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Okay, this might mess with my later schedule, but I finished the TLS update and I don't want to put it off any more artificially. So you're getting an update now, just please be patient for 0.35.0. Here's the newest version:

Link: https://mega.nz/#!bkVRwAJJ!xxIw1hYWD2Ux4yPgs67pYFefNroIH_cNkxaGvUHMmwk 

RTP: https://mega.nz/#!flUhiaDS!6bgHfnsO8d7Q5SVZDtrO5BdvkuAb1YuavJepudeew5A 

TLS 0.34.1

 - Givini/Ardford content from last time now properly blocked off.

 - Dari maxing conversation added.

 - Misc bugfixes and improvements.

TLS 0.34.0

New Content:

 - New section of the plot.

 - Four new plot scenes, six new affection scenes.

 - Uyae can join the harem.

 - If you did the transformation research, Dari can finally be cured. With enough relationship points, she can also join.

 - Bar miniquest. Visiting most bars in the game will trigger an Orcent conversation (nine added).

Changes:

 - The requirements to max Iris have changed. She is now locked at 99 until you have invested a significant amount in the Chalice States. If you already maxed her in the past, there will be no change.

 - Riala now comments on the current research project.

 - The head Unsuccubus reports on your base's stats.

 - Thanks to Lamsey, there is an updated map of Arclent showing the new nations! You can find it in the teleportation room.

For once this isn't being finished at the last second, but that's left me with a weird feeling that I've derped on something right at the end. Welp, report if there are issues.

This one has some awaited events as well as some new fodder for discussion. I hope everyone enjoys!

Comments

Tanner

I'm loving this update. Not finished everything yet, but my favourite thus far is the GRAND ARCLENT BAR CRAWL with Simon and Oricent

aso bromo

The map doesn't seem to stay updated

SSCat

Okay, I need some help. I'm still a few parts back, but I got everyone back to the castle... And I have no idea what to do next. Please help.

Dubsington

Yay for Uyae!!!! (sorry, had to) And is it strange that I'm super-excited about a chance to finally nail Dari's strange green cannibal self?

DukeLeto7

OK, if you choose monster Dari, then induct her into the harem, then talk to her afterwards, Simon says "TEXT", and she responds "TEXT" before getting to the harem member menu. Looks like a forgotten placeholder. Text box overflow on the head unsuccubus' HQ rundown.

DukeLeto7

I for one look forward to seeing Orcent pass the bar.

Name

Odd bug I've only just now noticed, but looking through the past versions has been going on for quite some time. Hilstara seems to be entirely missing from my HQ. I still have her as a usable party member, and she was present at the beginning of this update for her massage scene, but her model disappeared as soon as the scene ended and she's nowhere else to be found. Additionally, I'm not sure if this is intended or not, but while my equipment section shows the entire harem, my formation is limited to Uyae, Qum, Hilstara, Yarra, and Nalili. I'm currently caught up with the content and everyone (aside from Hilstara) is present in the headquarters.

Captain Hair

I just want to say..... damn you. I was all ready to end the content with an assassination and you pull the rug out

Desuwa

There are two Balias right next to each other in the headquarters courtyard. I didn't invest in Balia's orc labs during the first round. Some initial conversations in the HQ are repeating themselves. By initial conversations I mean the conversations that trigger the first time you talk to the character, not the ones that are repeated if you talk to them 2+ times.

Lord Forte Games

Minor visual bugs: The various statues and such in the new Tower segment are passable. Overall, I enjoyed the update. Some balance thoughts: Weirdly, I found this Tower segment significantly easier than others and was able to get through it without a healer. Of course, maybe I just hit on a good party combination for it (Simon, Robin, Hilstara, and Aka), but MP attrition ended up being more of a danger than the actual fights, which I just thought I'd note since it felt odd after Robin's warning before it. That said, I loved the aesthetic of this area. Plot developments were intriguing, of course, though not entirely surprising. I always got the sense that the Anak was that sort of person--being relatively reasonable is what makes one especially dangerous, as we all know well. Looking forward to the next update!

WaxerRed

Between the amazing plot conversations and the orcent bar talks I would definitely call this the pleasant dialogue update, I love it. The only real 'blur' I felt was when Anak refereed to the Extra dimensional space as the "Tower" and Simon questioned the term. Robin had already used that word "Tower" when you ask her about Research back at the base. Although if I had to voice an opinion I would say the 'error' would be Robin knowing the term "Tower" in the first place because I'm not sure where she would have heard it and in ever other instance they call it "Extra Dimensional Space."

