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Lily: Having a beautiful, poignant moment, reckoning with mortality 

Bel: Absolutely going through it but trying to stay positive 


I'm not sure if this one has quite the depth and range of feeling that I wanted it to have, and while I hate planning for a rewrite, I have a feeling this one is going to need a bit of work to give it the flow and emotion I want. This is a scene I've had in my head since the early days of the book, and it's changed a little bit, but the essence I wanted is still the same. I would normally keep writing, but we have no power at the moment due to a windstorm. My laptop is running out of battery, so I'd rather post the shorter chapter now, write it better later, and give you all first dibs on when I get the book in hard copy. 

As always, I look forward to your thoughts whatever they are, I appreciate them all. 

Please don't post this anywhere else! As always, boops for those pets/partners/friends/children/roommates/plants that will tolerate it. 

Jaysea 

Comments

Kim Frederick

I'm First, that has never happened!!! Can't wait to read this!

Tamura Hupp

Every weekend I look forward to giving my dog a book and saying "this is from jaysea" while he stares at me like I've lost it 😂

Jenn Perry

If I boop my human children they will bite me lol so I'll boop the cats lol.

Wolfie

Beautiful! Absolutely beautiful!

Riley Hovell

I love it so so much 😍 you're amazing and I'm honoured to get to read the chapters of this brilliant book ❤️

Hesper Wells

My only complaint is that beautiful chapter wasn't longer. As always you have a fantastic ability to weave a window for us to look thru and see the story. Much love and can't wait for the next one ꨄꨄꨄ

Metalupis

Lovely, tears of joy for the both of them.

Devilcat

I. I don’t know how you can make that better. Truly. I’m sure any rewrites would be amazing too. But. I had to pause and feel after page 6 and then the end of the chapter. This book is amazing and I can’t wait to hold the actual hard copy version in my hands.

Mel

Goosebumps xx

Jenny Shaw

I intend to purchase THE HELL out of this book when it comes out. Hardback, paperback, kindle, audible, all of the things. I loved this chapter. You have a way of making your characters come alive and with just a few well-chosen phrases pull your readers in and hook them. I always look forward to more.

Jenna B

I loved this and I cannot wait to read more next week!!!

Amanda

That was fantastic! I need new words to express how much I love this story. ❤️

Ana-Elizabeth Arnao

Well great, now I'm wiping at tears while also wetly giggling over Greg with Lev and I just wanna hug all of them, for forever.

Vicki S

What a lovely chapter. My heart is bursting.

Emily Anderson

This was amazing!!!! I think you got the emotions of it across spectacularly!!! I think there’s someone cutting onions! I’m not crying! Your crying!!!!!

Kyllisha

Very very good. Felt all the feels.

Syd San99

Brb gotta go sob to my therapist

Jenn

Wonderful, all the feels!

Laura Rennhack

I legit had tears in my eyes when they realized Lily was "alive" again!!

Darri

This was so good!! Laughing and crying happy tears

Arminda Gray

So amazing! I thought her and Penny had done this together when they were engaged, but this is way better and makes far more sense 😅

Debra Cimabue

As always, did not disappoint! Love, love love it. Feels like been waiting forever for this! I do like that she made the decision to stay before finding out about that loophole! ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Mark

Well, you've done it again - another superb chapter. And such a heartfelt ❤️❤️ ending (Get it? Heartfelt?)

Carrie Brooks

Who would have thought that Hell would show us the beauty of life? I’m crying- I want so badly to step into the Belles world that it’s almost physical.

Malak El Dessouki

I don’t think I’ve ever been this worried about a fictional character than I was about Bel not completely falling apart before she got to him. IT WAS PERFECT

JustSurvibing

Great job the ending the chapter with a beating heart CHEFS KISS. Writers Note: Go further in the italized part on why she's staying. Just like you did for the italized part at the Reincarnation gate. Think about mirroring those passages. Really list out specifics on why she's staying. Your lists are a reoccurring tool you've used in the story and have brought me to tears multiple times. So I would just say push it further and give us every beautiful detail of this Afterlife of love you've created. Much love keep up the good work and can't wait for more. 🖤💕

Carrie Brooks

And I hope you guys stay safe and warm tonight!!!

