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Hey everybody! after reading the feedback, I noticed that I could improve the chapter. I added some more of the LORD MAGISTRATE into this chapter, because he needed to be there. Most of the chapter remains the Same.ctrl+f the following to get the new parts:"I assumed he was an imposter""Something warm pooled in his pants, his entire body shaking with terror."

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==============“I first met Zang Li in this town. He tried to force himself on a woman, and, well, I objected to that…”

Xiao Ge sat back and listened as Jin told his side of the story. The rest of them did as well whilst eating a very fine meal. Ge would rate this relatively simple fare quite highly in the meals he had eaten in his long life—it was flavorful and packed with Qi, but could not match the quality of some of the meals he had had at the Imperial Palace, or during his own adventures where Ge had befriended a Spiritual Chef.

Still, it was of far, far better quality than he ever could have imagined possible in this province—especially the drink to go with it. With the immediate tension drained, Ge could sit back a bit and enjoy the tale being told, at least a little, a sentiment obviously matched by the others. It was not the most absurd tale Ge had ever heard—no, Ge himself had at least ten stories where the coincidences lined up like they had for the young man.

It gave him a chance to take the young man’s measure. Shen Yu was obviously proud of him… but Ge himself needed to see exactly what the rot in their beloved Cloudy Sword Sect had cost them.

“I assumed he was an imposter, because the Shrouded Mountain Sect couldn’t have had a disciple so weak, much less a Young Master, so I threw him in jail.”

Everybody paused at that. At the abject humiliation, to be given to mortal guards? Minyan barked out a laugh along with Shen Yu, both looking amused.

“You were the one to contain him?” Ge asked the mortal Magistrate. The man paused at being asked a question, and he took a moment, but when he spoke, there was no wavering to his voice.

“Yes, Master Xiao Ge. My student gifted me a rather nasty surprise—we ended up having to use all of our suppression seals, and it was a close thing. The Shrouded Mountain Sect outrider arrived just in time.”

Ge nodded. Suppression seals were only good against initiates. But another word caught his ears. A word he knew Yukong and Shou had noticed as well.

“Young Jin is your student?” Ge asked. The Magistrate froze again.

Young Jin spoke up. “Yes. I noticed my education in the realm of politics was… lacking. I’m honoured that the Lord Magistrate accepted me as his student—he was top of his class in Pale Moon Lake City.” 

The Lord Magistrate cleared his throat, a slight blush on his cheeks. “Indeed, Young Jin is a fine student, and I am honoured to have him.”

Ge leaned back. Kowtow to the mortal who enlightens you. Those words resonated with him. With all of them. Shou was looking at the Magistrate with new eyes, while Yukong had a small smile on her face. Even Shen Yu looked satisfied.

Once more Ge found himself mourning what could have been. It was painful to hear and to see the character of this man. Bright, upstanding, possessed of a sense of duty and honour, and willing to take responsibility. Before Xiao Ge was one who had been a disciple that the Honoured Founders of their sect would have held as a model to emulate.

He had been in their sect—and their negligence had driven him away. Ge would have to kowtow before his Master’s funerary tablet a thousand times for this travesty.

“Please, continue,” Ge whispered, his soul aching.

“So I was very unhappy when I saw him again, attempting to kidnap a member of my family and attacking a good friend…”

Young Jin had stumbled into fighting a user of demonic arts, defeated him, and sent him back to his sect while claiming he was an imposter, only to meet the same man again when he was attempting to kidnap a member of his family… and again defeat him, this time sending the obviously demonic corpse back to the Shrouded Mountain Sect.

Ge could find no fault in the young man’s actions; they were well thought out, and he expressed the noble desire to solve things with his words and reason rather than simply taking the world in his hand. He respected the institutions of the Empire and he safeguarded the mortals.

True, he had used their name to quell the budding conflict when he was no longer one of their disciples… but Ge had commanded Lu Ri to give him that symbol so that he could use it to protect himself.

Young Jin used it to stop a war… and then had ceased using it, displaying temperance when given such a powerful symbol. 

Xiao Ge glanced at Shou and Yukong, both of them offering minute nods. Minyan simply watched, studying this young man, her expression neutral.

“Next, I believe it would be you, Zang Shenhe,” Brother Shen Yu mused. The woman had remained stoic throughout the retelling, but now looked slightly nervous.

“Yes, Lord Shen Yu. We received Master Rou’s message, as well as the body of Zang Li, and we deduced that the only cultivator who would disregard our resources…was an Elder of the Cloudy Sword Sect,” Shenhe reported.

There was silence for a moment. Jin looked shocked and slightly panicked, the young man clearly not expecting that, before he schooled his expression.

Shen Yu started to laugh. Ge could not help but chuckle along with Yukong, while Shou raised an eyebrow. Even Minyan let out a little snort of amusement.

“Did he claim to be an Elder?” Shou asked.

“… no, he just said he would rather not involve his Senior Brother.  After our disciples reported his strength was equal or greater than my own…” Shenhe trailed off, looking embarrassed.

Ge shook his head. “And what did you do with this information?” he inquired.

“We reasoned that we were being given a mission to redeem ourselves after we had missed the demonic corruption within Zang Li. I immediately assembled a strike force and we set about scouring the Fangs for hidden bases—which we found.”

That stopped some of the amusement. Ge considered the situation.

“That is indeed serendipitous,” Ge said. “Your actions on finding them?”

