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Damn, I'm actually surprised I finished this in the time I had set for myself.  I'll be working on a quest update for the rest of the weekend, so I wanted to try and get this out for everyone who wanted to see some more Industrious.  Once I get my quest submission finished, I'll likely have either another chapter of Industrious for you early next week or a chapter of The New Ron finished.

...there's also the outside possibility of a new fic coming down the pipeline, but that's still kind of vague.

Until then, everyone stay awesome!

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Industrious Chapters 21-30

Chapter 21: With Tenten's upcoming graduation, the rest of my erstwhile students had exams scheduled as well, so I'd canceled most of our tutoring sessions. I still met every other day with Yakumo and Satsuki still showed up to buy kunai, shuriken, and wire that I'm sure she didn't really need,...

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GAMB42

Kota has no idea how utterly monstrous he is becoming. He already surpassed all the other sealmasters by the simple expedient of knowing more and knowing better then them. Now he is going to be inovating and turning his stuff to a even more higher level. I am just starting to get a bit worried about the lack of actual opposition. Sure there is Danzo on the horizon but either he is going to be dealt with or he is going to be on the fic forever. Frankly I'm thinking this fic need some more external worldbuilding. Maybe some alternate POV showing some of the knock down effects from our protag discoveries and efforts? Would be funny to see him being mentioned by the Hokage again.

Axel Wate

If I do not remember wrong Danzo was an AU change, he is already dead

Rockinalice

Making a space where Sharingan, Byakugan and Otsutsuki Bullshit (Zetsu fall in that category) can't see or get into is definitely the right thing to do it can also work a a Panic Room I'd any of them come for Him.

SirWaddlesworthThe3rd

Any 'actual opposition' that affects Kota directly would mean that shit has hit the fan in a major way. For anyone with hostile intentions to figure out his value as an asset to either capture or eliminate, they'd need to get through not only Kota's obfuscation, but also the Hokage's, and if they're able to do that, then he'd have bigger problems to worry about.

Slayer Anderson

Thankfully, there aren't any other reasons why Kota would be targeted. I'm sure his association with major clans won't make him a target at all.

GAMB42

Wait, Danzo is dead? Then why are Torume and Sai there? I thought they were root plants? Is somebody else commanding root?

Vanathor

I liked this chapter. The insight we got into fuinjutsu was fun. hopefully we get another New Ron soon, really looking forward to the fallout of that last one.

Axel Wate

I think rehabilitation; the Third wants shinobis, not tools