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Content Warning: Bel and Lily are themselves. It gets steamy. Lightly smutty. If you are repulsed or uninterested in *shenanigans* please use your discretion.  

 haven't even attempted to write smut or any kind of sex scene since I was a 17 year old, writing One Direction fan fiction (that will never see the light of day), so this was an interesting exercise. Apparently reading a lot of smut does not a master smut writer make. 

While I was excited to get to this point, and I'm excited to share it with all of you, I am, as always, looking for helpful critiques and constructive criticism to improve my craft. Also, I don't anticipate anything super odd, because most of you are amazing, but for my own peace of mind I would like to say: Please don't make this weird. I don't know how else to say it other than that. Some people in my dm's on other sites seem to believe that because I make sexual jokes, or in this case write sexual content, it means that they can make their comments or messages overtly sexual (towards me). Please don't do this, because, in the spirit of fairest Lily, I will block you. 

With that being said, go forth, read my attempt at writing sexy. LookinForSmiles, I hope the Greg scenes meet your approval. 

No editing, we die like men (I wanted to go watch a show with my Momma).

Jaysea 

Comments

Elle

Oh my god I’m so excited to read this, I love this prequel so much. One of my favorite ongoing fics currently! Thank you for all you do ❤️

Phil Mangefrida

One word to describe all, one word to define it, and that word…Giggity. Sorry but sometimes it just works.

Castiel Rin

AAHHH I'VE BEEN SO BUSY I HAVEN'T EVEN READ CHAPTER 18😭😭 gotta dnd my phone for an hour brb🤣

Juliana

finding out you were a one direction fan has truly been the highlight of my day

Megan Lillo

Oh my god this was so good!!

Juliana

yess!!!! harry has always been my fav since 2012 but i love niall always. do you still listen to his music?

Elle

This was amazing!! I needed a dose of happy. These two’s story is so sweet, and patient I can’t get enough. And you’re a wonderful storyteller to boot.

Kristiane Laucht

Damn. And I do mean DAMN! His hand! Her neck! THE MIRROR!

Trish Ramey

Holy hot as hell!!! 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

Olivia

Chef’s kiss! Can it be next week already???

Embeth Arreyn

Respectfully, god damn 😳😳😳 As a person experienced with reading, writing, and doing the smut... God damn.

Chef Jeff

I think you did an amazing job will reread it later once I'm home

Embeth Arreyn

Also respectfully, in the proofreading department I caught 2 typos (p 11, Greg is evidently a fictional team member, not a functional one 😄 And p 16, Lily wanted to down in a feeling, as opposed to drowning in it). Other than that, I caught nothing except very strong feelings and the urge to drag my husband to the bedroom. So thanks for that 😆😆 He says thank you, too 🤣

Daniel Mann

In the words of the Hero of Canton, “I’ll be in my bunk.”

Debra Cimabue

“Greg had been one of the fictional members of their team” is this meant to be functional members of their team?

SeaYaLater

Thank you SO MUCH! My writing program has an autocorrect function that drives me up the wall and sometimes it does that kind of crap. Sweet, ‘fictional’ Greg 😂

Sierra

🔥🔥🔥🔥damn! I’ve read a lot of smut and thats gotta be top 5 for sure. The mirror, the respect, the tease and hand necklace! I love it

Nikolas

I DIDNT WANT IT TOO END WHAT ABOUT BEL… anyway, I am too gay for this shit.

Peter Psareas

Also really want to hear Bel’s story and Lily’s reaction. Hell’s Belles never explained when Lily gave up reincarnation. I feel bad for Greg thinking lots good he is alone. But also bad because I know Penny is coming. As usual love the Lily Sharkie interaction. Lily growing into her mom role. Sharkie gaining confidence. Cerberus and Sharkie. Quite a pair. Thank you.

Kat 💜

So, I had to read it twice only because you poked my heart right at the start with Greg and his belief that he would spend eternity alone 😔 I am so thankful I know how it turns out for him 💜 Second time around, I was able to fully appreciate the literary genius that is this chapter. In the midst of what was happening, Bel is the true gentleman. And I said all that to say... DAMN. Just... damn.

Kat 💜

It just gives Lily more time to come up with more things to do when him.

C Williams

Loved it. I have read ALOT of smut and this was EXCELLENT. Not overly sexual, just enough to let the images form, absolutely amazing. *chefs kiss* keep it up.