“There were twenty-three of varying sizes and complexity, and we destroyed them all.”

“She did good work,” Shen Yu interjected. “I was impressed with her efficiency and thoroughness.”

That was no small praise. 

“Then I would say that you were indeed following the directives of a specialist attached to the Cloudy Sword Sect,” Ge stated, extending an offer to the Shrouded Mountain to save face —and deepen young Jin’s connection as affiliated with their Sect.

“That is indeed a fine proposal, Ge,” Yukong said, while Shou just nodded. Jin looked relieved that their reaction to his “impersonation” of them was so mild, but indeed it was beneficial…and even the Honoured Founders sometimes made exceptions for victory, especially against the Great Enemy.

Shenhe bowed, taking the offer immediately. It was nearly the truth anyway. As she rose, she grimaced. “However, at the last base we were ambushed by a prepared Earth Realm cultivator, many Demonic Cultivators, and an entire army of Artificial Demons. All but two of our number either fell in battle or were captured. After that…”

She turned to look at Shen Yu.

“My tale begins after I was reunited with my grandson. I was quite upset with the insult the Shrouded Mountain Sect had offered him and intrigued regarding the demon he had found…”

Shen Yu’s own tale started slowly. Though it was rather a shock that he had accepted another disciple—one that he told them they would meet with later.

Ge didn’t like how Shen Yu looked. Impossibly, he was even smugger than he had once been—but it had been a long while since Ge had seen Shen Yu so animated and amused by something as he recounted his disciple’s infiltration of the Shrouded Mountain Sect.

It was like one of his old stories. The stories he had told before… his son. His grin was wild and his hands made exaggerated gestures, his Qi sparking and leaping as he really got into it. His joy and amusement was infectious as it always was.

“And then I pulled out one of those old ration scrolls, you know the ones that the Emperor handed out during the Gate Breach? The ones with His seal on them?”

“You didn’t,” Minyan sighed, but everyone could tell the woman was smiling. Shou rested his face in his palm, while Ge and Yukong chuckled.

“Of course I did! Nobody ever stops to check, they just see the seal and assume!” Shen Yu declared, right in front of the Imperial Herald.

“Lord Shen Yu, please refrain from admitting to impersonating the Emperor’s will,” the Herald said, his voice filled with emotion for the first time… though this was exasperation. “And…this one is rather certain that you have an actual writ from His Imperial Majesty.”

“Yes, I do have one, but I didn’t want to use that there. It's too important for something like that,” the man stated shamelessly, before sighing. “But, well, there was no corruption of the demonic kind. Just… well, that is a story for another time. The Patriarch proved unworthy, and several developments exposed less than savoury practices used by the sect. My disciple and his allies caused a schism.”

Zang Shenhe grimaced at his words. Young Jin frowned. Shen Yu sighed.

“But that is the end of the merriment. After that we went after Shenhe and found the place of her defeat—and it was there we were alerted to the greater threat. A threat I gravely underestimated. I thought the Earth Realm cultivator would be the strongest of them. I intended to use the expedition to the Sea of Snow as a teaching opportunity.”

Ge straightened at the change in tone.

“The expedition went as reasonably well as it could—and we were aided by an Imperial Realm Spirit Beast after my disciple earned his favour.”

“Imperial Realm?” the Imperial Herald asked. Such beings of immense strength were always of concern to the Emperor. Those that the Empire knew of were tracked as best as they were able, and if they proved hostile, entire sects would be called against them.

“Yes. I name Master Forest Sweeper and his predecessors Martyrs, in the vein of the Honoured Founders—and I shall not reveal his location without his consent,” Shen Yu spoke, his tone firm and final. “You remember the confusion about the lack of northern demons? The line of Forest Sweeper is the reason, for they held and still hold the line in the cold and far North. They have been suppressing and destroying the demonic taint since the Age of Heroes, and providing succor to lost mortals who stumble into their domain.”

Silence met his words. A friendly Spirit Beast was a rarity already. A friendly Spirit Beast of such power dedicated to fighting the Great Enemy? From the histories, nearly all had died in the Age of Heroes.

“Then I shall pay my respects and raise a toast to Master Forest Sweeper,” Ge said. “If he is agreeable, the Cloudy Sword Sect shall pay their respects in person.”

“I will convey your words to his Imperial Majesty,” the Herald stated. “He would be interested in opening a dialogue with such a being, if it is indeed benevolent.”

“An interesting bit of trivia,” Minyan said with a shrug.

Shen Yu nodded.

“After instructing my disciples, we set off once more, and we found the Enemy’s base—where we were immediately greeted by a Demonic Cultivator in the Imperial Realm.”

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The room was silent as Shen Yu finished the report of his battle. A victory… thanks to this mysterious new disciple of his. Ge was a bit suspicious that Shen Yu was being so cagey about a boy he was clearly proud of. However, though it was a victory… it was clearly a costly one. The damage to Shen Yu’s cultivation was severe.

From there, once more Young Jin took over the tale.

“A friend had a bad dream about demons from the north, one that seemed too real. Prophetic. She was very distraught, and the entire situation felt strange to me. I asked Brother Lu Ri to head north to check on some family I had up there, and scout for any hint of this threat…”

Again, Young Jin’s instincts were correct. Diviners were unreliable at best but his saying, “Trust, but verify,” was indeed profound wisdom.

From there, they counter-ambushed an ambush, revealed demonic mind control, and the man fought off three Earth realms and one Sky Realm. With assistance, according to him, but the fact that he had been able to accomplish the feat at all was the mark of a legend on the same vein as his grandfather.

