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Jake was really good at dodging. In fact, he dared venture that of all B-grades at his level, he was the best of the best. However, there were instances when even he couldn't avoid everything thrown at him, and this was one of them.

The Chosen of the Heartsoul Daolord could attack him from all sides with a variety of methods that made responding nearly impossible, forcing Jake to prioritize. When faced with a dragon of steam and a rain of spears, Jake chose to face the dragon head-on, forcing himself towards it as fast as he could despite space being squished around him.

That certainly didn’t help, as Jake preferred for space to act normally when he was moving through it. He pushed Pride of the Malefic Viper to its limits, trying to forcibly stabilize space, and while it worked to some extent, it was far from enough, and he clearly burned through far more energy than his opponent.

Even so, it wasn’t enough, and while Jake managed to blast himself through the drake of steam, he still suffered several burn wounds that only got worse due to the powerful sunlight trying to roast him. The rain of spears also didn’t stop falling, but at least Jake could avoid them after being free of the steam, though the feeling of space pressing in around him still made it difficult.

The Chosen of the Heartsoul Daolord didn’t give Jake any space to rest, as all the fallen spears that had gone past him suddenly all bent and flattened, turning themselves into boomerangs in the blink of an eye, naturally making them spin and fly back towards him.

At the same time, the other Chosen held up her hand towards Jake and spoke.

“Repel.”

Jake immediately felt the invisible force from the Word of Power as he was launched down towards the spinning boomerangs that were already quickly moving in his direction. Twisting and distorting his body in the air, Jake managed to safely pass by a few, but several left deep cuts before he finally got through, only for the boomerangs to all turn in the air yet again, flying back toward him.

“Attract.”

From being pushed away and flying towards the ground at high speeds, Jake was suddenly yanked in the opposite direction and dragged back toward the other Chosen and right into the swarm of spinning sharp boomerangs yet again. Fortunately for Jake, he had slightly more time to react, and with both katars in hand, he managed to avoid taking any major blows while even propelling himself towards his target, wanting to take her by surprise.

He stepped down the second he was free of the boomerangs and teleported, appearing nearly right in front of his opponent, ready to strike. Yet he didn’t.

Instead, Jake blasted himself backward just in time as a small beam of light passed right where he would have been if he’d followed through on his attack. Without his danger sense screaming at him, there was no way he would have avoided it either, as it had been a sneaky one.

The steam that had once been a river, then a dragon, had risen into the air, and once sufficiently far up, the Chosen of the Heartsoul Daolord had formed it into a lens of water that caught the sunlight, shooting down a concentrated beam of light towards him. She had effectively formed a magnifying glass and tried to fry him like some ant, and as much as Jake hated to admit it, he probably would have had a hole burned straight through whatever it had hit.

His opponent looked a little surprised that Jake had managed to pull back, something he immediately took advantage of by summoning his bow and shooting several quick arrows. He was hopeful for a brief moment that he would hit her, which he technically did, but it didn’t exactly do much.

Right before his arrows struck her, soft padding covered their arrowheads, making them all blunt, leaving only small blue marks at best. His attempt to make them explode also failed, as the padding she’d added allowed her to utterly suppress any of Jake’s control over them, causing the arrows to disperse mere moments later.

Having accomplished nothing with his one brief opening, Jake was fully forced back on the defensive again as she’d been given the chance to mentally refocus and continue her onslaught. Nearly a hundred different weapons were summoned, the one lens in the sky turned into four, and beneath him, the ground warped as the many trees started sharpening into spears ready to be launched upwards.

There was so much to deal with at the same time that Jake simply couldn’t keep up both physically and mentally. The unpredictable nature of the attacks also became an even bigger problem as the weapons randomly teleported, the edge of an axe randomly switched sides, a sword grew in length, and spears randomly transformed into chains mid-attack to wrap him up.

Trying to understand everything was a losing game, so Jake simply didn’t. He went so far as to close his eyes and focus only on his sphere and danger sense while trying to get in the zone and read everything happening. Despite the unpredictable nature of the many attacks, there had to be some kind of pattern. Not to the attacks themselves necessarily, but to the thought process of the one controlling it all.

