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Alright, we're getting to the good stuff finally!This page is fairly similar to the first page in terms of action, so I tried to spice it up with a few more interesting angles this time around. Hope it's alright!

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Bloudin Ruo

Man what a page! As I said in the lines, I think the progression in this page is just superb. The last two panels specifically just get me, with that much stallion just so close to a waiting muzzle. Then that cliffhanger! You sure know how to keep us on edge :) As for the technical conposition, I love that everything in the background is just abstract. Being able to focus solely on the foreground, and drift into the kind of 'pink fuzz' I'm sure Kyle is well and truly immersed in right now is a great move. Additionally, this page is so close in on the characters after getting farther out shots of them for so many pages that it's nice to see their details again! Great work Ru, a simply fabulous page, really :) p.s., fennec markings all present and accounted for!

Summer Vixen

Mmmph! Balls! Big 'uns! Thank you, Ru <3 <3 <3 Edit: also, I *really* love the eyes in the first panel. Sooooo well-drawn! In fact- when was the last time you did a close-up of a character's eyes? I don't recall noticing a shot like that before. How'd you get them to look so good here?

Shadewing

the director will just shrug and go "fuck it, just film them and print it"