EXORCISM pitch redo (Patreon)

Another project! I'm working with an editor on redoing my old EXORCISM gn pitch! This is something I've been trying to get off the ground for years, with a few different editors from different publishers. All of them eventually passed on it- until January when one actually sent notes back on how to fix the story!So the story got an overhaul- still same core idea and important characters- in order to make it stronger. This editor is actually also a big horror fan, so I really appreciated her feedback!An important note: nothing has been greenlit and no contracts have been signed, so this is NOT a done deal. All that's really happened is the editor likes the story and wants to take it to acquisitions- which I imagine will be where we get final say.She offered to take the pitch as is, but I volunteered to redo the sample pages- since it's been five years and this opening is now a little different in the story. This is page 1 of 6 (and I still plan to tone it!)