It would have been almost unbelievable—but the young man embellished nothing, noting his own near defeat. Shen Yu’s boy cared little for glory, that much was clear to Ge—he clearly preferred his solitude and peace. He was a quiet scholar called to war. Truly, truly he was a Disciple of the Cloudy Sword’s path.

Finally, Shen Yu spoke again, and the depths of the Demonic Cultivator’s insidious plan was revealed.

“A puppet worm this size—and the host is still alive?” Shou demanded, as he stared angrily at the glass vial.

“Their disciple said their plan was to invade the Demon Realm?” Minyan asked, her eyes wide and furious.

“Your foe implied that he was well-entrenched,” Yukong stated, her eyes narrow as she too inspected the vile creature.

“Yes. Their disciples were… worryingly sane, and it is clear that this is a plan perhaps a thousand years in the making. They are clearly spread throughout the Empire, and if they can open permanent Hell Gates already… it would be disastrous,” Shen Yu said, before he bowed. “My friends, this is why I called for your aid. The resources of our foe are great, as you can see by the power of their disposable weapons. This cannot be allowed to fester. The enemy organization is vast and diffuse, and I cannot destroy them alone, especially in my current state. First, we need an analysis of their transport formation so that we may root them out wherever they may hide. Then, a decapitation strike against ‘Yulong’ and the destruction of the rest of their bases in the Sea of Snow. Finally, we mop up anything that is left, using their own formations to pinpoint them.”

The plan was only considered for a moment as the light of the dawn began to filter in through the windows. They had arrived quite late and had been talking for hours.

“You have called. The Cloudy Sword Sect will answer. In the name of the Founders, every Demonic Cultivator shall be put to the sword,” Ge intoned.

“They will not see the blade before it descends from the clouds,” Shou agreed.

“Hmph, I suppose you have some sense in your head,” Minyan said, her voice a jab. “Very well, but I will expect compensation for this, Shen Yu.”

She demanded payment—even though everybody knew she was going to be participating even without it. Ge rolled his eyes.

“Of course, Minyan. I have just the thing—or rather, I believe Ge has just the thing?” Shen Yu asked with a smile. “My granddaughter’s formation would certainly prove useful, no? Especially with stronger reagents.”

Ge sighed. “Using me to pay off your debts… some things never change,” he said with good humor—because Shen Yu always did pay him back in the end.

Minyan looked intrigued.

“His Imperial Majesty’s experts seem to have the problem well in hand,” the Herald intoned. “A course is set… and This One shall remain to see the aftermath and report back to the Son of Heaven. If that is all, this meeting is adjourned.”

Both Young Jin and the Magistrate seemed surprised by the swift and decisive action.

“We shall head out immediately. Shen Yu, you said Lu Ri is currently defending the captured base?” Ge asked as he rose to his feet.

“Yes. I have no doubt Yukong will expose the secrets of the enemy’s formation swiftly,” Shen Yu stated.

Yukong rolled her eyes. “Empty flattery.”

“If you need a place to rest and recover…my home is probably better for it than Verdant Hill. Keep people from getting worried, you know?” Young Jin offered.

“I would very much like to see your gardens, after we complete our duty.” Shou said, his voice brooking no argument.

“And you can meet my disciple. He's such a proud, erect fellow,” Shen Yu japed.

Ge raised an eyebrow as they opened the door to leave… only to hear a commotion in the hall.

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“Are you obstructing my path?!” Sheng Yanjing, the Auditor-General demanded, glaring at Bao and his guards through bloodshot eyes. This was the third attempt to slow roll him. The guard outside had stalled, pretending to be looking for the keys and claiming the door was locked despite the fact that all the lights were on. The second hemmed and hawed, and only a threat got him in line.

And now, Bao himself was trying to stop the Auditor’s advance.

Yanjing still felt a bit like shit. The bastard Magistrate had plied him with so much drink on the night of the solstice the Auditor had been sick the entirety of yesterday. But after a good night’s sleep, and a bit of rice, he was feeling much better… and he wanted answers, damn it! The Lord Magistrate had been utterly tight-lipped about the explosions and commotion, and Yanjing would have answers.

Bao smiled disarmingly.

“Lord Auditor, please. The Lord Magistrate has specifically asked not to be disturbed. This is an extremely important meeting—”

“Oh, a meeting? How am I sure he's not cooking his books, hmm?” Yanjing responded. Bao frowned.

“This early in the morning? Please, have patience—”

“Patience does not factor into this! You’ve all been attempting to bar my path!”

The rotund man frowned heavily and leaned in. “Listen, I’m trying to save your life—”

“Save my life? I’m sure you’re just giving him time to do what he needs to do to finish some nefarious scheme, or to destroy evidence. By law I am to have access to him at all times—and if he will not see me, this is something I must report.”

Bao glared and opened his mouth… but he was interrupted by another voice, smooth and nondescript.

“You are largely correct. As signed into Imperial Decree in the one hundred and twelfth year of the Empire, the Lord-Auditor of a province shall be privileged, in the carrying out of his duties, to have the obedience of all other members of His Imperial Majesty’s Bureaucracy—except when they are carrying out the will of a superior assigned agent.”