It was impossible to avoid injuries, but Jake lessened them as best he could, dodging and weaving in between everything, even trying to get ahead of what he believed his opponent would do next. It sometimes worked, but even when it failed, that was one more piece that brought him closer to reading the other Chosen.

He didn’t even think of attacking, as it wasn’t at all a possibility while under the pressure he was dealing with. Usually, Jake wanted to claim momentum, but that simply wasn’t an option. Despite it all, though, he wasn’t entirely panicking yet... because he only needed one solid opening.

The Chosen of the Heartsoul Daolord had a hyper-specialized Path, and thus also hyper-specialized stats. Her mental stats were incredibly high, and her Willpower was naturally at a stupidly extreme level, with her likely having a bunch of skills increasing the stats effect or even the stat itself, similar to Jake’s Malefic Viper Legacy skills.

This meant that her other stats naturally suffered. They were still pretty high, courtesy of her being a human with balanced stats, and just having high stats in general as a genius, but it was unquestionable that her defensive stats were incredibly lacking. Jake had found the disciple from the Sword Palace to be a glass cannon, but the Chosen of the Heartsoul Daolord was even worse in that regard. That was also why she’d consumed a potion despite seemingly not really needing it. Just the few small arrows from Jake and Caleb’s efforts had damaged her significantly.

The problem was actually hitting her, though, especially now that he was caught within her Domain. Summoning defenses was effortless, and she could even blunt Jake’s arrows, which she appeared capable of doing right before they even struck her.

Likely because of her fragile body, she was extremely skilled at defending herself with her abilities. She had practiced never risking being struck directly, knowing it could be lethal, and, based on how she’d made it to B-grade, she was clearly skilled at avoiding being hit and knew how much to commit to her defenses while pacing herself.

Even so, Jake was waiting for her to slip up or for him to create his own opening. He had been fighting a lot that day already; his resources were burned through, but he also had plenty more to show, including an arrow within his quiver with the Chosen of the Heartsoul Daolord written on it. One opening, one good Arcane Powershot, and everything could be turned around.

Now he just needed to figure out how to get that opening, and despite surviving her onslaught while minimizing damage as much as possible, he didn’t see any. At least not one large enough to take advantage of. In fact, things were getting worse as time passed.

Jake had hoped that the immense energy drain of the other Chosen’s domain would result in her being put on a timer, but evidently, he’d severely underestimated her. That, or he’d overestimated how much it actually took for her to keep Jake trapped within this world of her creation while constantly unleashing attacks.

This can’t continue for much longer, Jake thought as he parried a flying spear before barely dodging a sword that turned into a whip halfway through a swing, only to get a burn across his arm as another lens in the sky had formed and shot down a concentrated beam of sunlight.

He was constantly taking damage, and while no single attack did anything major, the sheer volume was becoming a problem. Jake had realized that he had overreacted to some attacks, as while there were a lot of weapons swinging at him at the same time, the power behind each of them wasn’t always worth blocking or even dodging.

In fact, as Jake blew apart a boulder with a blast of arcane energy and blocked a sword, seeing it nick on his katar, he started to realize that the material integrity of all these items summoned by the Chosen of the Heartsoul Daolord wasn’t that sound.

It made sense in retrospect, seeing as she was the one who’d summoned it using her own power. The durability and offensive power of anything she summoned was determined by how strong she was, meaning that while a sword swinging for him appeared dangerous, compared to one swung by the Sword Saint or the disciple from the Sword Palace, it really wasn’t worth writing home about.

That didn’t mean he could just take them, though, and she was also clearly aware of this perceived weakness of her Path, which was why some of her attacks were far more powerful than others. Ten spears could fly for Jake, but only two of them were truly dangerous, with enough willpower and energy poured into their creation to pose a genuine threat.

Even with this realization, and Jake’s ability to read her pattern increasing, he was still having a bad time, and it only got worse when she stopped simply throwing out the same kinds of attacks and went back to using her damn combos.

Right after Jake dodged away from two spears and blocked a third with his foot, using the leverage to kick himself away and make some distance, the Chosen of the Heartsoul Daolord raised her hands and spoke.

