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Tutorial.

Truthfully, Miranda couldn’t say she had performed that well in hers. In fact, no one had. Her Tutorial had been, in general, downright average, with no real standouts. The most impressive person had probably been Hank, with his construction experience.

Seeing as her Tutorial had effectively been a base-defense kind of deal, his skills had come in handy to make sure they could hold on and handle the waves of monsters coming to try to kill them. Miranda had never tried to go beyond their starting area or explore the entire Tutorial area, or anything like that. She had just wanted to survive alongside Hank and his family.

Entering the Tutorial the second time around, things were very different for several reasons. Miranda never read much of the story trope herself, but she believed this was effectively what people called a regression, and with that came many inherent advantages, such as knowing the future and entering with all the experience she’d gained the first time around.

This was probably even more overpowered than a mere regression, since she only had to do the Tutorial. Though there was one slight complication: the goal.

Administrator Test has commenced. Stage one: the Tutorial.

Objective: Clear the Tutorial within thirty (30) days. All experience gained is doubled. Class, profession, and skill selection set based on prior choices made.

The original Tutorial had a duration of 63 days, give or take. Now, they had only half that, but with experience doubled, which should make up for much of the lost time. In addition, Miranda had one other huge advantage: four assistants who had entered the Tutorial with her that weren’t there initially.

Experiencing the Tutorial all over again was weird, to say the least. Miranda had spawned in the same place as the first time, surrounded by familiar faces, some of whom were now dead. They all acted so real, probably because this simulated reality was as real as it could get.

It didn’t take long for Miranda to purposefully dissociate these simulacra and not engage with them, but instead focus solely on completing her task as quickly as possible to pass this stage of the test. She didn’t want to think too much or risk getting any kind of emotional connections with people who would effectively stop existing within a month.

Immediately, several methods were available to clear the Tutorial. One was to make use of the other Tutorial Attendees. They also all got twice the experience gain, and what’s more, it was confirmed that they could all pick different classes and professions, meaning if Miranda was skilled at guiding them towards specific Paths, she could likely have ended up with quite the competent helpers.

But again, Miranda didn’t choose this method; she instead relied solely on her four allies. Well, mostly three of them for the majority of it, seeing as one of them wasn’t that helpful in the beginning. She still fondly recalled witnessing the grand Northpeak Wyvern immediately after entering the Tutorial, as she found herself with three other humanoids... and a small lizard. A iguana, to be precise.

Yeah, definitely not the most useful in the beginning, but he grew up pretty quickly, and at least he had retained his full mental capabilities despite turning into a state where he originally didn’t have any real sapience. As a monster, he also had some innate advantages, such as Tutorial creatures in general not attacking him, meaning he could serve as a scout and find the objectives beyond defending the starting base.

Her decision not to include the original Tutorial Attendees was likely wasteful and suboptimal, but Miranda felt too weird about using them. They felt too real, so with mainly herself, Lillian, William, and Holstred, she ventured away from the safety of the base with their little iguana friend serving as a scout.

Miranda hadn’t been strong at all during the Tutorial the first time around. While she was definitely better now, she realized how much she still sucked. As a basic caster, she had no way to pull off any of her witch magic, which was all she’d trained in, making her incredibly useless.

Lillian was a bit better, but the magic she had trained in was also less than optimal. Lucenti magic was also inherently mystical in nature, and she didn’t have the ability to pull anything impressive off either. Sure, if they had been this “talented” in their original Tutorials, they would have been prodigies, but they certainly weren’t with the current company they were keeping.

Holstred was honestly a beast. Perhaps due to his servile demeanor, she’d forgotten that he was a genius of his own planet during his Tutorial. Now, with all the experience of a B-grade, he surpassed the classification of merely being a genius and became a true master who easily cleaved down all the monsters that dared come near. Yet, despite his extreme level of skill, he ended up spending most of the simulated Tutorial defending Miranda and Lillian. Not even because they needed a defender that badly, but due to their final party member.

Miranda had kind of started to think that casters were just disadvantaged in this kind of regression scenario compared to those relying on martial skills. To pull off complex magic, one needed the required mana and a certain level of mana detection, something that simply came with levels and evolutions. Meanwhile, being good with a weapon was being good with a weapon.

However, William shut down that assumption entirely.

If Holstred was a master swordsman, William was a force of nature. Miranda and Lillian were both decently skilled casters, but they hadn’t been anywhere near geniuses initially. William, on the other hand, had always been a prodigy when it came to mana control, and now, with his experience as a B-grade, he could have easily completed this entire first stage of the Administrator Test on his own.

William didn’t look very happy about the situation at all, though. Miranda knew his history, and it was clear that being back in a Tutorial didn’t bring back any happy memories. He was quiet and just seemed like he wanted to get out of there as quickly as possible, which he certainly worked hard to accomplish.

In the end, it took them twenty-five days out of the thirty to reach the D-grade boss of the Tutorial, though they could have definitely been faster if Miranda hadn’t insisted on ensuring they wouldn’t lose anyone in the final fight. By that point, all of them were around level 60 to 70, with Holstred at level 70 and William at level 75, as he had been the one doing most of the killing. Jake had been around level 65 when he fought the King of the Forest back in his Tutorial, and Miranda had wanted them to at least surpass that.

Something that really turned out to be unnecessary.

Miranda’s Tutorial was not like Jake’s. Its overall difficulty was far inferior, and the last boss was so much weaker it was almost comical. The grand confrontation with the mighty D-grade ended up lasting just shy of thirty seconds, with William and Holstred absolutely slaughtering the poor boss.

With that, the first part of the Administrator Test was passed, though Miranda remained unsure what they were being tested on. It had seemed way too easy to simply complete the simulated Tutorial, but perhaps that was only because of having the assistants she’d chosen.

After the first test was done, the five found themselves back in the Seat of the Exalted Prima once more, with one of them especially happy to have returned.

