Chapter 4 Reboot, Page 11 (Patreon)

I've been busy trying to finish up this video for my review series, so only one page this week. I should have the video up this weekend sometime but we'll see.

I actually redrew one of the panels entirely for this page. I've been keeping a lot of these the same but I hated how one panel looked and it was nice to have a chance to "fix" it. I think there is at least one other panel that will be completely redrawn, but we'll see.

Step By Step

Here's the original image from the manga. I must have been short on time when I drew this because I made a lot of errors!

New line art! Completely redrew the panel where Lamia plucks Vox from her cleavage. Had to draw Ora's face because it was originally blocked by a word balloon in the bottom left panel. Quite a few changes here and there.

Silhouettes!

Flat colors!

Shadows!

Gradations and highlights!

Textures and patterns and various touches.

Dialogue and sound effects! I did alter some of the dialogue for this page. I removed Arma's use if "bastard" because I want to save that level of bad language for heavier scenes in this version.