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Elaine

good chappie

Wensber

Salvos would make an amazing therapist

WingedIkaros

I don't think I'm properly equipped to dissect the mixture of fascination, sympathy, and speechless awe this conversation between Amanda and Salvos elicits. A fragment of the human psyche written out and given form. Excellent writing D!

Eric

"Truth Divination" that sounds like shes one step closer to understanding rocks better

Kristeen Livesay

That kinda really hurt to read. But it was a very Salvos thing to say. That is one of the reasons I like this series so much an wish it will never end but at the same time hoping it does. Salvos is my favorite character. She is true to her self at all times, from the moment that her character, motives, and personality, were properly established I cannot think of a single time that she has acted out of character in a way that isn’t related to her character/emotional development.

Alexey G

Lol. Insulting a [Primeval Demon of Pride] - that's a suicide with extra steps. Amanda got to live though.

Some Jerk

Am I the only one who wonders if demons actually CAN have sex? We know they aren't born of such pairings... But can such pairings happen? Does anything ever come of it? Is that how politicians are created?

Jason Morse

From the previous parts of the story it always seemed like Salvos matured with each evolution and I was wondering how it would manifest with this evolution. It seems like Salvos has taken a step forward again with this one, as I can't see her being quite this mature or insightful before. The chapter was well done and I'm really interested to see how this plays out.

Dancingdoorknobs

The God of Jealousy is out there doing its best to turn all sane beings into morons. Also, I like the aromantic part of Salvos, I will be unhappy if that changes. Good chapter!

Lon

Damn, Salvos making some solid points right there. [Truth Divination] op pls nerf

Sparkie

Amanda a bit too audacious for this imo, its OK to be jealous but not to make it other people's problem.

Sindri

If you've never had a friend before, and you're not sure if the things you're feeling toward somebody you like are romantic or not, the simplest solution seems to be to make another friend and compare the two.

Cold_Fischl

No please don’t crush my ship Amaniel ;-; lol for real tho this was a great chapter.