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For Whom the Belle Tolls - Chapter 3 (Patreon)

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Just when I think that life has settled, a new curveball gets thrown. At this point, I'm becoming rather adept at just dealing with it, so, barring any true catastrophes, we should be back to a regular Saturday (Pacific Northwest time) posting. 

Lily gets to experience some of the more unexpected parts of the afterlife, before facing her Judgement. 

As always, I welcome all comments and critiques, but please keep them kind. 

Jaysea 

Comments

Yael

So beautifully written! The way you write i feel as if I’m there with Lily! Truly amazing work!

Lori Wellborn

Well shit. Now I’m crying. 💜

Katie Donahue

Me just over here 😭 I love it so much.

Natcole Gregory

Even though I knew what would happen I still cheered lol. It would be so fascinating to see all faiths and religions like that.

Ty Mixon

So, I think it was this chapter. But it had me bawling. My mother died of cancer almost a decade ago. I miss her every day. And for some reason this story allowed the floodgates to open. Thank you.

Kat

You are so talented!! I hope you make a comic book series at some point. I would buy all the volumes or if you wrote a whole book!!!

Em Kemper

In one of your tiktoks you mention how the afterlife is so much kinder than you expected and when I come back thru and read your work or watch the Hell’s Belles playlist, I can’t help but hope you’re right. I love this. It makes me cry in the best way 💕

Samantha Pare

I cried so much and then laughed through the tears as you described Hobbiton. I love this so much!

Baylee

I’ve watched HB on tiktok probably four different times, just going right back to the very first one and starting again once I got to the end of the videos. I never realized I had so much of an attachment to these characters, to Lily, until I joined this platform and began reading the chapters you’ve put out. Ugh, I need to go cry in the corner for a minute before I go onto the next one 🤧🥂❤️

Rae

I cried. 😭 I hope it’s like this.

Bonnie Ehrhart

I am LOVING these! You're a good writer

Hayden Scott

You have an amazing talent. I love it!

Celine Gorman

Absolutely I’m love with your writing!!

Erin street

Some constructive criticism if you're open to it. *ahem* MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you!

Aj Hawkins

I swear to the universe if I didn’t know Lilly would find bel, this one would have absolutely broken my heart, excellent work

Kat 💜

This chapter broke my heart. That's exactly how I've always pictured judgement when the time comes. Lily lived the lives she did so she could have the Afterlife she has. It's was meant to be. On the edge of my seat for the next chapter. Well done, you!

Kaitlyn Sanborn

I just wanted to tell you how much I love Hell's Belles and For Whom the Belle Tolls. I've always had alternative views on what the afterlife, if there is one, would be, and it's so amazing to see your creativity and talent portraying an inclusive and forgiving take on the subject. So, for what it's worth, thank you for putting yourself out there so this shy dreamer can live vicariously through your art ❤️

Carter

Thank you for making me cry, you’re writing pulls at the soul in all the right ways.

Beth Kiefer

I’m not crying… you’re crying.

Shawn M McFadden

OMGs, the tears springing into my eyes as Lily realized she'd gotten her Paradise. I'm loving this story, Jay. Looking forward to more.

Kim Bowie

You are brilliant! Keep writing!

Ann Sullivan

And.... I am a sobbing mess. Keep ripping my heart out. I love it!!!

Stuart Grosse

Beautifully done. The pacing is just right, with the comedic elements breaking the tension before getting right back to it with the arch. The transition from what she considered her failings and shortcomings to finding herself in Hobbiton flowed naturally, to the point where it wasn't cutting to another scene, but a natural transition, like the wave meeting the shore. When you finish the prequel, will you allow me to promote it in some of the writing groups I'm in? Especially if you intend to put it on Amazon?

Chris Liu

When you know the outcome, and you are still sitting on the edge of your seat as you read…

Van Brewer

This is just so well done. I really appreciate you taking the time to do this right and to build it out in your own construct - this story deserves the time to be well-told. I think this is turning into the story we didn’t know we needed but we did.