“Truly a horrendous experience,” the wyvern said, shaking his head as he stretched, now back in his humanoid form. “I only had memories of my time with such a form, so truly experiencing it myself was familiar, yet it also felt like I wasn’t in my own body.”

“I do wonder how this testing stage works with other monsters, especially those who were born naturally at a higher stage,” Miranda said, having considered this throughout the Tutorial. What if she had brought someone like Vesperia, who had been born as a C-grade? Wait... what if Jake had been able to participate in this system event and brought along the Forest King? Would there have been two of the same Unique Lifeforms? What if the Forest King himself had been an Administrator Candidate? Things could have quickly gotten trippy. Then again, chances were they simply wouldn’t have entered a “real” Tutorial but something else entirely.

“In my opinion, we were lucky with the challenge we faced,” Holstred said. “The difficulty was low due to the below-average judged potential by the system during that Tutorial. Mine was far harder. Ah, I naturally meant no offense; I was merely making an observation.”

The knight was incredibly apologetic, but Miranda waved him off. “None taken. My Tutorial was indeed on the easier side, and I wasn’t increasing the average much, if at all, since I wasn’t the most competent back then. Still not the best, but I’ve gotten better.”

She looked over at William and wanted to say something, but he still looked a bit in his own world, having definitely had to confront a lot of internal struggles during the test. He would definitely need another session with that psychologist woman he sometimes visited.

Regarding the next stage of this Administrator Test, it would begin when the original thirty days for the first test expired, meaning they had a few days to spend inside the Seat of the Exalted Prima. They were entirely sealed off within, unable to contact anyone, including their gods, but that didn’t mean they were bored.

Spending three and a half weeks going from level 0 to closing in on D-grade had been an incredibly valuable experience that was almost like a reward in itself. Losing all their skills and being able to experiment without relying on them had given them newfound inspiration to improve their current abilities, really showing the value of a simulation like this.

It was no doubt all the top factions wanted it, if this was just a taste of what it could do.

The days thus passed as they all practiced and discussed strategy for the next Administrator Test, and when it was time to start the next stage, they once more went onto the platform that sent them into the simulated world.

During their discussions, the general consensus was that the next test would likely focus on the time immediately after the Tutorial. That seemed like the logical next step.

Oh, how wrong they were.

--

Being what was effectively a diplomatic prisoner was definitely a new and novel scenario that Jake hadn’t thought he would ever see himself experience. Mainly because he was the kind of person who would rather try to kill anything and everyone rather than be taken prisoner.

Yet he’d agreed to the Arachnec’s “demand” to follow him back to the Nest. The likely reason Jake wasn’t hating the situation was that the undead spider had been awfully polite when inviting him, not really making Jake feel like he was being forced along.

Which, technically, he wasn’t. Jake could try to run at any time, and he was still fairly confident he could succeed should he attempt a daring escape. At least for now. When he got to the Nest, where he reckoned there was bound to be at least one A-grade, he wasn’t as confident.

It was definitely risky, but Jake was also incredibly curious to learn more about the Arachnecs and see this Nest, so he followed along willingly. To be clear, he was still very much friends with the Venusians. They were his frog pals, and no undead spiders were going to come between them.

“I find it hard to determine whether the level displayed upon using Identify on you is accurate or not,” the Archweaver said, speaking for the first time after they’d already been flying for more than ten minutes, with Jake following after the Arachnec.

“Why?” Jake asked, though he already had a good idea, but he would prefer for the Arachnec to spell it out.

“Your speed. Evidently, the Venusians were slowing you down before. I had initially judged you to be the weakest link in that group, but it appears not,” the high-tier B-grade said.

“I’ll take that as a compliment, and for the record, my level displayed is very much accurate,” Jake said, once more being totally okay with all the natives of this world getting the impression that humans were all some incredibly powerful creatures.

“Are all humans as powerful as you, or are you a variant of some form?”

Jake took a moment to consider how honest he wanted to be before eventually just giving the same spiel he’d given the Shaman when he’d asked the exact same thing. Again, it wasn’t as if Jake could stop this race from ever making contact with the outside world, and they would eventually learn that humans came in many forms, pretty much all of them weaker than Jake. Technically, Jake was the only superior variant of human, so he could argue he was at the very top.

Their flight continued mainly in silence; the Archweaver was definitely less talkative than the Shaman. It did observe him carefully throughout their flight, though, as if trying to glean some secret from his body. Jake also felt the Archweaver’s magic, which significantly increased their flight speed, in addition to trying to subtly probe him, but it didn’t achieve much.

Jake mostly ignored the undead spider's attempts, thinking that if the undead spider wanted to know anything, it could bloody well just ask. Jake took this time to get a proper look as they got further into Arachnec territory, flying directly for the Nest. At least Jake thought they did, but soon something else caught his attention.

In the distance, something felt off. They were heading for an empty area, but when Jake looked there, something told him what he saw wasn’t entirely right. Narrowing his eyes, Jake also activated Sight of the Boundless Horizon, and when he did, his vision shifted, allowing him to see the truth.

A mountain, or perhaps a large hill, appeared, made entirely of bone, stitched flesh, and webbing. Except at its top, where a familiar-looking worm-like growth sprouted up, with a far larger than average eye at its end. This worm moved around erratically, looking in different directions, but the moment Jake focused on it, it spun around and stared directly at him as Jake used Identify.

[Arachnec Guardian Monitor – lvl 499]

Peak B-grade, though even from this distance, the creature didn’t strike him as more powerful than the Archweaver. In fact, it felt significantly weaker. Still far stronger than Jake with its massive level advantage, but definitely a far easier target if Jake had to somehow try to take it down.

“Your Perception rivals or surpasses that of Monitors many levels beyond your own,” the Archweaver said, having realized Jake saw through the illusion. “That, or you have skills allowing you to peer through illusions. Likely a combination of both.”