DukeLeto7

So, Xerces is a True Neutral. I hate these filthy Neutrals. With enemies you know where you stand, but with Neutrals... Who knows? It sickens me! What makes a man turn Neutral? Lust for gold? Power? Or was he simply born with a heart full of Neutrality?

Runcible Technician

This was a gem to play through, thank you so much! The conversations were great!

Edward Culham

By the way, anyone else notice how the previous research seemed to not be done. Selected it back in 31.2 and just seems to have nothing done still. Choose to upgrade orks in case anyone else noticed it as well

Nome

I found a bug where you can go back to Ardoheim to deal with Tyna's request, after it's already been dealt with. If you go to the teleport chamber and select the Ardoheim crystal it asks you the prompt for Tyna's request and it take you there if you say yes. You can freely leave it by going to the teleport circle on the New Givini regional map, so it's not like you're trapped in the event for eternity.

Young Quality

So, I started a whole brand new game just to refresh myself on everything that's happened. However, I've just stopped the Coup the first time you enter Yhilin, and when I try to leave the castle, Aka's telling me to talk to Janine. I have talked to every member in the castle multiple times at this point, and I'm not able to progress any farther, anybody have an idea of what I should do?

Hypo Soc

Regarding the Ardoheim bug, I've found this locks out your party to the New Givini team. I might need a save fix, because I've lost most of my combat party and unknowingly saved after.

SerEaglenose

The conversation in the Gasm Falls bar acts as if Orcent and Lucy are still together even after he and Kara start a relationship. Tho I do like how it highlights how ill suited he and Lucy are for one another.

DukeLeto7

Very minor. In the Trin Copies Common event, the listing for the Ghanth Aide being copied is tied to the New Givini Aide's switch but there is no line for the New Givini Aide

Fulminato

i don't think it alredy reported, the uyae's synergy skills aren't unlocked because the courtyard script set her RP score to 99

Seil

Anyway, played through the update. Bar conversations were interesting most of the time. "Delivering one unconscious psychopath". That cracked me up. And regarding that big conversation at the end... Hm... That's some interesting development. And now i am wondering what's the deal with perfectly ordinary girl is even more.

Iamdexter

I think some investments deserve an upgrade. Yhilin Bank bring less return than the Stineford Bank is quite unbalanced, maybe high Yhilin score or reaching the final stage can boost a bit? Also is that possible to make Booze Shack more "illustrious"(more Prons)by supporting Farnan selling booze to orcs? I remember SL is planning a complex investment system,so if these suggestions upset your plan,you can just ignore it. Last but not least , the new Arclent map is a one time thing,I cannot reread it,guess it is a bug.

HarmlessArachnid

Excellent work as always. I'm pretty sure I have missed stuff, though. Revisiting old areas, I find it odd that there are still drunks passed out in front of the bar in Stineford's slums even after it was closed by the Church. Perhaps they are just used to lying there? :)

Chaon

"Dari can finally be cured. " Oh boy... a certain priestess won't be happy about that. :P

Sycrus

Nice update. A whole lot of interesting content crammed into it. Finally, one of the world's greatest mysteries revealed: the Anak is a Druid! ... Yeah... :P

stephenwang89@duck.com

Found a couple of bugs (I think), if you talk with Dari after her transformation and are working on inducing her into the harem (After Yarra says "That works! Into the harem!"), her next conversation is just TEXT from her and then from Simon. Second error is that if you use the reflect skills (I've gotten the new Hilstara scene, the new Robin scene, the Dari scene, and the Uyae scene) and scroll up from the bottom, one of the scenes is causing the game to crash. Will keep playing and thanks for the great work! For the crash, I see this in the log Cache:106:in `initialize': No such file or directory - Graphics/Faces/Robin emo, Errno::ENOENT from Cache:106:in `new' from Cache:106:in `normal_bitmap' from Cache:91:in `load_bitmap' from Cache:45:in `face' from Window_Base:381:in `draw_face' from Lone Wolf: Scene Replay:505:in `block in set_faces' from Lone Wolf: Scene Replay:504:in `each_index' from Lone Wolf: Scene Replay:504:in `set_faces' from Lone Wolf: Scene Replay:492:in `update' from Scene_Base:95:in `block in update_all_windows' from Scene_Base:93:in `each' from Scene_Base:93:in `update_all_windows' from Scene_Base:49:in `update_basic' from Scene_Base:41:in `update' from Scene_Base:14:in `main' from SceneManager:23:in `run' from Main:8:in `block in <main>'</main>

sierralee

Okay... reports seemed to have slowed down, so I've put out a new version. See the post for links/details!

