decided to humiliate herself by putting herself under Abby's thumb a little bit? Nothing major, nothing that'd get them into some weird relationship, because Isa still has a job and lover and all that. Not sure what it'd be or how it'd work, just a thought that popped into my head! Definitely looking forward to hearing more from the other folks involved. Candy and Isa stand out more than the rest because they're adults and had a relationship before this all happened. How they've transformed, and how they've dealt with it, could be a very interesting read.

WDB

I love that idea for Isa! Abbie writing "I Will Be Mean To Isa" a hundred times... very into that!

Ferrum1

Glad I'm not the only one! I wonder how it would manifest? Maybe something that gets everyone involved, basically "normalizing" the way they treat her. And encouraging them to do it more often. Maybe it's another of those "She's the boss of me" type things, ensuring that Isa is now a submisslve little bitch for Abby and know's she did it herself. A double humiliation. Maybe worse - Isa uses the term "whore" in the colloquial sense, but Abby interprets it in the literal sense and is compelled to pimp Isa out. Imagine some hot pillow talk where Isa tells her to "make me your little anal whore!" Nobody in their right mind would interpret that as anything more than spicy language to heat things up, right? Isa was so turned on at the idea of corrupting Abby, so Abby would corrupt her, that she forgot to be clear on what she wanted/meant. Abby takes it literally and Isa can't stop it because she's a submissive little bitch who gets turned on by humiliation. Even going to Candy doesn't help because she's got the fetish where she gets turned on by seeing Isa humiliated and used. The best Candy can do for them is to help keep it from Canon since "he already has so much on his plate, this can be a little secret among us girls!" I don't know what I like better, the command being simple, direct and dirty like you say..... or it being something seemingly simple, direct and dirty.... but gets misinterpreted because it wasn't worded properly. Considering Canon's an english teacher and Abby wasn't the best student, it would be hysterical if some ambiguity in the wording caused a mess of trouble. :D

WDB

Ha ha, yeah! I can see either option playing out, one where Isa's steel trap of a mind knows exactly what to do to Abbie to get what she wants... and one where her kinks and lust have her do sloppy work. I think a general "I Want To Make Officer Barbour Do Things For Me" has the right ring of something that could get Abbie to exert the control that Isa craves, while still being vague enough to have weird consequences.

Ferrum1

That'd be perfect, imo. Like you say, the wording isn't too awful, but is open enough that awful things could play out as a result. We should chip in together and get IB to write it. At least 10,000 words, maybe 50,000, so the story has plenty of room to grow! I wonder what she'd make Officer Barbour do? Would Abby prefer standing orders, or would she only the power occasionally? Would Isa get off on non-sexy commands? Would Abby have the smarts t slowly train Isa to be a slave? What will Candy do when she finds out? Will she be an enabler? Gah! Now I really want to see this story pan out!!

WDB

Huh! Tricky. So, assuming that the upgraded Serenex is all gone, I'd think it'd mostly be Abbie abusing Isa's authority for her own benefit, as well as more overt fantasy scenarios for Canon. The thing is, how does it go wrong? Because it *has* to go wrong, right? What in that phrasing would end up getting out of hand? There's the built-in safety of neither of them wanting Canon to be exposed, so things can't start off *too* crazy, but still. Maybe Abbie starts to push Isa around 24/7, living at her house?

