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Creator Chat 😌 (Patreon)

Published:
2022-10-26 21:05:50
Edited:
2022-10-27 10:49:28
Imported:
2026-06

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I'm curious what you're all looking forward to seeing happen in the main story and what sort of things excite you the most. Is it fluff? Is it sexy times? Is it Grave curb stomping a criminal? More baddies? Is it the character's history? Would you like to see more silliness or chaos ensue? More thrilling elements or dramatic situations?

If you feel like writing a long response, I'd be more than happy to read it because I'm going to archive the feedback to help me while revamping the script. And don't feel like you have to hold back because you like an unpopular, cheesy, or common trope. I'm down for anything. 

I have a ton of ideas, but I want to make sure that I'm moving in a direction that will make us all happy. My idea of happy is you being happy with the comic LOL while I'm chillin' over here. 

Comments

Melon

Fluff ❤️❤️❤️

Melon

And sexy times!

Pamela Brodman

I'd like to see Grave go all protective and beat some bad guys up to help her, then go soft to bring her comfort.

Eva Rodríguez

I would like to see them develop as a couple ( lots of cute moments and also spicy ones)! But it will be great to have some drama/ dark sides to the story!!!!! Grave past? Nightmares….Ellie too (maybe an ex- jelousy is always a good motivator)💓 See them both vulnerable, struggling loving and fucking❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥

Tiffany

Omg all of the above plsss👉🏼👈🏼. I’ve loved everything you’ve created!

Rose Nguyen

I'm very curious about Ellie's background, I feel like there's a darkness to her that she hasn't revealed yet

Dallas N

Sexy times but also like grave protecting Ellie from baddies. I also like when grave teaches Ellie to be a badass so maybe like combat training weapons training. I also like when Ellie consoles grave and makes him feel secure so vulnerable grave

Reena

All of the above but I reddit enjoy the dramatic writing! It's so good and keeps me on the edge of my seat!

Tyna Taylor

All the fluff and sexy times .. but like its be kinda cool to see someone from Graves work and in and fuck with Ellie .. but like Ellie kicking some serious ass

Jaime

I like the sexy stuff most 😂 but I’ve been really impressed thus far. I love when he’s sweet to her. I’m really excited to see how she responds to his past and his feelings for her

Lyly

I love when a plot lets the readers really know the characters they're reading about, or in this case dreaming about 😍 Then the more intimate moments really shine!

BunnyB

Ooo! Yes please!

Yaritza Rodriguez

What I love about the story line is how relatable it is, how down to earth are the conversations and how it shadows that is ok to accept the hard truths, the parts that resemble depth but also acceptance and perspectives. Of course we all want tge sexy time but at the right time, when it actually means something to each other. This is the best and what makes you different from other comics Ive read. You show us that there is beauty in everyone story, that no mattet how fucked up your life is there is growth, hope and self love if you allow it to if you just find that person who allows you to just be with no expectation or ulterior motive. We all as adults miss or have high regard to people who are genuine with us and accept even our darkest moments.

angel

I’d love a lot of action sequences but balanced with softness. I’m a sucker for character A being injured and character B dresses their wounds/takes care of them. I’d love to see some Grave flashbacks sprinkled throughout. And I do love a good slow burn, but it might be a bit too late for that lol

Yaritza Rodriguez

Examples of what I look forward is seeing through their stories unfold but in a raw manner. Through dreams, reminescence of the past, actions that might trigger each other. In ways where the reader truly can feel connected and understand. I also want a roller coaster of emotions. Those scenes that makes you flustered, angry, happy, or well even aroused by knowing how a beautiful story unfolds, with showing fears, insecurities, while also having the emotional intelligence to talk about it and share perspectives of opinions.

M S

I'll be honest, I joined your Patreon for you 'She weeps for the Devil' story that you were building and I'm sad when I don't see updates on that story line because I was really invested in the story and the character development. I like these side stories too but not in the same way I liked SWFTD.. I just would like to invest reading a story with character development.

