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The first monk lunged forward, grabbed the elder by the shoulders, and yanked him back. The connection broke.

The older monk stumbled a step, then another. The glow around his hands went out in a blink. He fell back into the first monk’s grip, breath coming in hard pulls. Sweat beaded on his shaved head. His lips had gone a little pale.

Ouz hunched over, arms around his chest. The bruise burned. It felt less like one spot and more like a wide band now, every nerve awake and shouting. He tasted iron at the back of his throat and realized his teeth had cut his tongue. The room spun once and steadied.

The elder drew in a sharp breath. He pressed the heels of his hands together, checking his own bones were still solid. His eyes fixed on Ouz.

The first monk’s voice shook.

“Master Huan,” he said. “What happened? Your light—”

“I’m not sure,” the older monk said. His voice held no chant now, only tired gravel. “When I touched him, it felt like putting my hand in very cold water that had sat there for years. The goddess’s blessing met something that didn’t want it.”

His gaze did not leave Ouz.

“You said you fell,” he said. “That is all?”

“Yes,” Ouz said. His voice scraped. “I was in the woods. I remember mushrooms. I remember a fall. After that, snow. When I try to push further back, it hurts here.”

He tapped his own forehead once, careful not to actually press.

The older monk studied him for a long moment. Whatever he searched for, he did not seem to find it. He sighed.

“Goddess Yangz’e gives her light where she wills,” he said. “Sometimes she closes her hand. Today she closed it around you. My skill cannot break that grip.”

The words slid through Ouz’s ears, but his body seized on another truth: they were not going to try again. His shoulders loosened before he could stop them.

“I'm sorry,” the monk added. The apology sounded sincere. “I thought I could ease your breath. Instead I gave you more pain.”

Ouz let his arms fall away from his chest. The burn along his ribs had faded from a scream to a rough, constant roar. His lungs drew shallow air.

“I’ve had worse,” he said. That was true. Death had been colder and very quiet. This did not reach that level. It only felt closer than anything since.

The older monk’s mouth tightened.

“I doubt that,” he said, “but you believe it, so keep that. Sometimes belief is the only bandage.” He glanced toward the door. “You should get up off our floor. Go back out, find a corner today. Sit and breathe. Don’t lift anything heavy. Don’t let any fool strike you in the chest.”

The first monk looked from his master to Ouz, clearly unsettled by what he had seen.

“We could keep him for observation,” he began.

The elder shook his head.

“If she did not let me mend his ribs, she will not give me more answers in the next hour,” he said. “We will watch from a distance. The goddess can tug him back to our door if she changes her mind.”

He turned away and walked slowly toward the inner hall, steps careful, shoulders a little lower than before. The first monk watched him go, then looked back at Ouz.

“I have never seen that,” he said quietly. “Usually the light feels like warm water. With you, it bit his bones.”

“Sorry,” Ouz said. There was nothing else to offer.

The monk huffed out a breath that could have been a laugh or a small curse.

“Go on,” he said. “The door is that way. Try not to die on the steps. It would make our morning busy.”

Ouz pulled his shirt back on, each movement a tug along the wide line of pain. He tied the cloth with slow fingers, shrugged into his cloak, and stepped out into the yard.

The boys had stopped their drills for the moment. They stood in loose lines, hands on their knees, catching their breath. A few of them glanced over when he passed, then looked away again when the monk at the front spoke.

He left by the main gate. The morning had grown brighter. The bell tower cast a long shadow across the street. Vendors were setting up stalls farther down, unrolling cloth covers and setting out baskets.

He made it as far as the tower’s base before his legs shook. The pain from the healing attempt had hidden his old ache for a short time. Now both returned. The bruise flared under his ribs where the light had touched it. His breath hit a wall halfway in. His vision edged in gray for a moment.

He leaned his shoulder against the cool stone of the tower and let his forehead touch it. The stone felt steady and real, rough under his skin.

What was that?

He had no words for the thing that had met the goddess’s light. He only knew that when it touched him, Death’s Awareness had recoiled. Not like it had met pure danger, something with teeth. More like it had met a force that pointed in the opposite direction from his own path, the one that ran closer to graves than shrines.

“Did my power bite back at hers,” he whispered, “or did hers bite mine?”

His breath fogged the stone.

For a few heartbeats he only watched that mist bloom and fade. The bell tower felt like part of the temple still, a rooted bone of the same body. The monks’ goddess had just tried to reach into his chest through that body and something in him had snapped its teeth on her hand.

If they knew that, would they have let me walk out?

He thought of the way the first monk’s face had gone tight, of the tremor in his voice when he said I have never seen that. They had watched boys drill in the yard, bandaged pilgrims, coughing old women. They had seen fever and rot and bones grown wrong. Yet whatever sat under his ribs had made a man like that step back. His fingers curled against the stone. Cold crept in under his nails.

He tried to imagine walking back inside and telling them the truth plainly: there was a piece of power in him that listened for dying breaths and marked the moment bones stopped moving. Practicing Death didn’t belong in a bright hall full of incense and hanging bells. It had woken in the reek of a dump pit under a fort wall, pressed against old bones and splintered wood while his own lungs almost stopped.

