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As my highest tiered patrons, I'm curious what you're all looking forward to seeing happen in the story and what sort of things excite you the most. Is it fluff? Is it sexy times? Is it Grave curb stomping a criminal? Is it the character's history? Would you like to see more silliness or chaos ensue? More thrilling elements or dramatic situations?

Right now, there's not a lot of engagement between our couple and the outside world and there's not a lot of conflict between them. I plan for more things to happen, but I don't want to rely heavily on the highs too much to tell a story. I want to be able to make quiet, less intense moments still interesting. Like in Ghibli, something as simple as characters cooking or eating can be interesting, but I feel like I haven't quite grasp how to do that yet. 

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apw

This is just the hopeless romantic in me, but I loooooooooove the fluff and sexy times 🥰 but you have a plan as the creator of your story and I'm happy to be along for the ride!!

Tanyinika787

I think alittle competition won't hurt . A lover from the past.

Cora

I would very much like what ever story you have planned I'm here for the ride!!! 😁

ajoji_comic

what are examples of fluff that you really like? Because our definitions of fluff could vary.

ajoji_comic

Do you mean like a love triangle? I did have an idea for a new chaotic character to enter the picture, but I didn't plan for him to appear until later in the story when some pretty big things happen between Ellie and Grave.

ajoji_comic

Thank you for having faith in me lol but I'm curious what stories you like.

Cheyenne Apolinar

I think I would like to see a bit more on their backstories and some more fluff to see more of their emotional connection

TinyNomz

Personally, I like that the conflict they have mostly isn't between the two of them, but between themselves and the world. I like that she helps him face the monsters of his past, while he teaches her to face what she fears or needs to fight. I want to see them become more then they are separately, to stand together as a couple. Im not fond of actual love triangles, but having others express interest, specifically so the main characters can say "no, I'm taken and happy about it" is very satisfying. The idea of a self rescuing damsel is fun too. Maybe Elle has to use something Grave taught her? Your naughty scenes are always hot, so thats all good. 😁

ajoji_comic

what kind of fluff would you like to see?

Tanyinika787

Exactly, but Ellie will be the jealous one. She's so innocent let us see her dark side too.

BunnyB

I think for me, other than just the hotness of both, the best parts are them working through their own issues and having real conversations with each other. As someone else said, their issues are between them and the world, not between them as a couple and I really appreciate that. Background would be lovely and another facet of understanding their relationship.

ajoji_comic

Conflict could be like disagreements, different perspectives on the world, and playful teasing, or bickering like an old couple lol I don't want to create drama between them for the sake of it. I like what you wrote here--we're on the same page for a lot of things, but I think you worded it really well.

A

I feel like I need I want to know more about Graves and Ellie stories. I want to know where there insecurities are coming from. I want them to react to something that happened to personally instead of them being so vague about it. It doesn’t have to be a big or major event. But something small that made them change something about themselves in life.

ajoji_comic

Yeah, there's enough craziness in the world for them to contend with. No need to create a rift for the sake of it. I just meant conflict as in some of their principals or values differing, or something as minor as playful bickering or teasing. Just to keep them on their toes lol

ajoji_comic

Hmm, that would be interesting. That would have to happen inevitably, especially with how Grave is built like a brick shithouse 😂

BunnyB

Yes! That sounds delicious! I also love the moments where they doubt themselves but the other is all in. Honestly, I’ve seen a huge shift in my own self esteem as someone who is shaped like her… thank you!

Nicole Hurley

I want to start by saying I love this story and the characters so much, and I love the fluff and sexy times stuff but I’d really like to see more character development. I think it would be nice to see some character history and maybe a little more inner monologue. Also I wouldn’t mind seeing Ellie take on a little more dominant role especially after the time jump because I would assume she’s a little more comfortable and confident in the relationship. We know Grave has some pretty serious trauma to process and Ellie is supportive but I would hate to see Ellie’s needs be pushed aside. I think in relationships where one person is a trauma survivor the other does need to be supportive but also assertive or they can wander into codependent territory….☝🏻I also wouldn’t mind a little former love interest drama lol, I’d love to see a jealous Grave 🤤🤤🤤

Tanyinika787

Well like they say beware of little women. Or quite ones too.

apw

I think fluff as Grave actively knowing and trying to find ways to take care of Ellie during her time of the month, or more tangible ways that Ellie can show him how much she really does love and care for him (things like that/super mundane every day things plus over the top romance every now and then) ❤️

December_Love_Song

So excited to see what you have in store for us! ❤️ The sexy time is lovely, but what makes them tick? Did Grave do something that low key annoyed Ellie or vice versa? What's their personal back story, what were their parents like if they were around? I just wanna know everything, perhaps I'm greedy but you've created a lovely world and characters, it's hard not to want more. ❤️❤️ Thank you!!

Alyssa Dudas

I think I like when the relationship is going well, but they have like family issues, or they are asked to make a big life decision like relocating or something and the couple has to work through that together. I really dislike the miscommunication trope, and I loathe the cheating trope as well. I also love seeing the main couple be soft with each other but I like when there are moments of what I’m gonna call “spice”. And in addition, I like having the character’s backstories sprinkled in as well—like little flashbacks or something as the story progresses if there are moments that reminds a character about something that happened in the past—kind of like how they did in the Charlie and the chocolate factory movie if that helps explain what I mean.

Alyssa Dudas

BUT I do really like how this story has been progressing, and how they are communicating with each other. I think you’re doing a great job so far and I’m looking forward to where you take it.

Luckie

Fluff and sexy times. Maybe even an over protective Grave. Maybe even a moment where Ellie gets jealous and Grave reassures her in a kinky way. I dunno. I just love them so much.