Andie Hernandez

I would like to see a moment where both of them are jealous of each other with someone else and they go through those emotions separately at first then realize the other one is jealous too. I also would like to soon see the moment of their first time, in the most romantic way possible, with maybe a possible kink being minimally done

Yaritza Rodriguez

Something I would love to see is Ellie exposed to Grave world, perhaps even by accident, opening something she shouldnt have (curiosity killed the cat)... Perhaps scenes where they explore new things together. Thats the beauty of relationships is each other been exposed to the other while also trying new things. Also show scenes with the pains and aches of life. The several instances of why it made them who they truly are. Of course I would love to see Ellie growing into her femininity, been more secure of herself, and even commanding the bedroom and not waiting for permission 😏 or catching him off guard. Of course not him running away but allowing himself to feel, explore and give in.

Nic ET

I loved their conversation over dinner, when Grave played his guitar for her- there were some really thoughtful interactions between Grave and Ellie. I’d like to see a bit of Grave at work to see how he is when Ellie isn’t there. Okay, and Grave in the shower was pretty awesome too :D

Yaritza Rodriguez

Also would love to see those material things that they have kept throughout their lifetime that mean something to them.

Soul Surgeon

I LOVE the idea of Graves past catching up to him in his current self. Maybe he was involved in a former gang or him and Ellie are out together one day and he bagged a criminal involved in a gang and another member saw him! So they plot ways to make him pay for revenge! I'm always big on action and maybe they kidnap Ellie for ransom as an exchange while Grave has to go through lengths to find her, testing his own love and devotion to get to her while Ellie is at the mercy of these criminals, secretly learning more about Grave's job mixed with his past! (Hopefully this isn't too long!) I love your story so much!!

Jagura

I have been so enthralled by there unfolding relationship, as long as there relationship continues to grow and mature I am down for anything.

Mischief Maker

Maybe feral/protective Ellie? Cinnamon roll snapping is a great trope. But to be honest I think you should just write what you want because it's all been fantastic. The only "issue" I have is that these two clearly will need more cuddles if there's gonna be more soul probing.

Ami Pet

I'm also interested in seeing the story progress. I'm curious about Grave's past but also would love to learn more about Ellie. I love the naughty stuff too so would enjoy a balance of character development and sexy times lol Regardless! This comic is awesome and I look forward to seeing it progress.

Alexa

Would absolutely love to see Grave curb stomping a criminal 😂 Love sexy times! I would like to see Grave getting protective with Ellie or Ellie being exposed to his job

Merryl Martin

Im.looking forward to what ever you write

Vivian Kemler

Character development, plot development with of course, glimpses of their pasts, and of course sexy scenes 😉

tsumetai senpai

Grave has GREAT taste in clothes 🥰, but somehow, I just can't see him shopping around in retail stores. He'd prob unintentionally scare the living daylights out of the staff and other customers lolz I've been wondering for quite a while now how and where he does his clothes shopping, tbh... Long story short, I guess I wanna see them shopping together 🛍️, in between or after errands. Maybe not at the mall, but like at a main street kinda vibe, small business owned by locals, where they know Grave from way back when. Overall, I'd like to see them do/talk about mundane things, like the time Grave was out on a job and they were on a video call. I believe it makes their relationship feel more realistic and relatable.

Chelsea Reecer

I love the story, and I can appreciate a slow burn, but I’m starting to space out when I read the updates. I love the character development and the fact that you are taking your time to make this fictional relationship as realistic as possible, with real world problems and trauma and stuff, but I reeeeeeallly want more spice and romance. Like a lot more. What you have done so far is 🤌🏻 a masterpiece, though. Very, very well done comic.

A

I love everything so far. Character development is something more as well as some sexy time…because come on who doesn’t want to see that!!! You’re doing amazing. Love your stuff.❤️

Ember-Fire

Fluff their first time. Really I just wanna see where you are going with the whole story.

