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He was a (horned) boy, she was a (horny) girl, can I make it any more obvious?

Avril Lavigne moment aside, for those who get squicked out by some casual lust, please be aware that Lily is very attracted to Bel in this chapter. I tried a new formatting option, hopefully this will make the text a little larger, but if not I'll go back to do battle with the Scrivener gods again. 

Even though I procrastinated writing this chapter again (hello, wrote this in five hours because I'm a lunatic with time management issues) I really actually had fun with this, and I'm excited to write some of the things I have planned for this story. 

Thank you all for sharing in this journey with me, you all genuinely have helped me have confidence in my writing, in addition to being my poor guinea pigs and graciously dealing with my minimally-edited chapters. Someday I'll get this a proper editor and cover art, and you all will be the first to know about it!

See you next week!

Jaysea (I'm so sorry, I've had way too much tea today and I can feel the 'hyper')

Comments

Nikolas Murphy

Love the Avril reference! Keep on writing! I’ve enjoyed every single chapter! It’s gotten me back into writing, short character stories, but writing nonetheless!

Kristiane Laucht

Ah, and here we have the origin story of Sharkies filthy mouth. We are blessed to witness this glorious moment. Also, I'm now terrified of the next chapter, as I fear I may perish. Can one die of horny, asking for myself?

Andy Johnson

I have not even finished reading this yet, but I needed to comment to say HOW VERY VERY much i needed to read this: “We all have terrible thoughts, yes? Sometimes they just leap into our minds out of nowhere, others they creep out of crevices in ourselves we didn’t know about or tried to forget. This is normal. ... But our second thoughts, ah, that is where we are."

Elle

Just finished the chapter, what a glorious end to my Sunday.

Amanda

You’re a seriously fantastic writer! Love the story!

Luraa Lack

Amazing per usual! Love when I get a notification of a new chapter being dropped!! Can’t wait for Aphrodite to doll up lily! Glad you had her happy in her marriage to Hephaestus! Can’t wait till the next one! Great work

Nikolas

Loved sharkie at the end, also, sharkie talking about the fear, just, they were scared because they (foster monster/pastor, etc.) conditioned her to be. That, and she was a literal child at the mercy of grown adults who we’re supposed to protect her.

Peter Psareas

Another great chapter. Meeting the other characters is a lot of fun. Sharkie kicks ass. I bet you win at trivia. Bel’s attention would always be on you. At first I thought Aphrodite asked if Sharkie would come to trivia before realizing it was the sleepover. Careful they might summon Greg

Kat 💜

Sweet Sharkie. She's healing 💜 As for Bel and Lily... you're trying to kill us, aren't you?

Syd San99

Im so excited for trivia night

Helena Wigforss

I’m already looking forward to trivia night next week! This will be awesome!

Aj Holder

Another amazing chapter as always. I cannot wait for trivia night next week! Also love how you wrapped in the girl Lily had sex with in the church parking lot from one of the skits!

C. M. Alongi

I wanted to let you know that you inspired me to upload one of my own WIPs on Patreon, chapter by chapter, even though I'm an absolute perfectionist with my writing and put about a dozen warnings saying how it's a first draft and that it was going to go under at least one major revision, probably more. But my fans absolutely adore it, so thank you for giving me the idea.

Judy Sullivan

I have edited four published books for a friend. I’d be happy to volunteer to help out.

Carrie Brooks

For those with the kindle app, here’s how you get a version with adjustable text- open attachment, tap download (upload?) icon, Kindle, then look for “pdf options”, and select “make layout changeable.” Tada! (Because I’m officially middle-age this year, I won’t say how long it took me to figure out on purpose what I accidentally did once!) Jaysea, that sleepover’s happening soon, right? And we’ll get a very long chapter, not multiple chapters with cliff hangers, please? Please?