Censuur

Things got a bit weird this time around, as I ended up with a split party thinking I was able to continue Tyna's situation. Made it a bit challenging to go through the new dungeon with just Simon and a gaggle of succubi, but I enjoyed these fights much more than the last few updates (more attrition and less "boom your party member is now dead have fun trying to revive them" And I guess Simon + succubi is uniquely suited to attrition what with a large amount of recovery for both health, lust and mana. The plot expands once more and the exposition was great, but now we have even more to look forward to, man can only handle so much anticipation ;)

Phil

I went from 70 Economy before Tyna to >80 after this investment round, but going to Megail's office doesn't trigger a scene. Wrong info in the wiki or bug?

Hell Satan

Had to become a patron don't know how long that will last though stupid dollar exchange rate.

WaxerRed

I'm not sure if the Iris 100 RP conversation is bugged. I know that it now requires Chalice State investments but I poured well over 1.5 million pron in and still can't seem to get that elusive last point, I have well over 40+ "Chalice state score" as the option to send the succubus nun to Beatrice occurred, but that still seems not enough. I am unsure how to proceed if it is a late game variable I need to work towards or just a bug.

Hell Satan

Where can I post image of bugs cause I see a lamp on the teleport room in the black space on the left side of Riala floating in the black space.

Dubsington

With the teleport room, I feel kind of like I did when I unlocked the airship in Desecration of Wings. The new flexibility is great, but I don't really have any idea what the hell I'm supposed to *do*. My memory sucks too much to reliably retain game state information from release to release, and the quest log is basically useless (it just tells me to try to hire maids and the "arbiter" quest, which shows as white but has no actual to-do items in it). I ended up talking to everyone in the castle and enjoying the new dialog, then sort of flopping around the countryside a bit before giving up. Am I supposed to be revisiting every location on every release and talking to every single person? That can't be right, it's an insane grind. The dialogue between characters gives lots of hints about what they are doing, but to my simple brain it doesn't clearly translate into quest objectives.

Trevor

Another nice update. I've got some comments and some bugs so lets get going! Bugs: -Several Text shifts in the new affection scenes. Dari 'Hiding' - "He cooperatively reached around her body to cup her" Uyae 'Nesting' - "She leaned forward and took his member fully into" Uyae 'Exotic' - This entire scene is a mess. It looks like a few page-breaks got lost in translation or something. -Lantern Floating in Teleportation room near place to enter holy plane. -In Zirtanian slums the tent message "It seems this is a home, not a store." Can be activated from the side of the tent as well as offset from the door. Applies to both tents. Not really an issue but feels weird. -Teleporting Succubi-Nun during Helvanna Church Ritual. Comments: - Talking with Sarai in Yhilin has no mention of that Hester told her. To be added later? Or has that conversation worked its way though the rest of the world. -Eustrin how long has the sword merchant that Min worked with been there? I've lost track of how long it actually has been and he seems to have been moving on for quite awhile now, -How long will the Denmiel Mushroom Farm owner take to hand off her farm to someone else? If we invested in her after the 3rd war it has been quite awhile. -I really liked the Helvanna church ritual. Top notch scene. It got me thinking about the Succubi in general. They are so sweet and all loving. We haven't really met any truly vile/evil succubi so our perception of them as players is a bit skewed when compared with those in game. I can only really think of 2 which are slightly morally grey. As a result when someone is mean/cruel to succubi it is like kicking a puppy, they only want to love you and show affection. The fact that they are so often the victim (that we see directly) is only icing on the cake. Is this intentional on your part or will we see 'evil' succubi in the future? -The conversation with Anak was really interesting. I think that his goal of balance is doomed to failure. When life gets involved it does a good job at throwing things out of wack, doubly so for intelligent life. "Life finds a way as they say." More interesting to me is WHY he so hung up on balance. It is also telling that he places himself as the one people meet when the ascend the tower. Sounds to me like he it claiming mastery/ownership of the upper levels, which doesn't seem very balanced. Learning about the other tower climbers is interesting as well. We're finally getting some insight as to who the real players are. My initial guesses are someone in the Church and the Divine claw for two of the climbers, maybe the Mother's Guard too. Or Ginasta. Heck anyone with yellow eyes I guess. -With Yarra's harem tracker getting filled out a bit more, it is getting a little bit easier to guess who may/may not be a future harem member. For example in the 'Combat' tab we have a blank between Nalili and Uyae, the 'Non-Combat' tab has one between Wynn and Iris and 'Leader' has two gaps between Janine and Lynine. There is a limited number of characters who can fit in these slots. The fun part is imagining how they end up joining. -Will is be possible to get 100 affection with all harem members? Some individuals currently have very little leeway in their affection and it seems like RP are getting scarce as time goes by. I wonder if I may have missed my chance with some characters who have been at 90+ for some time. Thanks for all your hard work!

