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Write in one sitting over six hours, no editing, we die like men. 

But seriously, you guys are essentially my first beta readers, as I've decided to try to publish this once it has finished. I'm never mad when you guys give me constructive criticism, I'm super grateful! 

This has been one hell (and not in the fun way) of a month for me, and so many of you have been so wonderfully supportive, As always, I cannot thank you enough. Thank you for enjoying my work, thank you for helping me have the confidence to continue to create, thank you for the absolute glee I get from reading your comments and reactions. I'm honored to get to share this story and journey with you. 

I made myself both blush and cry while writing this chapter, so good luck!

Jaysea 

Comments

Jasmine Polmanteer

Yeeesss soooo excited and I haven’t even read it yet!!!!!❤️❤️❤️

Hannah Kuracina

Can't wait to read the whole book in one go

Juliana

I literally jumped for joy when I got the notification that this chapter was posted. I already love it and I haven't even read it

La Yuca Mala

Yuss!! I LOVE YOU! I've been waiting all weekend. Seriously the highlight of my day

Skylar Jayne

I can't wait! I love this whole story

Bethany Moore

I'm so excited!! I just found your page and I binged all of the episodes on tiktok in like 3 days and read all of the chapters on AO3 and was so happy when I joined your patreon and there were more chapters on here. You tell a hell of a story (pun intended) 😁💜

Elle

Jaysea, the warm feeling spreading through my heart is only matched by the happy tears. This was beautiful. The entrance of everyone’s favorite shark has been larger than life. Just like them. Thanks for sharing 💜💛

Kristiane Laucht

Sometimes a home is a Soul, a Demon Prince, and a Sharkie. And I can't wait for it to grow.

Trish Ramey

So good. Just. ... so freaking good. My heart is full.🥰

Castiel Rin

When this is published im buying 10 and gifting them to friends to read! Everyone needs to see your amazing work!

Carrie Brooks

My soul just curled up in a warm window seat and had a good cry. This series is both beautiful and heartbreaking in the best way possible. I’m so very grateful you’re sharing your stories with us. Thank you.

Shay

AWWWWW Sharkie in their happy safe place with a Max-loaf guardian. I love it!! Can't wait to see Lily and Sharkies relationship progress. 💖💖

Elizabeth Barnes

This chapter is so amazing. It tugged at my heart strings and left me on the brink of tears. Thank you!

Becca Greenfield

Excited for each new chapter and I will be buying once published 💙

Nikolas

I wanna cry happy tears tbh, as someone who’s dealing with their own Childhood trauma, seeing little Sharkie have so many caring adults makes me SO happy. Max knows sharks a good kid/person, animals always know. And the beginning of Bel and Lily’s relationship!! Yay! God, also Bel being the protective dad that he is 😍

Sarah Harmon

I'm honestly crying right now. This was beautiful! I was hoping we would get to see Sharkie's origin story in this and I'm so glad we do. This was another beautiful chapter, thank you!!

Thomas Forrest

This chapter is just another masterpiece within a masterpiece of a prequel for a grand masterpiece that is Hells Belles!! Keep up the great work, and know that we are all behind you!!! (P.S. Can’t wait for the tension to break, and for the eventual smut that follows!!)

Juliana

and I was right to be excited I think this is my favorite chapter so far

Aj Holder

This chapter was utterly amazing and I can’t wait to see sharkie call Lily mom. But I agree with Thomas I can’t wait for the tension break between Lily and Bel.

Greg Schoppe

Is it a bad thing that I was bawling my eyes out while reading these chapters?

John Baudry

I am not sure why I was cutting onions at 1am but damn. Seriously though this whole story so far is great.

Madeleine McSorley

To fan girl really loudly and wake up my family or to scream in my mind and do a snoopy dance that is the question.

Peter Psareas

Could not wait to read this. I can’t or won’t offer advise on typos etc. what I can say is your writing draws me into your world. That started with your Tic Toc skits. This book is even better. I love the characters. I will never think of hell or Lucifer the way I used to. Your creation changed that. A good book makes you forget the outside world. A great books makes you feel like the book is the world. This is a great book. Others can give editorial notes. Me, what I will say is thank you for creating this world and sharing it with us. I am 65 and maybe a bit jaded. Your work makes me less so. Thank you

Melodee Glatzel-Smith

Tiny error on page one "no shit lemon sharks don't *test* like lemons"

Helena Wigforss

I loved this and i love Lilys house that agreed to protect Sharkie. 😍😍😭😭 i’m looking forward to what happens next both with Sharkie and Bel and Lilys relationship.