Embeth Arreyn

One minor editing note: it seems like you've lost at least one line, maybe more, to the dreaded accidental-shift-&-up-arrow >.< I'm sorry, that's happened to me, too! It's on page 9, where Lily is organizing her new tool rack. That aside, I loved this chapter <3 The description of fear coming from caring is going to stay with me. I genuinely think it's something I'll tell my son if/when the subject of bravery comes up again. The "fuck" at the end also very much reminded me of my little one 🤣 I'm also super stoked for the next trivia night! And excited for Lily and Bel to enjoy some *quality time* together soon haha I'm loving watching the tension build, though! One other brief editing note: on the transition between pages 5 and 6, when Lily goes from recalling sexy fun times to being jolted back to the present, I was briefly thrown because that had kind of been a flashback within a flashback (thinking of the girl in the car while thinking about being at the training field with Bel). So when we jumped back to the present, I was briefly confused, thinking Lily was reading and being greeted by a teenage demon while still on the rocks at the training field. I'm sorry, this may just be me being dumb! I got so invested in the "lunch with sweaty Bel" scene that I forgot it was a flashback. I think a transition from pondering the time in the back seat with the girl, back to watching Bel train, before Lily snaps back to work, might be a good idea? I totally apologize if I'm out of line, if you're not looking for any editorial notes right now! I'm not criticizing at all and very much love your writing! <3 You're doing an awesome job- as evidenced by the fact that I should definitely be sleeping before work tomorrow, but I saw that you'd updated and couldn't sleep without reading 😅

Amelia

Loved the ending

Diesel Frog

There seemed to be a bit if a cut off sentence after the tool rack appeared "appeared next to the desk after Aphrodite and Persephone had left. What a h" and it ends there

Diesel Frog

I really appreciate all the work that goes into these stories. The characters seem so real and relateable. Thanks for another great installment

Kat 💜

You know, Lily is going to be all sexy and irresistible at trivia night, distracting Bel to the point they lose... and all he'll need to do is take off his shirt.

Thornblade

I like the formatting tweak! I found it easier to read. I'm starting to squint more and the change helped me out personally, so thanks! The other one works just fine, this was just a touch easier. Now, onto the story, I'm SO excited for the next chapter as well as watching Sharkie grow! It's so sweet, I love it! Trivia and making Bel all hot and bothered should be fun. Then of course the getting down with the thiccness that's soon to follow im sure... 😏 Thank you for all you do for us between the skits and this book it's just amazing, and saying it's amazing feels like I'm doing it a disservice.

C Williams

We'll just chill til the next episode. - Dre & Snoop

El Teale

absolutely adore your writing Jaysea. thank you so much for doing this ❤️

Thornblade

Well he does have thick thighs.... Go to YouTube and search "down with the thickness" and DJCummerbund did a mashup for your listening pleasure.

Delia Isaac

I love the explanation for swear words. I'm taking that for my future parenting. I can't wait for trivia night! Shit is gonna go down. I love these moments with Lily and Sharkie. I feel like Lily's experience with the Goddesses is universally understood. Like I'd lose it were I introduced to Athena so it's relatable. I also enjoyed how Aphrodite is happy in her relationship with Hephaestus. We don't get to see that often and I feel like it fits this universe better. Anyway, keep it up! This is the Bel and Lily content I live for!!

Melodee Glatzel-Smith

This is the only thing I read as soon as it comes out. Thank you! I cannot wait for the next chapter. I've seen mention of the editing note for page 9 already, so I won't add on for that one. On page 10 where sharpie moves farther into her hood, you have it written as father. Just kidding the r.

Michael Hennessy

Gah! Want more! Part of me want to wait to build up more to read at once. But I’ll be dammed to level two if I’m gonna wait.

Staffan Lindell

Can I say that I’m just happy to be here? This has all the signs of a bestseller in the making and I am absolutely thrilled to be able to see it firsthand. 😁

Samantha Johnson

Not me desperately swiping on page 12 hoping against hope there's another page....lol it was lovely a great mix of fun, hints of the spicy to come, and feels.