“Wind.”

Jake was ready to be blasted by a massive gust of wind, or perhaps to deal with a giant blade of wind energy, but instead the wind simply formed a sphere of revolving energy around the Chosen of the Daolord as it spun at high speed. He wondered why, as it appeared so defensive, and he got even more confused when she spoke again.

“Fire.”

The revolving wind got set ablaze as Jake was slightly pushed back by the torrent of flames that spun around her at high speeds, forming an orb of fire that he didn’t even want to try to break through. It still appeared needlessly defensive, and Jake made distance and summoned his bow to try to shoot a few arrows to test the sphere as a third word echoed throughout the world.

“Lightning.”

With a crackling sound, the burning wind was electrified, significantly increasing its destructive potential. Like a massive burning thundercloud, the sphere effortlessly blocked Jake’s arrows, which exploded on impact. While he still had no idea what she was planning, his intuition told him it wouldn’t be good for him, and her fourth word more or less confirmed it as Jake’s eyes opened wide.

“Swap.”

Jake felt a powerful pull, and while he tried to resist, he barely managed to do so for a few moments before he suddenly found himself surrounded by a raging, burning thundercloud. He was entirely enclosed, and sparks jumped between his body and the cloud immediately, making Jake react instinctively by pushing Pride further and summoning an arcane barrier all around his body right in time for a fifth word to echo.

“Implode.”

The spinning sphere of destruction started closing in on him immediately, making Jake’s eyes open wide as he poured all the mana he could into his arcane barriers while summoning more. His wings were flayed and unable to defend him, forcing Jake to rely on his scales and arcane magic only, but even then...

This is bad.

Jake usually relied on Moment of the Primal Hunter for tight spots he saw no way out of, but in this instance, would it even work? He was surrounded on all sides, and even if he used the skill to slow time, what would it let him do?

An idea suddenly sprang to his mind as Jake prepared to force Moment to activate by lowering his defenses, intending to use the slowed-down time to channel an attack to break through the wall of wind, fire, and electricity. Diving through it seemed unwise, but if he made a hole first to go through, he should be able to get out while minimizing-

“Barrier.”

His plan was killed in the cradle as a powerful barrier formed around the sphere, which continued to implode and push through his layers of arcane barriers one by one. Even without making contact, his scales were sizzling and getting overwhelmed, and Jake felt his skin burn and start to flake off anywhere his scales couldn’t keep up.

Despite his best efforts, the sphere continued closing in on him, with Jake doing everything he could to save himself. Pride of the Malefic Viper was pushed to its absolute limits as Jake tried to fight back and destroy the sphere somehow, but it was far too powerful. The thought of taking out the staff from the Cyclops Magi suddenly appeared, but a part of him resisted the idea.

He hated the concept of having to rely on an external item to overcome this. Was he facing another Chosen? Yes, but that was no excuse. To Jake, this wasn’t a fight he should even have the option of losing. It was an incredibly arrogant thought, but while he’d recognized the Chosen of the Heartsoul Daolord’s Path as powerful and interesting, he’d never viewed her as someone he could truly lose against if he went all out.

Yet here he was, still having several skills he hadn’t used yet, and his danger sense was warning him that things were getting perilous. His skin was peeling and tearing as the wind closed in, the fire starting to break through his final barriers and licking his body, instantly searing his flesh.

Even as reality was starting to set in, and taking out the staff from the Cyclops Magi seemed like the only choice unless he wanted to do something even riskier, Jake refused to do any of it. Instead, he focused on pushing back against the magic, relying on nothing external nor pushing his Bloodline beyond its limits.

It was foolish, but it was a matter of pride... and Jake was very prideful. So prideful he utterly rejected the very notion that he couldn’t stop this attack, and as his will was pushed to its limits and his demise appeared imminent, the spinning sphere suddenly started losing steam as Jake’s eyes gleamed.

His heart was beating loudly, echoing in his mind and body as his innate pride pushed his will further than he’d perhaps ever taken it before. Vaguely, he felt the resonance between his partly Bloodline-caused innate will and Pride, utterly ignoring the splitting headache that was threatening to knock him unconscious.

