Ties That Bind - Page 11 - More Sound Alts (Patreon)

Here we go, just for you higher-tiered heroes! <3

I put in SEVERAL hours into all this Sound effect work ultimately deciding to remove it all and keep the page sparser - it helps the dialogue and moments land more solidly. STILL, I think some of it's fun, and that some of you might get a kick out of seeing some of it!

I've attached the page I went with. The MUCH louder version with Judy making all kinds of sexy noises, followed by a middle-ground version that I almost went with.

I think about visual flow a LOT; where your eye as a comic reader naturally wants to go next. I think it's a really important thing to design around. The worst moments in comics are when your eye is accidentally led to skip a panel or avoid a face, or made to dart back and forth because it doesn't know where to go. Those sorts of moments break the immersion, and heck when you've got a Bull who's delivering his monologue at you - you gotta stay in the moment otherwise it all crumbles apart!

While I loved giving Judy some sexy noises and fun, I decided it was at the detriment of the flow, too much for our eyes to look at, too many places for the eye to go to! And I opted to keep the scene quiter!

Hope you all have a lovely weekend! I'm gonna sit under trees and do NOTHING for the first time in an age. Hopefully, I can remember how to rest ;D

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