Jason Fox

Absolutely amazing, great little chapter. Side-note, anyone else hear Lemongarb with that last soul? Because I heard Lemongarb

Keira-Louise Williams

Thanks for the new formatting! My dyslexia and terrible eyes thank you too!

Kristin Tronnier

The question regarding Lucifer: I'd see him as a daddy. I can almost see him, caring for a boy or even a Little, totally in contrast to his role in most peoples mind. Someone totally unafraid and even a little naive, leaving Luci almost perplexed with how to act.

Amanda Carr

I am an irrational level of excited to read about trivia night 😂 you have had some damn amazing chapters but that has the makings to be the best one yet.

Van Brewer

Always, always worth waiting for. The things-I-loved-about-Jaysea‘s-writing list keeps getting longer, but it includes Maura’s offhand comment, Aphrodite and Persephone as BFFs with a plan, the magnificent scene at the training field, excellent wisdom from Zazzenaag (where do you get these names, do you have a demon name stash somewhere), and a perfectly lovely scene with Sharkie at the end, to name a few. Although I am certainly waiting on that, um, culminating moment (and I will have to start smoking again after 30+ years because I’m gonna need a cigarette), this serial format really does bring a lot to storytelling because of the reflection it brings to each chapter. It brings to mind how Sherlock Holmes was originally published, or some of the science fiction serials I read a long time ago. Once again, take heart in the fervent devotion of your readers to reinforce your confidence in your writing, and (this is obvious) please continue to follow your instincts as new ideas pop up. They are right on target. Excellent work. Thank you.

Judy Sullivan

Oh Trivia Night is going to be amazing! I love the interaction with Sharkie, as usual. Page 9 seems to be missing part of a sentence though?

_jackieeeee

Love it as always! Sharkie is such a sweet little baby and I am glad that she and Lily have each other

love-bookswillbetheendofme

Trivia night is going to be epic!!! I really enjoyed the conversation Sharkie and Lily had about fear. It was so insightful! Perfect use of "fuck" in the ending!

Van Brewer

Is that in reference to my now-archaic reference to 🚬 after ❤️‍🔥?

Elizabeth Werstein

Oh trivia night is going to be the best!! I can’t wait to see if Bel and Lily keep their control. Or if Lily uses the dress from one of the earlier chapters

Jes Land

I love everything about this! I too cannot wait for trivia night!

Kris

Like Lily, I am also cursed to be stupid and horny all the time 😂😂😂

Kelly Jackson

I’m sure you’ll get many offers to edit, but I’ll volunteer, also. HS/College comp instructor.

Van Brewer

P.S. Deep-cleaning closets sort of sounded like an advanced avoidance technique. For time management, that is. 🤣🤣🤣

Ellie

I enjoyed that! Thank you!

FreyjaBlight13

I absolutely loved this chapter in the extreme! I love how you write. Your ability to tell a story has it playing like a movie on my head! Totally gonna buy a signed copy when you publish 🥰 You got this! Have faith in you, and remember we're all here for you!

Maryann

Beautifully done with Sharky at the end. And beautifully written in general. Your writing is always such a treat. 😁😍

Catherine Thompson

Absolutely loved it and can't wait for more. You are a wonderful, expressive, and thoughtful storyteller. There is a sentence fragment right after the goddesses leave on page 9 just fyi.

Jordan Yeager

I for one like the new font/format I thought it definitely made it easier to read on my phone at least. Also this was yet another amazing chapter! I can’t wait to find out how trivia night goes

James armour

As brilliant as ever. Think you might have deleted half a sentence on page 9 by accident btw

Jörg Tuzzo

Just one comment on formatting: On the iPhone I use the Acrobat App and it’s Liquid Mode (not a paid advertisement). Has the same effect as an e-reader, i.e. the text has the size I want it to have, and the line breaks are flexible so that they fit the screen. It might be that an account is required, but it is free.

Essaygate

I'm so happy I subscribed! I caught up to what's on a03 and needed more of your content. Your writing is beautiful and I'm so invested in this story.