“Who dare—” he glared around Bao’s fat ass… and then the words died in his throat. His entire body seized when he saw the blank white mask etched with the seal of the Imperial Family upon it. For a brief, very brief moment, he wanted to accuse the Lord Magistrate of pulling some kind of prank, of trying to deceive him. Then he felt the sudden weight upon his shoulders as four men and three women stared at him, most with only barely concealed contempt.

What he had felt at the Dueling Peaks was nothing compared to this. His heart shuddered in his chest. The room started going dark.

“Ah- ah, um, wh—” he sputtered, and all of a sudden the pressure faded slightly. He stopped stammering to gasp for breath.

The blank mask cocked to the side. Out of the corner of his eye, Yanjing saw Bao kowtow, and, to his great luck, his own legs gave out so he could collapse forward onto his face.

“It would be remiss for this one to let a loyal servant suffer for this servant’s largesse… however, this meeting must be kept quiet, you understand?”

“Yes!” he squeaked out.

“You may continue with your audit, then,” the Imperial Herald declared. The Auditor only saw feet walking past him.

Something warm pooled in his pants, his entire body shaking with terror.

The world narrowed to a pinpoint. In a daze, he barely noticed the Lord Magistrate and Bao gently picking him up, nor the servants helping him bathe, and getting him into clean clothes.

The world finally came back into focus when he noticed he was sitting in front of the Lord Magistrate’s desk, the man pouring him a cup of wine.

The Lord Magistrate looked stressed, with deep lines on his face.

“Here. A bit of a drink does wonders,” the man said.

“Is… this a bad dream?” the Auditor-General asked.

“No,” the Lord Magistrate replied. He sat down heavily, and loosened his robe. “The cultivators have been here for three years.”

The Auditor stared at the man. “You’ve been dealing with this for three years?”

“The first year and a half I spent every moment wondering if I was going to get deposed, or worse” the man said with a chuckle. “But luckily… things turned out. They’re quite easy to get along with when you understand them.” 

Yanjing took a swig of the wine, fire running down his throat. He had been nothing but antagonistic the entire time he had been here.

“Are you going to…?” Yanjing asked.

The Lord Magistrate shook his head.

“I asked them not to interfere. You’re the symptom. Not the cause. My dear wife’s family, on the other hand…” At that, the Lord Magistrate’s expression became stony. All of a sudden, he looked like a general marching to war. Yanjing swallowed thickly. Then, his visage  softened again. “Well. That is no concern of yours. Please complete your audit to the best of your ability.  I must confess I found a great deal of fun in our little duel—looking at all I’ve accomplished is no bother.”

Yanjing stared at the mad bastard. He had been having fun?! He had enjoyed getting the books out?!

Yanjing took another swig of his wine, emptying his glass.

And, at that moment, he made a decision.

Fuck the Wu clan! There was not enough money in the world for him to put up with this shit.

Besides, he knew when to get off a sinking ship. A fucking Imperial Herald. Yanjing thought he would never see one in his life. Here, at the far end of the Empire! He glanced at the Lord Magistrate. The man was obviously a rising power.

He idly wondered if the man would like a loyal Auditor General.

Failing that, he would be leaving the damn province.

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In a secret bunker within the Gold Grass Steppes, deep below the earth, a figure shifted fitfully. The new day dawned before them

Huian looked close to death… and they had been for a while. They had nearly died when the teleportation sigil had deposited them into this base, thousands of Li away from the battle.

Disaster. The entire thing had been a disaster. Huian tried not to dwell on it, but getting a report immediately upon waking up that Master’s failsafes had tripped and they had a destruction ping from the northern hub base had been… trying.

It was almost unbelievable. No, it was unbelievable. How had things gone so wrong? The only spot that wasn’t a complete failure was that Yulong had managed to signal his survival while Huian was unconscious—a contact they were trying to reestablish so they could understand what exactly had happened.

Huian had been in and out of consciousness for most of the day, tended to by the disciples of their Master. They had barely clung to life—and it was only the skilled ministrations of the men in the base that had saved them.

But nothing they had done so far had managed to get rid of the burning agony in their leg. The cut was gone, but it still felt like it was there, burning, throbbing, judging—

Huian grimaced. “Do we have a connection to Yulong yet?” they croaked to the other man in the room—Zhou Tai, the head of this base. Once more, Huian was thankful that their Master was their Master. Most demonic cults would have probably killed Huian if they had arrived in this state. Instead, Tai, who could have killed them easily at the moment, was still acting with polite deference and care.

“No, Heavenly Demon. We are trying, but the aftershocks have made the system delicate. If we push too much we risk burning it out.” Huian’s grimace grew at the calm report. Tai had a sympathetic look in his good eye, the other covered by a patch. “We do, however, have the most recent reports. A new batch just arrived. May I assist the Heavenly Demon in reviewing them?”

“Thank you, Tai,” Huian sighed.

The man bowed, collected the reports, and returned swiftly. They started going through the reports. Most were mundane. However, one of the ones higher on the priority list caught their eye.

“The Army Forged in the Crucible has been placed on standby. Quartermasters distributing cold-weather gear—greatcoats, hats, gloves, boots, and fire crystals. The order came from the Cloudy Sword Sect itself. Several members of the sect departed on flying swords…?” Huian said out loud.

Their eyes met Tai’s. Dread started to pool in Huian’s guts. That… could not be a coincidence.

“Get Yulong. Get Yulong now. Burn out the formation if you have to!” Huian commanded—but Tai was already sprinting off, bellowing orders to the transmission stone teams.