Audrey Makloufi

I liked the rhythm of the beginning when the drawings were in black and white. I prefer when they evolve in daily life, one at the other, shopping, cooking, spice and romance etc... And maybe introduce a little stakes in the story. I hope I have expressed myself well, my English is not very good. I really love your stuff

Sakura

Kinda love the trope for a ex to reappear in front of Ellie. And have grave react to that. Basically building a better connection/story between grave and Ellie. Show Graves jealous side. I love a jealous partner trope.

j178kgal

Passion. Strong emotions.

Lilia

Hello! I definitely would like to see more intimate moments like fluff but I also wouldn’t mind more naughty time *wink* I also would like to see some protectiveness towards Ellie from Grave like if Ellie were to run into a creep or I saw someone in the comments mention an encounter with a ex I think that would be interesting to see. Other than that I think the character development is good, and overall the story is interesting! Keep it up!🥰❤️✌🏼

ajoji_comic

What's a fluffy situation you'd like to see in the main comic?

ajoji_comic

Aww Thank you!! >w< Been feeling a bit uncertain about my work lately, but I'm glad you're still enjoying it.

ajoji_comic

Sometimes the softest ones have a side to them that you'd least expect 😈

ajoji_comic

Eventually he'll show her how to use her firearm, but I won't spend too much time on it like I did during the winter arc. Protective Grave, Grave teaching Ellie new stuff, and vulnerable Grave--all good stuff~

ajoji_comic

It's getting there >.<;; I had some thrilling stuff planned after Ellie and Grave spend a little more time together.

ajoji_comic

Grave will eventually show Ellie the ropes with her new firearm, so she could possibly pop a cap in someone's a$$ 😂

ajoji_comic

Aww, thank you >w< I have that part written out extensively, but I think I can go back and write even more.

ajoji_comic

I've written thousands of words about these two characters in my script and various notes, but I still feel like there's so much more that I need to explore as a writer. We're getting there! Slowly but surely!! >w<

ajoji_comic

What a sweet comment. This really captures what I originally intended with SWFTD. Thank you for putting it into words <3

ajoji_comic

I got you covered >w< I like that too~ Can't say much more though without spoiling the script >.<;;

ajoji_comic

I like what you said about actions triggering each other. It's those small things that can add depth to a character without showing or saying much. I had to take a break from revising my script, but everyone's comments have been so helpful. I'm excited to dive back into it and try to craft the story in a way that will genuinely elicit that roller coaster of emotions.

ajoji_comic

I stopped doing side comics since August. Lately I've been focusing on SWFTD and doing one of NSFWs so I can focus on the main comic. It's been slice of life lately in the story, but there's a lot of stuff planned for the future in my script.

ajoji_comic

A lot of people have been mentioning jealousy, either on Ellie or Grave's part. That's an interesting trope. Been a while since I had those feelings, but I'll dig up the memories and write my heart out 😂

ajoji_comic

Hmm, maybe she accidentally uncovers some crime photos or a bloody tool or something would be interesting. I'd imagine her mind would race and it would make the fact that she's dating a bounty hunter more 'real'. What kind of new things would you like to see them explore together? I'm always open to ideas on how to further develop their relationship :3

ajoji_comic

haha, more Grave shower time. Gotcha~ and I have a lot planned for his bounty work, but I'm currently trying to balance it out with lighter moments because his line of work can get pretty brutal.

ajoji_comic

Like keepsakes or just things that spark memories from the past? that's a good little tid bit to flesh them out even more.

ajoji_comic

I can't say too much, but I have something along those lines planned. I appreciate the feedback! <333 Going to get to work on the script again once I have more pages done.

ajoji_comic

Haha, yeah I can see that now. Ellie sitting on his lap, reserving her territory 😂 Yes, gotcha. More cuddles <3

ajoji_comic

Thank you ^w^ I'm working out the kinks with their back stories. I think I will incorporate a few pages soon ish with some of his war buddies.

