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Pale Moon Lake City, Shen Yu decided as Lu Ri led him through the place, was fascinating in its sheer… mortalness. A city’s population was always going to be predominantly mortal, but he had never yet seen one in all the Empire that was like this, with barely a hint of the touch of cultivators. It was a glimpse into a world without Qi. There were no grand stadiums or arenas for cultivators to battle, no auction houses for rare reagents. There wasn’t even a ruling Sect, as most cities had, the administration was supposedly purely mortal.

It was so different that for a brief moment Shen Yu had questioned whether he was in the Empire: but the flags fluttering on the Palace roof told no lie, flying the ever radiant Phoenix.

Pale Moon Lake City was a quiet and sleepy place. The mortals hawked their wares. The guards inspected caravans. Life ground on, in this Qi-less desert without cultivators.

It was strange, so strange, to see the world like this. They hadn’t had a demon attack in this province since the Empire was founded. Shen Yu hadn’t felt any powered formations on the walls— hells, the shanty village spilled far, far outside them, fearless of any Spirit Beasts—if there were any amount of the creatures at all.

The mortals who ruled here, however, were obviously fairly intelligent and industrious. Their little buzzing medallions that Lu Ri had pointed out were actually quite ingenious contraptions, and exactly what they needed.

It was probably less shocking for Shen Yu, compared to other cultivators. He had spent enough time as a wandering vagabond that he knew the mortal world better than most. This city was about the same as any other, albeit without the enormous amount of crystals used to provide water or light.

Honestly, it was slightly cleaner than Shen Yu had been expecting. The circular lake, obviously a remnant of some great battle from ages past, was fetching in its own right.

If it weren't for the fact that it was in a horrid Qi desert, he would have said the city was an enjoyable thing to walk through. Shen Yu took his eyes off a banner advertising a play called “The Demon Slaying Orchid”, and turned to his companion.

“So. Your “Plum Blossom Shadow”… You think these mortals will have information for us?” Shen Yu questioned, as Lu Ri started towards an alleyway. He had sent a transmission to one of his men as soon as they stepped foot within the province, warning of the impending arrival.

“They do. I requested that they keep an eye on things for me, and if anything came up involving Jin Rou, they should know. In truth, however, I expect little to have changed.” Lu Ri replied, as he started down the narrow corridor filled with junk.

Shen Yu’s eyes snapped to what looked like a drunk, laid out from his alcohol against the wall. But the smell wasn’t right, and he was far, far too alert.

“The shade under a plum tree refreshes the spirit.” Lu Ri intoned, as he stopped just before a door in the side of the alley.

“And its fruit a grand prize.” The pretend drunk whispered back, and rose from his prone position gracefully so that he could kowtow before Lu Ri. “Master Scribe. This old man pays his respects. The Section Heads are ready for your arrival.”

“Already?” Lu Ri asked.

“You called, Master Scribe. We are ever prepared to answer.” The beggar rose, and gazed upon Lu Ri. The worn man’s eyes were full of a zeal one saw in a loyal subordinate.

Lu Ri opened the door, and the man returned to his guard position. On the other side of the door were two far more armed mortal guards, who clasped their fists and bowed as Lu Ri led Shen Yu down this separate alley, until they arrived at the back door to a manor.

Once more Lu Ri spoke his pass phrase giving them entry within. Not that they could have stopped him.

Lu Ri had not, to Shen Yu’s eyes, changed his mannerisms. He was still as mild and seemingly uninterested as he had always been. But now, there was a presence around the boy. An aura of charisma and command.

How interesting.

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Thus they stepped foot into the lair of the Plum Blossom’s Shadow. Shen Yu had worked extensively with information brokers. They were some of the most powerful organizations in the Empire. Each province seemed to have its own master of shadows who was supreme—geography and intimate knowledge crafted over centuries ensured there was some variety between places.

They were wealthy clans living in the shadows of grand cities or hidden within illusion drenched forests. Individuals existed too, solo operatives who worked out of dive bars—and this was neither of those. There was no mysticism here. No ancient clans, or special techniques. Instead, as they entered the lower level of this simple manor house in the city what met them was organized chaos.