“I do like Perception,” Jake said, deciding not to accurately state that Perception was indeed the best stat, as he honestly didn’t want to get into that kind of discussion right now with the bone mound so close.

“Like? A statement implying stat allocation is partly by choice for your race. Interesting,” the Archweaver said, definitely getting more out of Jake’s words than he intended to reveal. He’d kind of forgotten that a lot of monsters had little to no Free Points given, but had all their stats automatically allocated upon gaining levels.

“What is this place?” Jake asked, changing the topic as he looked at their destination. “It’s not a Nest, that I can tell.”

“It is not,” the Archweaver confirmed. “This is what we refer to as a Tunnel Mound. If you are familiar with the Venusians, it functions similarly to the teleportation network they’ve set up between villages, though on a smaller scale. All of them connect to the Nest.”

Jake nodded, also suddenly understanding how these Arachnecs could claim such large territories. Assuming all of their kin were spawned in these Nests, it would take a long time for them to travel to outer territories, but if they had these weird things that were effectively long-range teleporters.

Based on how Jake saw Arachnecs streaming out of the Tunnel Mound, it looked like they were trying to replenish the losses from Jake’s hunt. That, or they just always had this much of a run on their teleporters.

“Aren’t they a safety hazard?” Jake asked, looking at the structure – a term he used very loosely. “What if the Venusians claim one of these Tunnel Mounds?”

“It would achieve nothing but waste the resources of creating one. The Tunnel Mound is like a limb of the Nest, relying on its will to operate. It can be cut off at any moment, rendering it useless,” the Archweaver answered, looking at Jake. “Despite having hunted my kin alongside the Venusians, you seem wholly ignorant about many things. Did they not share this knowledge with you? Curious why they didn’t.”

Jake ignored the Arachnecs clear intent to sow discord as they approached the Tunnel Mound. There were undead spiders everywhere, hundreds of them staring at him, but none moved towards him. He guessed it was due to the magic the Archweaver was using on him, which seemed to not only increase his speed but also make the other undead recognize him as one of their own.

Landing in front of the large Tunnel Mound, they entered a cave leading to its insides, which were quite nasty to say it nicely. Definitely not the kind of place for those faint of heart.

The Nest is definitely not going to be better, is it? he asked himself as they walked toward a dark pit in the center of the Tunnel Mound with undead spiders already crawling out of it.

Comments

C0bra$

Thank u for the story

Misa

Tftc

Rahsheem Reid

This whole trip is nightmare fuel.

Gracie

tftc

ButterflEye

There going to have to go to each party member’s tutorial meaning they have to fight Jake is my best guess

David Vieira

So each party member tutorial? Miranda was definitely the most chill, We know Holstred was hard. Lilian had Donald and Abby making everyone a living hell, the Wyvern might be excluded, and William was the hardest. That said William itself was what made it so deadly. Problem is they have to fight the King of the Forest.

Bluejay

Thanks for the chapter

David Vieira

Only reason William fought Jake was because he killed everyone. If they take care of Richard, and gather everyone, the tutorial is not so bad. They still have to defeat the 4 dungeons and then the King of the forest

ButterflEye

But a depiction of Jake gains his instincts which means he’ll go off script plus most tutorials don’t have active interference of gods his has 3 more times to go off script but they have 3 more tutorials to plan since i imagine they go in order of difficulty

ButterflEye

But imagine the character development we get with William from it

Loststar7

Thanks for the chapter and happy Friday the 13th everyone. I thought the North Peak Wyvern told Jake he was an iguana not a gecko but that could just be Miranda not knowing the difference.

Samuel Nelson

I'm getting"Love, Death, and Robot" vibes. Zogie, are you good? Thanks for the chapter!

ButterflEye

Oh god I just realized that would mean Jacob casper and king would to

Erebos

Can someone explain why Jake doesn't have to participate in the first phase? Is it because he's already a Prima Administrator? It would be funny to see him go into the inner zone of his tutorial with the absolute minimum level, kill the four Beast Lords with a stealth attack, and then destroy the king at level 25 to 35. Like Valdema in Nevermore.

Erebos

That's right. What if all the candidates end up in the same tutorial and can disqualify each other? That would mean only one of them would advance if they're not in the same group: Jacob, Casper, William, or Jake. Even though Jake won't be participating, they'd still have to beat him and defeat the king before him. I think it would be amusing if Jake got a pop-up message in the nest: "Patriarch Update. Your simulated self has managed to reclaim his patriarch title. Your simulated self has surpassed the other candidates, even though you didn't actively participate. Your records are too powerful," etc.

Mateo Lopez

I definitely remember the wyvern being an iguana. I’ll just write it off as Miranda not knowing her lizards.

Clint

And deal with a sim Jake…

JJB4345_80_815

Yes, thank you for the chappy Zogarth!

definitelynotbrjenness

I suspect it might be us deciding he was an iguana from the description. Or maybe zog goofed or is giving those that like correcting him a chance to earn an emotional cookie.

ButterflEye

Just Jake wins something he wasn’t even in lmao

definitelynotbrjenness

Who was valdema? Oh nevermind. Valdemar. Why doesn't that look right? Valdimar? That doesn't look right either. Meh, doesn't matter. Cocky guy with an axe. I assume that's who you mean.

ButterflEye

Also do u think the king is competing under the pantheon of life for tree mom as a sorta payment for the body?

definitelynotbrjenness

I like my theory of Goldie teaming with the united tribes and having been working with them to gain control over beast planets in the galaxy in order to bring unity, organization, and opportunity to the beasts there. I'm sure zog will rewrite entire chapters in order to keep one of my brilliant predictions from coming true.

Xerecs

Because he already meets the requirements for the next stage of the event.

Vega

Thanks for the chapter! As a bit of a suggested edit for the sake of continuity, I recall the Wyvern as having been evolved from an iguana, instead of a gecko.

