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In which... a desperate Ellie is willing to do anything to close the deal. The toothy consequences of teenage secrets finally sinks its teeth into some teenage butts. And Shylock, smelling commercial potential, has finally found his dragon to slay. It’s shaped like a school full of children. Clearly, a clever disguise.

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What Are You Buying? Chapter 9 - Schools Are Just Early Access Sweatshops In which... a desperate Ellie is willing to do anything to close the deal. The toothy consequences of teenage secrets finally sinks its teeth into some teenage butts. And Shylock, smelling commercial potential, has finally ...

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Verity

Sweet sweet. I like this story.

RJKY

Getting a visit from the milkman gains new connotations.

Phraxius

The children yearn for the mines, but the sweat shops will do. Riley (correction: Ellie) is special, though. She's a protagonist! Exploiting her requires a delicate hand, as everyone knows playable characters are one bad day away from going full murderhobo.

Nasaguy

A protagonist? I see her as an essential character to Ellie for the backstory and thrown to the side after her value was gone. But could become one of the important characters through Shylock, all I remember her is that she joined the fireflies

Phraxius

... ah hell, I meant to write Ellie. You're right, of course. Riley may think she's important, but she lacks the je ne sais quoi of a protagonist. As such, her plot armour is severely lacking!

Chad Wiggins

Love this story and hope to see more

Phobos

I think the chapter is good—thanks. But I also feel like the story isn't progressing much— whether it's his powers or even the *The Last of Us* plot. At least he's building relationships, I suppose.

Maleficarum

So caught up. I do think you need to dial back on Shylock being campy. He has severely diverted from his chapter 1 personality especially when he first isekaid, and hes starting to not actually feel like a real person anymore. He feels more like a manifestation of capitalism. Also won’t lie the economics of the chapters with Shylock giving so many freebies or discounts outside of actual sales is coming to cross purpose with his said being a manifestation of capitalism. Hope to see some progress in either the lewd variety or Shylock actually enjoying his second life and not just being a meat puppet for mercantilism/the system, because so far I’ve not yet see him have likes or dislikes besides exploiting minors financially.

asdo

"CAPITALISM HO!" -Shylock probably

Vailiant

Just a thought, skylock has a massive card up his sleeve for the sole reason he can get modern grade building materials and tools to his buyers. In other words shylock should find government bureaucrat and get a 20 year contract to do nothing and get paid handsomely for it.