Crimson Gray 1.5 Title: Round 2 (Patreon)

EDIT: Poll is closed, as a decision is made.

Well, I'd hoped that voting would go quickly and we'd get a title everybody liked, but that was not to be. T-T I took everyone's suggestions to heart and came up with a second round of potential titles. I am relatively confident that one of these will work, unless some of these get a lot of unexpected negative reactions.

(By the way, the reason I want to get this done is because I have been informed that I am doing my Steam releases poorly. I've preferred to put up a page late in the process, for a polished page and a quick release, but it seems you want to do the opposite: put up a page many months in advance and flog it everywhere. Lessons learned, I suppose.)

Reminder:  All of these would be a subtitle, as in "Crimson Gray: Subtitle Here."

As an added thing to give feedback on, or perhaps just to give you guidance regarding the subtitle, here is my intended description for the page.

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Short Description: 

A slice of life visual novel with the emphasis on the slicing. Play as a mentally unstable young woman with blood on her hands trying to adapt to a normal life.

Long Description: 

Lizzie has it all: a large collection of knives, a loving boyfriend, and an intense desire to murder. She's escaped the conspiracy that forced her to kill in self-defense, but now she needs to adjust to normal college life.

All she wants is to act like a normal couple, graduate from university, and get married. But a committed relationship isn't enough to stabilize her, and she finds herself spending a lot of time with her knives.

This visual novels plunges you into the mind of a deeply unstable young woman, viewed entirely from her skewed perspective. Your task is to find a way for her to be a normal student, a supportive partner, and not a serial killer. This is a short visual novel with an emphasis on unreliable narration and subtle consequences of the player's actions.