As they passed several rooms Shen Yu glanced within at the teeming papers and mortals gathered by them in amusement. The air was thick with code-speak and sign language. Some of the mortals had fingers pressed against minor transmission stones, transcribing what they were hearing in shorthand. These men and women moved with a purpose that would not look out of place on Tou Le’s own mortal soldiers. Shen Yu could see the influence of the Cloudy Sword Sect clear as the summer sun in the brief glimpses of organization charts, hierarchy, and well laid, efficient planning and rotations. It was more of an artifact machine that gathered information and processed it, rather than the organizations Shen Yu was used to.

“In six months you built this?” Shen Yu questioned. Like the beggar outside, and the guards… they were driven. Driven by passion, an almost tangible force within the building, and Lu Ri had been the one to inspire it. Once more, it seemed that Lu Ri had only the illusion of mediocrity about him.

“Three.” Lu Ri responded absently. “They were receptive to the words and works of the Honoured Founders… and just needed a slight push.”

Shen Yu had to stop himself from laughing. This boy—he thought what he had done was unimpressive. That it was merely the work of the Founders of the Sect, rather than his own skill, not realizing that he had replicated in months what the Founders had taken centuries to refine.

He would have to give Brother Ge a heads up about this one. With a bit more refinement, and a century or two…. Well. Elder Lu Ri was something that was nearly a foregone conclusion.

They ascended a set of stairs to the top floor. There, the throng of people thinned out, as the building became more what one would expect from a noble manor.

There was a servant waiting for them, as Lu Ri marched unerringly towards a room. The woman’s head touched the floor, and the door was pulled open for Lu Ri.

Within were three people— two men and a woman, and all immediately bowed.

“We pay our respects to Master Scribe, and his honoured guest.”

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They were swiftly seated and offered refreshments. Shen Yu took a swig of the offered wine, which wasn’t bad, as the mortals composed themselves for their “Master Scribe.”

“Thank you for receiving me so promptly.” Lu Ri said, as a scraggly looking man brewed him tea.

“It was no trouble, Master Scribe.” A corpulent male wearing merchants garb intoned. “We are ever at your service.”

Lu Ri nodded his head. “Very well. Report.”

“As Master Scribe has commanded, we have worked extensively with the Azure Jade Trading Company, and expanded the reach of our Plum Blossom’s Shadow. It has been mutually beneficial for both of our organizations.

“And Jin Rou?”

“As you dictated to us, Master Scribe, Verdant Hill has not been approached—however, shortly after you left, there was an… incident. We were unable to contact Master Scribe at the time.”

Lu Ri raised an eyebrow.

“What manner of incident?”

The woman popped open a scroll. “This one will begin the first consolidated report on Jin Rou—Rou Jin as he has named himself.” The mousey, nondescript woman began. She wore the garb of a palace worker, in the transmission stone division.

Shen Yu frowned deeply at the reminder. The name change was an attempt to hide so Lu Ri reported. Rou had apparently been worried that the little bastard who had tried to cripple him would go looking to finish the job.

It was a simple method to hide, changing the characters of one’s name, and then reversing them. A little shit like the one who had hurt his grandson most certainly would have been fooled and dissuaded.

“We start less than a week after you left. Jin Rou was involved in an incident at the Dueling Peaks, as codified by these reports—in which there was an altercation with the Shrouded Mountain Sect.”

Shen Yu paused in the middle of taking another swig, his eyes narrowing at the woman. Oh, little Rou, little Rou! Shen Yu chastised. Something had to have happened. The Young Master, back for revenge! He had been proud, when Lu Ri told him little Rou had managed to suppress a Young Master of the Shrouded Mountain Sect—the story had been downright hilarious. Beating an upjumped shit, and then leaving him for the mortals to contain after declaring he was so weak he couldn’t be a Young Master?