Van Brewer

Magnificent. Just effing magnificent. Thank you, thank you, thank you. ☮️💟☯️

Mickey Brock

The way I ran to read this! It was so good! Can't wait for more

May Barros

I've never been awake before when the new chapter dropped and I'm so glad I was here for this one ^^ So beautifully written! Kinda wish her heart beat would only come when all three of them were together, her, Bel and Sharkie. Still, soooo sooo goooood!!! 🥰🥰🥰🥰

MelemelaS

I read this chapter very slowly so as to savor and relish it. Wonderful...I feel so good. Thank you!

Peter Psareas

My god that was beautiful. I started crying at love. Laughed a bit at Greg and Lev. Loved Lily’s heartbeat. Please don’t apologize this was great

Kristiane Laucht

That section, where Lily is standing at the gateway? Absolutely phenomenal. Lily saying goodbye to the possibilities of life, because she found and chose her greatest path. Brilliant, love it. Going to curl up into an introspective ball now. ❤️

Makayla

Amazing chapter you should absolutely set up a pre-order for your book cause hon I'm first in line. Thank your for writing this masterpiece🥰

Kristen

I think this was one of my favourite chapters thus far. It was emotional, Lily's excitement was palpable.

Alisha Hobgood

Honestly great chapter considering your problems with power going out! I would love to see how you could make it better as it’s already so good!

Figment Lorton

Once again and as always this was worth the wait. I could feel all of the happiness and love that Lily felt as she heard her heartbeat. It was so beautiful. Thank you for the feels your writing gives us all. 😄 🤟

Peter Psareas

Right there with you. Jaysea if you allow preorder you might be able to buy the house you want

Jonda Goss

All I can say is "WOW"

Lily Stagner

Oh..oh man, Jaysea. I've read it twice already. It is already such a powerful, beautiful, hopeful chapter. Your tiktok about emotions and instruments had me worried!! Now I'm just left mourning Sharkie's little siblings/the children we won't get to see them have, as this is a Hell's Belle's prequel, not a sequel!!...Wait!! SHARKIE!! Ahh! I can't wait for Sharkie to hear the good news!!!

Lily Stagner

Idk, we might have to hold a jousting tournament for who gets to be first in line... haha!

Lawson harvey

I would just add that some exploration into bels’ thoughts and feelings while she is in the office, before she gets back, would be a strong addition and building point. Especially as he is holding her file (of which, I believe, has the effect of her ‘imprinting’ on him, and he reinforcing his aspect on her afterlife, causing a more purple tinge), seeking silica in his turnpikes and fearful mind. Especially as his heart is trying to defend his hopes. Just a thought for a building point, and a possible additional way for a meaningful beefing of the chapter. However. Beautifully written. I still needed to have a couple glasses of wine tonight.

Lily Stagner

I know, right!? I was so worried about him the whole chapter, I had to immediately reread it once I finished, to pay better attention to the 1st 2/3rds!

Mike Smith

There is no way that the bureaucracy in the After-Life is that efficient. Fantastic chapter. Can’t wait for next week.

Amanda Cormier

*just the absolute ugliest ugly crying with tears of joy*

Mandy Karlin

I can't wait to read how Sharkie reacts to the news!!!

Peyton Stanley

Perfection absolute Perfection. The goodbye to life, the reunion, Greg getting ready to tear Lev's intestines out his throat, the literal start of a new life together. ❤️ I can't wait for bel to make Lily's heart race

Sebastian Blackbourne

The way I DOVE for my phone after realizing you posted 😂 Even if you do end up rewriting, this is still SO good 🥰 Can't wait to (hopefully) read about Gregs reaction too!

Chandra

I don’t know what you were aiming for, but I’m hella deep in my feels. I know this feeling. After years of emotional trauma finding your person, your reason, does feel like feeling your heartbeat for the first time. So, while I understand you weren’t satisfied with this chapter, whatever the missing thing is, is going to fuck us up, I just know it. This was beautiful.

Emily Barteaux

Idk what the goal was here, but I'm half way through a box of kleenex. This is incredibly emotional. The rewrite, if there is one if going to rip my heart out.

