Faith, Draft 1, 1 5, outline, CH 18 (Patreon)

Faith in the Family, Commentary, CH 18

And Thomas escalates.

Nothing much to say about the chapter itself, Ben barely felt the need to make changes.

But I’m realizing that we’re 18 chapters in and nothing really ‘magical’ has happened. There’s a reason for that in both mine and Ben’s head, but I am starting to wonder if playing coy with what’s going on helps the story. After all, the book is for people who have already read the previous series. The only person that needs to be kept in the dark is Thomas, not the readers and we have a way to ensure that happens even if Thomas walks in on the magic, soo…

So that’s it on the comments, I hope you enjoy the file