That was damn poetic, and something Shen Yu wished he would have thought of. In fact, the next time he happened to suppress some boy too big for his britches, he’d do just that! How embarrassing! How shameful, to rot in a mortal’s cell, and be declared an imposter because you were too weak!

The mortals however seemed unconcerned with angering Lu Ri, so Little Rou had obviously come out fine from that event as well.

“The altercation involved every Sect in the Azure Hills, as well as the Shrouded Mountain’s observers. The official story of the sects is that it was a drunken altercation, a small fight. But agents have unearthed that the whole thing began over the apparent assault and imprisonment of one Rou Tigu.”

The world ground to a halt at the name. The barest hint of Shen Yu’s intent leaked out, and one of the little medallions in the room shattered.

“What?” Some of Shen Yu’s intent leaked out at that. Rou Tigu? “Describe her.” Shen Yu commanded the suddenly silent and sweating mortals. They were struck dumb, and the fat merchant started chocking.

Shen Yu retracted his aura, and they began to gasp for air. The woman fumbled her scroll, panic in her eyes as she tried to obey him.

“Recover yourself first.” Lu Ri said calmly to the mortal, and Shen Yu grudgingly banked his will. The woman seemed to take heart from Lu Ri’s words, and took a breath, before speaking.

“F-Female Cultivator, age fourteen to sixteen. Orange hair. Facial markings. Clothes had a depiction of a maple leaf and rice stalk upon it. She was part of the sectless contingent, but defeated all in their path, save Cai Xiulan, who she was seen interacting with frequently. A wild, unrestrained, and bestial fighter. Relation is likely that of a daughter, or niece. She was physically affectionate with him, but not in the manner of a lover. The observer likened it to his own daughter.” The mortal bit out, as sweat trailed down her cheek, the woman shakily held out an unrolled scroll. “Likeness is included.”

Shen Yu gazed down at what was an advertisement of all things, of a stuffed doll.

A cheeky, orange-haired, and smiling brat looked back at him. Was… was she perhaps some manner of family? Was that why Rou had come? She was far, far too old to be a daughter. And there was something about even the drawing that was familiar. Something in the facial structure.

Had she been some sort of distant family Rou had found that still lived ? Or simply was she like Rou, picked up off the street by the sympathetic boy? Well, allowances could be made, if she was impressive enough.

“Continue.” Shen Yu commanded.

The mortals continued. Spinning a tale about an assault at the Dueling Peaks… and how Little Rou had apparently taken to heel the Shrouded Mountain in its entirety.

He would have to confirm the tale himself! Rou, crushing a sect already?! Just what had his boy been doing?! How had he grown so fast?

He should have been worried. The tale was distressingly familiar to his… to his son… but there was a massive, glaring difference.

Instead of depredation and death, the tale the mortal told was of a benevolent, and still righteous boy—one who had taken it upon himself to repair the city that had been wrecked. They were polar opposites.

So Shen Yu had a small smile on his face, as he reigned in his frayed temper.

“He was at the head of negotiations, from what observers said, and the Disciples bowed to him and him alone. They gave their reparations— And then left.”

“They did not challenge it?” Lu Ri questioned.

“Not at all. From all reports, not a single member of Shrouded Mountain has stepped foot in the Azure Hills since they left.”

“That is good, then. Keep an eye on things.”

“As You command.”

“And the Trading Company’s relation to him?”

“It again, was as you surmised. The Azure Jade Trading company has aligned with his interests, and now they are dedicated to his cause. Even Guan Chyou, the favoured daughter, was witnessed by agents spending the night with him, twice, and even journeyed up north, with a full guard, and stayed with him. She has also been absent at the functions she normally hosted, and the company closed off all offers for her hand.”

Shen Yu perked up at that little tidbit.

“Oho?” he asked.

Another drawing was quickly provided—This time of a fetching beauty with beautiful scarlet hair.

Oh, Rou had excellent taste.

“I see. I thank you for your report.” Lu Ri said, as Shen Yu examined the woman. There was a thunk of a scroll hitting the table. “Within lies your next set of orders. I will be back soon, to further explain them.”