Kat 💜

I, for one, am glad Greg is fictional... or else my husband would really be in trouble!

Syd San99

Ho..ly.....fuck......damn......

Syd San99

Im curious would you consider writing a book for greg and penny....at a much later date

Aspen Byrd

Holy fuck. Yes, this good.

Anna Fultz

OMG soo good, and so worth the wait!

Dragontooth Flamehair

So, even in the beginning, they couldn't even make it home. Lol. This was sooo good.

Joedraj22

It's times like this that I don't care if I have to get up in 5 hours. But for real, fantastic writing as always.

Sunita Buddhu

Loved this!Finally!! Spice!! The only error I saw was hand was misspelled to be had.

Jen

Holy fucking hell that was hot. If this is you out of practice, I'm afraid to see you at your best!! 🥵 Two quick fixes, page 7 I think it is supposed to be "What *if* he held it..." and page 11 "He couldn't *make* out the details of her make up". Take out might work too, but my brain kept trying to correct it, so I wanted to point it out just in case. Can't wait for the next update because I'm sure it is going to leave us all as puddles on the floor!!

Hannah Kuracina

I like smut but I am picky, but DAMN you did good. I think something about them having so much story, and chemistry made this HOT. Unfortunately, my partner and I are long-distance, however, I have plans for a mirror now ...

Hannah Kuracina

I also love how respectful you are of your Ace audience and anyone else who may not be into shenanigans and give them content warnings

Tracy Polasek

Holey hotness! No notes. Send new panties.

Van Brewer

Once again, you manage to exceed growing expectations each week. I know we as a society historically made pornography “dirty”, when it absolutely shouldn’t be. I thought your writing did a fantastic job of being descriptive and sex-positive, both realistic and respectful. And really effective. Your characters take care of each other, and celebrate each other, as a healthy relationship should. Bel, you’re a stud, dude. Way to care. Also appreciated that Lily could hold her own with goddesses, as she should. Apologizing for the eye roll in advance, you nailed it. Brava! Encore!

Diesel Frog

I cried for the sweetness... Bel in all his horny glory thinking about begging her to read for him broke my heart in a million beautiful pieces. Also fucking hot as hell... there were typos... I didn't care

Heather Dyck

Need more! Please keep writing!

Anjuli

Skimmed a bit (I’m not into spicy scenes) but loved it. You did well!!! Caught a couple of typos but it was great!

Thomas Forrest

Wow! Just wow! Can’t wait for more!

Nicole M

This was so good! As stated by others there were some typos, but they didn't detract from the story. I love seeing both of their POVs and the teasing is *chef's kiss*

Jenny Shaw

My husband appreciates this chapter. ;) As do I! Well done!!!

Ann Sullivan

OMG were there typos?? I must have to read this again to find them.... 😏

Cra-Terra Barnett

Another great chapter. I absolutely love the forming of thier story.

Aj Holder

Absolutely loved this chapter!

Jesse Riska

I love the book. You are an amazing writer😍

Nya

I can't with you. This was so good! I really hope that some day when this book is finished you publish it cause I really wanna buy it! Thank you so much for another absolutely beautiful chapter! You are the most amazing!

Nikki

It’s fabulous. Couple of things I picked up was page 11. I think you meant to write that Greg was the only functional member of the team. Not fictional? Also top of page 16 you’ve written had not hand

OceansAlliteration

Holy hottness Batman! But really this chapter was delightfully steamy and just felt right. You really are a master of story pacing. Sharkie and her school project were cute and it was nice to see some family bonding, the teasing between Bel and Lily was lovely and the guys Dont Look Desperate plan mostly failing made me laugh, Lily being a badass at work and then feeling delicate and feminine in Bel’s arms really helped set the tone of their spicy moment. I just love reading about characters falling for each other. Just great character moments this whole chapter.

Allison Beattie

... Why did I read this before I have to clock in at work? 😭😂🥰

CalciferSparks4

I too have read a lot of smut with my time on the Internet and I will say that spicy moment was really good writing, especially going back and forth between them to show what they were feeling and them in the bathroom was so amazing and so stemy

Samantha Johnson

As a fellow smut enthusiast...that was great, the pacing was good you didn't over detail or under detail leaving me going either get on with it or huh? A very good spicy scene in my opinion, and even better, you wrote the emotion in, the attraction, the emotion, all the things that makes the best spicy scenes. I loved it, and the part with Greggles as he's my favorite 😍

Emily Anderson

Damn that was spicy!!! I loved it! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!!!

