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Happy Friday!!~🥳🎉

It was fun exploring the mind of a hot-blooded man and woman, but I'm looking forward to Grave and Ellie's conversation about how they're feeling. I want Grave to speak for himself. Writing dialogue and exploring a character's psychology in different situations is fun for me, but sometimes I feel compelled to speak on their behalf because readers are eager, and it takes time to get to these parts. btw, his inner monologue is inspired by psalms 23:4. I saw some dude praying because he was getting haunted, and I thought the prayer was so beautiful 😂

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Roos Cochran

I love your use of Psalm 23. Did Grave grow up Jewish/Christian?

Eunan

welp time to freeze

Jacqueline N Robinson

I love the internal battle he is having. It makes him more human. Great work!

ajoji_comic

I love characters that struggle and suffer 😢💔

ajoji_comic

it's going to be nice and awkward when they get back to the tent 🤣

Alicia

He like FUCK

Amber

Psalm 23 is my favorite

Robin Lopez

Wow! That was powerful. I have seen many people that have come from a serious trauma say this type of prayer with the scriptures… he is so relatable… even though he’s a warrior but is showing his sensitive side and trying to be better. It is showing such growth… because he wants what everyone wants to love and be 🥰.

Elena Ramirez

Haha, oh no! I am so excited to see what happens next 🤣

Alicia

Right

Alicia

Hope he rolls a nat 20 on persuasion

Yumoyori Wilson

I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE AHH!! AWKWARD EXPLAINATION WEEEEE

Eunan

rather freeze my acorns off then have that conversation 😂

ajoji_comic

The imagery from the words is so vivid. I think it inspired Ellie's song from Last of Us.

TinyNomz

Oh, that prayer is GOOD! And my heart melted when I read it. 😊 I imagine they're both gonna be blushing when they talk. Looking forward to it!

ajoji_comic

stories where characters struggle a lot are very relatable. love seeing them push through, pull themselves out of the muck and do their best to be kind and gentle regardless of their bad experiences ❤️

ajoji_comic

me too 😌 love me an awkward asf conversation 🤣

ajoji_comic

girl, saaame 😏 I'm gonna work on the next page after this~

Sadie Allard

I knew his monologue was familiar 😆 Hmm will this throw him on a loop🤔

ajoji_comic

it'll feel like they're teenagers again, except they caught each other doing the nasty 😂

ajoji_comic

Ellie's becoming his light in the valley of the shadow of death. The scripture is so beautiful yet metal asf lol

Anonymous

Ok the "bunny" is totally what I do everytime I see one, however it is usually followed by 🎶I'm gonna eat ya little bunny 🎶

ana

uh oh grave 😭

Keisha Johnson

He had to walk in the snow to slow it down a bit. I don't know if it will work.

Jessica Flood

Wow she got him quoting the bible