“Yes, Master Scribe!” the mortals intoned, but Shen Yu ignored them, already standing. His Qi churned. The mortals actually had been useful—though now he had more questions than answers.

Lu Ri received Shen Yu’s silent demand, as they removed themselves from the manor.

The pace increased.

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Through the Qi desert, the cultivators leapt. Over the hills and the roads, heading further and further north. It was as if they were going back in time, as spring regressed. The leaves on the trees shrunk, and the blossoms closed— They reached Verdant Hill two days after they left Pale Moon Lake City.

Lu Ri was gasping for air, and Shen Yu was feeling a bit of strain himself, his wounds acting up slightly in the Qi starved air. But as they traveled further north, one thing was clear. There was more Qi up here. At least a little. It soothed their breaths, and the air stopped feeling so hostile.

They passed by an unfinished road, and entered a tiny town, the most backwater Shen Yu had ever seen.

Verdant Hill.

“He is supposed to be along the north road.” Lu Ri stated, as they paused for a moment.

“Remain here.” Shen Yu commanded, and Lu Ri bowed. “I shall continue alone.”

Rou was close. He could feel it in his bones. His feet took him past another, even smaller village.

And when he met the boy, he would get to the bottom of these outlandish tales!

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“Alright. That's it for the soybean field.” I muttered, as I stared at the newly planted soil. I was rotating soybeans into the wheat fields we had used last year. Soybeans were nitrogen fixers—so that meant they could return at least some productivity to what we had going.

I mostly wanted to see what the effect was with my soil super powers. Maybe there was something better than the four field rotation I knew we used back home? And realistically, anything was better than pumping the ground full of chemical fertilizers and abusing things until they dropped.

I know fertilizer and pesticide has its place. Hell, it's the reason we could feed so many people—but quite frankly, if I could avoid doing any of that shit here, I’d grab that opportunity with both hands.

Besides, I wasn’t trying to feed the world. Just myself and my family.

I turned from my new field, and headed back to the farm.

I saw the ghost of a girl at the edge of my vision, riding around on Chunky’s back. —I was still getting used to really seeing Tianlan. She had been a bit quiet, ever since she learned about what happened to Xiaoshi. But I could tell she was getting better. There was a bounce in her step when she explored and watched us prep the fields.

Everybody else was doing their own thing—Meimei had gotten back not too long ago from Hong Yaowu, grumbling about how Gou had changed the village too much. Hey, the man was working his new know-how—and it looked to be going well.

I got back to the house , where Meimei had just finished feeding our son. She patted his back until he burped, and then set him down for a nap.

Smiling, she turned to me…

And then sneezed.

She froze. She lifted her nose up like Ri Zu did to scent the air.

I scratched at my back, something touching the edges of my senses.

“What is that smell…? What is that smell?” Meimei whispered, her eyes unfocused—before she reared back, like she had just been punched.

“Jin! Somethings coming—!”

And then I felt it.

Something big was coming this way. My heart seized in my chest.

“Get everybody ready to hide.” I commanded, and then I was off, before conscious thought really registered, the ghost of a little girl drifting beside me.

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Shen Yu felt it. The mass of Qi heading towards him. It felt like an avalanche. Inevitable. Like a mountain, turning to face him.

This was not subtle at all. This was the roar of a dragon, that someone dared to intrude upon his territory.

Shen Yu broke into a grin. Rou had sensed his intrusion—to do so meant he was leaps and bounds stronger than when they had last met.

His steps got faster. He flared his own Qi in response, meeting the challenge with one of his own.

Rou’s Qi sped up, closing the distance. The earth rumbled.

Shen Yu brought his arm up, and swung. It was a strike that would have bowled little Rou on his ass and down the road when Shen Yu left.

Instead, his arm met another man’s, thick with muscle and power.

It was like hitting a mountain as the blows hammered into each other. The air roared from the impact and the earth shuddered.

Shen Yu allowed himself to be thrown backwards from the force of the blow. He landed, coming to an immediate stop, looking at the man who had struck him.