genericname12345

It looks like there's a bug in 34.1? I can't seem to recall the Robin Transformation scene. EDIT: Realized that this isn't much to go off of: The application crashes, with a Script 'Game_Temp' line 37: NoMethodError. This is what the error log reads: Game_Temp:37:in `common_event_reserved?': undefined method `>' for #<array:0xd8df204>, NoMethodError from Game_Interpreter:89:in `setup_reserved_common_event' from Game_Map:674:in `setup_starting_event' from Game_Map:660:in `block in update_interpreter' from Game_Map:653:in `loop' from Game_Map:653:in `update_interpreter' from Game_Map:565:in `update' from TileSwap:786:in `update' from Scene_Map:62:in `update' from Scene_Base:14:in `main' from SceneManager:23:in `run' from Main:8:in `block in <main>'</main></array:0xd8df204>

werewindle

Nice update, investment cycles and Tower lore are the best. Tho I have a hunch I'll be replaying the Ardan succession crisis yet again for 0.35, heh. Originally I went with the Orc research, which seems a bit inconsequential, so after checking out the changelog I went with the Unpeople research because reasons. That ended rather disappointingly, because I am in the high 80 with Dari, but healing her (or anything else happening in the past few updates, afaik) gives no RP bonus, so I'm just stuck agonizingly close to the goal. Seriously though, Simon fulfills her greatest wish and the only reward is a passing compliment on his looks? So unfair!!! Then again, it looks like some cold hard stat bonuses in magic defence might be the sexiest reward in the near future... Also you can walk onto the dark pillar to the left of the bosses guarding the Anak.

Fulminato

Sierra in the 'uyae affection' common event the title "Lovemate" [rp between 75-99] is unachievable because gated behind the 0001 swich (always off). this should be 2722 "uyae joined"?

EG Douglas

Potential bug? In the new content, trying to teleport to Ardoheim gives the prompt to respond to Tyna's request again. Also, the scene with Orcent and Simon in the New Givini teahouse is just precious. What are the numbers for Dari joining the harem? She's currently at 73 for me, and that doesn't appear to be enough. Are there opportunities to boost her some coming up? [hopeful] Also, is her choice purely cosmetic? I'd like to prioritise her wellbeing, but I'm not sure which option is in this case. And she's cute either way. [EDIT] Just seen up above I appear to be way off her target. Dang. It does kinda feel improving relationship points has slowed rather dramatically of late. Not wanting to criticise, but the feeling of stagnation with harem members is becoming a thing. Possibly just because we wait for updates and the pacing is designed for playing straight through - which is the more important priority. [EDIT 2] Talking to Orcent in the Gushing Quim reference Lucy, even if her situation has already been resolved with Kara. Intentional? [EDIT 3] In the conversation with the Anak, Alonon doesn't seem to be specifically mentioned at any point. If he's not discussed because he's already a known factor, I don't think that came across obviously enough. [EDIT 4] After the scene showing the update, the new map of Arclent doesn't remain showing the three new states. Okay, I'm going to stop iterating my response now... >.>

Greentext Guy

Have you considered buffing Hilstaras's helm? Currently it's worse than the mammoth helm in terms of pure defense even though it's a lot harder to get and less thematically appropriate.

Hell Satan

I hope the fucklord doesn't invade next update I just started to invest on the airship after anak mentioned it.

