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Tensions are escalating on the island between the "toymakers" and the coven... all right before the Coming Out dinner!

Last episode, Davis set his eyes on Brooke (who we first met at the end of Phase 8 on the yacht) as a replacement for Kendra... Will he get away with taking her as his new bride? Or will the "coven" (Holly's group of handlers who train the companions) have something to say about it?

Meanwhile, Jill was on her way to see Connor... 

Lots going on in this episode - I can't wait to read your comments! 😊

P.S. We get to meet a new character! She was mentioned previously, but this is the first time we're seeing her in the story.

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Tim

Yes, definitely lots going on here. Has Davis finally gone too far?... although we're going to see him in another day and a half with a gun in his hand. And I'm dying to know more about Akari... she's got the looks and attitude of an Amazonian goddess. And 650cc's for Connor?... something the prince custom ordered?

Tiki D

More memory lane moments for Jill. Im excited to see what happen to Davis and punishment he going to receive after trying to claim Brooke for himself. I was wonder during Conner/Connie's surgery did the doctor alter his vocal cords as well? Connie is not going to be happy to see Jill after previous two chapters to lead to his capture and the surgery. Who is going to help her adjust to womanhood? Davis really wants to make Connie really attractive for the prince as possible.

Jade Diaz

Akari is my new favorite girl. I don't remember her previous mention but since she's so tall, I'm gonna infer she is a product of Clinic 12 too, and I absolutely love how Davis has to look up at her. The sequence with Jill's expressions as she discovers what has happened to Connor and Gabriel's pleading are just so superb. Absolutely amazing work here!

Tim

Dr. Hatcher probably tightened Connor's vocal cords when she did the tracheal shave.

Maggie Heels

Oh... I'm not sure if waking Connor in such state is a good idea... and if I remember good his last meeting with Jill wasn't a pleasant event... she said to him that she chooses for him life as a woman instead of death... right? And Davis should never see Brooke... and should get a severe hammering from Akari And I'm wondering what was the name of Akari before she came to Island (was "she" as beautiful as now?)... ❣️❣️❣️

Tim

You really know how to "punish" Davis, Maggie.

Jade Diaz

I can tell you from personal experience that your voice is already super messed up after a tracheal shave and if there's some voice spray which permanently alters one's voice, why wouldn't they use it on Connor? (Forcibly or otherwise.)

Joe

Jill makes me have gender envy im ngl

Zoe Storm

lmao you fucked up Davis

Zoe Storm

Seriously you thought you could throw your weight around? Think again lol

Gemma

Great to see David come off his high horse. I expect he is going to encounter some reality checks. Jill is in a very tough situation. I am not sure what she can do for the latest young man being transformed nor for Connor! I don’t expect too positive a reception from Connor. Jill continues to show amazing bravery and compassion as she places placing the needs of others ahead of her own needs. True growth.

Ella Cherry

The tension is growing, and I like it! Getting my popcorn ready🍿 for the next chapter! 😊

Thomas Tolliver

That's going to be a tough conversation. Actually, both will be, but one will hopefully be far more amusing.

non anon

I think I see some foreshadowing here. It feels like a coin flip for who is causing the mayhem at the Coming Out ceremony. Either a rampaging Connor or Davis attempting a coup.

sapiens1559

Emory, I'm looking forward to the day when ALL your characters in the series are realized as women. I want to see them exploring their femininity to the fullest, feeling sexy, and wearing all the available lingerie haha and maybe even a nice bed companion. I almost feel this with Jill already.

Nolwenn (edited)

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2026-09-14 23:00 I'ld like that M.Xu give reasons to Davis for this. ( i really think they may have a good professional relation together. And yes davis deserve a new wife🤣. It'dl be so much more fun and cause so much trouble. And Poor Connor. It's entierly all jill's fault😑. ( i know i like chaos)
2024-07-02 11:21

Nolwenn (edited)

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2026-09-14 23:00 Is it the first time we meet akira? Has she been change? Has she been punished employed punished by m.xu or is she a victim with upgrade status like jill? I really think it should weight on the balance. But it's your story.
2024-07-02 17:56

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you, Tim! Davis has a high tolerance for risk, and a high opinion of himself, but even he might find he's bitten off more than he can chew this time. Akari is definitely one of the most formidable characters on the island - her backstory is something I’m excited to reveal in future chapters. 😊 Regarding Connor’s surgeries, yes, the 650cc implants were a specific request from his intended buyer. The transformation has been tailored to meet very particular standards!

Emory Ahlberg

Thanks, Tiki! For Jill, the memories of herself as Jack down in PL-0 are still fresh and raw, and they drive much of her empathy for those going through similar experiences. Good catch! Regarding Connor/Connie's surgery, Dr. Hatcher didn't need to do the harsh voice feminization surgery. As Jade pointed out (and Jill reminded us) there's a spray that will take care of this... if he's compelled to take it! You're right that Connie won't be happy to see Jill initially—there’s a lot of tension and unresolved anger there. Jill is aware that she'll have to navigate this very carefully.