Daysi

Omg!! My heart! I felt so much for Bel but this is beautiful!! It’s 3:30 am here the way I almost squeal when the email came through!!! ♥️

Peter Psareas

That doesn’t mean they won’t have kids. Lily has dropped some hints in her TT’s

Vic Hill

I'm not sure how you could make this better since I am currently sobbing happy tears but sure. I love that there was no paperwork, just her heart beating again 😭❤️. I personally am more curious about her past lives after the paragraph with the gate if you want to do more with that? But I do love the chapter as is

Embeth Arreyn

It's my & my husband's first wedding anniversary today. Surprise, happy anniversary (that he has to spend on base, yay army), he found out today that his unit is deploying. So please excuse me while I read this 3 more times, and sob my eyes out as I lose myself in a story where they don't have to say goodbye. Where they get actual, literal forever together. Thank you Jaysea, for giving me, giving all of us, this story. I needed it.

JustSurvibing

Ooooo nice! That would be interesting to go deeper in Bel thoughts while she's in the office especially while hes holding the file that disappears in his hands. A powerful image. Structurally though that might fit better as an add in to the last chapter before this one. I kinda love how this chapter is all from Lily's POV since it is the climax/resolution to her decision to stay. Of course Bel wants her to and it effects him but it is ultimately her choice alone which is why I like her being the only voice POV of the chapter.

Shawn M McFadden

Jaysea, the way you write and give life to your characters and draw your readers in is Second-to-NONE. This book, once it's published will be a guaranteed bestseller, and that's BEFORE it hits the shelves. You have so many fans here, on AO3, and on TT, that it'll be sold out everywhere as soon as it drops. Then once it hits the shelves, I feel like anyone who picks it up will be as enchanted as we all are. Stay safe and warm. Can't wait for the next installment. Love this book and love Hell's Belles.

Lily Stagner

Oh, absolutely!! I WHOLLY expect they will! And the joy I feel for this fictional couple and their non-existant-even-in-universe-yet children is so real, I've had to remind myself it's fictional once or twice, haha. I'm just sad we won't get to see them in For Whom the Belle Tolls, ya know? Because Lily and Bel deserve every ounce of joy the Universe has on tap. And the Universe apparently agrees, seeing how quickly it accepted her application, after not having done so for eons!

Kat 💜

Oh my heart!!! I have no other words. I am counting the minutes to have this in hardcopy!!!! Well done, you 💜

Keith Frederick

Everything from when Lily walked into Bel’s office was perfect. I was smiling like an idiot the whole time. Just wonderful. I do see what you mean about a rewrite, though. The scene in the reincarnation office seems… incomplete. Like, you knew what you wanted to say and you had a plan but you just couldn’t get it to come out the way you wanted. I can’t quite put my finger on it either. It might be that we go from Lily’s triumphant race through the halls to … the DMV? It feels maybe a bit too mundane for the magnitude of the situation. That juxtaposition might be the point, I know. But it feels somewhat out of place. Just a thought.

Lily Stagner

Happy Anniversary! Though, what horrible timing! Here's to him returning safe and sound, and soon!

Nina M

I am sick as hell and have damn near no voice. That being said, I immediately read this chapter to my husband. He told me that we could wait but I loved it so much that I had to.

Peter Psareas

I’m too old to joust but I will impatiently wait in line

Thornblade

I legit started to read faster and faster through the excitement. Such a beautiful chapter! If/when you do a rewrite here I'm sure it's going to wreck us all even more. You have a beautiful talent here Jaysea and thank you for sharing it with the world. I'm looking forward to hearing everyone's reactions to this because it's going to be amazing from the Front Deathk, to the Hellp Desk, to Lilith, to Lucifer, to Sharkie and beyond. Outside of Sharkie I'm most interested in how Lilith/Lucifer react. They've been around since the beginning after all.

LeAnne Meeks

I totally cried happy tears reading this chapter

Natasha

It broke my heart and put it back together. ❤️‍🩹 i loved this so much.

Candice Carman

That was quick! That was beautiful ❤️ They knew how much good she did to the afterlife!