Would they call it a curse? The monks’ chants had tasted of warmth and order. The force that lived in his chest knew graves and frozen ditches and the echo that came after a scream cut off. The two had met, and both had flinched.

He could picture them listening, weighing his words, naming what sat in his chest. Maybe they had answers. Maybe they could blunt the edge of whatever watched through his eyes when someone stopped breathing. If he ever reached for help, though, he wanted that hand to come from the same side of the doorway. Better to call the Iye that had brushed against him in the pit than trust strangers who might decide the safest place for him was behind a locked door.

A tight line of fear ran under the pain. His fear didn’t aim at the goddess herself. He doubted she spared a thought for one frozen stranger who called himself Zhanar. The danger came from hands that would act in her name. If the temple chose to name him wrong, to see him as something that bit at their goddess instead of something that could walk beside her light, they could close more doors than his. He wondered if Aldacı was watching from under the floor and smiling.

Don’t give them reasons, he told himself. Breathe, walk, work. Let them forget you.

Something stirred at the back of his mind. A presence he knew, the same quiet company that had curled up by his pillow on the Hermit’s narrow bed at night.

He had not called the spirit since waking in this loop. The last time he had heard that voice in the jade-moon wolf stone, it had not known him. The memory of that blankness pressed tight under his ribs.

If I call, what do I say? Help me, you don’t know me yet. He closed his eyes. What would the Hermit do?

He pictured the old man on cold mornings outside the cabin. Sitting cross-legged on the hard ground, back straight, hands resting on his knees, breath moving in quiet lines. When he sat like that, even the wind seemed to keep its distance.

“Sit,” the Hermit had told him once. “Make your breath slower. The body lies. It screams about whatever is loud. If something truly important comes, you should hear it under the rest. Practice that while you still can stand up afterward.”

Ouz pushed himself away from the bell tower. Standing here in the open, with people walking past, was no place to learn anything.

He circled around the base until he found a narrow cut between the tower and the yard wall. Someone had stacked old stone blocks there long ago. A small shrine stone sat in the corner, carved with characters he could not read, an old offering bowl at its foot.

The space was out of the main flow. Anyone looking down from the bell would see him, but people on the street would not, unless they came searching.

He eased himself down with his back against the bigger stone, legs crossed in front of him. It hurt. His chest complained. He settled anyway.

He closed his eyes and placed one hand lightly over his ribs. He did not press. He only let his fingers rest where the pain lived and tried to breathe around his own discomfort.

In. Shallow, at first. Out. The air brushed the sore line but did not shove at it. He found a rhythm that did not draw a cough.

The cold around him was clean. No smoke in this narrow cut. Only stone chill and a faint trace of incense that had drifted from the temple sometime in the last day.

Iye’s Tín.

After a few breaths, heat began to gather under his palm. It did not feel like the monk’s light. That had pushed in from outside, bright and searching. This rose from the bruise itself, a small ember inside muscle and bone. It felt closer to the Hermit’s silent mornings than to the monk’s bright chant.

His back warmed where it touched the stone. Sweat slid between his shoulder blades despite the air. His skin prickled. Pain did not vanish. It changed shape. The sharp spikes dulled. The wide band along his side went from a roar to a low, steady noise, like water under ice.

Words appeared in the dark behind his eyes, green lines against nothing.

[Tín resonance: steady → unbalanced]

[Tín resonance: unbalanced → balanced]

[Resonance stability increased for a limited span]

[Current maximum stability reached]

He watched the lines fade. His breath had deepened without his noticing. He tested a slightly larger inhale. His ribs twinged, yet they no longer tried to cut his air in half.

The older monk had said the bone might be cracked, not broken through. If that was true, breath and time could still knit it. Whatever Iye’s Tín had just done, it felt like more than time. Each careful inhale scraped the hurt a little less. If he could steal moments like this for a few days, he might stop grabbing his ribs every time he moved.

Maybe that was why the Hermit had sat so still on those winter mornings, watching his breath like a rope he could pull. Whatever line Iye’s Tín had carved through him when the wolf stone first broke didn’t feel weaker than a knight’s blessing. The spirit might be sleeping in the stone again this time, but the path she’d left in his ribs was still there to follow.

He opened his eyes. The stone beside him was damp where his back had sweated against it. The cold air on his wet shirt made him shiver, but the deep fire in his chest stayed.

He pressed his hand a little more firmly against his ribs. There was still pain. There would be for days. The sense of wrongness under his skin, the thing that had collided with the goddess’s light, stayed too. Yet it felt settled now, not thrashing. He pushed himself up, using the stone for support. His legs tingled before they carried his weight.

The city sounds rolled back in. Calls from vendors. A cart wheel hitting a rut. Somewhere far off, a dog barked.

Master Huan had told him to find a corner and breathe, not to haul sacks. The bakery had corners. It also had bread, heat, and a man who might trade coin for steady hands once the crack in his ribs stopped shouting. If he ever wanted to follow the road south, he would need more than thanks and a knife.

He adjusted his cloak, pulled it close, and stepped out from the shadow of the bell tower toward the road that would take him back to flour, heat, and work.