David Vieira

Only reason he fought Jake in the first place was because William killed everyone and Richard was manipulating the people to fight.

Gary Becker

basically undead sandy lol

Gary Becker

Or an undead whip scorpion (spider scorpion thing from harry potter and the goblet of fire)

Atoms88

I think Jacob would have it easiest. He is Jake's boss, so just lean on that and guide Jake to victory.

Arieh Sochaczevski

Thanks for the chapter! I was hoping he’d make friends, but when I started imagining that tunnel… I’m not so sure anymore.

Arieh Sochaczevski

Yeah. This stage of the event is for anyone without the administrator candidate title already to catch up.

definitelynotbrjenness

Lol...if I was zog and everybody was right about it being an iguana, I would be tempted to edit the earlier description and then come here and say, "nope. It said lizard."

Damascus (edited)

Comment edits

2026-09-05 04:00 Not one to complain but I was hoping for a bigger tutorial regression arc that stretched for a couple of chapters. Would have been cool.
2026-02-13 11:46

John Durrett

Its the stitching of flesh together over bones - Maldraxus?

John Durrett

Hmmm... a gecko that is intelligent, is a terrific scout and wants to be an Administrator...sounds like the Evolution of Geiko! Will find you the best insurance deals on the planet or the MultiVerse!

Goa

Tftc. It seems you have the nordic classic of confusing safety with security.

definitelynotbrjenness

Expand. Nordic makes me picture giant men jumping off ships and charging into larger armies to whip their asses. Not arguing, just never heard that statement before. Dammit, now you'll have my mind running in circles all day thinking about the concepts of safety and security.

Xerecs

Would be nice to get some full chapters focused on the event instead of split half chapters.

definitelynotbrjenness

Funny to me Jake realizing he's struggling to level as fast as his close friends because of his buddy boost ability.

Misa

It has also only been a bit over a month on Jake’s side, I think

Daniel

Geico should sponsor this chapter.

Siethrobo

2 Cliffs in one chapter? It must be Friday

David

Undead Candiru Fish (look it up if you don't know). Speaking as a dude....that's just freaking terrifying!!!

ZMVPJ

I really hope they go into each of the tutorials of the people miranda has brought

KenTX325

I thought he was originally an iguana. But maybe level 1 means gecko.

Levi Lowry

To answer your question yes it’s because Jake is already and administrator. This first phase is only testing candidates to see if they can then move forward to try and become the galactic administrator for the Seat of the exalted Prima

Xander

TFTC :) Not arguing in the slightest about the "in Venus" thing. I think its just the fact that the word is Venus. If it was phrased "in this minor world" it wouldnt seem odd. Similarly if it was phrased "mission in Earth" it would sound odd. Quirk of my brain i guess. I though the Wyvern evolved from an Iguana? Oh and my call for the next part of mirandas trial is "The Treasure Hunt" :) Hopefully she doesnt pussy out this time and gets stuck in to the head vampire. Have a great weekend all and I'll see you bright and early on Monday :) Suggested edits: "tried to go *beyond their starting area* and *had not tried to explore the entire Tutorial area* " Redundant. Both of these mean pretty much the same thing. Suggest dropping everything after "starting area" and putting "even" before tried just to clear it up a little. "Miranda never read any of the genre herself, " no clue what this is supposed to mean. Sorry if im missing something obvious. "ended up with quite the competent ** helpers." probably just me again but missing words "group of" " Still *isn’t*, but I’ve gotten better" Because Miranda is refering to herself this should be "don't" "Mostly ** ignored the undead spider’s attempts" missing word "Jake" "it functions similarly to *their* teleportation" i think this should be "the"

Sean

Hey at least it isn’t a water level with mushrooms…

djthomp

I wonder what this experience would be for an Administrator Candidate that didn't have a tutorial at all. There's got to be plenty of them across the universe that either had the monster style experience with the integration or came into being one way or another after it. If the common guess is right that they're doing each participant's in sequence maybe we'll see when they get to the lizard.

Quantainium C

It would probably be a king of the hill type event for some sort of natural resource.

beeve

Thought we might get a little more on Jake today but that’s okay

Yiskah

Zogarth: "“Like? A statement inferring stat allocation is partly by choice for your race" Infer is something the listner does. (Gleem information reading between the lines) Imply is what the speaker does. (Offer info between the lines not outright stated). So you sentence ought to be: “Like? A statement which implies stat allocation is partly by choice for your race" Or “Like? A statement from which I can infer that stat allocation is partly by choice for your race" Except both of those sound clunky and you should write something better.

Kyle

Having to race against jake in his own tutorial would be funny

CallHimDan

Doublecliff, fantastic

beeve

Journey before destination

zran

i think they will do like 2 or 3 tutorials max, since they spended 30 days(forced since ending early does not means they will move to the next early) out of 100 ...that is assuming they have 30 days per test

Devin Trero

If I remember correctly, didn't the wyvern say it started as an iguana?

Narvendel

Any clunk may be intentional as these creatures likely do not benefit from social aptitude and have an alien (likely Zerg-like from what I've seen) mentality from humans

djthomp

It's a World Wonder so there may be time compression running, a hundred days might not be the limit inside.

zran

could be funnier if that tutorial was the "intended" one by fate, where jake dies early and william kills everyone, except they use it as a rehab for william to allow him to face his past psycho self

zran

i think zog does not do it since he never really expanded much on everyonelse combat skills outside of a select few,like, we do not know how miranda "fought" on her tutorial

zran

to expand a bit on why jake is a full on administrator, is because on the previous event, the system found jake(and a few others like certain orange f) worth to be upgraded into full administrator

