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Ponyfinder Core - Unified (Patreon)

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2018-02-22 22:26:50
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Here is the first 10 pages of the revised core (attached to this post as a pdf). Read, criticize harshly.

Comments

Anonymous

In Ponykind Pathfinder Attributes, Languages should have the text, "Ponies begin play speaking Common and Sylvan. Ponies with high Intelligence scores can choose and languages they want (except secret languages, such as Druidic)." to match other pathfinder races. In Earth-Bound Pathfinder Attributes, under Ability Scores, there's a missing space in "insightful butnot terribly agile." In Pegasus Pathfinder and 5E Attributes, the description for Cloud Walker is too inspecific and the second part of the last sentence seems tacked on. You go from rules text to flavor-ish text in the same sentence. I would suggest, "Cloud Walker (Su): Pegasi may treat fog or other clouds as solid, if fluffy, objects for the purposes of taking walks, playing games, and so on. Activating or deactivating this feature is a free action taken on the their turn. Should they become incapacitated, cloud walker continues to function indefinitely." For the 5E version, "Cloud Walker (Su): You may treat fog or other clouds as solid, if fluffy, objects for the purposes of taking walks, playing games, and so on. Activating or deactivating this feature is a free action taken on the your turn. Should you become incapacitated, cloud walker continues to function indefinitely." to match the 2nd-person tone of 5E abilities. In the Unicorn description, you have an ambiguous direct object. I would suggest changing, "not shy about reminding anyone listening of the fact." to "not shy about reminding anyone listening of this fact." In Unicorn Pathfinder Attributes, under Ability Scores, the last word "nimbl" is missing an "e". Under Horn Magic, unseen servant is missing its em-dash. Also, everything in the Horn Magic description can be moved to a single line to match other Pathfinder races. If you do, unseen servant also needs a comma on the end. In the 5E block, under Elegant Spellcaster, you have a plurality mismatch. It should be "advantage on a Constitution saving throw" or "advantage on Constitution saving throws" depending on the proper form for 5E.