Jin Rou’s face was set in an expression of pure determination. His Qi burned within him like a star; His eyes were pure and unclouded, facing directly at Shen Yu.

The old man felt some of the pent up worry fade as he saw those eyes. Those beautiful eyes. The same eyes Rou had when he was a small boy shoveling shit to pay for his lessons. The same boy who skipped meals to better himself. When he took the punches the world threw at his head, and kept marching forwards.

It was still Rou. There was no Bu here. No monster wearing the flesh of a son.

Rou’s Qi spluttered. His guard faltered.

His face flashed through a myriad of emotions: hope, shock, relief and a flash of love, before settling on confusion.

“Gramps?!” Jin Rou asked.

It was Rou. It was still Rou. He had grown a little bit; but it was still the boy that he had taught.

Rou’s guard faltered. His Qi faded into the background.

Which is why he was utterly unprepared when a bundle of dried horse dung struck him in the face.

“Have it back, you little shit!” Shen Yu roared, as the boy spluttered. Shen Yu’s arms wrapped around the boy, as he ruffled his hair.

There were so many questions. So many things to look deeper upon—but for now, in that moment…

Shen Yu had his grandson.

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Maybe I could have cut down the plum blossom stuff. But Im fairly happy with this chapter.

Happy Halloween!

Edited by: Brandon “Philosophysics” Zhang-Leong, Ayje, Oshi

Comments

Idan tal

3 years later and this chapter is still a peak hard to surpass in any story I’m reading. Just Beautiful.

Bobtur

Thanks for the amazing chapter !

DaJoKa03

This is a very nice surprise to wake up to. Also this is some parts wholesome and nice and many parts ominous

Summercat

The Plum Blossom stuff.... I feel it's important to get a glimpse of Lu Ri from another angle. Gramps is mighty impressed, and... It helps to cement that the Azure Hills are no mountains to stand on, but a fertile ground for growth nonetheless.

Tyler smalley

I loved that we skipped verdant hill so the magistrate can be introduced by Jin. I wonder what gramps smells like to Mei?

Randall Bennett

Loved the plum blossom stuff. Just the right amount. Great chapter!

Teh One & TrueTabi

It’s always just dung between these two isn’t it?

Chris

That ending was real art.

GameJunkie999

OK that ending had me getting a little teary eyed. Gramps and Jin reuniting is something I've been waiting to see.

Allan V

No, the Plum Blossom content was just right. It helped highlight the impatience that gramps was feeling.

Quentin Long

The Plum Blossom stuff is valuable in its own right, and a worthy side-plot to the main narrative. You need neither apologize nor feel that you have in any way done wrong.

Sam Beasley

I really want to see Gramps' reaction to the mead. Everything else too, of course, but I feel like the mead will be particularly special.

Archyonx

Noooooo... how could you do that to us ? How could you stop the chapter with only this? Give us more

RJKY

Elder Lu Ri. The Master Scribe, Monster Of Organization.

SoralTheSol

The grand reunion! This will be fun.

Beardo

Such a tease. Brilliant chapter. Quite looking forward to this arc

Dust Russell

The plum blossom stuff was sick, never hesitate to flush out your characters, organizations, or even worlds!

striderfighter

Honestly some of your best writing was in your last three chapters....

Lark Sol

Great chapter! Thank you!

Nick

Tftc

AG

So is this the last part of chapter 46 or are we not moving on to chapter 47 just yet

Nemo

Oh no. "Jin Rou asked." I can't help but be worried about that phrasing...

StarBat

I am ashamed. I suqeeed uncontrollably. THAT BUILD UP WAS SO WORTH It!

CrazyExplorer

Do not worry about the plum blossom stuff Casualfarmer. You could make an entire spin-off about Lu Ri and the Plum Blossom Shadows if you want to and I, personally, would read it. They are just that fun and interesting. A cultivator mailman and master spy is a story that I think has a lot of potential.

Johan Larsson

The plum blossom stuff was great!

