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I've literally been sitting here trying to decide whether or not to post this next VB chapter because it is yet again devolved into a sex scene. Does it get boring? It's not all sex but there is sex. I know I'm being needy as fuck lately but I am really going through it anxiety wise.

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Gavin

Never boring!!

Kelsey Sorensen

Not too much! I think the scenes help a lot with character development and just seeing the characters connect is awesome too:)

Alex

Let the sex reign

Kierstyn Grepke

I don't think there's such a thing! Especially not with like omegaverse!

Mary

Not too much! Go where the characters take you and we'll love it!

Rachel

But…we like the smut. Please give us the smut???

Beth

It's not boring at all!

Jayce

I dont think its boring! i get hyped for all of the writing 😂

mo

Girl, you better RELEASE that chapter! We live for these spicy moments 🔥 don’t even stress about the sex scenes, if anything, they’re the highlight 😩 Just know your fans are READY and waiting whenever you’re ready to drop it! 💖✨

Amy W

“Too much sex” - Does not compute. 🤪 Write all the sexy time you want! 🍆💦

Angela Hartje

I mean but dont we all like smut here.

Alyssa Ashley

Not boring at all!!! But I also love the plot and getting to know all the characters 🥰

Becca

NGL I feel like we all know why we are here with an Onley James book. Its the good sex.

Alli Darlin

I literally dont think theres a possibility of too much sex you write my favorite sex scenes and i would read a whole book of just sex if you wrote it

heyjude

I personally don’t think so !! I’d read your grocery lists tbh, you’re such a talented writer.

Mackenzie Hayman

not boring at all! But I’m also dyingggggg to see all the boys talk to saint too 🥺🥺

Abbie Mendoza

I don’t think it’s ever possible that there is too much sex. Your scenes are always so incredibly well written. Sex or no sex. I’ll read anything you write.

AudioAddict

You've never written "too much" of anything yet. Chances are this won't be the exception! 😉 Can we all just make a pact to let you know if that ever does happen?

Kelly M Tuanau

Oh please that's the most ridiculous thing I've ever heard (Too much spicy time)🙄🤣🤭MORE MORE MORE😍😍🥰

Aimi Yokaiko

Naahhhh I don't think there's such a thing because you've always been good at balancing the smut with the plot. Besides I love seeing all the different ways they please each other

Shell Moens

I don't think it gets boring, especially with the omegaverse stories since there are so many options

Erin E

If you're telling the story you want to tell, it's never too much in my opinion. You're very good at weaving plot into s-x scenes. I've read other authors where the s-x gets repetitive because they're just describing different ways of inserting Part A into Slot B, but that's never been the case with your writing for me because your s-x scenes are always filled with a lot of intimacy which becomes character development. I don't care much or how little s-x a book has as long as it feels organic to the story and moves the plot along. Also, trust your instincts, we're all here because you're a fantastic writer.

Alexis

It's never too much

Christina Overholt

I love how your scenes still include happy cuddles and showing that they care too 😊

oreanna marrella

If you wrote it, I must read it . That's it. I don't make the rules

Stephany

Yeah. There are some authors that do the sex too much at the expense of the characters. You haven’t been in that category though. I always feel like the characters have a connection and really care about each other.

Jamie Ayers

Please post it so that we can reassure you that it's never too much.

Kristine 💜

Nope, this group of characters needs the bonding time.

Catherine L

Your sex scenes are never boring. They are always about more than just sex.

Nicole Rickert

Definitely post it but also if we found out somewhat soon if Seth is pregnant that would be cool 😊

Your Favorite Fable

I don't think it's too much, because to me, physical touch and intimacy is really important to these characters. It's a part of how they communicate and connect. It helps them reaffirm relationships and brings them closer. There is a plot, and sometimes physical intimacy helps clear the heads of the characters enough that they are able to find clarity in a problem they were working on or give them the strength to do something hard. Right now all of our characters are in a vulnerable place, so to me it makes a lot of sense that they are seeking extra physical comfort from their pack. It gives them the strength to keep moving forward. Or I dunno maybe it's not that deep and all the characters are just horny but either way I'm here for it! Not bored at all!!

Cass

I don’t know if it helps but I often skip past sex scenes, it’s just part of being demisexual, but yours are always so well written and have depth and emotion regardless of how smutty so they’re the rare ones I don’t skip.

JessB

Too much?! There's never too much sex, in my opinion lol. Especially with your writing, as your characters and storyline are well developed and it's not just sex for the sake of sex. We love you!