CH

Absolutely fabulous read. You are very talented

Chris Hoppe

Fantastic read. Thanks for sharing

John Baudry

I am loving this. You are awesome!

C. M. Alongi

Wait a minute...does Lily actually START the Hellp Desk?!

Kristiane Laucht

Hell, she might have done it purposefully. Oh Lily, your monster fucker side is showing. Hahahaha and I am living for it!

Amanda D

Thank you for sharing I can't wait for Chapter 4 <3

Joanna Laird

So damn relatable. I know she makes it where she’s meant to be but I’m still crying happy tears. It’s like seeing her get there makes me feel like I’ll get my own paradise.

Dennis Blackburn

You have a wonderful talent. This "Saturday Morning Movie Serial" type of posting is keeping me on the edge of my seat wanting more. Cannot wait until we can read the whole work all together. Keep going, you are doing great. And thank you.

Peter Psareas

So good. Made me smile and cry. Good thoughts to your mom.

Jessica Tanner

I'm addicted to this storyline and am eager to read more 😎😍

Wendy Willis

You are an amazing storyteller! I am so invested.😍😍😍

Sean

This is the best one yet. Completely sucked me in. Pulled on all the emotions. Wonderful!

Anna Pittnerová

It was stunningly beautiful, so full of warmth. It reminded me of being buried in a thick blanket with a cup of sweet tea during a rainy day.

KaeLee Newton

I’m so excited to start learning Lily’s back story! I remember Ruggy mentioning Siedah when dealing with the soul who was mean to Dante so I’m thrilled to learn more about her. This is so good!

David Fouchey

Oh man now I have to wait for part 4???? Not fair I tell ya. this is such a fun project you have going Jaysea.

Mark Bodenstein

I do a lot of reading. And you are a remarkable writer! <3

Elle

I know she makes it through, but I was even on the edge of my seat waiting. I love this so much!!

Chandra

Walking through the universal judgement nearly brought me to tears. This was so beautiful to read. I can’t wait for the next chapters. Keep going!

Sydney Byer

I JUMPED to patreon from TT when I saw you were writing a prequel.

Sarah Harmon

I have read a LOT (books, fanfic, poetry, plays, etc) and your writing is amazing. I’m so glad I decided to support you on here, because this story alone is worth it. You are so incredibly talented, thank you for gifting us these amazing characters and their stories ♥️

Carl Pine

Jaysea, you have a really incredible way of creating emotionally powerful content. I (and many others) am OBSESSED with your stuff

Mariel Franzen

This almost brought me to tears. Thank you so much for writing this and sharing this. I’ve been following your TikTok for a while now and just noticed you have a Patreon. I’m incredibly grateful to be able to have found your content. Thank you so much

Alisa Cornell

This was seriously amazing. I definitely felt a lot of things if that makes sense.

Lydia

Okay that one got me. Tears at my customer service job sounds about right.

Jessica Tanner

You take care of you girlie. We will still be here when your able to post more. That being said.....Don't know about anyone else, but i could go for a bit of Dante talking to his friends about the help desk and dealing with the souls.

Tracy Polasek

And now I have to wash the tears off my face and blow my nose.

Rachel

Thank you for making me cry in the waiting room of my drs office 😂 that was beautifully written!

Cobbled_Vibrance

I love this line! "After almost fifteen years of working in some form of customer service or another, she could relate to the miserable frustration of trying to deal with a group of people that seemingly had little common sense and more than their fair share of audacity."

Nikolas Murphy

My god! I’ve never felt a connection to a part of a story as I did with this chapter. Had to really fight back tears when Lily was revisiting the feelings about being upset that she wasn’t getting married like everyone else, or having kids when everyone else was. I know these feelings all to well, as they pop up from time to time.

Alexis Crespo

You trying to make me cry in the new year lol I'm loving this so far. Happy new year and all blessings to you and your family