Kim Bowie

Perfect. Absolutely perfect. A couple of typos, but the story is absolutely spot-on. You're really good at this, you know? Tell the Imposter Syndrome to take a hike.

Alexis Crespo

Thank you jaysea for creating such a piece of art. I'm loving this story so far and can't wait for the next chapter. Reading your chapters and watching the series has helped me extremely with my fight with depression. Your writing and skits have reignited my creative side again and because of you I am almost ready to start writing again and to finish my series from college. It kinda ties into parts of the belles. When I actually get the courage to film it, I will tag you and I want your honest feedback. Thank you again.

Savanna Haley

I think this is my favorite chapter so far! You’re writing always has me locked in! Amazing job as always 🖤

Molly Welch

I definitely chose to stay up and read this chapter knowing full well I have to be back up in less then 4hours for work. So beyond worth it

Melodee Glatzel-Smith

Ok now I've finished the chapter. Excellent. Amazing. Engulfing. It pulls me in and every description sets the scene in my brain. Thank you for continuing to silence your imposter syndrome and just write. Because it's... really really good.

Jen

This was so good!! I really loved the scene with Lily and Luci (also, baby Sharkie calling the ruler of Hell "Mr. Luci has my whole soul!). Seeing more of Luci as a character and his range of emotions is really cool. I love when stories make him more than one dimensional. And it is easy to see how much him complimenting Lily twice really effected her! That and all the absolute perfect stuff with Bel ❤️❤️❤️ my heart can't take it!!

Van Brewer

Another phenomenal effort on your part. Loving the evolution of the story and the character development. I am one of many who are more invested and care more for each of these characters as every chapter unfolds. Even more phenomenal that you could do this in one sitting! It’s absolutely true that writing muscles develop with use, like all the other muscles. Be assured that every blush and tear found its expression in your text, and was much savored and enjoyed.

Cra-Terra Barnett

So I am new to your page and I am so happy I found you. I love reading about Lily's time in the afterlife. Thank you so much for giving us Sharkies story as well. As a writer myself I know the toll of writing such dark things. So agian thank you, I really would like to see the journey of Sharkie growing into the awesome young woman we know and love in your videos.

Lorna Huot

Absolutely amazing!!! The story line is amazing!!!!! Can we get a pov from Bel when Lily compliments him?

Delia Isaac

I love Lily and Lucifer's interactions. Her apology broke my heart. And Bel!!! Must be protected at all costs. I mean him can protect himself but still! He reminds me a lot of my husband. That level of patience, understanding, emotional intelligence and sex appeal is so freaking rare. He's a well fleshed out character and you're doing a fantastic job. Definitely interested in Carl the house. And baby shark breaks my heart but I'm looking forward to their growth.

Diesel Frog

House named Carl... was sharky a Viking in a past life talking about Huscarl

Jenny Shaw

Each chapter is better than the last. I can't wait to see it all come together into one book! I think you've got the makings of a whole series here! This is always the best part of my week - when I get the new installment of Lily's story. I hope March is a better month for you and things go more smoothly. You're an amazing creator and the one person on TikTok that I seek out every single day. I've gone through the whole series at least twice. Keep on being amazing!

Chef Jeff

Thanks again for all you do, I just had a birthday a reflection of why I am still here. You are one of the reasons I look forward to each day it wasn't too long ago I un-a-lived myself but unfortunately, do-gooders stepped in. During my recovery, I came across one of your TikToks..........! So here I am being selfish in the knowledge of knowing that a being of your magnitude has intervened in my timeline to keep me on task though the purpose is unknown to me. I am glad I found you, your stories are heartwarming and emotional and exceptionally good please take care of yourself, enjoy life and fine your happy place

Elanore

I was so annoyed that I had to go to the gym when I got the notification of a new chapter! I am loving the journey you are taking us on and I'm excited that you plan to put this together as a book (preferably a series of books) that can find a loving home on my book shelf.

sally barter

This is brilliant. Thank you for your time. I love the TikToks and this book especially. I look forward to each instalment so much. You write so beautifully and you are so descriptive. I re-read the entire book before every instalment.

Michael Hennessy

You are getting really good at this. I love watching how every character’s personality is blossoming. Makes your videos even more entertaining.