Secular Reason

Hmm. One bug I haven't seen anyone comment on yet. If you replace Robin as leader during the Ardford sections? When you reunite the party Simon won't be in the leader position. And since you can't move him at all in the party selection screen, he just stops being the one leading the party. In my first playthrough I put Carina or Hilstara (someone who had really high DEF - used to the enemies attacking the person in slot one the most from other games) in the lead, and Simon somehow ended up in the second slot. Minor, cosmetic only affect but not having Simon in the lead after the party reunites is weird. Adding a script to force the party order to change differently would do it.

DukeLeto7

Minor side question. I took a gander around the new switches primarily to seek out new investment possibilities, and It didn't seem like there was anything that could be related to the new side quest regarding corruption that you teased in the comment chain that went down the philosophy rabbit hole last week. Can I assume that side quest was not finished?

WaxerRed

About 72 hours since release and over 175 comment? No rest for the weary huh SL. Of course that won't stop me from giving you more work to do in the form of minor almost unnoticeable bug reports! . In All seriousness these aren't even really bugs but more opinionated suggestions for tweaks, so feel free to disagree! . Both of them have to do with the sprites in the last update in Ardford. During the Megail and Ghanth conversation at the Silver Stump, it uses the "Party Leader" sprite for their talk. It felt more like a private conversation to me so I'm not sure its as fitting as just using Megail's. The other Ardan problem is when you enter the twisted space it gets kinda wonky if Robin is your party leader as there are two of them talking to one another. So maybe force someone else to act as leader or even just have all sprites present individually since there is only a few of them.