Instead, he gritted his teeth hard enough for blood to pool in his mouth as he let out a silent roar of defiance, the imploding sphere suddenly starting to be pushed away slightly as his pride won out, and in between the sound of heavy heartbeats and the roaring flames and crackling electricity, a notification sounded.

[Pride of the Malefic Viper (Legendary)] --> [Pride of the Malefic Viper (Mythical)]

Comments

R Mac

Let’s go!!!

Cyranosaurus

Love skill upgrade BUT chapter ended 😅

Noah Sterling

There's the Skill Upgrade we've all been waiting for!

Arrogant Savant

Who better a teacher for using the Willpower stat than an absolute specialist in the stat? The whole usage of Willpower is one of Villy's specialties so it would've been embarassing for the chosen of the malefic viper to lose this, saying that though the chosen of the Daolord will also receive direct insight into the Malefic Viper's legacy skill.

17^3

Domain immunity is going to be very useful!

Gavin

It has been a very very long time since Jake has done some truly heinous shit. Let's go Pride

djthomp

Good fight for a Pride upgrade. All of the legacy skills to Mythical will probably be an A grade requirement, so thanks for the assist Heartsoul Chosen.

Fdrugc

Tftc great fight! "He went so far as to close his eyes and focus only on his sphere and danger sense while trying to get in the zone and read everything happening." He doesn't use his sphere always?

Schneeente

Nice, that only happened because he was ready to "die". If Jake had used the staff or escaped or event horizon, he wouldn't have been pushed hard enough for this to happen, very nice

Michael mann

Jake pulling out the Escanor special of “Who decided that?”

Tyler S.

As expected and welcomed. To have absolute control over his immediate surroundings would be a given for the Primal Alchemist

Steven Myer

This is Jakes version of Micheal Jordan extending his arm to make that last basket in Space Jam.

DaMule

Now that was an epic read, can’t wait to see the upgrade! Gonna be epic when one step gets upgraded, I figure that one will have something to do with the eastbound monk or SS

BumAssBumAss

Nice, Jake might get all his of the malefic viper skills to mythical in this grade.

Chasingdeer

Oh come on! Not at a skill upgrade!

Loststar7

Happy Monday and welcome back to today’s episode of Cliffhangers With Zogarth. Hope everyone had a great weekend.

Rewdan

Pride upgrades! Bloody awesome. What a chapter. Thanks Zogarth great way to start the week

ABTelford

Ha! Battle used to upgrade skills. Thats Jake all right

Phil Ritter

Now that I think about it if her defences are really that horrible doesn’t that mean Jake can kill her at any time he likes using boundless horizon or whatever it was called? I don’t think the arrows can be intercepted or blocked

R Mac

Crazy that he was C level when he was doing this to a void beast

russell west

You always use your eyes and ears but when you focus on something you generally get better input

Staudi

Tyftc! Really exited about tomorrow!

Endern

If you are thinking about Event Horizon, it only makes it so that his arrows always reach the target no matter in which reality or on plane of existence it is. The arrows can still be blocked, intercepted or destroyed (if you have the means).

Justin

For perfect evolution perhaps that or legendary. Wasn’t a skill requirement for B grade just the lvl all maxed for perfect evolution which seems too easy for jump to A grade.

C0bra$

Thank u for the story

Dan

As soon as he refused to pull out the staff, I had a feeling Pride was about to get an update. Good ol' Jake method, push yourself to the brink of death for that delicious skill upgrade

