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It's wonderful that so many of you are enjoying your sonnet journey.

So I would love to hear your thoughts on Shakespeare's fourth sonnet.

We'll begin by talking about some games you might want to play when reading the sonnets, the mindset of having preferences, what to do when you don't enjoy a poem, and we will deep read and analyse this sonnet together.

Timestamps:

  • 0:00 a mindset for the sonnets: playing favourites
  • 0:50 Nietzsche, agon, and not being created equal
  • 2:00 What if you don’t enjoy every sonnet?
  • 2:45 A game you can play with the sonnets
  • 3:00 Non-native speakers and translating the sonnets
  • 4:00 Pretending you are the poet composing the poem
  • 4:30 Reading the 4th sonnet together
  • 5:45 Sonnet meaning and analysis
  • 6:00 Who is Shakespeare addressing? (About the Fair Youth)
  • 8:00 Is this Shakespeare’s voice?
  • 10:00 A deep reread of this homily
  • 10:45 Looking at the last words of each line to unlock the sonnet
  • 12:00 Shakespeare’s caesurae, parallelism, and questioning
  • 13:00 Questions make the best instructions
  • 14:50 What did you think of this fourth sonnet?

Sonnet IV

Unthrifty loveliness, why dost thou spend
Upon thyself thy beauty’s legacy?
Nature’s bequest gives nothing, but doth lend,
And being frank, she lends to those are free.
Then, beauteous niggard, why dost thou abuse
The bounteous largess given thee to give?
Profitless usurer, why dost thou use
So great a sum of sums, yet canst not live?
For having traffic with thyself alone,
Thou of thyself thy sweet self dost deceive.
Then how, when nature calls thee to be gone,
What acceptable audit canst thou leave?
Thy unus’d beauty must be tomb’d with thee,
Which, usèd, lives th’ executor to be.

As always, let us know if you have a favourite line, image, or sentiment from this fourth sonnet.

Although I mentioned this not being my favourite, I do appreciate the metaphor of Mother Nature lending her gifts to us rather than giving them.

Happy sonneteering!

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Comments

Emma Yap

I wasn't a fan of this sonnet when I first read it - I agree that it feels very cold and transactional. But when I re-read it, there were some things that I appreciated about it. I liked the line "why dost thou use so great a sum of sums, yet canst not live?" I took the line in isolation, and tried to read it as not necessarily being linked to procreation (I'm not sure whether this is the right way to read the sonnets, but it helps me to appreciate them!). It made me think of how we put so much emphasis on things that don't matter - there are people who are very financially successful, and work hard at achieving high rank, but yet they can't meet their own basic needs, which really resonated with me

Sid Collins

I find it so interesting that this one was lower on your list! I did not quite identify with the imploring to procreate in previous sonnets but this one took a different route. Whereas others focused on the wrinkles in the face, the bent back, and the posterity of beauty, sonnet 4 seems to take a more psychological approach. There is no mention of mirrors or eyes or appearances nor mention of a child. I rather interpreted this as a sharing of our inner beauty, personality, or heart. The recipient sounds introverted (for having traffic with thyself alone) and Shakespeare is attempting to shock him out of it. And in the final couplet, that internal beauty will die with us unless we share it with others. Then the living become the executors of their inheritance. I quite enjoyed the financial theme as well as it adds another dimension to what Shakespeare is capable of, more than flowers and sunsets and gold. Though my favorite line must be line 10, "thou of thyself thy sweet self doth deceive." Such great and multi-layered alterations. Cannot wait to see what favorites are in store for us later, Benjamin!