CalciferSparks4

I will always cry with sharkie in these stories cause I see the beginning of their family and can never stop thinking of what Lilly said to sharkie in the wedding episode "it all started with you kid" and it will never not make me emotional. Love anytime these chapters come up your writing is so fun and draws me into the world so quickly, also love bel and Lilly interacting and how good bel will be for her in the future. I can't wait to read more since I just adore all these characters

Tara

Your talent for describing emotion and tension in a moment is incredible!

Doty

Been waiting for things to heat up with bel.... but this chapter was just so good, any small grammar errors I forgot as soon as I read them haha

Doty

I want it to get steamy but I am enjoying every second of this story,

Callahan Noelle Davenport

Brilliant. The emotion and love pouring through is just so palpable xx Keep being spectacular Jaysea!!

Aj Hawkins

Ma’am that was absolutely amazing and I loved it. And the thought that someday I could hold this magnificent story in my hands, is almost as beautiful as the family that’s being formed here

Jim Brady

Thank you very much, love t how it is going.

Mac T

I really should not try reading and getting ready for work at the same time but I just could not resist

Embeth Arreyn

Well now I'm crying before work again. So worth it though. The absolute love pouring towards Sharkie and Lily right now is healing something from my childhood. But one of my favorite moments in this was Luci letting Lily know that he sees her. It was uncomfortable for her in the moment, but in the long run it might be an important step towards healing, because that's I think the first time she's known that someone SEES her and hasn't run from her. And her and Luci letting their monsters show together is always so delightfully intense. And let's not forget about Bel! Lily letting herself feel things about him, and not running away from it! (Or at least not as fast lol) No "he deserves better than me" this chapter; we love to see our girl grow! Overall a fantastic chapter as always <3 Super emotional. And I'm so impressed at you banging it out in a 6hr marathon session; I've been there!! You did amazingly, and more than that, I'm SO glad you're considering publishing when it's done!! This story 10000% deserves to be read, and I'll be first in line to buy my copy. YOU deserve this. You're an incredible storyteller; your pacing, word choice, and characterization are all spot on. I want to live (uh, die??) in the world that you've created. Thank you for giving this atheist my first real hope of what an afterlife worth going to might look like.

Rixi Urdaneta

as an adult i still feel the hot tingly feeling of hearing someone open my door.. the hyper awareness and crackling sensations I get when there are hushed footsteps and quiet scuffling around you when bad men think you’re sleeping never really goes away. when Lily demonstrated the protective barrier to her room is every scared kid’s dream. That relief that Lily saw on Sharkie’s face..too real.. you wrote this beautifully jaysea. thank you

Amanda Carr

Girl. You have a serious talent. I look forward to every new chapter and each one keeps me so invested in the story. I mean sharkie is precious and heartbreaking and the slow build with bel is *chefs kiss*. I could not be happier that you are wanting to publish this as a whole after you are done writing. I would be the first in line to buy it even after having read all these chapters before. Thank you for sharing your creativity with us. Especially in such a raw honest way. I feel like as these characters heal themselves, it is healing pieces of me too that have been hurt in some of the same ways.

Bex Merhar

So good! I also look forward to each chapter, and would definitely buy it and show it off when you publish it. I love this story so much

_jackieeeee

I am so excited every morning that Patreon tells me you've posted! Another amazing chapter. ❤️❤️❤️

Kat 💜

Damn, Jaysea. Just...damn. This came in after midnight here so I didn't get to read until this morning. Crying first thing Monday morning. You are doing that baby so much justice. The love everyone already has for her is heart-wrenching, in a good way. And Bel and Lily? The love between them is beautiful 💜 However, I want you to know, I have a degree in English Grammar (a certified red-penner 😁) and your grammar and punctuation are spot on. Well done! When you publish this, take all my money!

Jen Aalbue

i love this so much. it colors every interaction of sharkie and lily in the tiktoks in such a beautiful way. i adore how careful youre being and it shines through in their every reaction. lily is such a beautiful character and also PLEASE GOD LET THEM KISS

Sabrina

I love this so much and it's an amazing escape I can't get enough. Your doing an amazing job don't doubt yourself. ❤️

Sarah Erickson

Marvelous, as always. I would buy anything you write in a heartbeat. Your pacing is amazing.

Matthew

Sort should be short:

Matthew

She had only worked in Hell for a sort time in the grand scheme of anything, had had only a small taste of exactly the kind of putrid evil that could be found in Hell.

C. M. Alongi

*patiently waiting until the pastor comes to Hell*

Matthew

This was magnificent, and I cried happy tears. Thank you so much for sharing your world with us.