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No break this month. going until the book is finished! im a little bit in limbo about how many chapters are left, but it should be done this month.

Edited by: Brandon “Philosophysics” Zhang-Leong, Massgamer, BargleNawdleZouss, Aaron “Pastafarian” Sofaer

Comments

Ethan Prince

Thanks for the chapter can’t wait for the introduction to fa ram!

Randall Norman Pick

“And you can meet my disciple. He's such a proud, erect fellow,” Shen Yu japed. This never gets old.

Nick

Tftc

frankie doerr

I’m so glad you’re not going on break and leaving us hanging I pay my respects to the great farmer

WarStrider72

Hehehe Tigu does good work with her ghostly fire! She will have her prey! I can't wait for all the cultivators to see Bi De and go: A CHICKEN! Shen Yu was dropping hints and no one got it. Glad to see that the Imperial Herald told the Auditor to essentially gtfo!

KyoDaDungeon!!

Ya fuck Wus they ain't nothing but wusses

WarStrider72

I guess the poaching of Fa Ram's disciples are about to begin! And then everyone realizes that they can't be poached! The Imperial Realm cultivators will spit blood once they see Fa Ram!

Sean Ulrich

I think this is the first instance of someone emptying their bladder in fear. It’s used fairly often in other cultivation novels

Bluebag

This chapter somehow felt very self contained and complete. The scene with the cultivators is done. The weird auditor guy embarrassed himself, and the Imperial Auditor (whatever his title is) was neutral but somehow very funny about it. And an update from the demonic cultivator side of things... Very satisfying to see them scramble. :). I guess it didn't feel like a cliffhanger this time

Krabby23

Thanks for the chapter! I can't wait for them to meet Bi De. Their reactions to Shen Yu's disciple being a chicken are going to be priceless.

KyoDaDungeon!!

Also could we get an update for the map please 🙏 love to look & see whenever we switch around places Gold Grass Steppes ain't there probably others

AkiIokuaAG

Welp, I guess the Lord-Auditor used up at least several dozen lifetimes of luck there. Looking forward to the reactions to Fa Ram.

Sofie

Thanks for the chapter!!

Emily Gurnavage

Ooh nice to see some panic in the demonic cultivators. Once he is revealed as Shen Yu's disciple, I hope Ge spars with Bi De. Could be in both forms or just chicken form but it feels like them sparring would fit. If Jin wasn't so obviously injured id be convinced Ge would politely ask him for a spar later on.

Geese

Which one was Huian?

Rayyyn

NOOO!! They have spies!

NightmareChild92

I get the feeling that instead of CS taking any of Fa Rams people several of CS people will find an excuse to stay at Fa Ram

THEMIGHTYBOXHEAD

can't wait for them all to see Jin's Cock. he is a very erect fellow and stands tall to great the sun every day! you tell them bid de!

Adam

Really loving Shen Yu's constant trolling

NightmareChild92

Happy birthday to me thanks for the great gift CF =)

ENK

Lucky auditor that the guards held him at bay long enough. I was halfway expecting him to get himself reassigned to the equivalent of overseeing a lone outpost in deep siberia, but he fortunately had working eyes not clouded enough by ego to avoid that fate. I do suspect he might just figure out that retirement sounds like a wonderful idea. CF was really kind to him. I was certain he'd be digging his own grave this chapter. Also, the amount of nonsense Shen Yu does with the emperor is wonderful.

Jon Dough

Thank you for the chapter! Really looking forward to all the elders reactions to Fa Ram and all the spirit beasts!!!

Arnon Parenti

I can already see how The Lord Magistrate shows compassion to a man sharing his plight and letting him clean up and sit to eat breakfast from the table of The Imperial Herald. Simple men like them serving Powers of Immortals have to stick together, or everything crumbles. Fuck the Wus for trying to cause trouble to such an upstanding member of the Imperial court.

Seaspike

Did anyone catch the words "northern hub base"? Wouldn't this imply they have more bases of that size, complexity and manning?

Calicofer

Yay no break this month, though I guess you'll probably have a long break for the holidays next month to start prepping for the next volume by New Year's. Anyways is this considered Monday's chapter or is it still part of last week's 3-chapter quota? Edit: Okay this seems to be the 1st chapter of the week~

Lanter

Shen Yu's bragging session, part 2 😆 I love how despite this being a pretty bigshot meeting, it really felt like Shen Yu grabbing a bunch of friends for a small catch up. The hilarious misunderstanding is finally brought to light! Jin is NOT a CSS Elder! "...please refrain from admitting to impersonating the Emperor’s will” the implication that impersonating is fine and normal but admitting to it is not lmaoooo 🤣🤣🤣🤣 And now, to Fa Ram to make Shou cough blood in envy 😅😂 Congrats to the Auditor on surviving with only a very light reprimand!✨️ And to the Lord Magistrate for making it through this with his dignity intact 🤣 Thanks for the chapter!

Ch W

Thanks for the chapter. I don't think Master Forest Sweeper wants to drink the same thing the cultivators do if CSS comes to pay respect. Will sapping season occur with all the visitors underfoot at Fa Ram or will Jin take a break this year because the maple tree grove need recovery from demon taint? I have more questions but they'll only be answered by more chapters and I will wait.