Mrburns93

Does anyone else find it suspicious that jakes bloodline and Jake juice is about seeking the origin while at the same time the world wonder is about seeking the origin as well? We've seen a few of these simulations now and they all seem to focus on going back to the beginning. The origin of a choice, the origin of one's time in the system. It seems well aligned to Jake. Is that just coincidence or is the system attempting to use Jake to find something. Also I believe the "faction" that attempted to kidnap Jake in the void may have been the system. The system takes the souls of the dead to recycle right? And it was confirmed dead god who attacked. And what ever force behind the kidnapping attempt can hide even from primordials? It may not even be the system but a church that worships the system like the primordial church but for the system. Imagine the weird skills they would get. Also I am extremely excited for this regression to jakes tutorial. I hope its like yelsten in how long it is

zran

i dont think they have to deal with sim jake at all, they just need to not piss him off and all is fine, even without william on a murder spree, you still had those two factions on war due to the a leader is born quest, that could definitelly consume most of their time on that tutorial

Joken

Will the world wonder let you simulate other life experiences as well? First they got to experience why would have happened if there life before the integration would have taken a different path and how that would have changed their integration. Jake got his other Jake out of that experience. Now for the administration question, some people get to relive their tutorial. What do you think would happen, if Jake and the others would get the chance to relive their nevermore experience? And get benefits and improvements out of it?

Xander

Not sure whats to be gained from that since they have gone from 0 to 75 once already. Also the other 4 are for support, Miranda is the star here.

RonGAR

When in history has going down into a stinky hole improved one's outlook on things to come? LOL

Carl Never

I have a friend i send spider pictures and she throws her phone untill someone else deletes the picture i really want to read this to her

BumAssBumAss

I feel like it would've been an interesting character moment for Jake to revisit his tutorial. He doesn't ignore 'npc' characters after all. A shame

Goa

Many Nordic languages use the same word for safety and security. When Jake asks “Aren’t they a safety hazard?” it sound like he's worried about a fall hazard instead of unauthorized use.

MarineDebris

People, authors have editors for a reason. Every day, there are people commenting "fixes" for the chapter and/or story, whether corrections on word usage, or on the story itself. That said, I'm not sure if any of you read a certain author's note-maybe a year or so ago-where Zog basically told everyone that does this to shut the fuck up about what he writes or don't read his shit, but I'll save you the trouble. Stop trying to correct him. You're not his editor. This is not your story. If you want a story that caters to your OCD, write it yourself. That is all.

Fylbrom

Pipe down there Jr. Marine, there is no need to get all boogity just because the comment section isn't as 'clean' as you want. People will be people, worry about yourself. 🤣

Fylbrom

Maybe it was a geko before an iguana and just wasn't smart enough to remember? Lol or Zog forgot. But you are correct. When we first meet the Wyvern when Jake finally talks with it, yes, he describes his early system days as an iguana.

Fylbrom

Except the books have been published and recorded and released already. Hahaha

definitelynotbrjenness

I think people would realize that jake is both more monstrous and more multi-faceted then they previously believed as they fail to come close to his score. and respect for hus teammates would also increase.

Lemonsqueezy

Most of us are just trying to help, whether he uses it or not is his prerogative. Most corrections I see are grammar, spelling, and maybe word usage. Sometimes it is just to better understand the meaning of some of the things he writes. We usually have conversations about things like this. Zog even responds and thanks us for some of these suggestions we make. Zog is from Denmark and is not a native English speaker either. Yes he has an editor, but that comes in when he publishes a book, how does it hurt if we make some suggestions before that point? So take a little time before you get all bitchy about something so meaningless. In the end the comments are for us to interact with Zog and each other while reading this great story.

MarineDebris

But people are crazy! Ya can't trust most people's judgement when it comes to ordering coffee, much less trying to educate an author on his word usage. Argh! But I do get what you mean 🫡

definitelynotbrjenness

first sage has determined the time is right to rejoin the universe without dominating it too much.

Loststar7

If I remember his rant was on people telling him what to write and criticizing pacing and content. It was not people trying to help by catching misspellings, wording, and lore. It’s still my favorite authors note to date though. The general tone of if you don’t like it you can just fuck off was fantastic.

Lemonsqueezy

Eh, Jake absolutely dominated his tutorial. We would have also had a lot more chapters about this and do we really want to relive book one? Also there was already the Nevermore chapter where Jake was in a situation where he was regressed back to level 1. It seems that the chosen tutorial was based on the leader of the group (Miranda's tutorial in this case). If Jake did this it would be his tutorial which the objective was to become the leader of everyone alive in the tutorial. Which Jake would have almost immediately became because of his skills and established role, and who he would have brought with him. The chapter stated that Jake would have brought the Forest King (natural D-Grade), maybe Syphie (who was born as a D or C grade i cannot remember), Vespa (may or may not have joined), and who knows who else who were born naturally way too strong to make the tutorial even a challenge. With Jake being the only surviving member of his original tutorial it would mean that he would probably just immediately kill everyone and everything on the map as soon as it began. The Forest king alone would have made this process take a couple days max. The other option would have just been to go and immediately kill the tutorial Forest King and the 4 other champions if needed. TL;DR: I don't think it would have been a very interesting chapter for Jake to do this.

Lemonsqueezy

Eh, Nevermore is more about figuring out the goal of each level. Already having this knowledge would make it not really be a challenge. As for the World Wonder, there hasn't been any thing said about what it will do. I could be a dungeon like Nevermore, or it could be something completely different. We will not really know until Zog tells us.

MarineDebris

I'm aware, and I agree with you. I guess I should've responded to the one comment in particular that I wrote this for, because I honestly wasn't trying to have a go at everybody that makes suggestions. But the one that got me sounded like the person was treating Zog like a child that doesn't know how to use correct language. It seemed arrogant and derogatory. That said, I apologize to anyone that reads my initial comment and felt that I was directing hate your way for having an opinion. I promise I didn't mean it that way.

definitelynotbrjenness

is anybody going to mention zog's most egregious mistake? he stubbornly refuses to implement any of my brilliant ideas into the story. like having the toucan show up at the prima event.

