EXORCISM pitch redo page 2 (Patreon)

I'm still really happy with how those old pages came out. And it's not that I like them less than the new pitch pages- I'm just trying to execute something different.You can see the house is still very much the same. In this second page and when you see the third page- you can tell I'm trying to keep the layout of the room and mess consistent. There's a lot of garbage to keep track of and it needs to stay in the same place in every panel!Again, this is not what the final page will look like! I added in some quick tones just to differentiate Anna and the background elements.