Alex Ingraham

The worst part of this chapter is the moment I realized I was out of popcorn for the auditor scene... I LITERALLY stopped reading; got a nice drink, went to go make popcorn and found nothing... 😂🤬🤣😭😭 But, I made do and loved the scene!! Honestly, when you consider the auditor got (GENTLY) slapped down by the IMPERIAL HERALD, it couldn't have been much more devastating for his worldview as a Imperial Auditor. For him, that was THE VOICE OF GOD personally telling him to fuck off and forget anything happened... Shen Yu and co. would have easily ripped his world a-fucking-sunder, but the Herald represented the Auditor's world turning on him and threatening to crush him. I'd tell the Wu's to fuck off too lol

WolfKnight22

I have a feeling minyan and mei mei are gonna get along splendidly

Alex Ingraham

"Once more, Huian was thankful that their Master was their Master. Most demonic cults would have probably killed Huian if they had arrived in this state. Instead, Tai, who could have killed them easily at the moment, was still acting with polite deference and care." Awwww, shit! It's never a good sign for our heroes when the evil guys can effectively suppress the natural in-fighting they normally have. On top of their obvious organizational skills, being "worryingly sane", etc., this is shaping up to be a major problem for the empire as a whole...

MatrixM

Damn, this book has been so suspenseful and fast paced I was thinking 'Oh, he's finishing this book early?' But it's been over 60 chapters!

israel valdez

Are we not going to talk about how the imperial herald "cocked" his head to the side...like a chicken!?!?!?!? Is this a profound secret message from the heavens?!

Cam Hearth

Fantastic chapter!!! Thanks CF!!

Cuticle

Lol “Oh, a meeting? How am I sure he's not cooking his books, hmm?” Yanjing responded. Bao frowned. “This early in the morning? Please, have patience—” Bao not affronted that the auditor is accusing the Magistrate, but that he thinks the Magistrate would cook the books so early in the morning hahaha

Jojiro

Somehow, the auditor's panic didn't feel as delicious as it could have been. The reveal is a tad too abrupt, and the cultivator pressure barely commented upon. I feel like the youth who handled the crystal formations at the Dueling Peaks had more lines of culture shock than this auditor did.

Cyrus McEnnis

Thank you so much for not taking a break - I wasn't looking forward to the break this time around, so much payoff going on ; )

SuperiorFreak

Jin truly has the greatest most magnificent Cock in the land. Meimei and Xiulan would undoubtedly agree. Its no wonder Shen Yu is eager to show it off.

Angua de Blubb

Did they already catch on that Jin is a Shennong cultivator? I so much hope we'll get to see them realizing that he's contracted to the spirit of the entire frigging province, and the implications of that XD Also completely separate, but with the official release of Volume 4 approaching, regarding Kindle and Audible, does anyone know: For sales numbers, I've heard that it is best to pre-order one and buy the other on release day, but I can never remember which IS which ... does anyone know?

Zygardegodslayer

The main question is if the 'oh shit' quotient is higher with the demonic cultivators or the auditor.

Kat

The Imperial Herald is sticking around for a while… that’ll be interesting

WannaBeATree

Maybe Bi De will give the Herald the Crystal of the history of the Azure Hills/Mountains to bring to the Emperor? Then we might get the situation of the Emperor giving honors/rewards to a chicken that Shen Yu was hoping for. It could even be constructed as him doing it as a response to saving his father from some legal problems.

Patanahi

Thank you for the chapter CF !!!

Cranky Otter

“Ge had commanded Lu Ri to give him that symbol so that he could use it to protect himself. Young Jin used it to stop a war… and then had ceased using it, displaying temperance when given such a powerful symbol.” And this is why we like Jin & Meimei. Nice that Elder Ge appreciates his temperance.

Kris Piskorski

This might be my favorite couple of chapters in the whole story! And I cannot wait for the outsiders to see fa ram

Marcin

Tbh i cant wait for the inevitable "A chicken... ?????!!!!" Also Minyan gushing over all the Ladies of the house :P

Demian Buckle

Thank you for the Great Chapter. I was expecting this to happen to Yanjing, but seeing it was wonderful.

Shawn Banks

🎶NO! SLEEP! TIL BOOK END!!!🎶 😆👍👍

Kali Smith

Thank you!!! This was a very good chapter! I’m also excited to see reactions to Fa Ram! This is going to be excellent!

Evander

Can Fa Ram comfortably host this many people? Food wise, yes. But space wise.

the fool

And you can meet my disciple. He's such a proud, erect fellow, Beware Of Chicken😂🤣😭🤣😂

litalmexy

Question is who won the bet between lady wu and boa?

Old Dog

As always, thank you for the chapter. Like so many others, looking forward to the trip to Fa Ram, it will be a hoot.

Dwayne Parker

You know, it’s nice to see competent villains who also have to struggle within the confines of the story’s world. I think I’m a little too use to villain fiat.

KyoDaDungeon!!

Also I think an understated thing here is besides "Zang Li" the demons have been competent & it's been both the one with better info & luck that decides these fights lately

Rake1810

Please don’t get me wrong. It was a fantastic chapter. But the wait for all the Experts to see Fa Ram and meet Bi De is killing me

Ormus Von Orbulon

Personally, I would say the four men and three women staring at the auditor wear expressions of "barely restrained contempt" rather than "barely concealed contempt". I mean, we know it's there. He knows it's there. All of them know it's there. So, it's not really concealed at all, is it...? Anyway. All of the Cloudy Sword folks are going to go haring off to investigate and/or purge scum... Except Shou. He's the herbalist -- and thus probably also head medic on this expedition. He's probably going to set up camp and/or inspect Jin's Facilities (and garden). He's also going to exchange healing lore with Meimei. Yukong is going to return to "camp" once her analysis of the tram line is complete -- her job done, for the moment -- only to find the formations worked into Jin's little keep. From there, she'll track down Xiaoshi's great works... Chances are high Shou and Yukong are going to stay in the guest house for a while, helping out, and detangling things. They're probably going to help Jin heal Tianlan in the next book. 🥳🎉🐔🫶😜

Kasinki

Thank you for the chapter

Melanie Me

Ok I understand that they are all going to lose their shit with all the animals and Bi De the chicken being Shen Yu's disciple. But I can't wait for them to see The General that commands the winter.