Lamsey

Mmm, tasty tasty plot update. Xerces is quite an interesting character once he decides to loosen his tongue, and it sounds like there are some more interesting characters to come. I'm looking forward to taking the fight to the Fucklord - he has it coming just as hard as the Incubus Arsehole, possibly even more so due to the lack of an insanity plea. I also cannot state enough how much I am enjoying the Orcent bar conversations. Philosophy and introspection in an erotic RPG? Truly, you are putting the 'adult' into 'adult gaming'. It was also nice to see Trin showing a bit more of a thoughtful side (however briefly, lol). I assume it's deliberate that some bars (e.g. Eustrin, the Court) don't have conversation events? I greatly enjoyed Uyae's scenes, as well. Your ability to write from different characters' perspectives is especially on point here, and her linguistic troubles and flourishes are adorable. Combat balance in the Holy Plane seems good. It's a nice change to come up against widespread magical resistances, which disrupts my tendency to rely on Robin to blast her way through everything. The Tower Nodes gave Varia a great chance to shine with her fancy new blades, along with Carina's healing powers. Typoes, suggestions, etc (all present in 0.44.1): There are no colons on the lines for the new investment returns: <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/mo9b0viodcqdj3j/Screenshot%202018-05-05%2016.43.30.png?dl=0" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.dropbox.com/s/mo9b0viodcqdj3j/Screenshot%202018-05-05%2016.43.30.png?dl=0</a> Not sure if this is an idiomatic thing, but "work toward them" sounds odd to me - possibly "work toward supporting them"? <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/ubvq8hverxd6p81/Screenshot%202018-05-05%2016.55.33.png?dl=0" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.dropbox.com/s/ubvq8hverxd6p81/Screenshot%202018-05-05%2016.55.33.png?dl=0</a> I assume that the missing words etc are deliberate in this bit as Uyae is getting flustered (nice touch!): <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/w5couord0drknrm/Screenshot%202018-05-05%2016.57.37.png?dl=0" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.dropbox.com/s/w5couord0drknrm/Screenshot%202018-05-05%2016.57.37.png?dl=0</a> Thou seeks -> Thou seek: <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/65wfghh0zycven2/Screenshot%202018-05-05%2016.58.22.png?dl=0" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.dropbox.com/s/65wfghh0zycven2/Screenshot%202018-05-05%2016.58.22.png?dl=0</a> thy -> thine: <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/hhkfele7wubv36v/Screenshot%202018-05-05%2016.59.17.png?dl=0" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.dropbox.com/s/hhkfele7wubv36v/Screenshot%202018-05-05%2016.59.17.png?dl=0</a> against -> again (or possibly 'against him'): <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/58g1tu8kjoqcyhi/Screenshot%202018-05-05%2017.02.05.png?dl=0" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.dropbox.com/s/58g1tu8kjoqcyhi/Screenshot%202018-05-05%2017.02.05.png?dl=0</a> Overflows: <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/a9h5prn1idvhxy7/Screenshot%202018-05-05%2017.07.15.png?dl=0" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.dropbox.com/s/a9h5prn1idvhxy7/Screenshot%202018-05-05%2017.07.15.png?dl=0</a> <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/h2hhlzfkq6z2pyc/Screenshot%202018-05-05%2017.08.42.png?dl=0" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.dropbox.com/s/h2hhlzfkq6z2pyc/Screenshot%202018-05-05%2017.08.42.png?dl=0</a> <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/wr9388irmk0g4zt/Screenshot%202018-05-05%2017.09.26.png?dl=0" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.dropbox.com/s/wr9388irmk0g4zt/Screenshot%202018-05-05%2017.09.26.png?dl=0</a> <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/f3br04d6yp5h5y8/Screenshot%202018-05-05%2017.10.26.png?dl=0" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.dropbox.com/s/f3br04d6yp5h5y8/Screenshot%202018-05-05%2017.10.26.png?dl=0</a> <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/zzj8war7a8w8hlp/Screenshot%202018-05-05%2017.30.22.png?dl=0" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.dropbox.com/s/zzj8war7a8w8hlp/Screenshot%202018-05-05%2017.30.22.png?dl=0</a> If you're going with 'thine heart', which I think is probably technically correct, then we probably need 'thine harem' here: <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/bb87c2wuansj45s/Screenshot%202018-05-07%2014.00.31.png?dl=0" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.dropbox.com/s/bb87c2wuansj45s/Screenshot%202018-05-07%2014.00.31.png?dl=0</a> thou shall -> thou shalt: <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/ww8jfqw8rwlh4dr/Screenshot%202018-05-07%2014.01.44.png?dl=0" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.dropbox.com/s/ww8jfqw8rwlh4dr/Screenshot%202018-05-07%2014.01.44.png?dl=0</a> knees -> kneels: <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/21mepkq6qfdmyqz/Screenshot%202018-05-05%2017.08.28.png?dl=0" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.dropbox.com/s/21mepkq6qfdmyqz/Screenshot%202018-05-05%2017.08.28.png?dl=0</a> Not longer -> not long / not much longer? <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/9bfu6uxftma823x/Screenshot%202018-05-05%2017.29.19.png?dl=0" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.dropbox.com/s/9bfu6uxftma823x/Screenshot%202018-05-05%2017.29.19.png?dl=0</a> update -> updated: <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/gnx9f5c2gh53y0g/Screenshot%202018-05-05%2017.37.14.png?dl=0" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.dropbox.com/s/gnx9f5c2gh53y0g/Screenshot%202018-05-05%2017.37.14.png?dl=0</a> This extra lamp has popped up - perhaps a template that's not set as invisible? <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/z1159o6i13f3zg0/Screenshot%202018-05-07%2015.17.17.png?dl=0" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.dropbox.com/s/z1159o6i13f3zg0/Screenshot%202018-05-07%2015.17.17.png?dl=0</a> eye -> eyes: <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/7jfn1i8y5oc2tph/Screenshot%202018-05-05%2017.51.34.png?dl=0" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.dropbox.com/s/7jfn1i8y5oc2tph/Screenshot%202018-05-05%2017.51.34.png?dl=0</a> I think this succubus could do with a new line by this point, since it's a while since Simon picked Lynine up: <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/ggiefhwqll92gcw/Screenshot%202018-05-07%2015.33.01.png?dl=0" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.dropbox.com/s/ggiefhwqll92gcw/Screenshot%202018-05-07%2015.33.01.png?dl=0</a> Creator lady give shiny green metal hat to palace guard orc before, much kind. Creator lady also give shiny hat to FANCY BANNER orc? <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/xrvysywp827bv2n/Screenshot%202018-05-05%2018.46.09.png?dl=0" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.dropbox.com/s/xrvysywp827bv2n/Screenshot%202018-05-05%2018.46.09.png?dl=0</a> hestitated -> hesitated: <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/x823btbxf05tgwd/Screenshot%202018-05-07%2015.46.14.png?dl=0" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.dropbox.com/s/x823btbxf05tgwd/Screenshot%202018-05-07%2015.46.14.png?dl=0</a> thou has -> thou hast: <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/zq95j94ef9n7qhy/Screenshot%202018-05-05%2019.11.26.png?dl=0" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.dropbox.com/s/zq95j94ef9n7qhy/Screenshot%202018-05-05%2019.11.26.png?dl=0</a> wouldn't -> wouldn't want: <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/il59zk2wx0g4gdf/Screenshot%202018-05-05%2019.11.44.png?dl=0" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.dropbox.com/s/il59zk2wx0g4gdf/Screenshot%202018-05-05%2019.11.44.png?dl=0</a> be subject -> be subjective / be subject to debate (I think 'subjective' is better, due to 'subject' appearing in the following sentence): <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/gjbr0pclqeymqgd/Screenshot%202018-05-05%2019.24.21.png?dl=0" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.dropbox.com/s/gjbr0pclqeymqgd/Screenshot%202018-05-05%2019.24.21.png?dl=0</a> lead -> led / leads: <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/vhlgnokuh1y6iev/Screenshot%202018-05-05%2020.27.44.png?dl=0" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.dropbox.com/s/vhlgnokuh1y6iev/Screenshot%202018-05-05%2020.27.44.png?dl=0</a> Does 'this continent' make sense in the extradimensional space? Also, did Xerces really do nothing? Would that mean Esthera threw him out of Renthnor on her own, since I assume at least one shard-holder would have had to be involved? Either way, perhaps "When the Incubus Emperor fled to your continent" would be clearer? <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/zhipmgokiy4ycqo/Screenshot%202018-05-07%2017.09.25.png?dl=0" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.dropbox.com/s/zhipmgokiy4ycqo/Screenshot%202018-05-07%2017.09.25.png?dl=0</a> Replacing 'among' with 'amongst' would possibly fit Xerces' voice if you want to reinforce his age (which I assume is considerable). It's rarer and more formal than 'among' in British English, but my understanding is it's regarded as more archaic in the US. <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/8yu361cjwwyw303/Screenshot%202018-05-07%2017.11.14.png?dl=0" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.dropbox.com/s/8yu361cjwwyw303/Screenshot%202018-05-07%2017.11.14.png?dl=0</a> I think I also forgot this one from a previous update - should this say 'Father' rather than 'Simon'? Or is it intentional that Robin's thinking of him less as her father now? <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/av82p69r9j590ry/Screenshot%202018-04-08%2023.03.31.png?dl=0" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.dropbox.com/s/av82p69r9j590ry/Screenshot%202018-04-08%2023.03.31.png?dl=0</a>