Ashers

I had to pause multiple times during the story to emotionally and mentally prepare myself. It never fails that, even though I’m fully aware of what this story is leading to, your writing is so well that I feel like I’m clueless to the next part. I think you did a great job with this chapter. The only thing I would like to see would be a switch to Bel after she’s at the reincarnation desk to a snippet of his POV to get a look into his thoughts then a switch as Lily is coming down and runs into Greg and Lev (hilarious scene BTW). But overall another superb chapter!

Samantha Johnson

It was absolutely worth waiting for! A little rougher than normal like you explained but I saw HARDCOPY! Yes please! I might have to get one to read and a backup for when I've worn out the first one :)

Tyler Davie

"Doesn't have the depth and range of feeling" my ass. I hardly got through the chapter without breaking down. Well done.

Shay

Awwww I love it so much!!! 💖💖💖💖

Shay

Put me down for *AT LEAST* one copy of the book. Definitely gonna need that!

Thomas Forrest

If you think that needs a rewrite, I can’t wait to see how you could possibly top that! An amazing chapter, that finally reaches the pinnacle climax with everything it deserves!

Sum

Beautiful as always 💕 this scene and the scene with Lily and Sharkie playing in the rain have been my favorite moments in this book! You are gifted ❤️ thank you for sharing your gift and talents with us

La Tricia Ransom aka OlivenBoo

I can’t wait for the analog version, for the tactile joy of flipping pages, reading and re-reading. Someone said readers will be enchanted, and that is an excellent description of this world you have created and are sharing with us: enchanting. You are quite the spell caster!

Tara Cabache

Aahh! Yes! I'm so happy for Bel and Lily (let's ignore the fact that we obviously knew what the outcome was going to be 😅) Also, I can't wait to have a physical copy ❤️❤️

Donald Gentry

Mm-hm. 21 emotions indeed. And tears. Though yes, I appreciate merely raw feelings to the typical piles of shredded emotion. Thank you for that. This chapter is Beautifully crafted and lovingly presented though. Sorry you are frustrated with it— I suspect you will find the path, in time, that leads you to a narrative form you prefer though.

Tinker_Del

I'M NOT CRYING YOU'RE CRYING

Jena

Oh, I am sobbing. I keep telling myself I’m not going to read books that make me cry, but then here I am. Sobbing.

Nanikg

🥹🥹 the amount of secondhand happiness I get from your work is a immeasurable!! 💕🤗

Laney Macdonald

Noooo!!!! 😭😭 I’m not sobbing y’all are sobbing!!! This was incredible!!!

Amanda Lasorsa

Even if you feel like that chapter needs to be rewritten to fully convey the emotions and thoughts that you had for it, it’s still really well done. The raw emotions I go through reading this are insane- giddy smiles, laughter, tears galore.

Rebecca Van Winkle

I personally enjoyed the chapter and thought it was well written. I have to say I loved Greg's response to seeing Lily. The emotions for Lily hating herself were spot on. Good job.

Beowulf447

And that is how the queen of the afterlife became a deity.

Judi Noriega

Can I just say how perfect the chapter title is? So many authors give too much away with their chapter titles but Jaysea this is just one of the ways you show brilliance. Beautiful.

BJ Canaway

The chapter is amazing. The emotions crystal clear at every step of Lily’s journey. I know you often include Bel’s pov, but here? This chapter said EVERYTHING that needed saying to paint the story in vivid colors.

Luturu

I'm not crying you're crying I love your work

Amanda Carr

Excuse me ma'am...I think you dropped your ABSOLUTE BADASSERY over here!!! Lmao seriously you may say you're not fully satisfied with the chapter but I will tell you, the end gave me chills. Like honest to God full body chills. And I feel a little tear in the corner of my eye.

Emma Southwell

I love it so much I'm crying with happiness I knew how it was going to go but I'm still extacticly happy

MateKa

Ma’am if you put in ANY more emotion, you make break all of us. That was wonderful!!

Jayde Gammie

MA'AM! ma'am! I absoutly insist you release all chapters of the book now. 🤣 I know they are not written but with this brilliance you clearly can work out time travel and I NEED the rest. On a more serious note this was perfectly written. It may not "flow" properly but I think that adds to the emotion of it. When your that excited nothing feels like it "flows" ever. It feels disjointed and jerky. And when you look back and remember it's still disjointed and jerky. I represented Australia in 5 world stage competitions for Artistic Roller Skating. I can assure you thoes memories are disjointed and jerky. They were some of the best times of my life apart from my children and husband

Annabelle Wren

Perfect!! Absolute Perfection!! 👌😍

Caboosz

who the hell is cutting onions? an absolutly brilliant chapter Jaysea!