Lemonsqueezy

I like your theory about the kidnappers being system generated. I have said before that I think that the system has been grooming Jake for something since the beginning. Jake has had a lot of events that have made him over-powered, completely unheard of, or allow him to survive in situations he shouldn't have. The bloodline that Jake has is so broken that it is hard to believe the System would allow it, unless it was specifically given to him for the purpose of some greater role the System needs done. I think the system is constrained by certain rules, and giving Jake that bloodline was a way for those rules to be bypassed or broken. The System itself couldn't break them, but it could set forth events for Jake to do so. My ultimately theory is that the System is creating a heir. It is grooming Jake to become the new System administrator. I think that The First Sage was the the first heir and he wants to retire, or maybe the System chooses one person from each universe to become part of the System itself (like a committee of members that all run the System), or maybe there are 12 members (like the 12 primordials) and each member chooses and heir when they want to retire by having a "Chosen". With Jake becoming TFS's heir/chosen, or maybe TFS is the manifestation of the System itself. It would explain why Villy said that each integration is slightly different from the previous one. New ideas and rules are integrated each cycle because the system integrated a new person. The system gave Jake this origin power to teach him the history of the multiverse and maybe reset the system back to its origins. Oooh, maybe the System wants Jake to ultimately change everyone back to what they were intended to be.

Lemonsqueezy

At least it wasn't a cliffhanger that made us all calling him an asshole lol. I think this one was a good end of the week cliffhanger.

definitelynotbrjenness

the system developer only known as the first sage feels the system is straying away from its true intent and begun to stagnate. so he creates jake and opens a path for his own return.

Xerecs

I know at least one comment I made in a past chapter about a way something was phrased feeling odd and Zog changed it after thinking it over and that wasn't an editing issue. So our comments can be helpful.

Lemonsqueezy

It really depends on how you read the sentence. You could read it as the Arachne stating that it was what Jake was stating (to imply), or that it was what the Arachne deduced (inferred) was being said. The thing with the word imply is that the statement has to be strongly suggested. In this case Jake was trying not to divulge that information. In that case it doesn't fit. "Alluding" would be be a better word to convey what is going on, or maybe "hinting". "Like? A statement alluding (to the fact) that stat allocation is partly by choice for your race." That is the thing with the English language, there are a thousand ways to say the same thing, for instance the words flammable and inflammable mean the same thing. Most of our language is just "does it sound right when you say it". As long as we can understand the meaning of what it being said it is fine. I am sure his editor will make the appropriate changes.

Lemonsqueezy

Good way to put that. I like that quote.

Lemonsqueezy

It is all good, purpose of the comments is for us to discuss things. You should definitely have dropped this comment on the particular post you had an issue with. Posting it as a stand alone made it seem like you were attacking all of us. I only get frustrated when I see the same correction repeated several times. It shows that people don't read the comments before posting corrections. Even times when I am guilty of doing that, I usually go back and delete my comment if I later find out someone already stated it.

Lemonsqueezy

Many ex-girlfriends/lovers come to mind. I learned that drinking tequila is probably something I should only do when I am at home.

Lemonsqueezy

Exactly what I mean, but unfortunately my ADHD makes me write novels in my comments to explain something that should only take a couple sentences. I just go on these long rants.

Joken

I rather think it is the first sage. He had so many transcendent skills as a mere C grade and could kill god equal void dwellers. I think he does on purpose knowing something like Jake will happen. Whatever it is… I am curious to see how it progresses.

Lemonsqueezy

Well that is mean. I like it.

Lemonsqueezy

I think every creature had a sort of tutorial, but for monsters it was while the planet was being changed. They were probably only given instincts to survive rather than a "quest list". Pretty much basic, kill or be killed. I think for this event the tests are based on the main person in the group (in this case Miranda). So the tests are really for her, while the others are there to support her success. They are all graded, but I think the others might be graded based on how they support the main candidate and how successful she is. Who knows, the test is only 100 days so 30 days for each wont fit. Maybe others will be shorter, maybe time dilation. The thing with it is that the groups can be up to 5 people, but it doesn't have to be that many.

Lemonsqueezy

My comments about your suggestions in order: It natural speaking people tend to be redundant when they speak. It doesn't need to be there, but it isn't exactly wrong for it to be said. I think Zog was referring to the LitRPG, SciFy, or fantasy genres of stories. It is a little vague but that is what I think he meant. Group of helpers, or just drop the "the" making it "ended up with quite competent helpers" Yeah this one is weird. Maybe "I am still not, but I have gotten better" That or "Jake mostly ignored the undead spider's attempts" "Their" is correct. The spider is referring to the Venusians teleportation.

Island Relics

I always love seeing more Miranda!!! Could I please have more

Lemonsqueezy

Agreed. The other's are the assistants for Miranda. So the entire trial is going to be focused on Miranda and probably the events she experienced.

Lemonsqueezy

That and he really doesn't level fast. He has so many stipulations on what he gets experience for. The creatures have to be higher level than him and even then they have to pose a challenge. Jake also gets diminishing returns when he fights the same creatures over and over. This is balanced by making each level Jake gets boosts his power significantly. Jake is built to fight things a lot more powerful than he is, so the system requires him to do just that.

Lemonsqueezy

We are really talking about background characters here. Miranda is semi-important at this point in the story, but the rest of her group really isn't. So a brief half chapter on what is going on is what I was expecting.

djthomp

I've been suspicious for a while that it is not an accident that Jake and this new World Wonder are both entering the Multiverse at the same time.

Lemonsqueezy

Well the goal of Jake's tutorial was to become the leader and have everyone else become your subjects. It just happened that Jake became the only surviving member of his tutorial because of what William did. It would be quite difficult to get that accomplished in 30 days unless they just massacred everyone else on the map.

