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End of Year Poll 3 (Patreon)

Published:
2023-12-29 12:00:01
Imported:
2026-06
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Poll

End of Year Poll 3

  • Yes 5
  • No 62
  • 2023-11-30
  • 67 votes
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Content

Another day, another poll.

Though this is less a poll, and more a general survey.

Do you have any specific comments or suggestions regarding my writing?

If Yes, please drop a comment

Comments

Hayobro

Keep up the good work!

Lynxarius

Some of the arcs drag on a bit to long, which aside from Mandalore, hasn't been too much of a problem for me but I have talked to some people who have dropped your stories because of it. The only other thing is I'm not a fan of game systems being changed and nerffed throughout stories, but not a huge thing since your done doing that and it was only for your first gamer story. Otherwise keep up the great work and thanks for the stories.

ForgottenRuins

One suggestion, which others have been mentioning before, is getting to the point instead of letting things drag on. But I'll give more of an explanation: For example, the recent chapter of 'A New Player'. We are at one of the biggest moments in the Star Wars history where the galaxy can be changed depending on the changes the main character has made. Yes, there are many parts to this moment but there is no denying that Darth Maul is the biggest and most important of them. Therefore, Readers can't wait to see his and the main character interact and how their battle will play out. But then you switch to the Mandalorian POV where I feel like 'she's only in it for the money but...', is being repeated far too many times. Not only that, but her POV takes up a good chunk that the main character has yet to even arrive. This can be frustrating, especially since it feels like Anime Filler episodes just to draw things out. The chapter could have ended with the main character arriving, followed by a brief and short interaction (No Words needed. Maul is one of few words in the Phantom Menace unlike his Clone Wars version self where he is too angry to continue being an assassin.) between them and Maul, and jump right to the fight the next chapter. TLDR: Exploring other viewpoints is fine but keep them brief, especially during big moments like this. The main character has the spotlight and audiences get annoyed when their eyes away from him for too long.

Your Jordan's Are Fake

I noticed in coir buaidh you sometime just rattle of large amounts of names and clans without pause, it's feels a bit excessive. While very impressive, I never know if these people are important or will become relevant and so far many aren't so I find my eyes glazing over a bit at those parts. I don't know if you should either reduce this or if they are relevant later try and distinguish the important names from the extras. Just a suggestion, keep up the good work!

Austin lloyd

I wrote a long comment for the last chapter you released of ANPIF. Something I’d like to add is that Cam now going all out from the beginning as he later admits is out of character for him. He thinks to himself how he should have used more of his Mandalorian gear earlier in the fight. But I think it is obvious that he could have and should have used multiple items/tools/weapons at once. In his fight with Maul he deployed the electric chain, sound destabilizer, poison gas, and flame thrower at various points in the battle. If he used his other tools when Maul was being shocked it would have been the ideal time to capitalize on his momentary weakness. He also did not use any force abilities!!! Why no lightening? Or throwing objects at Maul from behind. His Meteclorian count is supposed to be unrivaled.

Austin lloyd

I’m loving the story though! Just mentioning the parts of the story I think could be improved . Overall your writing has been phenomenal!

Tyler

I absolutely love your writing and frankly my only problem is that i would have loved to see some of those smut scenes you mentioned actually written out, even if they had to be posted as a different story or patreon only. I feel your writing style would really suit it well. Hell I'd pay another few dollars a month for it lol.