Ginny susi

::fans self vigorously:: I'm so invested in these characters. I almost didn't comment my love because there were 69 comments and I always think that's funny.

Aly Weitkamp

INCREDIBLE ! You always kill it but that chapter was particularly SEXY ! So much love for this story

Embeth Arreyn

No, you were right the first time. Hell's is possessive, Belles is plural. If Belles was also possessive, it would still be plural, so the apostrophe would be at the end of the word, as in "Hell's Belles' stories are being told here." English lesson for today 😆 Also, while I totally don't expect Jaysea to keep writing this such that it overlaps with a lot of Hell's Belles, I agree, and would absolutely LOVE an epilogue getting Bel and Lily's reactions when she yields her mortality.

Embeth Arreyn

I love that this is the one we all caught 😆 No one wants Greg to be fictional haha

Jes Land

I am loving this story and your vivid writing. Granted there were a few editing errors, some that I had to stop and think about, but mostly it was easy to gloss over them. I'm so invested in these characters and can't wait for the next chapter!

Ben Preheim

Oh....Yes. I was both excited and nervous going into this, but you threaded the sexy needle wonderfully and Bel made the right call in the end. I'm even more excited to see where they go from here. Well done! Keep going! (there were a couple typos I spotted but didn't track. I'll have to circle back through later.)

Chirii

Oh please give us more smut you’re absolutely amazing at it this chapter was and is great it just FELT sexy

Chandra

Your penchant for smut is deeply appreciated. This chapter was so well done, the editing issues were minor and easy to see past. The depth of emotion you were able to weave through the act itself made this scene so beautiful and intense. I didn’t immediately re-read it or anything. 😏 As always, amazing work, Jaysea!

Caz

God damn that was so hot. How many times have I read this? Yes.

Kat 💜

There's nothing "pornographic" about this. It's very emotional and passionate, but not pornographic.

Elizabeth Werstein

This was an AMAZING chapter!!!! So stinking funny to watch some characters lose their minds! But also very well written steamy stuff! You should be proud!

Judy Sullivan

well done! And now I want to see him 'fess up to Greg that the couch has been lost. LOL Can't imagine how many rewrites this one took!! Perfect amount of emotion to smut ratio Few edit suggestions: hidden away had a very different fantasy (add “a”) What if he held it a little harder (change “it” to “if”) to have put in an effort to seduce their partners right back. (add “an”) pause in her tracks and stare right back, (“stare” instead of “stared”) Greg had been one of the fictional members of (“functional” instead of “fictional”?) take out the details of her makeup (“make out the details”?) his massive hand collaring her neck, (“hand” instead of “had”)

Kelly Jackson

Was that a Tony /Ezekiel reference? Wonderful. One thing I really liked was that even though you gave us a framework, we got to fill in the details, like everybody’s outfits. Sometimes I get so much detail they might’ve given me the brand and style number. You also kept the pacing realistic. Them coming together happened a a realistic pace, but not slowly because they’ve been teasing each other for weeks. Well done!

Katie Devon

I think all the smut “research” 😉 you’ve done came in very handy (pun intended). You’ve read all sorts of scenes with varying amounts of details, pace, and emotions described. I think you knew what you prefer reading, you know the characters, and you were able to combine those into a WONDERFUL chapter and I cant wait for many, many, many more smutty moments with these two. (I’m also excited to see how the conversation about the couch goes and how many others know about it and/or what Bel says when people show up to his office and ask why he’s missing a couch)

Van Brewer

Absolutely. A favorite one of Lily’s teachings was “shame for something everyone does is just a means of control” which captures the concept very well.

Jim Brady

Their were a couple of passages that resonated with me. Very good.

Jacq

I’d like to say something intelligent to praise all the hard work you put into this but all I’ve got for you right now is: holy shit, Batman. That was hot 🥵

Van Brewer

And you’re Hell’s Belles famous now! You were “mentioned in dispatches”!!

Peyton Stanley

Hot as hell my dude. This is amazing

Luna Rae

This story keeps gettinbetter and better. This chapter was so awesome. I never want to stop reading this. So much crying and tension and I want to live in this world tou have created even though that sounds so dark seeing as it the afterlife.