Belinda Millar

If you’re wishing to re-write this chapter I’m here for it, but if you want to leave this as it is that will definitely work. It’s what makes you happy. I guess the only thing would be fleshing out the chapter more, maybe have Bels POV, but I loved this, especially after the cliffhanger

Anna c

Ok, the way they found out at the end? Her being able to feel her heartbeat and then letting Bel feel? The privacy of it instead of being handed an acceptance letter? Perfection ❤️

Charlie T

I didn’t read last weeks when it was published and I am SO glad I read this one and the last one consecutively

Tzwaenia.fox

Another Sunday morning crying over this characters. The dog came over to check on me, cause of the crying. I'm curious about a rewriting since you already made us cry. Also love the appearance of the old couple always wondered if we would see them reunited. And Greg dealing with Lev and then seeing Lily - love it. I am already so excited for the book to be released one day, I have to ship it around the world but I will get at least one copy, probably two as backup.

Kwon MaiLi

This. This would be the perfect place to have a cliffhanger I would hate you for. But if you need to cut the monster book in half, this is it ^^ and the only thing I think would be great to have in this chapter would be a Bel POV. The "lack" of flow (which I don't find that noticable) might be a perfect indicator on how nervous and excited lily is ^^

melkay31

Okay, so I know that Lily is deified already, but reading how it happened is 😭😭😭. And poor Bel. And Greg with Lev. 💚💚💚💚

TashaHeart

This is absolutely perfect. I’m actually crying. So beautiful

Chelcee B

I thought for sure the 'thump' was what happened to Lev but that was so much better

Jo N

Love it! Great job Jaysea. Now excuse me while I go find the darn onion ninjas in my house... lol

Maryann

Jaysea that was incredible. You had me in tears, and I know it seems imperfect to you it I can hardly imagine what an improved version would look like! You are a fantastic writer, and this chapter is incredibly powerful. I forgot I was reading; I was there living the moments with Lilly and Bel. Very, VERY well done!

Eleanor Hindley

No notes. These was perfect. Tears whilst sat watching football (England) with my inlaws not ideal but this chapter. Perfect.

Sarah Ann's Music

Such a good chapter! Can't wait to see what a rewrite looks like on this masterpiece!

Judy Sullivan

Oh poor Bel! When the file “proofed”…no wonder Greg was ready to Level 9 Lev! I love it

Sean

I was halfway expecting Bel to find her looking at the reincarnation gate

Samantha Pare

I'm not crying, my phone just got really blurry. I love this. 💞💖😭💕💖

La Yuca Mala

The image of Greg grabbing a terrified and sick Lev is too funny. 🤣🤣

Courtney

I’d love to see Bel’s perspective from after Greg went to get Lev to when Lily knocked on the door. That would add even more emotion to the chapter. Loved it nonetheless!

Daniel Mann

Definitely didn’t notice any “flow” problems, but that may have been due to the tears. Another amazing chapter. And yes, would be a great one to “end” book one.

WolfWarrior121

I live for these chapters every Sunday morning

Lalakay

"I needed to find beauty in a moment that had none" 💖 I had to take a moment to appreciate that choice at such a time.

Lalakay

What an exquisite moment to write about! This is perfect.

Meredith Alden

Damn the wind! This is definitely feeling like a climactic chapter! I also hope we get to see Bel's POV - it would make an excellent start to the chapter, structurally.

Wildfyr69

I have managed to remain stoic through ALL of the previous chapters. Maybe a couple tears on the ones that hit home. HOWEVER, THIS!!!! I will be leaking tears all day and have to figure out how to explain why I'm crying to my teammates during league!

Van Brewer

Second that on the kids - @Elly.and.Art did a couple of drawings of their potential family, and they are my hands-down favorite.