Ferrum1

There's no reason to assume the Serenex is gone. Remember, IB revealed that Abby/Taylor had a can all of their own. The original can was depleted by Abby/Taylor/Canon using it on everyone, but that second can just showed up in the final showdown. Plus, there was the comment that "Officer Barbour has connections" and provided the second can. If she could get a second can.... she could get a third can, and a fourth can.... Maybe she got a can for herself just for emergency use in case she had to clean up some more of Canon's mess. Maybe she was able to score a sixpack of cans that were in evidence, or found during a raid at a frat party? At the very least, we know that the second can exists and it could be almost full. Or, it could be nearly empty -- which implies that it's been used on a lot of people. We still haven't seen exactly what Abby/Taylor did with Canon's can while they had it. We know they used it up. We know they drugged their parents and the dick-suckiing guy, but that doesn't seem like much when you consider they used almost the whole can. I can't help but thinking that the one reason Abby and Taylor aren't too worried about flunking out of school is because they know they've set up their lives pretty good with that Serenex. If they were smart enough to use it on their parents, you have to believe they used it elsewhere and likely have dozens of slaves willing to do their bidding. What does Abby do to Isa? What does Isa implant into Abby so Abby does stuff to her? Really hard to say. Part of me wants it to be an inadvertent command, a misunderstanding because of poor word choice. How any of it manifests, though, is up in the air. What could Abby do and not cause a ton of problems? If she still sees herself as needing to be a fantasy slut for Canon, she'd have to be careful that what she does to Isa doesn't conflict with that. She saw how it ruined Taylor's chances and doesn't want a repeat of that. I could see Abby wanting to establish herself as the queen of the harem, to make sure every other chic knows who is in charge. Tabitha has already shown us that the 'obedience' command is there, but is it obedience to Taylor, or is Abby really pulling the strings? Won't all of them have had that implanted after their second dosing? Maybe Taylor was the one who was more frantic and short-sighted, but Abby is a thinker and sees the long-term potential. She wasn't expecting to get dosed with the stuff, but once she was.... it gives her the idea to set things up to her benefit. When Isa gives her whatever commands, it's like a gift from heaven, putting Isa into her hands completely blame-free! That would be quite beneficial if Canon finds out about it because she can honestly say she doesn't have any choice in the matter and must make Isa do tons of naughty things because of the Serenex! I could see her telling Isa to dose all the other girls so they are all on the same page, happy to spank Isa when she's bad, or otherwise dominate her. Of course, Abby uses that second/third dosing to add some commands of her own, putting herself firmly in charge. How it goes wrong, though? Ugh! So many ways, and most of them delicious, I'm sure!

WDB

"The original can was depleted by Abby/Taylor/Canon using it on everyone, but that second can just showed up in the final showdown. " Sure, but the second can is just garden-variety Serenex, not the Super Serenex that Canon had. (Folks on the Discord have started referring to Canon's special batch as "Deus Serenex". Also, you should drop in on the Discord! Tons of discussion going on there!) With it being the normal kind, while they can always get more, it only pacifies people. Canon's was the only kind that could input commands, and he sprayed the last of it on those brats.

Ferrum1