ajoji_comic

I can definitely draw Grave lobotomizing a crim with his shoe lol just kidding, but yeah!! Protective Grave is definitely on the to do list :D

ajoji_comic

Thank you, this is the sweetest thing that every author wants to hear 😂

ajoji_comic

Can't forget the smexy scenes 😂 <333

ajoji_comic

I imagine that Grave probably goes to a tailor. That way he doesn't need to deal with the public and he can have his clothes fit his chiseled body to a T 😂 I definitely have some everyday things for them to do, but I can always add more. Let me know if you want to see anything in particular. I think it would be funny if they were on a video call while Grave's kicking some guy's ass haha

ajoji_comic

What kind of spicy or romantic things do you have in mind? I'm open to suggestions <3

ajoji_comic

Your English is perfect~! I'm building up to some dramatic stuff, but slowly working my way there. I can definitely add more slice of life stuff as well <3

ajoji_comic

You're not the only one who likes the jealousy trope 😂 A lot of people have been suggesting it. I had a funny idea for it for a one off scene, but if I introduce an ex, that will take some time to write. Thanks for the feedback <333

ajoji_comic

I'm going to work on doing some expression exercises. I think beyond writing passionate moments, it needs to be seen visually on the character's face.

ajoji_comic

Thank you Lilia! ❤️ All great ideas. I'm writing them all down lol

Keisha B

"I'm chilling over here" 😂 So I'm a bit of two things. 1 — I'm down to see wherever it goes since I enjoy the art and bits of lore we've gotten. I'm curious to see what you make and how you develop it. 2 — I do have some tropes and moments I like from both of them bonding and having the honest convos we don't always get to see, to the funny moments when they're teasing each other, to more of their past and how they work through it on their own and with each other.

Keisha B

"I'm chilling over here" 😂 So I'm a bit of two things. 1 — I'm down to see wherever it goes since I enjoy the art and bits of lore we've gotten. I'm curious to see what you make and how you develop it. 2 — I do have some tropes and moments I like from both of them bonding and having the honest convos we don't always get to see, to the funny moments when they're teasing each other, to more of their past and how they work through it on their own and with each other. If my comments are coming up in doubles, it's because I wrote them on the train and then they disappeared.

Bugalum

Honestly I love the contrast from bounty hunter and a loving dude, it’s awesome

ajoji_comic

What are some of your favorite tropes? :3

ajoji_comic

A lot of people have sides to them that you'd least expect 🧐

Sonya Tibbs

I would love to see grave and ellie's relationship grow, maybe have them have sex for the first time. I also think maybe have one of ellie's ex-boyfriend show and try being mean to her and have grave come in and monkey stomp his a$$. To show ellie he really cares for her.

ajoji_comic

lol stomp his 🙊 a$$. okay, I'll write that one down 😆

Keisha B

One of them is partially going on - large looks like a villain but is a bean and smol looks like a bean but is a villain 🤣 There's basically isekai with MC just landing in some other world and finding community and love, enemies to friends to lovers, arranged marriages that actually work out whether set for a future king/queen or nobles (thanks Bridgerton), and I know I have others but can't seem to remember them at the moment.

Chelsea Reecer

Hmmmm…probably a scenario in which they cave in to their most primal urges. Like, for instance, Grave missing Ellie on one of his bounties, and they have phone sex. Or them going on a trip together and accidentally getting a room with one bed (I know that’s an overused trope but hey it’s overused for a reason). A sentimental gift exchange that gets hot and heavy. An argument, leading to hot makeup sexy times. I’d be down for anything, really.

✨Star_Idol✨

Honestly I’m here to see more of the past too. Like how did grave grow up that’s caused him to be so dark and moody.

Sailor Marj

Them opening up to each other, showing their vulnerabilities is the best foreplay there is. Feeling safe is incredibly sexy, as it can lead to playful risks and rewards. 😈 I also enjoy them waiting and taking things into their own hands, but still desiring each other. It shows respect and loyalty. It will make their first joining even more special.