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Edited on 1:40am on 23rd January. Added nearly 2,000 words and explain strategy a little more. Hope you like the changes! Happy Sunday Everyone!This was a fun Chapter to write, but I know that there may be some spelling mistakes that I must look out for tomorrow. I hope that it will successfully help build up the scene the way I want to, so let me know if you think it's gearing up to be epic or if you feel that it's kinda falling flat a bit. :)Hope you all had a wonderful weekend, and I'll see you next Sunday with another Chapter update. I'm also going to be creating a Glossary of Characters because several people on Royal Road have pointed out that there are too many to keep track of. I'll be posting that in the next day or so, I hope.James

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Young Youghurt

At the end when Elvira says "take down this wall", I wonder if replacing take with tear wouldn't sound better? Little bit on the nose but still a good reference. Crowd is bustling. For the first time in aeons people of Dread Lake village feel a hope! Hope of leaving this cursed place. The crowd shuffles and Lawyer of Plagues comes before the Dread Captain. "Mr Dread tear down this wall!" Epic showdown follows...

Young Youghurt

Also I feel like MC went from mission accomplished bombardment to full city gathering in less than five minutes. Quite speedrunner.

Prinny Knight

I'm feeling some dead weight here

Summercat

I honestly thought, reading through the goblin quests, that it was giving him credit for "wasting all that time in the forest" at first xD