Hmmm, I didn't catch that part. Still, that still leaves a ton of room available for mischief because we have no idea what Abby/Taylor got up to when they had the Good Stuff. I could see them having dosed dozens of kids at school with an "Obey Me!" command. Even if it was an "Obey Taylor" command, it'd be pretty easy for Abby to get around that much like Tabitha has been able to wheedle info out of Candy by suggesting something is for "Canon's plan". It looks like Tabitha has been doing more than just getting little nuggets of info here and there, but we haven't seen much more than that. Abby, forced by the Dues Serenex and Isa's implanted command to be more dominating towards Isa, could use those implanted "Obey Taylor" commands to basically put Isa in all kinds of situations. One idea, that came to me in a vision ;-) , was for Abby to collect a handful of guys and tell them that Isa was now their 'trick of the week'. Each guy got a day where he could get a blowjob or screw from Isa for $5. Worded right, the secrecy would be assured because they were obeying Taylor by keeping it to themselves. How could it go wrong? Well, what if Abby tells Isa that she's arranged for her to get a few tricks, explaining that a random guy would give her $5 for a hole and she was expected to perform accordingly. Abby knows that it's only a select few guys, but Isa doesn't know that because Abby thinks it'll be hotter that way. Isa will be super-humiliated if she thinks she's being passed around to some random guys! One day, for some reason, a guy outside the group hands her $5 and Isa reacts automatically without thinking about it..... Or, things go fine, but Isa gets so used to turning those tricks that she kind of stops thinking about it clearly. When some ass makes a wisecrack about her sucking him off, maybe a career tough guy who isn't afraid of the law, and she makes an unthinking comeback like, "Well if you had $5!" Or, it could be that someone sees the transaction take place and gets curious.... Back to the Deus Serenex, I still have a hard time believing that Isa didn't dose her friend at the lab. Being that protecting Canon was a high priority for her at the time, making sure her friend at the lab couldn't spill the beans in any way would seem rather prudent of her. Maybe that when things do go sideways with whatever... Isa admits what she did. At the time, she was the only person she could trust with the stuff because she hadn't been further corrupted, and she had to be sure this never got out. Everyone could trust Isa to be an upstanding member of the community, after all. Needing to clean up a mess or three, they have the lab chick try making a new batch of The Good Stuff because that's the only solution they can come up with. Canon hates seeing more people enslaved, but what choice does he have? As long as he makes the commands simple and basic, like not talking about what happened or ignoring that it happened, it's not like it'd really enslave the person, right? ;) Or what if Canon's not involved in this side-story at all? What if everything is kept secret from him because nobody wants to worry him further? Or what if the story is told in such a way that it happens when he's not around, and nobody thinks to bring it up when he is around? It could flow seamlessly with the rest of the story because there's a ton of stuff happening in the girls' lives that isn't mentioned in the story. Knowing how aggravated Canon is by the whole thing, the girls decide that it'll just be better for him if he doesn't know, especially since they can clean up the mess without creating more mess. Maybe Cassie actually recommends it because she remembers some article she read about the President not being told stuff about aliens so he could have Plausible Deniability in case there were ever any questions. Everyone's shocked at the good idea coming from the airhead of the group, yet they can't deny that there is some logic to it just on the off chance that Canon attracts the attention of law enforcement again. Of course, this is all predicated on us talking IB into delving into this train of thought with some more of his awesome writing!

