Chapter 7 - page 016 (Patreon)

Now we've caught up to the conversation Edith heard coming in! It's been very interesting to see everyone's takes on Set and Nebet-het's argument. I wrote this scene with the idea of 'Nebet-het is unaware of Set's growth and desire to change, but even if she were, she would be unable to see it through the hurt he caused and the hurt inflicted up on her because of his actions. Yes, she was unfaithful, but he all but drove her into someone else's arms. And Set isn't able to verbalize to her his desire to change because... being confronted with the person who paid heavily for his actions, does it matter if he wants to change? The hurt still happened. How does he make up for it, let alone apologize for it?'This chapter, I'll flesh out HOW Nebet-het has paid for Set's actions more, and how Aset's control over the family grew in his absence, and what the control looks like.