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Ouz pushed the bakery door open into the last of the day’s light. Out in the lane, stone walls looked dull in the low sun. The door swung shut behind him, and the sign above it creaked once.

Heat met him again, softer than the temple’s white glare and warmer than the tower’s cold shadow. The oven and a day’s worth of bread had soaked the room in a steady burn. Ash sat in the air. The front room stood empty of customers; the counter had been wiped, crumbs gathered in a small pile near the edge. From the workroom came the sound of a peel sliding on stone.

Dafu glanced up when Ouz stepped through the low doorway at the back.

“You came back,” the baker said.

He had a cloth in one hand. His sleeves were rolled; flour dusted the hair on his forearms. A new tray of loaves cooled on the rack behind him.

“They didn’t fix your head in a day?” Dafu asked. “I’m shocked.”

His tone carried just enough dry edge to sound like a test.

Ouz shook his head once.

“They couldn’t do much for that,” he said. “The monk said it might clear on its own. The ribs… he did something. It feels easier to breathe. He said I should rest a few days and it’ll set better.”

He placed a hand against his side. The bruised line still hurt when he pressed it. The pain sat lower now, like a weight that had settled into one place.

“Is that so.” Dafu wiped his fingers on the cloth and looked him over from boots to collar. “Rest in my house looks like work with the sharp edges taken off.”

He jerked his chin toward a sack near the far wall. The sack sat half full of grain, mouth tied, leaning against a crate.

“Pick that up,” Dafu said. “Hold it long enough to carry it to the door. If you drop, the monk lied or you did.”

Ouz stepped to the sack. He bent his knees, slid his hands under the tied mouth, and lifted with his legs. The weight dragged across the ache in his ribs in a slow scrape. His vision pinched at the edges for a breath. He locked it down, carried the sack in three steady steps, and set it by the door without letting it thump. He straightened. He tried not to show how hard his lungs worked.

Dafu watched his face, not the sack.

“Good,” he said. “You still have sense enough not to fold in half when it hurts. For the next few days you don’t touch anything heavier than a broom. You sweep, you wipe, you keep your eyes open. You watch what my hands do. When you can lift that sack and smile at me about it, we’ll talk about more.”

“Yes,” Ouz said.

Dafu nodded toward the corner.

“The broom is there. Mind the ash bucket. Mei’s gonna yell at both of us if you make a mess with it.”

Ouz took the broom. The first push along the boards sent little storms of flour into the air. He settled into the work without thinking much about it. His body understood sweeping; it was simpler than taking lives.

The days that followed blurred along the rhythm Dafu set.

In the mornings he swept the workroom before the first loaves went into the oven. He carried small bundles of wood from the stack outside to the firebox, nothing that made his ribs draw tight. He wiped counters, rinsed bowls, watched Biyu shape dough into neat rounds while she scolded Zhiru away from hot trays. When a customer came early and pounded on the front shutters, he listened to how Dafu answered. Short words, simple prices, no space for arguments.

When there was a gap, when bread sat cooling and the next batch had not yet gone in, Ouz found a patch of wall near the oven and rested his back against it. He let his eyes half close and let the heat sink all the way into his bones.

He drew his breath into a slow line, the way the Hermit had once shown him without naming it. In his chest, the strange sense the Iye had left in him waited, a thin bright thread under his ribs. He remembered the first time Iye had healed him, that strange power crawling through his body, hot at first, careful in its own way. Maybe what he did now with Iye’s Tín ran along the same path, only smaller.

He reached for that thread now. When he focused, it showed him the room in a new way. Dafu’s breath moved like bellows. Mei’s heart ticked quick under her ribs when she passed too close to the oven mouth. The oven itself glowed along that sense, a source of heat so steady it felt like a chant.

He kept the thread level. No spikes, no drops. The green words in the dark had called this balanced. He paired that with what the Hermit had told him once: make the breath slower, listen under the rest. Tín’s note sat in the middle. He held it, let go, found it again. The line between his inner ear and his ribs slowly stopped trembling.

After work he climbed the narrow stair with the others, ate at the table, slept under the same patched blanket. Each night the ache in his side shifted a little, like a bruise learning its borders. Each morning he could reach higher before pain reminded him of the fall.

On the third evening, Dafu watched him carry a tray of loaves from the oven to the rack without a wince.

“You’re eager to prove the monk right,” Dafu said.

Ouz set the tray down.

“I’d rather move than sit,” he said.