Chimera80

... I can't believe he kept the horse shit...

Nick Stanley

THIS WHOLE CHAPTER WAS SO GOOD. I AM BEYOND EXCITED

Empty Shelf

I think it's amazing that Lu Ri, the seemingly random scribe from the very first chapter, remains an integral and compelling character in Book Three.

Memememe

Gramps was just carrying horse shit the entire time.

Thiemo Guenther

A positive beginning for the reunion. There's quite a bit the two would have to talk about, especially how Jin Rou has something of an antithetical philosophy/lifestyle of cultivation compared to conventional wisdom. That's perhaps the biggest/most obvious issue. Aside from Jin being two souls fused together, because Rou actually died... But it's undeniable that Jin Rou is strong, and his "disciples"/ family as well. Plus there's a newborn son! I figure Jin is going to be much more reticent regarding Tianlan and Azure Hills past, though those issues, implications, and circumstances are actually very important in relation to the future of the Empire... Not too mention the shadow demon(?) that had been puppeting the guy from Shrouded Mountain, and the demon clan/sector that the readers have meta-knowledge about. Hmm , will Shen Yu detect the fox spirit hanging around? I figure Tianlan can be stealthy enough to hide her presence.

Galm_1

Tbh i think Gramps and MeiMei are going to get along swimmingly

NoAriGuy

Oh god please, i neeeeeed the next chapter. Why do we have to wait the ungodly few days! Great chapter!

Ichypa

I kinda hope that Jin’s next move is to immediately reveal the whole Rou+Jin fusion thing to Shen Yu, so that he can come to terms with it and decide he’s not going to slaughter everyone on the Fa Ram, and then we can move forward with at least that particular variety of angst and drama hanging over the story like the Sword of Damocles the entire time Gramps is here.

reji

I would like yo hear interaction in Verdant Hill tho... Feels a little rushed (but probably because gramps is suddenly rushing?)

Apeljohn

"Maybe I could have cut down the plum blossom stuff." - Don't you bloody dare. Lu Ri's oblivious "I accidentally a world-class spy organisation" continues to be quietly hilarious. And it was good to have an outside perspective on this.

Alex McGregor

Nah the Plum Blossom stuff is great

ericksond

Who will bet with me Gramps will think Xiulan is the “first” wife?

paul Emmer

So much power in so short of time will naygate any miss giving about the path Jin has chosen

Discordant Note

The pay off was great can not wait for the next bit.

Justin Ingram

Awesome! Loved it! Now which interactions will be the best. The wife thing will be funny. Washy awesome! Ba De not sure what to expect. So very interested, will Gramps get to see the crystal? Looking forward to it, and this was a really good chapter!

Jerry harris

Actually like the plum blossom it help explains why he rushed off so fast and his concern I like the tie in of the parasite I’m sure that he’s going to visit the shrouded mountain sect after Jin tells him what he found

ChanceOfFoxin

I think the plum blossom stuff is a great addition, I really enjoyed it. Great chapter as always!

Michael Fannon

So, going out on a limb here, but the thing describing how Bu eyes had changed kinda gave me an idea. Was Bu actually a demon? Processed and controlled in the same way the young master was?

Joseph

So what do you want to bet Shen Yu's original son Bu was possessed by the Twilight Cuckoo? I look forward to see how Shen Yu reacts when that occurs to him.

Demian Buckle

Thank you for the brilliant Chapter.

Dee

I love the Plumb Blossom side story, please continue it! Aside from just being a cool tangent, it’s a great way to highlight more of the world and society Jin lives in. ❤️

SwordMage

As always, awesome chapter!

industriousrevolution

Question: Does Gramps like fine, expensive wine or rotgut stuff? He drank extremely pricey liquor with the Emperor, but I don't know the quality of what he picked up in Crimson Crucible City. In either case, his introduction to vodka will be fantastic.

Guy L.

Oh my gods. This was beautiful. Thankyou so much

Kurohyo

vodka, mead,... has jin distilled the maple yet?

