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SeaSmoke

Sal is just gonna grab her and nope out of there

Mateusz Lokś

This... There was a stupid chapter... The author made a situation where Salvos MUST die, absolutely no chance of survival... He took away all her possibilities of survival only to have the "story armor" work at the end and somehow I will survive without anyone's help... I understand this style of writing, but after a while it starts to get tiring... And in this case it is already distasteful and absurd... And at the end of such a short chapter... Cliffhanger...

Azrie

Rough battle ahead. Salvos going to have to use Claws of Corruption to even push back the Great Agarus. Looking forward to it, seems like its going to be a struggle to even flee.

Mateusz Lokś

I regret reading this chapter... Can I forget about him? Remove it from the brain?

Alexey G

Honestly, there's this whiny guy going crazy because easy-escape-all solution doesn't actually solve all situations and Salvos learns the hard way that Revelation is not to be uderestimated despite having such an easy way out as the [World of my Mind]. Honestly, it is a good chapter showcasing that the Revelation and the Netherworld are extremely dangerous and Salvos even now cannot take it lightly.

Mateusz Lokś

You're somewhat right, I admit. But this chapter was a bit too much for me.

Elaine

good chappie

Tragic Hysteria

Just too short a chapter, feels like the whole chap should have just been part of the previous chapter

JulesBeHere

"Either way, facing off [The Great Agarus] was suicide." Edit: "Either way, facing off against [The Great Agarus] was suicide."