Emory Ahlberg

I've soooo been looking forward to introducing Akari! She's definitely one of my favorite new characters in a long while. Yeah, her height and strength make her quite imposing - but, as we'll see, she's a softy when it comes to her charges (mostly - she can be a little grumpy 😉). The sequence with Jill and Connor is another emotional moment for Jill - she's thinking of Emily mostly. And Gabriel's desperation was intended to show that the Second Dawn machine is more than the drama we're seeing - and it is definitely still churning out girls!

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you, Maggie! Jill is certainly more interested in Connor's recovery and emotional well-being, but you're right that their last encounter was far from pleasant - and waking up in such a state is going to be incredibly disorienting. Jill is taking a big risk here, hoping that her presence will provide some comfort despite their tumultuous history. Regarding Akari's past, I can tease that there are layers to her character we haven’t fully explored yet. She has a history that’s just as complex and intriguing as the others!

Emory Ahlberg

I feel you, Jacob! Jill's change has been intense and (for me too) deeply emotional. It's amazing how she's adapted and found strength in her new identity. She gives me all the gender feels even now!

Emory Ahlberg

Well-said, Zoe! Yeah, Davis is one of those sociopaths who has also deluded himself into thinking he's untouchable. His arrogance knows no bounds, and he genuinely believes he can manipulate anyone and anything to his advantage. But as you pointed out, he's severely underestimated the people around him!

Emory Ahlberg

Thanks, Gemma! I'm glad you enjoyed seeing Davis get a bit of a reality check... We'll see what Mr. Xu has to say. Jill is indeed in a tough situation, and her compassion and bravery are being tested... again!

Maggie Heels

Akari's story is complex and intriguing and has layers? Oh lovely... what if she's for this story similar to what for the Dorley is Stephanie... like she came here to find her sibling brother while exploit Clinic 12 for her own use... ❣️❣️❣️

ckarya

It gets more and more interesting... From the Coven we already know Holly, Gina, Akira and we are still missing Lola who we will meet at the meeting with Xu or at the Coven meeting. I look forward to learning more about Akira and Lola. I think Davis will get a good scolding from Mr. Xu, but I also think the Coven will not leave the meeting happy either. Knowing Xu, he will want to maintain the balance of power to keep all of his employees on edge. And I think he will mark territory, make it clear who is in charge in the Organization. So the pressure cooker will rise. Also, let's not forget that the Platinum Star members are already on the island... and Jill's father... and the rescue team! I think, Emory, that these 44 hours are going to be veeeeeery long... something I love! (I am passionate about epic fantasy sagas and their thousands of pages... hehehe.

Emory Ahlberg

Thanks, Ella! We know it'll pop off in about 44 hours - but there's still a lot that'll happen before then!

Emory Ahlberg

Will Mr. Xu be in the mood to placate Davis or show favor to the companion division, which he has previously said is his real favorite (despite the fact that they make far less money)? Jill and Connor may be a bit harder to predict. Connor tried to choke Jill last time, but the situation has become even more desperate for 'him' now...

Emory Ahlberg

Thanks, Anon! Connor certainly has the potential to be a wild card, given the trauma and anger he’s carrying. And Davis is always scheming and looking for ways to consolidate power!

Emory Ahlberg

Yes, Jill is definitely closest to reaching that point of full acceptance and exploration of her femininity. I hope it’s heartening to see her finding moments of empowerment and self-discovery amidst all the chaos!

Emory Ahlberg

Jill chose Ryan over Connor, so the consequences were inevitable. She made a tough decision, prioritizing one life over another, and now she has to face the fallout. Mr. Xu and Davis... their relationship is rooted in mutual benefit, mostly because Davis gets to be the brutish jerk while Xu keeps his hands clean!

Emory Ahlberg

Thanks, Nolwenn! We heard of Akira in Phase 8, but this is the first time we actually meet her in person. We'll learn more about her background and motivations in future chapters. 😊

Emory Ahlberg

Thanks, CK! Yes, we'll soon meet Lola, and you'll get to see how she fits into the dynamics of the Coven. You're spot on about Xu, of course. He likes maintaining a balance of power that keeps everyone on their toes. And you're right! We have the Platinum Star members, Jill's father, and the rescue team—all elements are converging to create a perfect storm. The next 44 hours are going to be packed!

stacy C

I love Hatcher's T-shirt hehe.....although I'm not sure Connor will be saying that when he wakes up :-) x

Emory Ahlberg

Probably my new favorite shirt of hers! She had one about orchis in Phase 8 🤣

sketchyqueen

davis is such a tool and i hate him so much

Emory Ahlberg

Yeah, Davis deserves everything that will (hopefully) come his way! 😈