Angela Roberts

So much to digest! First, love the banter between Shen Yu, Ge, Shou, Yukong, and Minyan! Ge's observation that Shen is bright and alive, like before his son, is so touching. Jin's alarm that the SMS thought he was an elder and Shenshe's embarrassment was too funny. That all the CSS elders regret the loss of Jin and want to maintain a strong connection is good! I'm thinking that meeting the Spirit Beasts of Fa Ram and meeting Zhuge may shift Minyan from "meh" to "WTF", yeah? Oh, and special bonus, the Auditor gets checked and finally decides to bail. Whoever called it for after the meeting was prescient. (We shoulda had bets going!) But, not quite the smackdown I was hoping he'd get. So I think that the Wu clan will get up to more stupidity before *they* get checked. (Probably by Lu Ri.)

Samantha Kuhn

Shen YU CANNOT himself when it comes to making comments about his erect, upstanding, proud cock of an apprentice! He's going to be making those cock comments for centuries! I wonder if the CSS will be encountering Bi De in his "disguise" first, as the handsome, collected cultivator. Then *pop* there's his original form! "Your apprentice, after spending years saying there was NO ONE good enough--is a chicken?!!" exclaimed Ge. "Well, he was raised by my grandson, he's technically my great-grandson and disciple, and he kicks EVERYONE's ass while being righteous and looking good doing it! It's amazing what my proud, strong cock can accomplish!" chortled Shen Yun.

Duke of Coffee

Awwww the Auditor is going to run away to furtherest hills, manage to survive the Herald. A Chicken a chicken a chicken a chicken is a disciple!? 😜

Pat Sprehe

I really want to hear about how all of this appears through the eyes of the CSS disciples and Soaring Island midshipmen. Also Lu Ri’s fiance (Su Ge?) the Storm Wings, Xiulan’s mom…

Gwyn

So excited for the upcoming chapters. Everyone meeting Big D and Rizu is going to be awesome. Can't wait for Minyans and the twins interactions with Meiling, Tigu, and Xiulan. Minyans reaction to Zhuye should be great. I'm curious how the regular CSS members view Big D, Shen Yus new Acolyte

Philip

Hmm. Shouldn't the magistrate get a line? Seems odd after the scene of shen yu insisting he be there that he end up not adding anything?

Antony Claughton

I’m surprised that the meeting didn’t discuss how the demonic cultivators have figured out how to subvert cultivators and keep their power level. That is a terrifying ability as it removes one of your troops while increasing theirs.

Dimosiko

It just struck me - demonic cultivators lost this fight because of one mistimed decision. Decision to attack Fa Ram. They split their forces, and as such - they didn't have enough to defend the base. Shen Yu was THIS close to being defeated, and it was Bi De who tipped the balance. Which could have been the other way around, it they didn't send out an army.

Arnon Parenti

Is Shen Yanjin somehow related to Shen Yu?

Savannah Black

A lingering question... What do the lowly spiritual herbs look like? A grass variant? Or more like a small bush, like roses? Or just a straight flower, like a daisy. The name seven fragrance jewel herb made me think of a cluster of 7 leaves. Just curious. And now that Shou is here, are we finally figuring out the root!?

Catherine

Have they harvested the maple syrup this year yet?

JohnJohn2195

Anyone else think the Herald is the emperor in disguise? That why he gets the truth instead of waiting for a guy to report back. I think it is cause his exasperation and him comment of im pretty sure you do have a scroll from him for this kind of thing.

Mohamed Heikal

This chapter is out of sync a bit (earlier than expected but there was that missed chapter so not sure). When are we expecting the next chapter?

James

Such a great chapter, so much fun and so much going on. It's also at this moment that we realize that Yulong is STILL unaware of what's happen to the invasion force. I'm waiting for that scene when Huian finally reaches his master and finds out their great master is dead, most of their forces destroyed, and the main base just gone...then having to telling Yulong that he is the sole survivor of the entire invasion force.

Ender419

The spy network of this particular demonic cult is legendary!! It would be awesome if Senior Brother Lu Ri and his Plum Blossoms are able to infiltrate it and add their concepts to their organization and make it better.

Cineos

All this talk about high altitude plants and the existence of flight rocks - are we seeing the ingredients to a sanctaphrax greenhouse?

Catherine

I hope we get to see Shen yu show the images he took with his recording crystal of Bi di, yun and Ri zu’s training to everyone. I want to see their reactions :)

Insertnamehereokokipressedokok

Hehe they're going to Fa Ram. Yeah the gardens are great, Shou... But wait until you meet Bowu. Better have your kowtow on standby.

Chimera80

A vast improvement. More Lord Magistrate always makes things better 😁

Lanter

Reupload! Yay! And more Lord Magistrate! 😆

KyoDaDungeon!!