Elizabeth

I want fluff. I want to see their relationship grow. I would love to see some silly stuff as well.

Wednesday West

The sexy stuff and backstop. Grave curb stomping someone is just a lovely touch.

Katherine Devine

You're my 1st patreon sub so please forgive this old lady if I sound too much like an old person 😂 with that said I read quite a bit of NSFW adult themed everything(books, novels & webtoons). I have found that some of the most compelling stories I've read, be it the novel and then the webtoon adaption or vice versa generally have a nice balance of all 3 of the things you've mentioned. Each serves a purpose in moving the plot forward or fostering growth in the world or its characters. Fluff moments can take us out of the drama for softer moments and drama can pull us deeper into the world we are watching your characters move through. The NSFW moments I find to be relief 😌 from both fluff & more serious moments and plot devices. Sometimes it let's us mentally experiment with ideas we wouldn't otherwise encounter in real life and that touch of fantasy is what draws most people to the genre I think. I truly love finding hidden gems of creators(like yourself) because watching your growth over time is just mesmerizing & mind blowing at times. I fully believe that stories like this will be the way the future consumes art & literature. It's a beautiful thing to watch artists blossom into their full potential thru their trials and errors. I think if you keep all that in mind and keep doing what you've been doing you'll find your balance in the pace of your story. Also, please remember there are adult webtoons out now that are on their 2nd & 3rd seasons so don't ever second guess yourself if you're moving too slowly(or too quickly) through the plot points you want to include. The people who are truly invested in Ellie & Grave's story will want to fully immerse themselves in their(& your) world. I've said enough I think... I hope you have a great rest of your week/weekend! ⭐️🌙💜

ajoji_comic

That's a good idea. Some heavy, major stuff happened in their pasts so that's why they can't talk about it too much at this point in their relationship, but I like the idea of them revealing smaller morsels of themselves.

ajoji_comic

Character development, character history, inner monologue, Ellie asserting herself, jealous Grave--gotcha!! ^w^ Thanks for the feedback!~ It really helps me move forward.

ajoji_comic

That sounds like fluff to me ^^ Thank you for the feedback, it's really helpful!! ❤️

ajoji_comic

Haha, greedy is good in this case lol I've already written a lot for their back story, but knowing how complex human minds are, I'm sure I can delve even deeper. Thanks for the feedback ❤️

apw

Yay!! Glad we are on the same page 🥰 I love your work ☺️

ajoji_comic

I agree, I'm not a fan of the miscommunication trope or the cheating trope. Which Charlie and the chocolate factory movie are you referring to? The 1971 version with Gene Wilder? Or the Johnny Depp one? I'd like to watch it to get an idea of good story structuring and character building. Thank you for the feedback!! ^w^

ajoji_comic

Over protective Grave and jealous Ellie lol gotcha~ Thank you ❤️

ajoji_comic

Gotcha~ fluff, relationship growth, and silly stuff. Thank you!!! ^w^

ajoji_comic

Haha, I can deliver a nice curb stomping😂 no problem~

ajoji_comic

Thank you so much for the in-depth reply ❤️ It really helps me move in the direction I need to go to ensure that I'm doing my job well as an artist, writer, and entertainer. I'm going to make a document to archive these comments so I can refer back to them whenever I need guidance. Thanks again for writing so much!!! ^w^

Mally

I definitely enjoy a good slow burn story and I think it's important for characters to really develop before just jumping into bed. However, and I'm not saying this has been the case, but eventually slow burns can get frustrating or tiresome. I think the pace you have going is pretty great so keep with it. I would like to see some sort of drama but not something like a woman from Grave's past causes insecurities but maybe a different aspect from his past. Obviously his PTSD is clear but there should be something exciting to have him push past it - like maybe have to save Ellie. A little action? Either way, I feel as if you go with your gut, you can't go wrong. You have had people absorbed from the beginning so trust yourself and where you want to take these characters. The world you created is beautiful and yours.

ajoji_comic

Aww thanks Mallory ❤️ personally I do think the pace has slowed down, so I'm trying to pick it back up. A lot of personal stuff going on that seems to be impacting it. I definitely have some action planned. Just letting them have a little more fun together before the heavy hitting stuff inevitably happens.

Alyssa Dudas

No problem! And I am talking about the Johnny Depp one.

Mally

Having slow moments throughout the story happens and I'm totally ok with it. But I'm super excited to see things pick up. You are extremely talented and I appreciate you taking the time to get input from your fans and readers. You have the potential to do great things! So proud of you!

ajoji_comic

Thank you >w< I always want to keep the dialogue open, but of course I also have to get the work done so I can't always chat ^^;;

✨Star_Idol✨

Thank you for asking. I’ve never seen an artist on here do that. The fluff and the NSFW stuff is 💯! I know you have a storyline worked out, which so far has got me very curious. It seems Grave has some hang ups that’s created some boundaries with Ellie, despite being taken with her. I would love to see Ellie pursue Grave in that light. He’s so reserved, and she’s so gentle. I can see her working her way in. Also maybe they have a fight, or a tiff? Idk just to mix it up lol. Thank you for all that you do ❤️❤️❤️

Elizabeth

I just had a random thought on something that might be fun to see. I first noticed this comic when I was randomly looking around on webtoons and it was the picture of grave in the chair with the gun that made me decide to check out the comic. Side note still my all time favorite picture and that says a lot. It might be fun to see him getting into a bounty or two. Just a half baked idea I wanted to throw out there

Miracle

The sexy sweet stuff has been my favorite so far