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Previous / Next PagesReads left to right~Trying out the manga / traditional comic page format. I'm thinking I might try making physical copies in the future, but no promises. Just experimenting and see what works.

I was talking to my plants & tats peeps about possibly redoing the beginning of SWFTD. I already have the whole script written out for the rest of the comic, so everything you haven't seen yet will still happen. The beginning will be more fleshed out, and a few things will be changed around. I didn't do that before because I was working full time and wanted to test out riskier plot points before committing to a slow burn. That's why the pace was so fast because I didn't want to bleed hundreds of patrons every time I tried something risky, such as grave gifting his girl a gun.My thinking was that ppl would be more open to different ideas if they've haven't invested as much time into it. This led to a lot of confusion and people not sympathizing with Grave, so I think I will just try taking my time with it and see what happens. I have some long time patrons who were here from the beginning to help provide feedback so hopefully that will help me make better decisions.I'm guessing most ppl will be okay with it, but let me know what you think. Thanks!! ^^

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Ashleigh Johnson

Same! I'm so glad they put that line in along her lower stomach. And in previous episodes, her boobs didn't stay in place when she was lying down they migrated towards the armpits. It depicted what actually happens with big boobs, feels so much more realistic this way. The characters are relatable, imperfect like us. Much love to them for doing this, inclusive af!

shinyyywolf

I appreciate the fact that she has a realistic body. Comics especially tend to portray women for the male gaze, even if it's not intentional. And seeing a body positive depiction of intimacy warms my... Heart....

Adrenaline Fed

Where I do realize that what you say is true, I can’t see it as always just for that reason. I feel like it’s the level of the artist. I feel like it would take far more talent to make a “imperfect” body look real especially in images like this. How the lighting would affect, how the skin folds and moves….I feel the “lean, perfect” body would be “easy”. If anything, my response should directed at our content creator but I definitely applaud the work put into the realism but to call Ellie’s body “imperfect”….i scoff at the notion. Lol!

shinyyywolf

Was this meant for a different comment? I never said it was imperfect.

Guts Gore

Love the chub Makes me feel better about my tummy when doing it ❤️

Aurora77106

It’s the belly rolls for me 💜🤌

Lady LaVey

Love the formatting!!! Hottttt by the way! 🥵🔥🌊 Ahh snap, just hit me, is this real??? Woo its real... *squeals to herself... Oh the mystery. 😍

chibikatana

Thank you for your hard work, 🙏

Dominique Nicole Van Cleave

I've been here since close to the beginning and I gotta say I love the way things were portrayed but I'm always down to reread the it from the beginning if you do decide to go back and change some things up. I love your work thanks you for all your hard work 💜

TinyNomz

I like the Manga format a lot! I've heard some artists say it cuts off the pictures in some places, but that might be due to the platform they were presented on. I am always happy to read this story from the beginning if you decide to flesh it out. I love it either way.

Levi Dreymala

Mmm, love me a thicc girl and a miscreant boy. I would take either of their places in a heartbeat 😏

Amber

I honestly like this format. I think it could go either way with the design of your story. You could possibly do both to keep it spicy 😌❤️‍🔥

Lunar Loveless

Hi love the story and everything, i don't mind whichever format you want to use and/or change the beginning will still love it regardless of change or not

Arely Martínez

I think it's awesome that you want to give more background to the main character and if by that you need to change the beginning, GO AHEAD 💯. By the way, both formats are great 👍🏻🤗

moonspirithinata

I would 100% get physical copies if you ever sold any 👁️👄👁️

Vanessa Ringstaff

I personally like the panels better when they are done one by one because I have really bad eyesight 🥲 so it very hard to get my eyes to focus when it’s done that way unfortunately.

Sakura

I would 100% buy a NSFW copy of this comic if you decided to do prints. I'd even back you on Kickstart if that helped. I love this comic and I enjoy the intensity of development but whatever you decide to do I'll be excited to read.

Dracula

Do what you feel is the best ! 👌🏼 Experimenting is the best way to grow anyway, so why not ? 😉

KJSOTO

Whew

Anjela Leeson

I absolutely love the way you draw Ellie’s body. Iv never seen a comic/drawn series where i relate to the body type so much 🥰

Anthalialovel25

THEY LOOK SO IN LOVE! can’t wait for more!!!! Uff , hey author, will you draw him carrying her w those strong and juicy arms ?!?!

Ellie Evans

I am obsessed w how you draw Ellie, first of all my name is also Ellie & I’ve never felt more seen by the way an artist draws a feminine body 🥰

Autumn Mosier

I would so would buy this in book format as well. I love it to bits. Seeing this, she reminds me of mochi and it’s fantastic.

AnnahKat

Baby you do you! I’m just along for the ride! 🥰💚💥

Emily Buch

Heads up: traditional manga is framing right to left.

Candace Taylor

Wait so is this actually happening? Or is this Grave’s imagination? Either way hot damn! Lol

ajoji_comic

we still in his mind gurl, he a dirty one haha

ajoji_comic

it can be left to right when it's translated into english, like with dark horse comics. they rearrange the panels. I think its less confusing that way for english readers.

Robin Lopez

Thank you for showing a real woman’s body so beautifully… and that a gorgeous man like Grace enjoys a woman with curves.

Sayuri_Hime

I actually like Grave a lot...him gifting her sth he finde useful and him having a paßt and anxiety about opening up makes him so much human and adorable. 🥺

PixelatedLove (。♡‿♡。)

I've been here for a little while now and I love💗 this comic. I originally checked it out because I seen an ad with Graves pic on it for the story and I was like "holy shit, this guy is super sexy". Grave immediately got my attention because of the way you draw him. I'm not kidding, the art is is amazing. Once I started reading it, I fell on love with Ellie too. You have done such a good job not only on the art but with the story as well. I love this slow burn because they are becoming very close and they are falling in love with one another so much during the wait to be physical. It will just make that moment so, so, much better when it does happen. I really want to read the story the way you intended but I am not opposed to reading you portraying things differently with a rework either. I think it will be fun to read these 2 characters in any type of story tbh. ☺️

PixelatedLove (。♡‿♡。)

Also about the way you made this update look like a manga, I truly like it like that. It makes the update seem longer, like there are more panels than with the way you have posted the previous ones. But I do like the original way you post too though, cause the panels are bigger. Both are great 😃 👍 I will read it either way... Hehe 😊

Ldyblue

Ohhhhh this is sooooooo good 😌

Sara Schaefer

I’m one of those patrons ❤️ I love you ajoji!!

Rose Nguyen

I guess like most readers, I want to see the plot progress and see a lot of chapter releases. It's very tricky, I also do artwork and it takes so much time and effort if you're a single creator who doesn't have the resources to hire helpers. As a reader knowing the author is constrained I would want things to be more fast-paced, but as a creator I say it's best to do whatever you want to remain passionate about your work. No matter where you take the direction of the comic, it has beautiful art and good dialogue, so I will always support it.

Brooklyn Fields

I love the fact that she’s a little bit chubby. Makes me feel the inclusivity ❤️❤️❤️❤️