WDB

Man, some *very* fun ideas there! I especially love Abbie talking everyone else into keeping things from Canon... but mostly as a pretext for Abbie getting to do more crazy shit. You can't put Abbie in the corner! For Isa, though, I just can't see her voluntarily dosing anyone. She seems pretty emphatically against it throughout the story, with sole exception being Possible Supervillain Canon. Her opting to bring someone under her control to protect Canon... I just can't see it?

Ferrum1

If you think about it, how hard would Abby have to work to talk everyone else into keeping things from Canon? Candy is the main concern because she's Isa's girlfriend/wife/whatever. With Abby dosed by the Bratwursts, she's "blameless" in all this and can only do what she's been programmed to do. Isa can explain things to Candy. The really curious part will be seeing how Candy's penchant for wanting Isa to be humiliated and controlled plays a part in the decision-making. To my mind, it wouldn't take much talking on Isa's part, except to convince Candy that she wasn't being replaced. Candy already wants to see Isa used and humiliated and all that, so it'd just be a matter of getting her to understand Isa's just taking it to another level and doing so of her own "free will". It could be as simple as Abby slowly increasing the dominating behavior so Candy can see it and get used to the "new normal". As the behavior is normalized and Candy sees how much Isa loves it, Candy is free to really enjoy the show just like she does when Canon uses her girl. And if there are any questions or concerns, Isa can quickly nix them by reassuring Candy. Of course, then you have to wonder if Abby wouldn't dose Candy again to make her more compliant. If the command is worded as you suggested, what could be "meaner" than making Isa complicit in furthering her naughtiness by making sure her Wife/Girlfriend is fully on board with the idea? Keeping everything from Cassie and Tabitha wouldn't be necessary. As long as they understand that this is Isa's kink and Candy approves of the relationship, what can they say? They both know what it's like to be under the influence of the Deus Serenex, so why would they complain or feel odd about it? If anything, they'd be happy to help just like they're happy to help each other do the webcam stuff. Do they keep it from Canon? Only the mess. From Canon's perspective, not much will have changed because he's used to seeing Isa used and he knows Isa gets off on it. How many times has Canon expressed shock about things when he finds out what's been going on in the lives of the harem? He's pretty much out of the loop on 99% of things unless he specifically asked about them or they came up accidentally. As such, it wouldn't be hard for him to be out of the loop again as the story focuses on the relationships between the girls. Even when the mess comes up, keeping Canon in the dark would be pretty easy because there's not necessarily any need to involve anyone besides Abby, Isa and Candy. What could Cassie and Tabitha do to help since they're basically still kids? What resources would they have that could be used to help in a clean-up effort? Not saying they can't be brought into the loop, but it's certainly not necessary. Depends on what the mess entails, I guess. Did Isa dose her lab friend? I think it's entirely possible and highly probable. At the time, Isa was dosed to see protecting Canon as a big priority. Maybe not her top priority, but certainly in the top ten. She also recognized the ramifications if this concoction got wider distribution. As a sworn law-enforcement officer, how could she not dose the lab friend to make absolutely sure there were no notes or recordings for anyone to find? How could she be sure her friend wouldn't talk to someone else about this "new party drug" she'd worked on? Even if she didn't mention Isa, she still might have had to write up a report or a paper for publication since the cocktail was unheard of in her professional experience. Isa would weigh the pros and cons, surely. And she's likely hate herself for doing it. But, I think she could have pulled the trigger just like she was willing to castrate Canon. Both are examples of her taking the law into her own hands, willing to dispense her own form of justice, because she saw it as the better option. She might not have liked doing it, but she also realized that it was necessary to protect the larger community. Plus, Isa knows she's a good person and wouldn't give her lab friend any perverted commands. It'd be easy to rationalize it. Safety, security, protecting Canon and the secret.... everything kind of points to Isa doing it. And we still haven't gotten into what Taylor is up to. This mean, vindictive, spiteful teen has control over the harem girls, maybe even Abby, and we're supposed to think she's just going to take the rejection without a fight? This is the same chic that slashed tires and keyed a paint job, but all of a sudden she's cool as a cucumber? Maybe. I don't see it, but maybe. That doesn't mean she has to be in the side story, though. I'd much rather focus on the evolving relationship between Isa and Abby. Bringing Taylor into the mix would ruin that, unless it was her that caused the problem. Maybe she deduced what Abby was up to and sent more men in to give Isa $5!! Taylor was the mastermind behind things, so it's fair to say she might have more slaves in the wings that she can use. I mean, isn't it reasonable to expect Abby and Taylor would stay in contact? They're family, after all, so maybe Abby has let slip a few things and Taylor's able to piece things together? If anyone would be happy to make a mess of things, it'd be her! If I'm being completely honest, I would laugh uproariously if Taylor figured out Isa was being "pimped" and decided to add another dozen men to her roster. Abby is completely in the dark about it, obviously. Isa just thinks this is entirely normal and just part of Abby's masterplan to embarrass her no end. They don't really talk about the specifics of the tricks she's turning, so Abby never clues in to the fact that there are more guys than there should be. It could be something as simple as Taylor seeing Isa and one of her "slave boys" coming out of a room looking flushed and unkempt. Being the curious type, Taylor catches up with her slave and interrogates him using her "Obey Taylor" command. When she gets all the details, she decides to have a little fun and get some payback by giving the particulars to all the guys she controls. She even plays it smart by working them into the normal routine so there isn't a rush on Isa. All Isa knows is that she's turning a trick-a-day, sometimes two, and having the time of her humiliated life. Because she thinks it's Abby's doing, and it works with the plan she had when she corrupted Abby further, Isa doesn't think twice about it and doesn't bother bringing it up. Abby's not paying attention to it at all because she is confident that she set it up perfectly and it's operating smoothly. She gets to enjoy Isa's embarrassment in the evenings after work, but never thinks to ask for details. Months of turning tricks could go by before anything untoward is discovered. Even then, Isa would probably be through the roof with orgasms when she realized she had screwed far more men than was originally planned and was well-known around town as a whore! The big question, then, would be whether they decide to stop it (if they can) or just let it continue since there doesn't seem to be much harm really done. Does it matter if Isa is screwing ten guys a month? If ten's not a problem, how is twenty an issue? As long as everyone's happy, right?!? :-) Again, though, not a fan of her making any appearance even if it could help the plot. I'd much rather the story be all about Abby and Isa and how they get things done.