Quintuscus

This has been the best chapter ever. The complete feeling of suspension that held me tighter than anything you wrote, except the fight with the arrogant young masters of the sect. But this time the ending was not grim or full of both dread and heartache; this was pure. Thank you so much, once again. I hope you have a wonderful day, but if you don't release the next chapter soon I might die of heartache.

Osamaru

BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Need more!

CUI13

Can't wait!

RedFaux

He was worried about his character. That's better than I thought

Baconater

I NEED more. NEED.

Gygax Fan

The Plum Blossom stuff was awesome for giving context and relative powers and such for the things that had happened in the story.

IG884HIRE

I absolutely love that Gramps considers Lu Ri an Elder in the making. A good egg indeed.

Adam

One of the best chapters in awhile, thanks!

Tragic Hysteria

Great chap, love the plum blossoms shadow stuff, really interesting to hear what other thought of the events we knew.

Alex Lindsay

One thing about the plum blossoms. If they are so good how come there is no mention that he was married. It is not a secret to those in the area. Seems that a big miss if they were investigating him.

COR

NOOO!, don't cut down on the Plum Blossoms, they are my FAVOURITE B plot in this story. Give me whole interlude chapters about their progress. 2nd favourite B plot would be the magistrates increasing wealth and clout, Seeing him style on the Azure trade company was great, and I can't wait till he starts doing it to other officials and even cultivators. Go, you underdog mortals, go!

Will mILLER

This is practically an early chapter. This humble mortal is very pleased. Long live the Plum Blossom!

Artman

Good, now the wait is on.

nugitoBambino

plum blossoms shadow stuff was amaaazing. Lu Ri is such a dark horse favorite for me

Randall Norman Pick

Lu Ri has really elevated himself as one of my favorite side-characters.

BelligerentGnu

"Have it back!" So. Fucking. Perfect.

Dion

This was a really good one. I hope whatever tribulations are ahead that gramps can still keep a good relationship with his son

Victor Segura

Magnificent chapter. I love it so much. Thank you

Jeff Petkau

I was hoping to see the Magistrate's reaction to the most powerful cultivator in the empire coming to visit. So much for his small pond! I imagine he'll get along great with Lu Ri though. They're both all about that efficiency.

neco

No! I love the plum Blossom stuff. These side stories of the Bees and Lu Ri are great. Please more

Reinhold Wuerzner

The Plum Blossom stuff is fun to read so I say keep it.

Panda

I am also very happy with this chapter.

Jeff Gault

You used "his guard faltered" twice.

Logrus

Love this one. I really, really like that Shen Yu seems to be primarily concerned with Jin being happy and a good person. It will hopefully balance out being upset at his chosen lifestyle. Also - I have a feeling Shen Yu is gonna LOVE Tigu. "The old man felt some of the pent up worry fade as he saw those eyes. Those beautiful eyes. The same eyes Rou had when he was a small boy shoveling shit to pay for his lessons. The same boy who skipped meals to better himself. When he took the punches the world threw at his head, and kept marching forwards." This was a wonderful paragraph.

Net

Too short :(( but so lovely!

Southmonk

Man the dung throwing was amazing I was shocked. Didn't predict it or forgot Abt it rofl. Nicely done!

N0ct3m

^.^ your stories make me smile. Thank you

SuperiorFreak

Heh. I can't wait for his reaction to all the spirit beasts and the literal dragon, lol. Vaguely disappointed that Gramps didn't hear about how Lanlan was his "wife" that misunderstanding is still very amusing to me. Imagining the dead look in everyone's eyes when yet another person makes the mistake of greeting Lanlan as the wife would make me grin so wide.

BargleNawdleZouss

I am NOT looking forward to Shen Yu dropping a comment about Jin allegedly sleeping with Guan Chyou in PMLC. I'm hoping that Jin and Meiling have already discussed that offstage.

Eric Manwill

Reunion! Gramps is in for quite the culture shock when he enters Fa Ram. Also, don't begrudge yourself the time spent with the Plum Blossom spy ring; it was fun seeing the culmination of what Lu Ri built, from the perspective of an outsider.

