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The bottom panel isn't inked because I'm going to try for an out-of-focus effect, and start black ink doesn't mesh well with that idea!

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Scarlet565 (edited)

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2026-09-07 08:00 first thought on last panel: "My gawd, those ears!"
2019-02-05 01:37

Bloudin Ruo

I think you got a really good expression on the horse actor in panel #2. Just enough of "Damn finally" and "This is actually good" :P Kyle has a long way to go, though! He's only just taken the tip~ Also, something I've just noticed with the lines--the diagonal transition between panels #2 and #3 seems to give the illusion of some lines crossing over, and making the horse actor look like he has a bit of a belly, because of his slouch in panel #2 and the perspective change in #3. Let me know if you see what I'm referring to, otherwise maybe it's just one of those optical illusions that I can't unsee!