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Hey all!

Firstly, I deeply apologize for the gap in posting this week, thank you all so much for your patience. I have a short story about the demon trio as teenagers that I hope to post tomorrow to make it up to all of you. 

Secondly, it's the last little bit of world building before we finally get to Hell! I, and Lily, are both ready to get this Hellp Desk going. 

Please share your thoughts, questions, and critiques! 

Comments

Yael

2 quick question for all of you lovely people! How old is Lily? Once she dies does she stay the same age? Thanks!

Kierstyn Grepke

In the 3rd chapter, she says something about 35 years on earth, or something like that. So I'm assuming at least 35, but I don't know if she ages.

Guipago Mailand

I'm a bit behind, I've watched everything on tiktok and am yearning for more. This? This is some amazing writing. I know you're still at it, but you keep this up. You've got the brain and the drive for it. Don't let imposter syndrome get in your way. I look forward to more and am so glad I've done my first Patreon with you.

sienna!

i think in this storyline once you enter the afterlife you stop physically aging.

sienna!

odd question but could we possibly have a layout/ blueprint for lily's home? i like to visualize things and even getting a little sketch for the front of her house would be so cool!

lightningfury

Good girls go to Heaven. Bad girls go everywhere? I love this. I probably shouldn't be reading it on my period but hey crying is good for you.

Nikkie Schmeisser

Wait wait wait I’m behind on the reading but is this why Dante gave Lily a sock in the recent TT video?!?!

Kat 💜

Damn. Your imagery is impeccable. I felt like I was there. I could feel the breeze and smell the bread. And I cried when Max came. Okay, Lily... it's time to take over!

Carl Pine

Excellent as always, Jaysea. There were several things to unpack for this chapter, really loved these little interactions like with the deity and the trainees! I am SO looking forward to chapter 5!

Desiree Mcbride

Max I can hear the purrs thought that maybe one of mine as I dream the story I read. I was there seeing and hearing

Mortan

Its amazing and always worth looking forward to. Highlight of my week. Thanks again.

Trish Ramey

Wonderful! The imagery is great!

Kristiane Laucht

Awesome as always. Also I could be wrong, but I did notice the punctuation when Lily was describing her boots seemed off. Don't know what it is, just didn't flow when reading it.

Alisa Cornell

I really felt I was there. What kind of tea does Lily drink?

David Fouchey

Jaysea this was excellent lass I love it.

CH

Excellent as always

YeOldSouls

four lines in that last page, possibly the best ones ive ever read. simply amazing

Chris Liu

Love it. Very well done

Keira-Louise Williams

Brilliant read before a 15 hour shift in retail on steroids! Thank you!!

Kim Bowie

You are truly a horrible person. First, you get me totally addicted to your Hells Belles videos and NOW you've got me addicted to your story! Seriously, you've got some amazing talent going on. Keep it up.

David Coster

I can not wait for the time I can share this with my sister... she will love it as much as I

Silvia dht

This is an incredible world you’ve created and I’m loving the chance to see it! I love Lily and her story💜

Chandra

I love it! I love how descriptive your are, you paint such beautiful pictures of each scene.

Jessica Snyder

I’m loving the story so far! I can’t wait to curl up and spend an entire day of reading when it’s done.

Judy Sullivan

Love the moment of decision. Love the whole thing

Tiffany Dubois

Oh so you’re just going to make me cry right off the bat with this one hu? I see how it is 😜

Rin Deal

Glass of wine in hand then go home in paradise 👏

KaeLee Newton

I love each and every word of this. I’m excited to see how Lily gets her position in Hell, more of her early relationship with Bel and Sharkie (like had she already started dating Bel when Sharkie arrived or did he know he was going to get a bonus Sharkie when they started dating?) and just life in general.

Ann Sullivan

I cry at every new chapter. Love it!!!

Ainsley Bowers

I can not wait these posts and your tiktoks make my days better I never fail to smile when diving into your creativity with you by reading and watching your stories.

Aj Hawkins

Absolutely love it and can’t wait for more 🔥❤️

Samantha Johnson

Oh man I adore every word, absolutely cannot wait for the next installment. It's wonderful

chrissy allen

May I ask if you have thought of Chapter titles? I love it when the title makes you wonder what's gonna happen now, ya know?

Peter Psareas

I Read this chapter 3 times so far. I am hooked, cannot wait for the next. Writing is hard for me, I'd rather talk. You can do both. So glad I found your content. Its the best part of my day

Jessica Tanner

Each time you post a new chapter I start over from the beginning. I am SO in love with the world that you have created both with your writing and your Hells Bells series on the clock app. As a budding indie author myself, I find your work inspiring. I share the TickTock videos with everyone I know as they all have a message that needs to be spread. Now with your writing, I find myself constantly checking my email for a notice that another chapter is available. Keep it going and we will gladly follow.

Meredith Alden

I found myself crying when Max appeared. I'm going to lose my favorite kitty soon, and I can only hope he'll be waiting for me too. 😢

Maiyin

The worldbuilding is amazing, I can vividly see all the places in my mind's eye

Renee Jackson

It's amazing to watch your writing evolve with every chapter. Most people need to write books and books but damn, keeps getting better and better!!

Melody

This made me tear up and I had to cuddle my puppy

Anjuli

Do you have a story yet for when Lilly meets Sharkie?

Stormy

This. This is how I feel 💙