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Heavy revision which was quite a pain ;A;

I had the third panel in my mind ever since we wrote this script...and I totally wanted to use it no matter what. Charlene is just so beautiful when she started talking some sense into her (nearly) deadbeat husband.

Originally Roy's dialogue was said by Charlene (of course in a questioning way)

But I thought it would work so much better for Roy whining about all the 'great things' he'll miss when giving up his old life. I also thought it would give a little look into his head and how he feels about the whole shotgun marriage thing. Apparently he was welcoming the fact that he'd become a dad (I'm so happy how uplifting the comments about that was by the audience. Thank you ^3^)

However, I thought it would be a nice turn of events that he's not ready for the marriage itself. After all, we are talking about a dude who ran off because his mom mocked his boots. how could he be mature enough to accept being a husband and taking care about a wife?

I was amazed that nobody got offended by his choice of words in the last panel. We try to avoid cussing as much as possible. But it was unavoidable to have him use some sort of vulgar language here ^^"

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NewPatriot778

I know everything turned out find, but Charlene really shouldn't have been climbing trees while pregnant, if she had fallen we may never have gotten Michaela. Plus I'd hate to think what her family would have done to Roy for being inadvertingly responsible for the loss of their newest family member.