Xander

TFTC :) Hope everyone had a good weekend :) Been waiting for Jake to use the awesome word of power "Nah!" since this fight started :D Suggested edits: "Daolord could *attack* him from all sides with a variety of *attacks* that" repetitive. Change the first to "assail", "assault", "barrage", or "swarm" "Right *before his arrows struck her*, soft padding covered the arrowheads, making them all blunt *before they struck her*" repetitive , ditch the second and reword the extention of the sentence to "meaning they did nothing more than leave some small blue marks at best" "Jake was *forced fully* back on the" should be "fully forced" " *trying even* to get ahead of what" should be "even trying" " formed a sphere *and* revolving energy around" should be "of" "spun around her *at high speeds*," repetitive from the sentence before. Just ditch this second use of the phrasing. "and sparks jumped *from* his body immediately" should this be "for"? as in small attacks coming from the cloud for Jake rather than sparks coming from jake to the clouds. " relying on nothing external *or* digging deep with his Bloodline." This doesnt seem right. If Jake IS digging geep with his blood line ths should be "but" if he is not then this should be "nor" "and *cracking* electricity" should be "crackling"

Xander

Dont think they were ever a "requirement" more a Jake imposed arbitrary goal.

CJ King

Thank you for the chapter

Fore stumbler

Wow that is a throwback of epic proportions

Fore stumbler

Does he need to change all the viper skills to Jake skills before godhood. Or do they stay viper skills until he dies?

Eastbound monk

You're right sylphie Jake should have payed more attention when you talked about wind.

Mat

Will change to Jake skills at some point. Duskleaf has skills derived from Villy’s legacy that make up his legacy. With how powerful Villy is though, he probably can go all the way to Godking using Villy’s legacy skills. Maybe n difference how he uses then compared to Villy

Kirin

I really hope next chapter is the last one about this fight. At least we got a skill upgrade.

SirRektz

Chills with the last paragraph brother!

definitelynotbrjenness

If Jake had gotten a duskleaf skill, he would have noticed the name looked funny. After looking at it real hard, he would have asked, "who is this shattered dusk emperor"

djthomp

It was a Jake imposed goal that turned out to be a real B grade profession requirement for him. From chapter 1266: Objective: Upgrade all nine skills related to the Legacy of the Malefic Viper (9/9). Upgrade at least one skill related to Legacy of the Malefic Viper to mythical rarity (2/1). Perform an alchemical feat worthy of calling yourself a Primordial’s Chosen (1/1). Perform a feat worthy of calling yourself a Primordial’s Heretic (1/1). Perform a feat worthy of calling yourself a Primordial’s Heretic-Chosen (1/1). If B grade needed at least one of the Viper Legacy skills to Mythical it's an easy guess that A grade will need all of them to that.

Pekka Kohonen

I wonder if this means he can upgrade all of his legacy skills to mythical by infusing them with more of his Bloodline?

definitelynotbrjenness

Not gonna lie. I've been waiting the entire fight for Jake to just say, " Nope. I reject your reality and replace it with mine." Skill Internet political discourse upgraded to mythical.

Summer Coff

Looks like all those guesses were right.

Arieh Sochaczevski

Thanks for the chapter! I’m fairly certain that Event Horizon could have ended this fight in a moment at any moment.

Eiv

Good thing it is Monday huh? 😂

DeAndrea H

Ha! She really thought she was cooking. But Jake routinely makes Primordials go “Wait. how did you even do that?” She’s about to get curb stomped in her own soul space!

Dave

Nice!

gray matter

This is definitely written like Jake’s in trouble, I can’t help feel he should’ve had less trouble with her than he’s actually having. I would’ve thought the sheer weight and power of his soul would’ve already caused her to end the domain, much less how much he’s truly getting outclassed in will and the fact he didn’t even try to use his own words of power against hers. It’s making for an interesting fight, but I don’t see her outclassing him in will as much as she has and keeping him in her domain for as long as she has.

Jake Thayne

I’m locking in for this one.

Benjamin Mages

Jake is strong sure but it's important to note that he is not necessarily the strongest and he is definitely not the strongest in every area. He's a perception specialist, why would he not be outclassed by a willpower specialist? Also this domain she's using isn't just bashing her soul against his; the strength of his soul can't really be brought to bear outside of his or someone else's soul, like when he dove into the Cerulean Demon Lord's soul. And his own words of power is a gimmick with no real combat utility; it's just a consequence of brute forcing things with willpower, which she is better at. At least until he upgrades his skill to mythical, that is. We'll see next chapter.