Laura Rennhack

Okay I am crying from how freaking sweet this is!!!!

Krysta Hurley

Love love loved it! Thank you 😊

Nate Blurton

I love the entirety of the Hellp Desk world you have created! My sister and I bond over every new episode and new chapter. You are very talented and I hope for nothing but the absolute BEST for you! Can't wait to see what all comes out of this for you, and for the universe you created! All the love!!!

Sarah Holden

I can’t be crying like this at work! Another amazing chapter, I can’t wait for the book!!!

Ben Preheim

Aww. This one made me smile. :) The only note I could think of would be capitalizing House when speaking or referring to a specific house. I didn't see any in this chapter, but in previous chapters, you've commonly left dialogue paragraphs on a comma instead of a period, and you've used dashes where elipses might be more appropriate. I'm sure those nits will get picked before the published edition. I can't promise I'll be first in line, but I'll be in that line to get a copy when it comes out!

Peter Psareas

When you publish please start with a run of signed copies for Tic Toc and Patreon fans. Hopefully followed by a book tour so we can tell you in person how great you are

Karen Wright

I'm excited to read this as a novel...but I love the anticipation of the next installment.

Jessica Tanner

Falling more in love with the story with each chapter you release. Thank you so much for sharing their journey and putting in all the hard work to write it. We love you and I definitely want a signed copy if you publish.

Ellie

oh, WOW! well done! well written and completely enticing, Thank you!

Krystle

Again, my heart. What are you doing to it? You write so well; it is a pleasure to read.

Jen

Amazing writing and I love how the story is developing. I was in the last chapter of another book and had to persuade myself to finish that one before coming to read the latest chapter! Also..Carl! I LOVE IT!! xo

Louise Benjamin

Oh my goodness... lots of tears. Thank You so much!

Elizabeth Werstein

This chapter was absolutely beautiful. Stunningly written. So very touching and I cried at how beautiful the afterlife can be. Phenomenal work, please keep these chapters coming!

Sunita Buddhu

I am so loving this story!! Lilly, Bel & Sharkie are such round, complex, characters. I love that you give the different points of views of your characters, and your world building is very well done. I can’t wait until you’ve written the book!!! Please make it a series.

Lori Wellborn

SO MANY ONION NINJAS! Ahem. On another note…..I read pretty much everything on my phone, and the document you post ends up with SUPER tiny type, which is hard for my eyeballs to read. So, being a slightly crazy person with ADHD, who hyper fixates on random shit, I decided to snag all 14 chapters on my computer, and copy them all to a single doc, so that I can read them in larger font whenever I want. But it didn’t copy properly, so now I’m going through and reformatting the entire thing, and why did I decide to spend my entire afternoon of my surprise day off doing this? Ugh. (Nope, I’m not sharing this doc with anyone, it’s just so that I can re-read it at my leisure without hunting down all the chapters on Patreon. I have super crappy internet access at home, so this makes it easy to read no matter where I am, and how my eyeballs are feeling today.) I’m so happy that Sharkie has found such a supportive extended family in their afterlife. I look forward to watching them grow up.