Jane Doe

Thank you for having content equal for 3 dollars ..I really cant afford a ton. We are FT caregivers to my MIL and your posts on TikTok keep me sane ..I want a hell's belles hellP desk shirt for my bday so ..help.me.manifest that lol (send the vibes everyone) taking care of a parent is ..alot

Heather Cast

I can't wait for trivia night! I really enjoy reading this story. I love it so much!

Victoria Boyd

trivia night should be spicy!! and lol love sharkie!!

Guipago Mailand

The ending was perfect. I love it. I love this storyline, and I love that I am able to see myself in it as well. I am pleased to be able to read this, more than you know. I was an alpha reader for my ex husband for years as he spun out the stories he would write and publish. I enjoyed the reading process. I miss it, but that's about all I miss. He is an atheist that used his curiosity, narcisissm, and insecurity to break me, abuse me, and manipulate me. It's taken me 11 years, but I am finally trying again in a relationship with a kind man with his own issues that we are slowly working out together. I read your story, I watch the skits on tiktok and what I continue to see is nothing but brilliantly written acceptance, validation, and beauty. You keep on keeping on, lovely. Your words, your story, your pacing is brilliant. Your characters are fierce, loving, and beautiful. A bit like you actually. <3

adriana amaya

I absolutely love this series! I can't wait for the next chapter and for the YouTube compilation! Thank you so much for the chapter and being the amazing storyteller you are!

Jordan Yeager

After my third time reading this chapter I’m actually a little annoyed. My face really really hurts from grinning so hard the whole time! Lol. Keep up the amazing work

Kristina Dopp

Jaysea you are so talented, and I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter! This series is just wonderful.

Crimson leCreme

I don't know if anyone else does this but I like to match characters to songs and at this point Lily is reminding me of Ghost by Ella Henderson. Particularly the lyrics about having to go to hell to know I'm not insane and sleeping your demons away....

Krystle

Another well written chapter. I enjoyed it.

Magik Bus

I love every single word you’ve written! I’ve binged this over the last couple days, and it’s been YEARS since I’ve been so immersed in reading that I’ve accidentally been up until 3 am. I would read a War and Peace-size novel of this. Two novels. A trilogy. Literally anything. Your world-building is incredible, and I’m so envious. Each character is so well defined and no one feels like a one-dimensional side character at all. It’s just is so clear that you know each of them so well. I could hear your inflection and cadence so clearly for each character thanks for watching your videos, which has been kind of wild honestly, and it’s been really cool to be like oh, I can imagine exactly what Bel’s delivery of this line would be. That’s not something I’ve ever experienced, and it’s really rad. Oh also! I’ve learned the names of so many animals that you’ve referenced, enough that it’s a little embarrassing, but I’m thrilled to now know about springboks. Also, I only say this because you mentioned an editor, if you’re ever interested, I’m an editor by trade and would be happy to give any of your writing a once over (free of course, I’m not trying to advertise myself on your work lol). Or I could send you a little tip sheet I wrote up for a fellow fanfic writer friend if you’d like. This is not at all a criticism of your work! I only bring it up since you’ve mentioned editing a few times, so I really hope it doesn’t come across that way at all. Thank you for writing this! It’s been living rent free in my head and will continue to do so. - Sara, a fellow Pacific Northwesterner

jessiee

Yes it is almost 3AM here, and - Yes I am still reading because this book makes me feel things and I simultaneously love and hate feeling emotional, but your writing makes my painful days much more worthwhile. Amazing chapter Jaysea

Michelle Sanders

started here after reading on an archive of our own. Holy shit Im a dork and didn't realize Patreon had chapters first which makes total sense but 🤦 anyway now I'm screwed (or more sadly not) as I have to go to work but this is where I'm at!!! argh, ok one more I can be a little late

Felicity Shields

Excellent as ever. ❤️❤️❤️ On page 9 it looks as if the new formatting might have ripped a sentence apart? It says a h then new paragraph with our Sharkie taking about her new teacher

Jade

I need art of Krun. I'm having a hard time imagining him