Lemonsqueezy

Zog often has references or influences from other stories. A lot of anime stuff like how DBZ is written. So it is entirely possible that he got influence from that.

Lemonsqueezy

I think the "leader is born" quest was the ultimate goal of Jake's tutorial. One person was supposed to become the leader, unite everyone under his banner, and then destroy the tutorial boss (Forest King). It just happened to be that William killed everyone and the Jake killed him becoming the defacto leader.

Lemonsqueezy

Nah, Jake was always written to go solo. No matter what Jake's bloodline would never allow him to be subservient to anyone. They would ultimately have to kill Jake.

Gabe Stankiewicz

Hey Zogarth, I thought the wyvern was an iguana, not a gecko when he was on earth during the tutorial? There’s also no way Miranda would ever mistake an iguana for a gecko. Just an observation! Either way, I don’t really care. I laughed my ass off at the big bad wyvern turning into a little lizard so thank you for the laugh and thank you for the chapter!! 💜🙏

Josie

So is the WW itself gonna be everyone doing a simulated level 0 Battle Royale?

Gabe Stankiewicz

The majestic Sylphie speaks the truth yet again

Gabe Stankiewicz

I doubt it, probably just a small oversight by Zogarth. Not calling him out on it, though. He’s built this immense multiverse so there’s going to be small mistakes here and there. Hopefully he changes it, but even if he doesn’t, I got my laugh about picturing the scene, a humanoid wyvern with the group suddenly turning into a 3-4 inch long gecko is absolutely hilarious 😂

Gabe Stankiewicz

I mean who really cares? It was so funny and made me laugh out loud picturing a tiny little lizard instead of the big bad Wyvern 😂

Gabe Stankiewicz

Jake is already an administrator. This test is just for candidates for the administrator position. He’s still got 2 whole months until his test comes up, with Miranda and the bunch needing to complete their administrator tests to join him.

definitelynotbrjenness

i'm thinking it has to do with both strength and helping others gain strength. which makes me think miranda oopsied a little by not bringing some of the npc's along. no idea how zog is going to play this out.

Rewdan

Thanks Zogarth for a great weeks reading

Rewdan

I’m not sure I’d like to go for tea with the undead spiders

Rewdan

Undead history teacher

Patty O’Cartnoy

Are you sure that you're not getting that from Jake calling him an iguana snarkily, or just taking a guess, or something like that? You might be right, I don't remember. Just throwing the possibility out there

BumAssBumAss

It's pretty obvious he would dominate the tutorial as he is now, but that's not what I said would be interesting. Jake has a few traumas from his tutorial. Many of his coworkers died, he felt relief when William told him they were the only two survivors, that one coworker who was in a relationship with Jacob during the tutorial, things like that. Jake never really revisited his feelings about it and moved on as he does most things, but revisiting it, even as simulations, would bring some closure to him. The only time he really revisited his own feelings is when he got mad a Miranda and tried to figure out why he got so angry

definitelynotbrjenness

I was hoping someone else would fess up first but... Holsted spent most of his time defending, not because they needed defending, but because of the third member of the party... who else thought for at least a few seconds that William went horror movie villain again?

Anonymous

There's a solid 50% chance that they serve Jake mushrooms

Qu4rtet

No, in book 12, after returning to Earth, Jake goes to visit the wyvern and asks for his story. The wyvern himself says he was an iguana.

Dhia

i wonder if the arachnecs and the venusians are so against each other the arachnecs prefer coffee over tea

Baged

I did

definitelynotbrjenness

OK...not trusting random internet strangers, I checked book 12 somewhere not to far before page 178 and confirmed that wyvern told jake he was an iguana. Mondays chap will begin with miranda asking wyvern why he told jake he was an iguana and he confesses he thought they were cooler than geckos.

definitelynotbrjenness

akkkkssschuallllyyy, he evolved from gecko to chameleon to iguana to wyvern

definitelynotbrjenness

Bertrand should be a badass in this scenario. trained before integration and trained by church. should be similar to nonsystem pro fighter or high tier operator vs untrained desk jockeys.

Rhett Russell

I assume that meant that his prior evolution, as in d-grade was that of an iguana, while before that he was a gecko

Eden

I find it ironic, how jake and mirandas roles are flipped atm lol, shes off hunting getting steonger ect, while jakr is forced to do diplomatic shit

Endern

So what if the tests are the previous System Events? The next one would be the Treasure Hunt with the Monarch of Blood as the boss and with Jake and SS as the competition. Also William, Holstred and Northpeak Wyvern haven't experienced it yet. Would be fun to see how they approach it.

Josie

My old theory that Jake is growing exponentially and will slay his first god mid S is looking more plausible. He's a baby B and feels good about his chances for taking down a Peak B. Utterly broken boy

Josie

Jacob is gonna be derping hard until he gets his Augur profession again lol

Clint

When he runs the WW, he’ll probably be able to revisit all the past moments (and might-have-been alt-timeline moments) that he wants.

Chris Connolly

Random completely off topic question: have we considered that the first sage being forbidden knowledge is because eversmile used his transcendence to make it so? Maybe even under a similar agreement he had with Villy to kill him?

Kevin Hargett

Definitely thought that. And honestly I was here for it.

Biggy smalls

It probably wouldn't be possible since Eversmile can only use it on less powerful individuals. Considering the Multiversal level influence FS still has (without most even knowing about it). I doubt he'd have had the power to erase him from history. Villy also noted that Eversmile can learn about FS if he follows enough breadcrumbs back to him.