Gracie

tftc!! 🐍🏹🧘

Justin

Oh! Totally forgot about that , thanks for clearing that up. So that’s going to be hard as heck going into S grade then.

definitelynotbrjenness

hey, you're in my top ten favorite characters in Primal Hunter. Well, maybe top twenty, but ten sounds better.

definitelynotbrjenness

I also expected Jake being "heavy" (as jasper said) to be a factor pretty quickly. however, rem how many times cheetoh messed with jake's thinking in the final battle. jake isn't skilled at mental stuff, just strong.

Jonathan Danforth

One of my favorite chapters of the whole fic, its awesome seeing Jake suffer against someone supremely talented, and upgrade a skill thats super needed for competition. Awesome.

UNKNOWN

It's not a soul space, it's a very powerful domain. The fight would already be over if she dared bring Jake into her soul space, somehow.

Ty Cooper

He is also Chosen of the Villy. Corruption is a big part of his path also. I kinda wonder if that will play into tomorrow's chapter. Immune to domains in immediate vicinity and Corruption any domain your pride can touch. Sounds pretty cool

UNKNOWN

Is that John Primal Hunter himself?!?!11

UNKNOWN

All in a day's work.

UNKNOWN

Remember the last time he tried that?

Pekka Kohonen

I suppose that is a good point… now though he has a Professional Class that infuses his bloodline to it. So it is working. Just slow and steady. Actually, I was also thinking that he still has not really done much with that planetary core… could that be used to upgrade his scales further but carefully this time. So maybe leave it until he has support from the Viper or the System. Also there are bit of Yip of Yore and El Haka’s he hasn’t used. But upgrading the he Shadow Skill could be next. He does need an attack that cannot be diverted so easily.

Levi Lowry

I’m currently re reading/ listening to this series and I just remembered that Jake has a demon lord heart from minagas labyrinth. Wouldn’t it be cool if Jake used the demon lord heart the dragon heart and then the thing he got from El Hakan to make some cool demon dragon or something

Robert C

I don't want to be negative because these have been good fight scene but I really dislike Chosen of the Heartsoul Daolord, she and her build (and I'm guessing the Heartsoul Daolord) is crazy broken and frustrating. It's a watered down version of the Great Sage's Power Word Spam but it's not fun. it's cool for a little but you only win 3 ways, one shot them, out will them, or out endurance them. You don't really out skill them or set up the environment or really fight them. It's really cool for a little while but crazy frustrating.

Corvid

Is he fighting the granddaughter of the first sage or what!?

Trumangolorian

Hell yeah back from vacation and have a whole week's worth of chapters to read. Tyftc Zogi.

Dhia

this is the perfect opportunity to also push for an Unblemished arrow upgrade to fight against her willpower

Gh0st-Hunt3r

I don't believe for one second that this is JUST a domain and i would go as far as say that its probably a combination of Domain, Soulspace, and Willpower to create it and if it is part soul space then if Jake realizes it she's royaly fucked cuz his primal gaze could kill her alone.

Kirin

This was a week ago.

Gh0st-Hunt3r

Definitely Nice to see Jake Pushed since he's constantly complaining that he can never find Worthy opponents to fight 😁 also it's always in these moments he gains insight and upgrades. I do also wonder how this Domain skill of The Heartsoul DaoLord Disciple is able to stay active for so long ? It could be that this fight hasn't really been going for as long as I feel like it's been and in reality this fight has only lasted 15-20 min Max. anyways i guess ill see in a sec when i read the next chapter.

MusicalWriter2

Maybe even enough to make a version of it on her own as a pseudo domain so she can save her full one

Yip

Primal Hunter John?

JW Saxby

As happy as I am that Jake is progressing, I’m a little disappointed that a similar scene didn’t happen with Caleb considering the Legacy he also carries and him seriously needing a significant power boost as he has been falling behind in a huge way lately and I really like his storyline and power set. Anyways 👍🏼 Tyftc 🍻

Fylbrom

That was building up so beautifully towards the end i half expected/wished for the upgrade to read Pride of the Primal Hunter. But I know its way to early for that. Maybe S grade. Also, very Jake to outmatch his opponent on a contest of wills. Very Jake indeed