Nikki Mitchell

Whoever says to much spice is not correct all the spice

Latonya Smith

Honestly, even though they’re delicious, I would trade some sex scenes for the advancement of the plot or even some non sex romantic or cute scenes with the characters.

Kaye_tee_bee50

Your scenes don't feel like filler. The sex is there for a reason. It goes with the story, it goes with the plot, it is there for a reason. So give me all the spice.

Fyrebanshee

Babe, there can Never be too much sex. not with the characters you bring to life and the way you right the spice. smut enjoyers always well fed🥹🥹🥹

Arson Graham

Bring it on!! Its never too much, you do it so well and never believe otherwise!

Gabrielle Hensley

Perish the thought. If sex is what you’re cranking out, then it’s there for a reason! ♡︎

Julien

Never too much sex. Especially with a poly omegaverse pack.

Wendy Ragan Poplin

The story and characters are always important but in my opinion that can never be too much sexy times.

B Johnson

It’s so awesome that you care enough to ask for your fans’ input 🤓🤓 I’m always happy to see whatever direction you want to take your characters, though I’ll never decline one of your smutty scenes if it’s offered, please and thank you 🥰 😄

LausBookRambles

There is literally character development during your sex scene

Natalia

I personally love how you use sex to develop the story and VB is one of my fav OV stories because of the overlap with partners and dynamics. It’s literally the best!!! 🩷🩷🩷

Radical Magpie

I want everything you’re prepared to offer whenever you’re ready to offer it 💯✨❤️👏 Never too much sex in your stories, and never too much not-sex 😬👍🤗

Maureen Hart

My opinion, you can’t have “too much sex”. Besides your sex scenes still involve a lot of things that drive the narrative. Also, look at it this way- with 4 couples all developing their relationships at the same time, there’s bound to be more sex than you would have in a book focused on one couple at a time.

Tiffany

I def want character and story development but everyone loves sex scenes

Mandy Sellers

There can never be too much sex but of course this is my opinion. I love all of the sex scenes and the guys getting it on. Please dont take that away x

Dawn

I know you say you don't like to write them you dislike them but they are well done. And as many other have said it's story driven and relationship driven in your books. Need all the smexy and not so smexy and non smexy scenes. Need all the scenes.

Katherine Farmer

I’m not sure there’s anyone writing sex scenes that develop character and story as well as you do, your sex scenes are never ‘just sex’

Echo Delaney

The scenes are always such a natural progression of the story - they make sense to me! Progress the story however it works for you 😊✌🏽

W L Stercy

I don't think the sex scenes have detracted from the story in the slightest. If anything, they enhance it because you get a deeper understanding/feeling for the bonds that are getting stronger between the pack every time.

Stacy Perry

You had me at too much sex. That’s my happy place

Megan

There is definitely no such thing as too much sex with your characters!

SWZ

I usually don't post. I have definitely read books where the sex scenes get monotonous. I think the thing is that the sex scenes should be (in my mind) moving the plot or our understanding of the characters forward while being hot (if they are trying to be) and different enough from the other scenes. So far, everything you have shared seemed to both be hot and move the characters relationship and our understanding of them forward.

Monica

You have 8 guys. I don’t think too much sex is a thing lmao.

Donald

Onley, you're good as long as a sex scene advances the story in some meaningful way, whether through character development or plot progression. To date, none of your sex scenes come off as pointless or repetitive. I think you can trust your instinct by now. 🥰

Donald

I had some time to think about it and I have a thought. What if, what you're feeling isn't that there was too much sex? What if your instincts were pinging you that there wasn't enough of something else? I'm not talking about plot development. That is too obvious. I'm talking about intimacy. When we see couples together they are often having sex. That is fine as long as that sex progresses character development or the plot. The best sex includes intimacy but intimacy doesn't have to include sex. Maybe you are wanting to show the characters having more intimate, tender moments? What if they used the pack nest to watch a movie? What if the couples break the tension with a night of Monopoly or Cards Against Humanity? Maybe that is what you're craving? If so, don't worry because nothing kills sexy time like babies and at least two are on their way. After that, you will be hard pressed to find time for sex. Enjoy it while it lasts!

Emma Fern

I know that I am late, but when I saw that you said you feel needy, I wanted to respond. When I feel needy, two things help me. 1. I am not needy, I am wanty This makes me laugh and it is a reminder that it is okay to want things. 2. You are not needy, you have needs. As someone who grew up with a mother who collected personality disorders like pokemon... I was shamed and targeted for having basic needs. I was too much and too sensitive. Most of the time, I have just normal needs.