DukeLeto7

Really minor minutiae. The portrait of Dari that appears in the Harem list menu is New Dari regardless of which form you pick. The sigil on the wall indicating that you have done the base defenses research project is less shiny than the other four. The corridor in HQ B1 that used to contain the teleportation room warp point but now just has Robin chilling out to ask for the ProN for her secondary defense ritual plus the event for a party member yet to be met is now effectively mostly dead space... I feel like there should be something there indicating its use or it should just be removed. That's obviously totally subjective. Lastly, we found the names on the events for the "Not A Psychic Parasite, Really, I Promise", both when she is met in the Tower Region and the Tower HQ... You are a cruel and capricious mistress.

Baloopy

Doing a run from the start - in Aka's path the quest Plight of the Poor doesn't seem to complete. In particular the "Stop the Inquisition harassment of slum purifiers" objective doesn't seem to complete. I've seen the scene between Sarai and Andra and I've talked to the person in the Lower City that was being harassed but it doesn't want to complete. Might be cosmetic as I've managed to impress the ambassador.

WaxerRed

Last minor complaint I promise! But on replaying the BIG conversation I found it weird that Anak did not introduce himself properly. I know that Simon probably knows it is him based on a description Yarra or the Empress could have given, but given where they were I would have asked just to be sure. (Also Simon calls Anak by his real name but I think that was already pointed out above)

Bladestorm

Great update also didn't expect that check on the base had to go through that one again, love the bar conversations but now I have to think what I need to invest in, my god the choices I have to choose and what's coming over the horizon. I think I need to go back and do the base research instead of the research for dari because while I enjoy the sharp tooth girl got to get the defense. Question though the research we choose for this iteration will it affect what's coming up or after that?

onepot

In 34.1, when entering Extradimensional Space to pursue Alonon at the end of the Succession shenanigans, there are 3 Sprites - Riala and two Robins? I assume one of the Robins might have been meant to be Aka?