Home Creators Posts Import Register Favorites Logout
haven't archived this post yet. have a subscription? use the importer!

Downloads

  • The Subordinate Chapter Five.pdf
  • The Subordinate Chapter Five.txt

Missing 2 files, as this post has not yet been imported.

Content

After a short delay, it's back - and meaner than ever! Picking up from the previous chapter, Olive rushes home in a moment of lucidity to keep her girlfriend Luna from crossing the Rubicon with Ivy... but can her newfound conviction withstand Ivy's presence? And more importantly, is Luna still the sweet, innocent girl Olive once knew her as?

I had a ton of fun getting back into the groove of this story. Enjoy! And thank you to Brendon for commissioning this chapter

Comments

Madison S.

"“Good,” Ivy interrupts. “Really, it’s a shame you couldn’t be here.” Another twitch.. And I notice that Luna is beginning to turn a deep shade of red." made my head do a very funny, I couldnt decide if I was close to gagging or crying. I think the scary part is that it spoke to that little part of my brain that doesnt trust anyone, that thinks that im...inferior, that my partners would rather have sex with people other than me but just dont want to admit it. tho halfway through I found it strangely powerful that Ivy is a trans woman haha.

Kallidora Rho

I've found it much the same writing it! It's really fun to be able to write a trans woman in a role like this, it really inspires me

WhoreHound

Reading Ntr from the viewpoint of the cucked while I'm depressed, recovering from a hungover and to top things of, at work it's like giving a gun to a teenager. I love NTR I've always loved it, I usually emphatisize more with the viewpoint of the adulterer, and so I would have loved if Luna's perversion had more protagonism, but having this terrible story explained so thoughtfully really tears me apart in the most beautiful way. Poor little Olive