Stuart Grosse

As someone who publishes on Amazon, here's some things I've learned: Cover art - Anyone who says "Don't judge a book by its cover" hasn't ever tried selling books. People absolutely judge by the cover, because the cover is BAIT. It is the first thing that draws in potential readers, even before they see the blurb. So having the right cover is absolutely CRUCIAL. After all, you don't use the same bait for catfish that you use for deep sea tuna, right? And neither one of those are what you use to try and catch sharks, or gators. Certain genres have definite themes in their covers, which help draw in the RIGHT readers. For instance, everyone knows that the book with the buff shirtless guy from the waist up (perhaps even just waist to neck) is going to be a paranormal romance story. Meanwhile, a book with busty, scantily clad woman in a provocative pose? Chances are that it is harem fantasy. Two high school girls in uniform, chatting as they walk along the street? Probably slice-of-life, maybe rom-com depending on the art style. And so on. Playing into those tropes in cover art is crucial for getting your work in front of the right eyes. Right bait for the right reader. So don't skimp on the cover art. Personally, I usually go to Fiverr to commission something. You can find people doing good custom covers for $50-200 easy, depending on the level of detail you go into. This is probably the most important money you'll spend on it, to be honest. The Blurb - After cover art and a catchy title, the blurb is the next part of your bait. You want to convey the tone and energy of the story, without giving away secrets or spoiling major plot points. This is your initial hook, what gets a potential reader on the line. Price - Obviously, talking price before the book is even complete sounds counterintuitive, but it is something to keep in mind. Whatever length your book ends up at, having the right price point is key to actually selling books. The sweet spot, for a full-length novel, is in the $3-5 range. Inside that range, you're at the 70% royalty level (compared to the 12-15% of trad publishing), and it is cheap enough that people don't think too hard about buying your book. Once you get into the $7 range, though they start thinking really hard about whether they actually need that book. Also, Kindle Unlimited is a godsend for new/indie writers. You'll have to make the digital version Amazon exclusive, which means you'd need to pull down these posts before publishing, but Amazon is literally 2/3 of the ebook market anyways, so that's like saying your computer game is exclusive to the Steam store. The big thing is that, if they have the subscription, books in KU are free to read on their end. On the writer's end, you get paid by the number of pages read each month. Sure, $0.004-0.005 per page isn't much, roughly half what you'd get off a single sale at $3.50 and a 70% royalty, but if someone gets it through KU, likes it, and then buys it, you've made 1.5 sales off that one person. On the other hand, if you put a book out, someone reads it, and then book 2 drops a few months later, and they want to reread the first one so they are caught back up? You get paid twice for that book. And that's not counting people who maybe don't have money for more than 3-4 ebooks a month, but KU lets them read 5-10. That's a reader you might not have gotten, otherwise. Another nasty consideration is piracy. Pirating ebooks is, unfortunately, all too easy. However, having a book in KU is a deterrent on that. First off, with a 'free' option, the impetus for piracy diminishes. Second, Amazon has bots that comb the internet looking for KU stuff being hosted out of KU, and the pirates know it. Combined, this means there's just better, easier things to pirate than 'free' ebooks. The First 10% - Because the barrier to entry and initial investment is lower with ebooks in general (and KU in particular), readers are much less shy about DNFing ebooks they aren't feeling. The first 10% of your book is critical. You baited and hooked them with the cover and blurb, but if you don't reel them in with the first 10% of your book, and make them keep turning chapters, then the other 90% isn't getting read. Proofreading and Editing - The signal to noise ratio on indie authors is atrocious, and this is the reason why. Once the book is all together, make sure to give it some proofreading love. If there's any question, get it in front of an editor. Yes, it costs money, but you instantly rise above perhaps 30-50% of the books on the marketplace by simply having your book not be a steaming pile of crap that makes people long for Google Translate for some clarity.

yoshi garnett

I've been very much avoiding these last 2 chapters cause I knew they were gonna destroy me 🥺 and now I sitting here crying my eyes out😭 with like this really stupid grin🥹 and I want more!!!!!!!!💗💘❤️‍🔥💯🫣

Claudia

This chapter is everything and I cannot wait for you to introduce the world to your lore. Your Hero's Journey is immaculate, and I could not be happier that I found you and your content. I'm a nurse and see a lot of heartbreaking shit day to day. Your world brings me peace and joy. Thank you. Thank you.

Anjuli

HELP! Is there a way to make the screen bigger? The previous chapters I turned my phone on the side and was able to read better. This time I cannot. My screen reader can not read it. I really want to read this but it’s too small. Anyone know how to help?

Taylor Smagacz

This is my absolute favorite chapter so far!!!

Louise Monahan

that was such a gorgeous chapter. So perfect and a lovely follow on. Just a quick, i could be a dumb moment. Did you take down Chapter 13. I was going to reread to confirm the follow on from that chapter to this. Great work.

Kaji_MT

I was just fine until the interaction with the house.... then the ninjas snuck in with their onions......

Chandra

This was so beautiful!!! I absolutely loved it typos and all, and if you think we won’t be referring to Lily’s house as Carl from now on, you’re out of your GD mind! Keep up the excellent work! 🫶🏾

Alex Knighton

“Home and family may not always look the way we imagined they would.” Love this, thank you once again for a good heart-swelling cry fest. I can’t wait for you to get published and take off, you have a great imagination, excellent word building, and pacing.

Robert Waldbauer, aka Professor Greenman

I finally got around to reading this chapter - This 70-year-old man has tears streaming down his face, imagining the scenes in his head. And at the same time, feeling so much love being poured out that I'm sure it has flowed to all the readers, who also feel it. Superb!