“Good. Boys who sit too long start to think too much.” Dafu snorted. “My daughter-in-law already does enough thinking for this house. You keep your hands busy. Here.”

He handed Ouz a rag.

“Front room,” he said. “Customers trample in everything the street throws at their boots. Before we close, make it look like we care.”

By the time the sky outside the front window had gone the color of cooled iron, the last customer had shuffled out with a bundle under one arm. Biyu slid the bolt on the door. Zhiru yawned loud enough to draw a look from Mei. She nudged him toward the stair.

“Up,” Biyu told them. “Hands washed. No arguing.”

Zhiru groaned but obeyed. Mei followed, carrying a basket that rattled with bowls.

Ouz knelt near the counter with a bucket of gray water and a rag. He worked from the far corner in slow strokes, pulling dirt toward him and into the bucket. The boards took on a dull, clean sheen as he passed. His shirt stuck to his back. The day’s heat had settled low in the room. Dafu banked the oven fire, drawing coals to one side. He left a small tongue of flame for the morning.

The knock on the door was light, almost polite. Two quick taps, a pause, two more. Dafu’s shoulders tightened at the sound. He straightened from the hearth and looked toward the front.

“We’re closed,” he called. “Come back at first light.”

The reply came through the wood, muffled but clear.

“That’s kinda why we’re here,” a man said. “Open up, old man. Time’s up.”

The air in the room shifted. Biyu, halfway to the stair, froze with one hand on the rail. Her fingers tightened until the knuckles went pale. Mei’s head turned; her eyes found Dafu.

He didn’t answer for a breath. Ouz saw the thought move across his face. Resign. Calculation. Something else under both.

“Upstairs,” Dafu said, without raising his voice. “All of you.”

Biyu opened her mouth to protest. She closed it again, swallowed, and nodded. She took Zhiru’s hand and pushed him up the stair in front of her. Mei followed, glancing back until Biyu gave her a light push between the shoulders.

Ouz stayed where he was. The rag dripped in his hand. From his angle he could see the door, the counter, the stair. He had spent three days scrubbing that stretch of floor. He knew every board.

Dafu walked to the front and slid the bolt back. The door swung inward fast. Three men stepped through in a loose line that said they had done this before. The one in front wore a coat that had once been fine and now hung open over a plain shirt. His hair had been shaved close to the scalp in a way that showed scars along the skin. A shallow cut had healed badly near his ear, leaving the lobe dragged down and a little misshapen.

The man behind him had a long face and a broken nose that sat a little to one side. The last one was broad across the shoulders, with a faded knot of ink at the base of his throat. All three carried the kind of ease that came from steel at the hip, even if their hands hung empty for the moment.

Their eyes flicked past Ouz without stopping. Whatever they saw there looked smaller than worth.

“Evenin’,” the first man said. He reached out and grabbed Dafu by the collar, like he was greeting an old friend. “You’re outta time.”

Dafu’s jaw set. His hands stayed at his sides.

“Let go,” he said. “You’re dirtying my work.”

The man laughed under his breath.

“Your work?” he said. “You mean our work. Our street. Our bakery we let you keep open. Collection day, old man. Don’t tell me you suddenly can’t hear.”

He gave Dafu a little shake.

“I heard you,” Dafu said. “I also told you what I had.”

The man’s grip tightened.

“Hey,” he said. “Look at you, still walkin’ around with that funeral head. We gave you forty days. That’s more patience than most get from us.”

He glanced back at his companions. They smiled, thin and sharp.

“Forty days,” he went on. “They say a soul hangs around that long before it moves on. We stayed off your door for every one of ’em. Let you burn your candles, cry your tears, scrape up coin. Instead of knockin’ it out of your teeth.” He grinned. “We call that respect for the dead.”

The man at the back chuckled.

“You know the sayin’,” he said. “For forty days the dead sit with the living. After that, it’s the living who gotta listen. You should’ve been listenin’ to us instead.”

Their amusement rolled in low waves. It sounded like they had told this joke before.

Dafu spat in the man’s face. The spit hit his cheek and slid down toward the badly healed cut by his ear, tracing the pull of the lowered lobe. For a heartbeat no one moved.

The man’s hand flew out. The slap cracked across the small room and sent Dafu to one knee. His head snapped to the side; his palm hit the floor to keep him from falling flat.

Upstairs, a board creaked as someone shifted their weight. The sound was small, but it cut through the men’s voices. Ouz felt it more than he heard it. The ceiling between them and the stair suddenly seemed thin.

