Behind the Scenes: Review Session’s older ending (Patreon)

Review Session had a different ending! It sucks! Why is Paulo so whiny! He should be having more fun with Daisy! I want their insecurities to show up more naturally rather than.. time to infodump to the audience how anxious I am. They can have this talk another time.

Also “horndog” was just a placeholder word I didn’t want to actually use in the comic.. it’s a weird word when this world has cats and dogs. A lot of rough first draft dialogue is this way. Souppy always comes in and cleans up the messes :)

This is a funny panel I screenshotted and kept. I was dozing off while sketching out this chapter.. and I guess in the midst of dozing off, I drew Paulo twice. I have no idea how it happened, I musta been REALLY sleepy. You can clearly see I drew Daisy’s body, including her tail, but then when I drew a flirty expression, I autocorrected to drawing Paulo. Silly me!