Lindsay

This is such a good chapter holy shit! Happy and sad tears

Aly Weitkamp

Incredible as always!!! I’m constantly on the edge of my seat waiting for the Bel and Lily kiss!

Miranda Davidson

Lily is the parental type I aspire to be, such a a good chapter

BadWolf-BadDog522

Loved the new chapter, as always, and I’m bawling… again! The scene with Lily testing the doorway for Sharkie, my heart!! And I loved the build up between Bel and Lily. When you finally publish this story, I’ll be one of the first in line!

Jennifer Cathren

I couldn’t stop smiling for Lily and Bel. And I couldn’t believe how touching the door testing scene was. As always amazing chapter and I can’t wait for the next one. Also I know it was a hard month for you and I’m sorry to hear that but I hope things just keep getting better for you.

Jada treglown

I can’t wait to see where this goes, there so many characters and books that could evolve and then if they reincarnate…

Coleen WhiteLightning

Oh I love this!! It's sweet, beautiful and frankly I'm so happy!

McKenna

I love how everyone just assumes Lily will take care of Sharkie. Beautiful! I couldn't have asked for anything else

Peter Psareas

Just rewatched the episodes with Sharkie’s foster mom. Adding that to these chapters of Lily meeting Sharkie made me angry about how Sharkie was treated and so happy that s They found Lily

Sarah Harmon

I can’t remember if I left a comment on this one yet or not, but I just reread it and cried again and I had to make sure I told you how amazing and wonderful this story is. Your writing is top-notch and the way you are able to transport us into this world is next level. You are doing an amazing job with this story and we all appreciate it (and you!) so much. Keep up the great work!

Tina

Your belles and their demons help me clear the chaos, make me smile, make me think, and take away the stressors of my middle aged life. Thank you for sharing your talent with all of us.

Zana Brown

I love this. You are such a talented writer

FreyjaBlight13

Sending so much love! This book is going to be amazing!

Stormy

Their story is sooo beautiful 💕 you are a wonderful writer & I look forward to each chapter! Thank you for sharing

Monique

I’m crying!! This is so sweet and sad and wonderful. Home and family. What a theme. Sharkie’s blatant relief hurts me so so bad.

Regina Winter

I'm reading this while lying next to my sleeping kid. I'm so ridiculously happy for Sharkie. She has her very own, completely safe room.

Keith Frederick

Ok, this one made me cry twice. Not really up to explain why I cried more at a non-Sharkie moment, but please know that it’s a compliment. Amazing.

Jordan Yeager

Greg’s text was the best! Straight to the point and a random fun fact. I could just hear Greg’s voice when I read it

Katy

😭 you’re amazing

Felicity Shields

Crying. Again. Goddammit Jaysea you're a genius ❤️😭

alexis rux

Soo many tears , just ugly crying ..I really hope this gets published

Deborah saunders

I loved the video series but I’m a book lover first (there with you on the smut). Sharkie has always been one of my favorites. I just watched the whole series from the beginning a few weeks ago and cannot stop reading this now. I’ll gladly help with editing when your ready

Kat

You could publish this book tomorrow you would have 2 million fans for these moments alone. You make your characters real. Thank you for sharing your talent!!! 😭😭❤️❤️

David Coster

Im waiting for it to be published, it will be my first purchase in this genre

Em Kemper

Every time I reread this chapter I get almost all the way through without crying (I sobbed the first time) but then I read, “how exciting!” And the tears well up dear gods you’re a wonderful writer!

Samantha Pare

I cried so much with this chapter but I love it so, so much.

Isabell Wuttudal

I never tought I would cry from a chapter, but damn I cried

James Wallis

Rereading this chapter. Damn it is heartbreaking. I love it. ❤️

James Wallis

On another note, thanks for mentioning our lord and saviour, Cthulhu. A foodie review series from Cthulhu would be hilarious!!!!

Carol johnson

I loved sharkie and lucifer. I forgot to comment on that one

Yamilet Nerio

SOBBING! As a devotee of Luci THANK YOU . This is how lucí is! a beautiful terrifying being that punishes the wicked and gives the innocent the justice they so deserve 🖤

Kimberly Ann

OMG... My heart just melted!!! This is amazing! This feels like a secret little back story, like we are the flies on the molten lava walls down in Hell!! Keep up the Awesome Job!

Cici

Is anyone else having a problem with this chapter?? For some reason it’s not showing up for me! :(

Aubree Helton

I know I’m a little late to this, but that chapter made me cry. I love tiny Sharky so much!!