“Careful,” the man said softly. “Shavin’ your head for grief don’t earn you a thing with me. You could wrap yourself in funeral rags and crawl on your face. I’d still want my coin.”

Dafu wiped the corner of his mouth with the back of his hand. A thin line of blood already showed.

“You took my son,” he said. “You want me to pay you for the kindness of it? Get out. Don’t put your feet on my floor again.”

The broken-nosed man laughed.

“Or what?” he said. “You gonna hit us with a kneading paddle? Pour hot water on our boots?”

The one at the back leaned against the counter with casual interest. His fingers brushed the carved edge, tapping a slow rhythm.

Through it all, Ouz stayed in his corner. He had gone still halfway through a stroke. The rag hung from his hand, drip tapping into the bucket. The men hadn’t looked at him yet; he had learned what it meant when wolves fixed on each other’s teeth and forgot the rest of the pack.

He watched, and in watching he counted.

The leader’s right hand was the one that had slapped. The knuckles were thick, skin built up from long use. His coat hung open enough to show the line of a sheath at his belt. The grip sat on the left, angled for a right-handed draw. The broken-nosed man had callouses more along his left palm; his fingertips flicked near his own belt without touching. The broad one had a small bulge under his sleeve where a short blade might sit; he favored his right leg when he shifted weight.

He let those details settle into the same place in his mind where he stored the forest paths and the gate’s lines. Not because he planned to use them now. Because the day might come.

“No coin?” the leader said. “Then you pay another way. A man your age should know that already. Debt don’t vanish just because you’re sittin’ in the dark feelin’ sad.”

He leaned closer.

“I was ready to grab a handful of loose change and walk,” he said. “Easy night. No fuss. You made it a fuss. Tomorrow, if I don’t see coin on that counter, I take somethin’ else from this house. Someone from upstairs.”

His teeth showed in a smile that never touched his eyes.

Dafu’s fingers curled against the boards. His voice came out low.

“Leave,” he said. “The watch will hear about this. There’s still someone on this street who remembers what law’s supposed to look like.”

The three men burst out laughing.

“The watch,” the one at the back said. “You already ran to them, remember? They said a boy died in a street quarrel, end of story. You point at us, they say grief’s twisted what you see. You really think they started listenin’ now?”

The leader clicked his tongue.

“This is your last chance,” he said. “Have coin on that counter tomorrow. If you don’t, I pick who walks out with us.”

He loosened his grip and gave Dafu a little shove. The baker rocked back, settling on both knees.

“Let’s go,” the leader told his companions.

They turned toward the door. As they did, the broad one’s gaze finally snagged on Ouz. The man stopped.

“What’s this?” he said. “You’ve picked up strays since we last came by.”

He looked Ouz up and down: the face, the rag in his hand, the bucket.

“What you staring at?” he asked. “Eyes down, boy. Or I’ll take ’em out and hang ’em from that hook behind you.”

Ouz met his gaze and didn’t look away. His face stayed slack, the way the Hermit had told him to wear it when trouble came, nothing the men could read. Inside, his thoughts moved in clean lines. Three men. Weight, distance, weak spots. Some quiet place in him waited for them to push too far. Another part held that place back, hearing the old man’s voice: stay small, not here. He didn’t need three bodies on this floor. Not yet. Whatever stirred in his chest never reached his hands.

The broad man took a step toward him.

“I said down,” he repeated.

“Leave the boy,” Dafu said from the floor. “He knows nothing. He’s been here three days and barely earns his crust.”

The leader glanced back.

“Forget him,” he said. “We’re done here for tonight.”

The broad man hesitated. For a moment his weight leaned forward, balanced on the balls of his feet. His eyes stayed on Ouz’s face, studying him, hunting for a flinch he could press. He found none. He snorted under his breath.

“Crazy,” he muttered. “Enjoy your new pet, old man.”

He turned toward the door. As he did, Ouz shifted his attention to the leader instead, tracing the man’s gait, the way the slap-hand flexed once at his side in a small twitch that looked ready to pick the next jaw. He fixed the man’s face in his head. Scar. Ear. Smile that slit across it.

The leader felt the eyes on his back and glanced over his shoulder.

“What a city,” he said. “Street rats with no sense of fear.”

He gave a little shake of his head and stepped out into the lane. The others followed. The door closed behind them with more force than Dafu ever used. The bolt didn’t move for several breaths.

The room went quiet. Ash dust hung in the air.