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Finally finish this one. Now back to the liquid mercury.

As always if you find any mistake let me know in the comment.

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StarGazer

I feel so envious and jealous of their prey

Chris

You do realize they're going to eat her

ChaosOverlordZ

as you intended, a much shorter one from the big long stuff you have done with these before. I liked it.

M

Really fun comic with a pretty cool spider theme and colors schemes!! Looking forward to Part 2 of Liquid Mercury 😁

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Format: Original quote ↴ Modified quote with [notes] ↴ Modified quote without notes. Notes shown in [square brackets] Multiple possible modifications shown in {curly brackets/braces} ――――――――――――――――――― “From this day you are mine.” ↴ “From this day, [comma separating clauses] you are mine.” ↴ “From this day, you are mine. “What is the meaning of this sister. We agree that this sacrifile is mine” ↴ “What is the meaning of this, [comma before addressing] sister? [question mark after rhetorical question, matching the other rhetorical question later on] We agreed [past tense, they agreed in the past] that this sacrifice [correct typo] is mine. [period]” ↴ “What is the meaning of this, sister? We agreed that this sacrifice is mine.” “You said the same thing last time. At this rate you will get fat big sister.” ↴ “You said the same thing last time. At this rate, [comma separating clauses] you’ll [contractions are more common in speech] get fat, [comma before addressing] big sister.” ↴ “You said the same thing last time. At this rate, you’ll get fat, big sister.” “Hmph! I miss the time when you still scare of your own breast. My little Kyo is all grown up.” ↴ “Hmph! I miss the {days [time is fine, but the phrase “I miss the days…” is more common] /time} when you were [dropped a word] still scared [past tense, she was scared in the past] of your own breasts [plural]. My little Kyo is all grown up.” ↴ “Hmph! I miss the {days/time} when you were still scared of your own breast. My little Kyo is all grown up.” “Avatar of Goddess need to be in shape right?” ↴ “{The/An [If she is the only avatar, and therefore is a unique title, “the” should be used. If she shares the title with Kyo, and hence is an instance of, then “an” should be used]} Avatar of the [insert “the” here, Goddess is a title] Goddess needs [simple present] to be in shape, [comma] right?” ↴ “{The/An} Avatar of the Goddess needs to be in shape, right?” “Quiet human adult are talking.” ↴ “Quiet, [comma before addressing] human, [comma after addressing] the adults [“the adults”, the is used because we’re talking about a specific group of adults] are talking.” ↴ “Quiet, human, the adults are talking.”

Stormfries

Cooool and evil good

Pascal

neat!

Edwin

Genderbender 😩I love it the main reason I’m studying science to make to come true 😂

Edwin

Lol the type of change I want is more like shapeshifting😩being able to change at will

Nathan Zhang

“Adults are talking” image has singular adult