Peter Psareas

Two for sure. Hopefully one signed and one to read over and over. I’d love to see a series of movies like LOTR

Peter Psareas

Read this five times now. No idea how you could make it better. Next chapter, tell Sharkie then a party even better than the betrothal block party. I love these characters so much

ScaryMamaBear

So beautiful! Maybe because you have so many more ideas in your head, you think the chapter might need a rewrite but unless it’s to just add the perspectives of the other characters, I think it’s absolutely perfect as it is.

Audrey

I am bursting with joy (and some tears). The reveal felt so right ! Also my boy Greg, forever the best friend that could be !

Loona Darkpaw

I personally want Greg's pov. I want to see his interaction with Lev in all it's entirety from when Lev left to when he sees Lily in the hall. But I do agree Bel's pov would be great to see

Jennie

I am trying so hard not to sob happy tears right now. That was so beautiful! You are truly an amazing author. We’re all here for you to remind you of that when you forget. ❤️

Anathema

Do I reread every chapter before reading the newest chapter? Yes. Am I so so so so happy for Lily and Bel and rereading all the chapters again? Also yes. Thank you, Jaysea for giving us such an amazing story and giving me one of my favorite hyper fixations ♥ I will be forever grateful.

Kat

I’m not crying someone is cutting an onion.

V Marie Ashes

I was talking about this story with my brother, who has never seen Hells Bells, and got him to read it. He absolutely loves it. I only had chap 1-40 when I borrowed him my kindle, and he came back saying, "Lily will get pregnant, I don't know how, but she will!" Then I gave him chapter 41-42, and he was ecstatic when he learned that deification was a thing! So people who has no knowledge of Hells Bells will enjoy this as well, not just those of us who has seen the TikTok series

Shawnee904

I thought the chapter was great. Would I like to know what Lev said sure. It is necessary to the plot? No. But I love all the characters in the story and the TT vids so I always want to see more of them.

Anjuli

I’ve been putting off the last few chapters so I can read them in chunks. I’m glad I’ve just read these last few chapters. (It must be dusty in here, my eyes are leaking).

Claire Moores

Wow! I hadn’t read the last three chapters until just now, too much sadness and too much going on in my life. I reread the whole story over the weekend, and it’s beautiful. Thank you. I need joy right now. I’m grateful

Jada treglown

Can we preorder signed copies now? This book is amazing and in your writing I have found a new genre and a renewed loved for reading

Donna Baird

Is there going to be a separate book for Penny and Greg? It would be just as awesome as this one!

Ayselle

I honestly don't want this to ever end. I'd love to see it continue past where the tik toks start. And maybe a penny and Greg spin off ^^ Your writing is just so beautiful!

Aj Hawkins

Ma’am I’ve said it before and I’ll say it again im sure, you are an incredible storyteller

Seshimori

Despite having been watching the Hell's Belles series, I was seriously on the edge of my seat. Beautiful work!

Seshimori

She did mention in a video that she's either going to do or is staring on a Penny and Greg story.

Kayla Cox

I felt my own heart beat with her. :D

TheDiceSmith

Oh man the emotional rollercoaster I have riden as i binge read the chapters I hadnt read yet. What a beautifully emotional chapter! Love it!!!

Claudia

IT WORKED! It's odd to cry at a story you know ends well. I saved up the last 5 or 6 chapters to binge and I couldn't stop crying. Jaysea, your work is glorious. This world and its inhabitants is one of the best fantasy worlds I have ever encountered and I've been a book nerd ever since I could read. You deserve your very own, equal paper and equal sized hardcopy series, but I will absolutely be unsurprised when HBO picks this up for an animated show. It's just THAT GOOD

Trazanice Scott

Omg🥹 I must say I have recently binged all available chapters of your story and I'm so in love with it.❤️ You really know how to snag those emotional cords lol. What Bel and Lily have is what I dream for myself 🥰 Amazingly beautiful work and I hope to read more as they come. 😁

Nonakris

Yes LILY IS STAYING such an amazing story really is love every single chapter ❤️❤️

Felicity Shields

Oh. Oh. My. On my favourite number the best thing ever happened ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Levi

I want this book in hard copy so bad! The TikTok series has been my comfort series for the last year or so, and now the book too (even with its emotional damage 😭)

Naja S.

AAAAAAH IT WORKED LIKE I KNOW IT WOULD BUT STILL!!!!

Erika Wood

It most definitely worked.