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Hey everyone,

Here's the first part of Chapter 169.

As I mentioned in the previous update, I decided to reorganise the battle and change the sequence of scenes so that it flowed better. As this is such an important chapter, I wanted the battle to feel suitably epic.

I'll work through the rest of the scenes, editing them so they all make sense with the new version, then paste them onto the end of this chapter.

I'm sorry that I wasn't able to completely finish it before the end of the month. I've been suffering some nasty health complications recently, all related to the ongoing gallstone saga.

Best wishes,

Tefler

Comments

Michael

Your doing great keep it up 👊👍

Unctadsk

Thanks Tefler for your chapters. Wish your and your Family a good health in coming months. Please try to complete remaining 3 chapters early so that we can come out of the cycle of placeholders and resentment.

Jim Owens

Keep focusing on your health. The words will come when you are ready.

seth mcmahan

Ignore the people eho dont understand the need for money to write while going through a health crisis. You got this and things will improve.

Antoine Scrivener

Much appreciated. Glad to see the tide is slowly turning. Gonna be a hell of debrief after this battle.

Tom Christie

I am so in awe of your writing and your commitment! I was just spending some time re-reading this from the beginning -- more than 9 years ago. Your devotion to this saga is nothing short of amazing, and in fact, I am not certain there are words to express my esteem. While I might wish that you could restructure how you are compensated, which could reduce the strain you feel. I am just so astonished that you have managed to maintain your devotion to the story. Your writing style is elegant, and even the sex scenes can be compelling. I am just so gratified that you have continued writing this story, and I can only hope you will continue!

Carcharias

After Calara finished strategizing with Leylira you wrote “the Nymph pilor” instead of “pilot”. Looks good otherwise.

GC

"with the Nymph pilor". pilot, I assume

Walter Davis

OMG!!! I am loving this chapter…please don’t make us wait all month to get the rest!!

Mark Strom

We are still supporting you. The chapters are good, and it is ironic that online games consume so much more than you ask. People don't realize how much bills cost in the uk. Tele tax, parking tax, carpet tax, everything is taxed in the uk.

Unctadsk

Tefler, you have send A short chapter in 169. Hope it will be properly completed soon. Also you are now 5.5 chapter back on place holders.🤔😩😱😡

James Dougherty

Best wishes for a rapid health improvement

Azwiz

Tef I hope you're feeling better . Still a couple of GR8 battle chapters . Can't wait to read the rest of the battle . Keep well Sir . And thank you .

Steve

Maybe the gallstone saga is something to write about? If it is not too painful to write about all the pain you feel and felt

Mac of Alden

Having bullied you into giving up your job and being funded by Patreon, I feel responsible for you, especially when hard times hit. I would recommend that you alter the system to a straight monthly payment method and we get chapters as and when they are ready. This will improve the perceived delivered quality as we will not be getting half finished pieces of work. People do not seem to understand that gallbladder problems, can be very complex. It took a long time for the system to sort out my wifes Gallbladder problems, and there can be all sorts of side effects, depending on the individual patient. Those outside the UK will not understand the way our health care system works(or not) nor the costs and time that can be involved.

John the 5th

Another great read. I had to stop and catch y breath a couple of times.

Robert Hibbs

I feel bad for Tef's health issues, but I will drop my subscription if it changes to monthly. I am willing to pay by the chapter, but not just for living expenses. The charging by chapter provides motivation and supports pride of work, while a monthly charge has no accountability and assigns zero value to delivering chapters. I don't like the placeholders, but at least it provides a delayed accountability, and I feel it is a fair compromise of advanced payment for future delivery as an alternative to just dropping out or on-going charity. Please understand, I am not hammering Tef for not being able to work, but I also have to be responsible for my spending.

John the 5th

Lol, almost gotta wonder if there's a connection between the villain 'Gally' and the gallstones.

Newnotsure

Sorry but this is a copy of the ending of 168

John Spears

Telfer you said in your previous update that you held off posting the end of Chapter 168 until you were happy with Chapter 169. Which implies at the very least that 169 should have been mostly completed. This release of an abbreviated 169 is a major disappointment. The only thing consistent about you is your tendency to over promise and under deliver. Now with underwhelming results.

Johnboy

Great writing but quite short.

G E

Loved the way it flows now. Good job ordering it. I have a few ideas on how it will end, but you always surprise me. :)

Walter Henderson

Hope interim posting occur on at least a weekly basis

Michael56Smith

-- Hey Tef, you got any hints to share as to when a completed chapter #169 might present itself? ... Thank you for your work, and I really hope that those pesky gallstones give you a break, ... ;-) ttfn

Michael56Smith

-- So, you'll finish off chapter #169 for an end of June release, and perhaps a teaser portion of #170 as well, ... hope you are feeling better soon, ,... TSM is so awesome, thank you, .... ;-) ttfn

EroticPoetic

So there’s a week left in the month… and we’re still 5-1/2+ chapters behind… How long will it take to get caught up? Will that ever happen at this point? And what happens if Tefler keeps posting placeholders? Can Patreon shut this account down for mismanagement or fraud? God forbid! I love the story and want it to keep going. I just hope Tefler doesn’t ruin his Patreon account by not delivering what’s promised.

Duncan Smith

aye up Tefler any movement or is every one froze in a stasis field, hope your health issues are getting resolved

Michael56Smith

... Expensive chapters? ... caused by the prepay? ... that might be a fair concept, ... or possibly, and this is just a thought, Tef's most recent placeholders could be to allow him to go to a private, more expensive, Physician, ... he might be working to solve his problems, ... good luck Tef, I'm praying for you buddy, ... ;-) ttfn

John Degennaro

What time is it in merry old England?

MVFast

Soon… Hopefully only a few more hours for the rest of 169 and 170. I hope he’s able to do more so we can binge on it.

Michael56Smith

-- maybe #169 could be completed at end of July, .... ;-) ttfn