Xerecs

No. Villy had told people about the First Sage previously before it was forbidden knowledge. It's more likely that it was the First Sage himself that made knowledge of himself forbidden after Jake interacted with him...

definitelynotbrjenness

I was picturing Bertrand being so badass that people listen to Jacob's advice and he gets an entire tutorial to level 65 or something like that. if been trying to make up some way for Jacob to get a transcendence that allows him to defend himself without losing the augor class. got side tracked imagining ...never mind, I'll post it in a minute.

definitelynotbrjenness

Mister Author man. shabba shabba. Mister Author man. shabba shabba... the music faded as the stage lit up and thunderous applause poured out of the sound system drowning out the boos and the hisses of the patreons. brjenness walked out onto stage holding both hands high waving to the crowd in a textbook example of false modesty. wearing a white t shirt covered in cheetoh dust and pizza sauce and mountain dew stains that failled so fabulously at covering his beer belly that it might as well have been a half shirt, he removed his fedora and bowed to the crowd until he felt his toupee slipping and he quickly put the fedora back on and stood up straight. after pulling his cargo shorts back up, he waddled across the stage. his lime green crocs squeaking with every step. "welcome to Lorem Ipsum, the podcast where we, the readers, ask your favorite authors our most important questions." sitting down in the worn out blue and black gamers chair placed center stage, he took a second to recover from the long walk and picked up the two liter bottle of mountain dew downing several large gulps. "Today is the day you've all been waiting for. the most requested Author has agreed to answer one question. The one, the only, the most malefic cliff hanger loving Author on the planet, Zogarth has agreed to take a few minutes of time away from his safari hunting a rare monkey species to extinction in the Congo and join us today !!!!!" this time the crowd's cheers joined the ones coming from the sound system. "Our question for the malefic one, have you ever written a line, action, or character decision that you expected to be the most talked about part of the chapter only to have the comment section not even mention it or written a throw away line or inconsequential action that you used to just move the conversation or story along and had it brought up in the comments for days?" brjenness rose and urged the crowd to its feet. "join me in summoning the malefic one. Zogarth, zogarth, zogarth. please bless us with your wisdom." a large projection lit up the back of the stage with...nothing but static as white noise played on the speakers. "we seem to be having some technical difficulties." brjenness frantically explained before running off the stage that was being pelted with rotten tomatoes. exactly two hours later a man in a wooden mask appeared on the screen and said with a slight accent. "hello? hello? I don't think anyone is there. let's get back to hunting those damn monkeys."

Michael

He thought he had no chances against any of those guys, but he thought he could escape

Frosgods

Technically Eversmile is infinity more powerful as it's God and FS is mere C grade

Nexas Aurelias

While I dont disagree that Jake will kill a god in S grade. Its clear here he doesnt think he can win but escape. While both can be classified as victories. They are not the samw

Jansemon

that cant be because eversmile knows when he uses his transcendence just not on who and i think eversmile would remember using it in the last couple of years after being told about someone being forbidden knowledge

Jansemon

isnt he called bertram?

Jansemon

honestly i forgot what the party members were so i didnt wven know william was there

Matthew Monroe

What if the system itself is a passive transcendence skill by the 1st sage.... and he wanted to die bc of the guilt.....

Rewdan

Yep I was that guy, I was shaking my head when he was selected. Not sure I’ll ever trust William.

Lynderyn

Interesting Friday cliff

DefinitelyNotMinaga

I'm really curious abut the other stages. Also what scenario will Jake find himself in right before he gets teleported to the WW? Will it be a clutch moment where he needed to escape, or a funny way to dip out leaving those around him stunned in silence with no context?

DefinitelyNotMinaga

its a stretch to assume anything at all about this topic. The wyvern never mentions the word gecko and neither does Jake. This may be a mistake or a subtle retcon, also could be a lowkey addition of a stage before iguana. Either way the wyvern said iguana and Miranda said gecko, we have questions but only zog has answers.

Michael

I’m glad Zog is not doing the weekend cliffhangers

definitelynotbrjenness

I'm off to Google baby iguana... okay back...baby iguana look like adult geckoes with longer tails. This is all Miranda's fault.

Josie

I like to imagine that no matter how big or powerful Villy gets, our snek still enjoys a good heat lamp. It's my absurd headcanon that he's lounging under one while watching his favorite livestream

Alejandro Mora

Just as Jake's energy has aspects of creation and destruction, will the energy of his bloodline, apart from origin, also have an end aspect?

Jeryd Greer

This well written. Start a RR account and write deeply specific lore of the imagine Brjenness interview series.

Madisyn

I have a question, that just popped up in head. Everyone got credits while in the tutorial, but is that the only way credits came to be? Because if you sell stuff to others they would use their credits. So after the tutorial there is a finite number of credits that only diminish as more people die. Or is there another way to get credits that I didn’t notice?

Brian Block

It was discussed ages ago, sometime soon after the tutorial. The system injects credits into the economy in various ways, and merchants and others like them, have skills/quests/something that allows them to create credits as well. I assume there are millions of other ways, especially for the great factions and empires, to create credits. Also, remember the discussion when he was heading to the order for the first time that not all credits are created equal. Credits from the 93rd universe were massively more valuable in the beginning than multiverse credits.

Zogarth

Grammatical fixes and things like sentence structure advice is very different to changing the story itself. Those are about improving the conveyment of the story, not the actual content of it. I appreciate people pointing out errors and always encourage it.

Chloe

Tyftc

Parker Bond

I love the implication that the system has something like the Federal Reserve that institutes monetary policy, adds new credits into the system, and manages credit inflation/interest rates.

Parker Bond

When he becomes a god maybe he'll become alpha and omega

Yip

oh i wish this is true

Marrla

I resonate with this on a metaphysical level

Gh0st-Hunt3r

Heyyyyy...????? Your supposed to be dead Yip ????

Gh0st-Hunt3r

Did yall forget In Jacob's and bertrand's Tutorial William Was an Absolute Menace And F and E Grade Jake was in it too That should be interesting lol

Gh0st-Hunt3r

Did y'all forget In Jacob's and bertrand's Tutorial William Was an Absolute Menace And F and E Grade Jake was in it too That should be interesting lol