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As Nikki and Zach spend more time together, they find common ground through pizza, video games, and some surprisingly heartfelt conversations. But will Nikki's decision to confront her fears jeopardize their budding friendship? And what does the future hold for these two former rivals now that they're getting a glimpse of each other's struggles?

Brace yourself for laughs, nail-biting suspense, and raw emotions in this latest installment of Half Sisters! I really can't wait to hear your thoughts and watch as Nikki and Zach's story unfolds. 💖

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Zoe Storm

They're bonding 🥺 Emory this is so good

punarotta

Wondering how Zack really feels about Nicky's looks; she's so damn cute - from straight guy pov :D Nick was a dick - would it be so bad if she'd be less so :P

Gemma

Oh Emory, what a tease. The last slide and conclusion to chapter 31 leaving everyone hanging, or at least left the reader wondering if they are still able to hang?

Alyson Greaves

I’m reading this and eating lunch so my comments will be brief and garbled but, god, I love Zach repeatedly but gently poking at Nikki’s homophobia, just as much as he tries to encourage her and build her up as the person she COULD be. I also adore everything about Nikki’s little speech towards the end. I’m not surprised she keeps going back to the beach in her head. Nick never left the beach; Nikki is who’s left. Such good writing! And LIFE IS STRANGE!!!! Zach new best character.

Alyson Greaves

Also, connecting the pointless act of “manly” violence with her dad… yeah. Except her dad wouldn’t have taken responsibility for it.

Pelicanboss

Excellent!! Nick and Zach are really something together. Hopefully Nikki will learn from Zach and learn to lightened up. By the way, I loved Nikki's posture on page 14. She looks so relax and dam right sexy. Is the Yummy pizza brand and logo local in LA or did you make that up? It's cute logo. E, I can tell you went to see the new Mario movie, it's hilarious you put that in there. I went to see it last night and loved it.

Estacia

Love love love love this!!

Bella Lime

Nice touch with the “life is strange” poster

Pelicanboss

Los Angeles, where Emory lives.

Bowie897

So where did the fantastic images for this episode come from? Why... from Zach's father's hidden cam recorders!!! (But I am sure Emory helped a little bit!)

Maggie Heels

Oh... Nikki, Nikki, Nikki... you have still tons of concrete to demolish before you'll be able to open more for true friendship... I believe Zach will help you with that... but you two must meet more than just once... AND FFS why you're so hot/sexy/cute in an oversized manly jersey and sweat pants??? It only reassure me that you would make out really great in everything even like in a potato sack. ❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️

Gemma

I keep revisiting and looking at Chapter 31. Fantastic job Emory. A brilliant story, well written dialogue, great character interactions and such beautiful artistry. Nikki is so pretty and attractive. Thank you Emory

Ella Cherry

A delight to read. Again! ❤️

mdtrentotto dodici

We have to wait until may! Come on Emory, we need more!

stacy C

Wow Nikki still looks good in a football jersey and jogging bottoms hehe x

sketchyqueen

Dun dun dun!! Oh no the patreon choice! It’s coming true! Ahhhhhhh! Absolutely adore Nikki’s face in this! She looks magnificent! Stellar portrayal! I do love Zach as a character and I really hope he gets out from under his dad’s thumb. He needs to be his gay little self and i feel so bad that he’s become such a boogeyman for jessica. Nikki’s whole arc really makes me feel bad for her after realizing the amount of ptsd she might have and such. I’m glad the two are being genuine friends to each other and trying to make the best of a bad situation. Also, life is strange i see you. Good choice >;)

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you so much, Zoe! It's always nice to see characters grow and bond as they overcome - and Nikki sure as hell has a lot to work through. She is, after all, as thick as a brick and half as smart (just kidding, we love you Nikki 💖)

Emory Ahlberg

Thanks, punarotta! Zack is still learning to navigate his own feelings and emotions, but he's at least becoming more understanding and empathetic towards Nikki / Nick. It's an ongoing journey for both of them, and who knows what the future holds? After all, growth sometimes comes from unexpected places - and IN unexpected places, too. 😊 (Although shrinkage also happens 😂)

Emory Ahlberg

😂 Gemma, you got me! I admit love keeping readers on their toes and ending with a little cliffhanger. But isn't that part of the fun? Life is full of surprises, both welcome and unpleasant - as Nikki may be about to learn!

Emory Ahlberg

Thank youuu! Zach will be challenging Nikki's ingrained prejudices for a long, long time. Her speech was both hard / fun to write. It's sometimes easy to forget Nikki went through an incredibly traumatic experience that would definitely induce really terrible PTSD - and now she's dealing with all this shit at home, too! 😢 LIFE IS STRANGE is an amazing game! Zach seemed like he would be a fan. 😊

Emory Ahlberg

Oh, and NO he wouldn't have. Nikki's dad only takes responsibility for things that go right. 😠

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you, Pelican! yes, their bond is definitely evolving, and who knows where it will lead them! As for page 14, I agree! Isn't it's great to see Nikki feeling relaxed and at ease? Definitely cute, too. 😊 The Yummy pizza brand was just for the comic, but I'm so happy you find the logo cute! That was definitely the intention. 😄

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you so much, Estacia! Lots more to come... I have so many ideas. 😊

Emory Ahlberg

Thanks! It's a great game and also a message to Nikki. 🤣

Emory Ahlberg

😂 That bastard is definitely creepy enough to do that! Thanks, Bowie!

Emory Ahlberg

Haha, Maggie, you're definitely not the only one who's fanning themselves at Nikki in that oversized jersey and sweatpants. 😳 And you're right, Nikki has a lot of work to do before she's able to fully open up and trust others - especially after everything she's been through. But with Zach's help, maybe she'll be able to break down those walls a little at a time. ❤️

Emory Ahlberg

Aw, thank you so much, Gemma! Your comments always bring a smile to my face. I'm totally thrilled you enjoyed Chapter 31 ! I can't help but agree that Nikki is too pretty. And she's definitely going through a complex journey - hopefully she'll turn out for the better in the end. I'm honored you're following her along. 😊

Emory Ahlberg

Thanks, Ella! I'll try to make it stay that way!

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you so much, Dodici! I'm glad you're excited for more. Trust me, I'm working on them as fast as I can. 💖

Emory Ahlberg

Ah! Thank you so much, Nina! 💖 It's definitely been a journey for Nikki...and sadly I think she has a long, tough road ahead. But at least she's making headway! As for Zach, he definitely has his own struggles. He lost quite a few friends when he joined the football team, and that became a point of contention with Jessica who once thought of him as a pal. Hopefully, he'll be able to break free and be himself - and hopefully, Nikki can find some catharsis and healing through their friendship! Life Is Strange is an amazing game!

ckarya

Another interesting conversation between these two. Again Zach hints to Nikki that a few years ago he did have friends... and from your comments to other responses, Em, I sense that Zach has changed since then too, that he used to be friends with Jess and Sophia. It's clear that they've both been well screwed by their parents, much more so Nick than Zach, obviously, but that they both have a heavy backpack on their backs. I also found it a very funny conversation where you can see the complicity of two old buddies. PS: can someone explain me the context of the comment "He had a pho"? What is pho? It is to be able to translate it well, I have an intuition but I prefer to ask it.😉

Jessica Thence

I liked this fun little ep. Just two friends having fun. She deserves it.