Savanna Haley

These chapters just keep getting better

Bonnie Peters

Fantastic!! I can’t find the words to say how hot that was. Great writing as always. This is why you’re my favorite creator. Please I beg you keep them coming!

Dani

!!!! Holy fuck. So so hot 🥵

Aubree Wood

Every chapter gets better and better! I can’t wait for the next one!

Emily Anderton

Hi Jaysea, just wondering if you want us to tell you of any typos or grammar corrections that could be made? I’ve come across a few, but I didn’t want to be THAT person, you know. But at the same time if we’re being your beta readers someone needs to tell you, and then of course I don’t want to be the 50th person to tell you of the same typo. Anyhoo, if you could let me know, I will either continue to enjoy the read withou saying anything, or I will pipe up as you prefer. Cheers, Emily

Ben Preheim

2, p 1 - "self-punishment" should be hyphenated 2, p 2 - _that_ a long time ago - ? 11, p 6 - functional, not fictional ;) 11, p 9 - "take out the details" should be "make..." 15, p 1 should end in a question mark 16. p 6 you put "down in sensation" - did you mean "drown?"

Patricia Volpe

Wow….🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

Jordan Yeager

I mean damn trivia night did not disappoint. Like at all. It was better than I imagined. We all knew that was coming (pun intended) But I just can’t stop laughing at the the thought of Greg someday marrying a mortal soul after giving bell so much grief. I hope someday we get a chapter on that

Ainsley Bowers

Holy heck that was amazing and hot I am dead way to go oh heaven. You never fail to make me feel excited to see your new chapter.

Kristiane Laucht

Check in the comments to see if others have already pointed them out, but if you see one that you think has been missed, feel free to add it. She's cool with us pointing out stuff.

Castiel Rin

oh... my... GODS!! jaysea!! this is probably the best chapter after meeting Sharkie

Jackie Costa

Girl! That was 🔥🔥🔥! Honestly, one of the best spicy scenes I’ve read in a while. Excuse me, I have to go wake my boyfriend up now.

Peter Psareas

Wow. So many typos in two sentences. Thank god I’m not the writer. Should be I feel bad for Greg thinking it’s good he is alone. But also good because I know Penny is coming

Dawn Shelly

This was awesome!! 🔥🔥

Kat Waterflame

As someone who is panromantic but asexual, and mostly indifferent to sex, I can say that I rarely (if ever) search out the smut to read. But, even so, I can tell you are a *very* good writer!

Marloes

OOF. Very serious oof. 🔥

Claudia

Damn. That was actually quite the steamy scene and I am impressed. It's difficult to write a smutty scene that isn't overly explicit and you've done an excellent job, girl! Very turned on and also EXCITED AF for Bel&Lil's near future. Trivia night is my favorite night!

Jennifer Cathren

Spicy! Loved it you did an amazing job not overly explicit and still just enough to make it exciting! Pure 🔥🔥🔥🔥!

Elizabeth

Oh my gods I have read romance books of all kinds sence I was a teenager and I have to say that was one of the best scenes I have ever read and I can't wait to read even more

Amanda W

Good work! I absolutely love the trivia night agreement 1 minute each ...had me cracking up! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Kat 💜

So, I've read this one a couple more times (looking for typos and grammar errors, of course 😇) and the "Let’s play, Princess" makes the whole scene!!

Phil Mangefrida

The interaction between Greg and Bel made me think of a question. We all know that Bel got left and Greg was heavy to point out about the reincarnation aspect. My question is this: is Lily the one who left Bel in the 1st place from one of her past lives and she is just not aware of it and Bel & Greg are and not saying anything?

Sarah

As a long time reader of smut ;) in both the form of romance novels and fanfic you have nothing to worry about. Very hot, fantastic job!

Krysta Hurley

I could read that over and over again. Beautiful 😍

Niki

I am absolutely obsessed. Amazing.

