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Wensber

Looks like the theory that the parents became necromancers to bring back their dead kid is probably false. The undead were seen before the guard was separated from them.

Precursor

Could still be the daughter, she could have found the necronmicon and become a lich to survive.

Elaine

good chappie

Melone

Amelia carrying screaming people is becoming a habit lmao

Sunshine

I cracked up at the image of her holding him like a baby. 😂 I like that you created situations where it appears that her abilities could be a weakness, then immediately subverted it to comedic effect. Then you topped it off with the mental image of her cradling a hero like a baby. Very fun! The only thing I saw was one line jumped out a bit as jarring within the rest of the chapter. It seems overly harsh. ““So you don’t know shit,” I said dryly.”

Sunshine

I just don’t think she’d kick someone when they’re down.