V01D

Here’s hoping we’ll FINALLY find out what that root is! Also, I wonder how much better the farm feels to Shen Yu… and how he’ll react to the various foodstuff. Like finding out Jin is the source of Maple Syrup Tigu is familiar? I wonder if Gramps has any link to the old lady with the goat? (I kind of want Lu Ri to meet Xulian, since they seem to run on similar wavelengths - having become invested in the mortals around them!)

paul Emmer

So Gramps mentioned that without cultivators around the demons should be so why aren't they their original demise was 1000s of years ago So many unanswered questions I hope we get some answers

Chimera80

“What?” Some of Shen Yu’s intent leaked out at that. => the phrase “intent leaked” is repeated from previous paragraph. They were struck dumb, and the fat merchant started chocking => “choking”. “Chocking” means something entirely different So Shen Yu had a small smile on his face, as he reigned in his frayed temper. => “reined in” (the expression comes from horses, not kings) Somethings coming—! => Something’s

Dbcooper3k

Wow, the last few chapters have been exciting. This next story ark has all the groundwork set to be incredible, Shen yu is a pretty well fleshed out character and I can't wait to hopefully see his interactions with fah ram, I could see him eventually being a belgarath (The ornery overpowered vagabond that's going to steal your booze and cheese but overall get along)

D J Meigs

Yay! I’m so impatient for the next bit! Wait until gramps meets his great grandson! And poor Meilin is going to have hay fever (qi fever) when smelling Shen Yu all the time

William Matysik

Thank you for the chapter. Don't want to wait... MOARRR!!!

HumptyDumpty

I was actually looking forward to the plum blossom part. Gave Lu Ri a chance to humble brag whilst expanding the pathway of his cultivation. Also a chance for the reader to see how Jin is being perceived by those outside The Farm. As well as how well the hidden master routine is going.

Silver Beard

Sucks he visited in the Spring... think he'd enjoyed Hockey

Jojiro

A lot of people are saying that because Shen Yu is fond of his grandson and just wants him to be happy, this reunion is going to be a happy one, with just culture shock shenanigans. But I do wonder about that. Shen Yu is powerful enough and seems "standard cultivator"-enough that he can cause a lot of harmful impact, even with 100% wholesome intent. If he is pranked by a spirit beast before Jin explains that they are family, I could see him killing it, feeling remorseful, and apologizing to Jin by giving him some rare reagent or some such. There are tons of xianxia stories where the tragedies are precisely caused by wholesome intentions with sloppy, overpowered, overdramatic execution.

HawkwardEgal

Ooooh man, was Shen Bu also taken over a demonic cultivator? Or was he naturally a little dick?

Bille

Is this about the most commented post so far?

paul Emmer

It's Wednesday I need the feed ASAP AND FRIDAY S TOO IF POSSIBLE

Imnebel

Tomorrow

AG

so any prediction for what time tomorrow?

Will mILLER

While CF usually releases late, there has never been a chapter that wasn’t worth it in my memory

Artman

Off to bed, x fingers for morning surprise

Regan

Can’t wait for MOAR!!!! Looking forward to gramps reaction too!

Chichi son

"Maybe I could have cut down the plum blossom stuff. But Im fairly happy with this chapter." No way the Plum Blossom adds some neat depth to the story Not to say the story doesn't have depth elsewhere but it's all great!

KRY

Bro. You're making me cry

MsMonet

i like the plum blossom stuff

Eleeyah

The plum blossom stuff was good. Perhaps a line or two from Shen Yu about the town of Verdant Hill.

Once and Future Executioner

Will we have an interaction between Lu Ri and the Magistrate? I think it would be entertaining.

Zoidberg’s Anchovies

That would be great. But I am looking forward to the elders of azure hills trying something. Maybe an ran mentioning why Jin was held up by a temple dog and demons to elder ye. Or Tie Delun’s panic meeting Gramps or Meimei. I think Meimei would do the shotgun talk with him, much better than Jin.