Even better cause ya this makes more sense to have LM there(especially him sitting with the auditor) surprised you didn't have Jin have a moment of realizing he almost killed LM

Trevor Mergen

I really think the new additions were a good improvement to an already good chapter.

Seaspike

Very nice adds. Now I really need the next chapter or three...

Kat

I like the changes made 😊😊

Rake1810

It’s even better but boo still no Fa Ram

Patanahi

“ Hanging took a swig of the wine, fire running down his throat. Yanjing had been nothing but antagonistic the entire time he had been here. ” first word is a typo I think. Tyftc CF

Old Dog

Outstanding additions, they dovetail in seamlessly .

BigBro Bluesman

Lmao now that's what I was talking about he could handle it but damn it's stressful as fuck

Lady of Stories

I thought this chapter couldn't get better but low and behold you have surpassed my highest expectations. Thanks for the chapter and blessing upon you CF

M e

Fantastic additions. I love the Lord Magistrate, and this was such a perfect showcase for his character.

D J Meigs

Yeeeees! That scene with the auditor and TLM was perfection! TLM showing some compassion for someone going through a similar shock to his own, but also using his commiseration as a power play is just peak TLM. The visible hero hiding the keen minded politician. The auditor getting a possible redemption is also very in line with what I expect of this story. This is the satisfaction I was slightly missing when the auditor ended up beaten by a third party unrelated to the conflict. I’m also glad for the scene establishing TLM amongst the new cultivators. Once again I realise I’m as invested in The Lord Magistrate’s journey as I am in the adventures of Jin and his disciples. I love the main story, but everything to do with The Lord Magistrate always delights me to a ridiculous degree. Awesome job CF! Thank you for reading the feedback and considering it so seriously, even though the chapter was already a good one, I really think it just got that much better 😊

Drew

The new scenes are great and worth the revision! Will the next chapter be delayed because of that though?

Steven Ramey

This was totally worth the update. Great work!!

Antony Claughton

Great additions. One thing on reflection, I would expect that there might have been more talk about the original infiltration of the Shrouded Mountain Sect. By memory, this was a technique that the elders were familiar with but they thought eradicated centuries ago. There surely must be concern that there are more infiltrators throughout other sects and the government bureaucracy throughout the empire. This would surely need a response beyond just the cultivators in the room, since sects would need to check themselves and be warned, which presumably needs the Emperor to insist on. As I assume they’d take it badly if the Cloudy Mountain Sect issued such a decree. I would have thought this should get some time. Then again, I thought their strategy was pretty simplistic. I’ve never seen the strategy session to be so much shorter than the information session. Even if Jin and TLM were surprised. I mean, they assume that they can ‘mop up’ the rest, and that there was only a single Imperial realm cultivator. What if this wasn’t even the main forces? It just seems simplistic. Not saying we need to see the strategy on-screen, probably skipping to the end when they’re summarising makes sense, but I think it should have been a much longer session and more detailed plans. Even the cloudy mountain sect can’t be everywhere, and this could be empire spanning. Oh: voice.” ==> voice.

Ligeia

The additions really take an excellent chapter from terrific to superlative! You really grasped the intent of the feedback readers gave you and found the perfect spots to improve the chapter with TLM, first showing the cultivators what an outstanding mortal he is, and then showing kindness to the auditor -- even if he did horrifying the auditor by telling him how much he was enjoying the audit! Thanks for the great work!

Ezidium

Looking forward to the next chapter. Could really use some of magic tonight.

Just a goat on a mountain

In this edit does Shou actually know about how well Jin has done growing all the seeds given to him? Or does he still only know about his skill with 7 fragrance

Nouseva Valo

So since first part of story is told by Ge perceptive who is same generation than Shen Yu, is not histories wrong word in "From the histories, nearly all had died in the Age of Heroes." Since he him self was living at that time too?

Cranky Otter

The extended bits with TLM are exquisite. I can hear TLM’s perfect diction on “they’ve been here for three years” dropping like precision hammer blows. The extension gives us readers time to marinate, not quite like the auditor, in the just barely avoided disaster. And flat telling the auditor he’s having fun?! Love it. Thanks for giving more heft to TLM’s role. It was just what this chapter needed to balance the weight and impact of each of the scenes and justified his meeting attendance beyond “this is happening to his province”. I respect an author who can deftly slide in a few new lines and take it from good enough to something that sings.

Truedragon5374

One more thing you might want to expand on a bit CS. Shouldn't the demon story begin and end with Jin? They end with Shen Yu fighting the Imperial Demonic Cultivator, but there is no mention of the attack on Fa Ram other than that outburst about the Puppet Worm. Might want to at least mention the attack, and that they have a few hundred Artificial Demons to study.

Arnon Parenti

General Auditor can cuss like a sailor when wind blows in his sails. Wouldn't want to be the first Wu he meets after this. Some messengers are just that unlucky.

Baqc∞ART

ohh i wanted to see how the lord magistrate defeats him and the result of the bet between lady wu and bao. Now let's wait to see how they deal with the Wu clan, it would be fun if Jin flew in on a Washi to the merchants' headquarters, making a show ordering them to stop trading with the Wu, and maybe Washi taking human form and marrying Chyo and joining that expedition, arcs that I've been waiting for for quite some time.

Bruodis

Really liked the edits. Awesome!

Insertnamehereokokipressedokok

Good edits both times. At this point in the book everyone should get their time in the sun, or their just dues.