Jordan Yeager

From previous chapters I know it’s his dad who left him. He says once he understood his dads decision but it doesn’t make it hurt less and he tells lily that demons are immortal unless they’re killed (like in battle) or if the choose to go to the void which is what I’m thinking his dad did

Jordan Yeager

And when he mentions that demons can choose to go to the void he like clears his throat or pauses or something that makes it seem like it’s difficult for him to say so I’m pretty positive something happened that made his dad choose the void and it hurt bel because he understood but he still felt like “he wasn’t good enough to be worth sticking around for”

Guipago Mailand

Very hawt. And well written. I'm invested completely and totally :)

Ben Preheim

Ooo...that would be some serious drama! I don't think that's what's been built up. Souls don't forget, not really.

Phil Mangefrida

Souls don’t forget, but she said in a previous chapter that it takes time for souls to remember their past lives.

Crimson leCreme

In the name of all that is holy and unholy- that is probably the hottest thing I've ever read.im going to scream internally while I wait for the next chapter.

Tina

That.Was.So.Hot! Hubby asked if I was reading smut, I asked why, he said “that smirk never lies”.

Vana

Ma'am I'm blushing that was so hot I can't wait for her payback

Ingrid A.K Klevstuen

Inquiring minds need to know, when do you usually post new chapters? Because I swear I'm dying over here 😭

La Yuca Mala

Ive been waiting for this 😫

Van Brewer

She usually aims for Saturdays (Pacific Time), but that's subject to life events - sometimes it's Sunday, occasionally it's a two-week update but she tries hard to stay on schedule (like we're on Chapter 19 now lol).

Ingrid A.K Klevstuen

Ah cool, thx! And I'm not complaining, I just wanted an estimated time of release so I can stop checking every time I have a spare moment at work, now I can relax and look forward to something else for the weekend.

Krystle

This was great. I could just feel the sexual tension.

Katy

I am so sad that I’ve caught up but SO into this. You’re doing such a fantastic job, I cannot wait to read what(who) comes next

William Lynds

Once again, teasing us and leaving us with a ciff hanger. You would make Scheherazade proud!

Renee Johnson

Ho-ly crap. That was HOT! And I’ve read a lot of spicy novels. You are so damn talented. Thank you for sharing your work with us.

Meredyth Costa

Do I have several other books to read for class? Yes. Is this WAYY more interesting and more fun than any history book? As a History major and lover... yes. Yes it is :))

McKenna

I kinda wanna see another "Night of Many Distractions" but this time with Penny and Ruggy. Like maybe no one will get a point at all. LMAO

Regina Winter

This chapter made me feel a certain way 🤤... Holy - or rather demonic - FUCK that was 🔥

jessiee

WOAH seriously for someone claiming to not be good at writing smut,, this is fantastic, you can write it in a magical way! The feelings are all there, the intensity, desire, it’s all so beautifully intertwined with every sentence, every emotion and tensions that I wasn’t sure I could still feel I definitely can after reading this chapter, I will be telling the nurses when they next come and do vitals haha! Thank you for your writing. It’s definitely getting me through at the moment. I can’t wait for the next one ❤️

DndGoblin

Well done. Now where is my husband 💋

Melissa Thiemann

Wow, that was totally hot. I can’t wait for the next one. You are a wonderful writer.

Ash

Love love love this!! When can we expect the next chapter? So so excited!! 💛

Shawnee904

I'd love to see that as well. It would probably be good natured ribbing but still Greg would deserve it.

Ivy Lyn

Jaysea 🥵🥵🥵🥵 THIS WAS SO FUCKING GOOD!!!

Michelle Sanders

Got to work, finished this chapter have, off to the next one, OOOOF! I'm dead. This is going to be a long hard day till I get home and can pounce my own personal Bel O.O Whew!

Felicity Shields

Good golly Miss Molly 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

Felicity Shields

Only one typo noticed - page 11. I assume Greg is the functional member of the team not fictional 🤣❤️

TurtleDon

More Smut. More Smut. More Smut! Teehee, this is amazing!

GlitchyFirefly

Jezus Christ on a pogo stick ... you're better than a Swedish sauna when it comes to steam..

GlitchyFirefly

Small note: page 16. "His ha(n)d collaring" and "to d(r)own in sensation"... now then, I'm gonna go sit in a cold shower, you rock at this stuff 😁😅

PunisherLuv

Apologies I'm so far behind everyone else, and i hope this isn't presumptuous of of me. The bottom of page 5 there is an extra "is" This is doesn't even look like a mountain. Loved the chapter amazing writing!

Hannah Snow

You write fantastic smut 🤤