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Noah's POV - Chapter 13 - Teser (Patreon)

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2026-03-24 15:01:16
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2026-08-26 16:05:25
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Noah's POV - Teser

All characters are 18+ and this is all fiction.

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Noah's POV - Chapter 13 - Teser

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Eryndor

Every Noah Chapter I feel like I'm adding another Pokemon to my Pokedex for each new little insight we get into his psyche ;_; this one was INTERESTING omg I found it fascinating just how "on edge" Noah was during the entire chapter. The triple jump-scare, the lead up into why Liam wants to talk, the days at the hospital; it's definitely understandable why he would be, given the circumstances. It's especially interesting too, given he "feels" a couple of emotions this chapter [pity? / "something uncomfortable"] that he gives in to BOTH times. Almost like his body is in fight or flight both because of the circumstances and because he physically "feels" his body trying to let emotions in, even if just one or two! Almost like cocoon -> butterfly but he'll be damned if he's gonna come out as some dainty Monarch lmfao Chat always discusses Liam's growth arc as he's verbalizing/internal monologuing/"developing" more rapidly so-to-speak; however, each Noah chapter he is ALSO giving in/growing just a little more - even if it is very miniscule. And at times too it feels like "1 step forward, 2 steps back" for him, but given the scene(s) with him and his dad... it's very telling why sadly v_v There were a couple of lines too that stood out to me as well. We learn that Noah DID share with Ashley about his scholarship - something he told Liam he DIDN'T do [Chapter 16 convo with Claire] OR did Liam just ASSUME Noah hadn't told anyone about his scholarship? Bold of Liam if so, like very "That's MY man" of him, and for Noah, who literally in this chapter says "...didn't need that shit [hospital] bleeding into his real life," bro WHAT is your real life then and what's not?! What is okay to share "about yourself" and what's not?! rubix cube of a human I swear Also DYLAN.... the club scene makes much more sense now I found it telling too, at least to me, Noah began the whole reset thing a bit at arms length with Liam - at the beginning it felt much less intimate/personal (ie: use this technique on chicks, "he knew he [Noah] wasn't the f-ggot in the room", etc) but as it progressed it seemed like Noah, much as he coaxes Liam to "get lost in it, let go", Noah did as well! Like the end with the kiss... didn't you say something about plausible deniability prior to that, Noah...? The call may be coming from inside the house! Small baby steps toward growth and self development... glacier pace... but forward nonetheless I hope.. for now... incoming Chapter 16+ ;_; Also the thought of Ashley running a meditation and wellness ig account while praying on the demise of Liam, like girl if you don't get somewhere.. (LOVED her saying Liam was influencing Noah though, cute and also facts)

Zeb35

Great chapter. So interesting to see Noah lowering his walls more and showing up for the people in his life. We see at least three instances of him doing something he doesn't want to do (going to the hospital, consoling Ashley, wearing a condom for Liam), and these acts are spurred by emotions he'd normally try to avoid or reject and a desire to make someone else feel better. They are acts that serve to strengthen each relationship and, in the case of Ashley and Liam, draw those people closer to Noah, rather than pushing them away. Which in turns means he is drawn closer to them, something he would probably say he doesn't want. But actions speak louder than words, no? Emotional growth against one's will! I love it. Also, Lucas, I thought the Liam POV of this chapter was hot, but this version...Jesus Christ. The way you write about Noah fucking Liam is so intense and so fucking good. Some of the best erotic writing I've ever read (and I've read...um...kind of a lot). Thank you for writing this story and publishing it here for us to enjoy. And because I can't help but be a little sappy...Noah putting the condom on because he could see how scared Liam was...🥹

Lorraine DeWilde

lol you make me feel like a bad person when I read Noah’s POV. I can’t help but laugh along as he mercilessly fucks with everyone around him. Like, I should probably feel bad about him cheating on Ashley, but I am too busy laughing at him not give af about the whole thing. The last story that made me feel this way was Better Call Saul, when I found myself just cracking up at Saul mercilessly conning everyone. There is a real delicious sadism in this writing.

Jim

Amazing how the chapter is so similar but written so different. I thought it was great.

Reilly

Eryndor this was a very entertaining read lol. I interpreted the "didn't need that shit bleeding into his real life" bit the other way round I think. I was assuming he was referring to his family as his real life and his stuff with Liam as the "shit" lol. It's interesting cause we only really see Noah's life where it involves Liam so it's easy to feel like that IS his life (and yea he's lowk obsessed) cause regular days where they dont see each other aren't shown. Id be curious to know how much time has passed since the start of the story and therefore how 'dense' their frequency of interaction is.