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I'm very sorry for very late post but here is another 4 page done!

I wish I could work faster. At least i've fixed my sleeping schedule not my attenion span thought lol

As always if you have any suggestion or found any mistake feel free to post it in the comment.

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Lauzed

nice!

Canti

Grammar check “your hands are” and “doesn’t she” you also wrote “ro” instead of “to”

Theerawee

I Agree with you Her personality should be kept. If it's all taken away, it's too hopeless. Also she like aria

Theerawee

Her personality should be kept, bro. it will make story to become Interesting and we become supportive with her

Theerawee

น้องคิดว่า(ความคิดเห็นส่วนตัวนะ) บุคลิกของเซ็ตคุนดา ถ้าเก็บเอาไว้จะสานต่อเรื่องราวได้ไปไกลกว่า หรือจะล้างสมองเธอก็ได้ แต่น่าจะให้หลงเหลือบุคลิกภาพของการต่อต้าน ที่จะสร้างความน่าสนใจและมิติของตัวละคร เหมือนกับเอเรียใน Demon Lord ที่พี่วาดไว้ก่อนหน้านั้น ที่สำคัญมันจะทำให้เซ็ตคุนดากลายเป็นตัวปรับและสร้างสีสันให้เนื้อเรื่อง

ibenz009

ใจเย็นๆ ครับยังเขียนไม่จบรอดูก่อน

Theerawee

55555555 โทษทีครับ นึกว่าวางโ๕รงไว้ก่อนแล้ว แต่จะเก็บบุคลิกภาพอยู่แล้วมั้ยครับ เห็นมีแอบทิ้งเบาะแสอยู่เรื่องนาโนแมทชีนหมายเลข 2 ที่เปลี่ยนเป็นเซ็ตคุนดามันยังไม่เสถียร ขอเถอะครับ เพราะน้องน้ารัก555

ibenz009

วางไว้แล้วครับแต่เปลี่ยนบ่อย 555

Theerawee

ก็ขอว่าขอให้น้องรอดจากการถูกล้างสมองแล้วกันคร้าบบ เพราะน้องน่ารัก และคนน่ารักควรมีชีวิตต่อ

Mantarok1205

This is the part where Mercury accesses her core and they plot to escape together.

M

Secunda Silver. I love the name! It'd be cool if Silver can morph her body more freely but her new form is pretty cute too. Personally, given how they're literally robots and the mad scientist loves obedience, it just makes sense for thier personalities to be reprogrammed. Plus it makes the eventual, sudden betrayal in the original satisfying! If you want to keep June's personality, how about having the scientist able to switch June's personality on and off. A maid mode and Mimicry mode. Either mode, June is still forced to obey her mistress.

M

I like the approach in the original comic honestly. The build up to a sudden betrayal despite being fully reprogrammed is satisfying.

Pascal

cute

M

Page 1: "AHHHHHH!" "Second Unit's muscle density reduced." "Registering new appearance..." "Stand by mode. Appearance registered." Page 2: "Ahh." "Ah." "Restriction of second unit's nanite usage is engaged, mistress." "Doesn't she look great, Prima?" "Yes, Mistress..." "Fufufu, I surprise even myself sometimes." "What an adorable little thing you've become, miss June." "Ador...able?" "I think I will call you Secunda Silver."

M

Notes: you did a good job this time around. Not too many corrections to make here. Page 3: "Wha...wha...what did you do?!" "What is this body?!" "Damn you, I'll..." "You'll do what, Secunda?" "How did you?! Grrr, let go!!" "Awww, so cute. How does it feel to be the short one now?" "You bitch!" "Oof" "Ahhh, your hands are so soft. I think I overdid that setting a bit." "Right now, your chassis is in safety mode. As you can see, it renders you completely harmless to me." Page 4: "Now to get rid of that brutish personality of yours." "Prima!" "Yes, mistress." "Miller?! Ahh...!" "Please stay still, Secunda." "Your old commander here is going to teach you how to behave like a good girl." "Miller, stop! Damn this weakass body!" "Preparing personality core access..."

Tay Altrus

I absolutely can not wait for the colored pages!!!

Sol Astrius Phoenix

May be, like, partial overwrite? So she gets respect to her new master but still her old's personality quirks appear. Like, without becoming totally unemotional. Or, maybe, something goes wrong and she becomes totally obsessed with her new master.

Arbiter

The Mistress isn't looking for more potential recruits is she? As I'll happily volunteer as tribute! Make a waifu outta me xD

Nobody-Kadaj

Wade's Virus from the first part could play a role in saving June's personality...and it could play a role in getting Miller/Prima to turn against Felsen-Bern. And it could see Felsen-Bern getting turned into Amalgam and subject to the same brainwashing process she subjected poor Miller to. June may have to guide Wade's Virus as she's being brainwashed/programmed. It could appear in her mind as a robotic version of Wade, and it could note that it only looks like Wade to her since she associates him with the it. It would be another excellent way for Wade to get the last laugh on Felsen-Bern from beyond the grave. Such a thing would be wonderfully cathartic to witness. Just throwing around ideas.

Arthur Yeung

@Ibenz009 Can you at least slip in one more page with Silver having big boobs?

Alexey Stratulat

You said you messed up your sleep schedule. Restore if necessary. After all, if you undermine your health, you will no longer be able to please us with your wonderful work.

Pohwaran_TH

อยากรู้ไวๆแล้วสิว่าสุดท้ายแล้วยัยตัวร้ายเราจะโดน(อดีต)มิลเลอร์หักหลังแล้วทำให้หลายเป็น Liquid mercury ตามต้นฉบับไหม :3

Theerawee

น่าคิดแหะ เห็นว่าคุณนักวาดเขาก็กำลังคิดอยู่เหมือนกันว่าจะไปยังไงต่อ แต่ผมอยากให้เซ้ตคุนดายังมีบุคลิกเหมือนเดิม เหมือนใน Demon Lord

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Ever since the first chapter been hoping for the equivalent of iron to come about, nice to see it is. :)