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“You kept it? How petty can you be, you old bastard?” Rou demanded as he pulled some of the dung out of his hair. The exact same dung Rou had sent Shen Yu.

Shen Yu laughed at the sheer incredulity in his voice.

“Of course I did! I had to return your gift—it was shit!”

Rou barked out a laugh as he brushed himself off.

Shen Yu took the time to look the boy over as Rou dusted the last of the horse dung off his clothes. The similarities from his memory stood out first. The brown hair. The bright green eyes. The freckles dusting his cheeks. Rou looked annoyed… but his smirk betrayed him. That familiar little smirk that he always had when he was about to be a little shit. Like when he replaced Shen Yu’s wine with literal horse piss.

The cheeky little brat hadn’t died with his crippling. In his letter, he had said he was fine… but Shen Yu had doubts, one could lie in writing.. Here, in person all was laid bare. Little could be hidden from his gaze. Rou was still there. He was still there, and still had some of the same core.

The smirk was where the familiarities ended for Shen Yu. Beyond that, the boy was different.

There was little that connected him to the child Shen Yu had left in the care of his sect. His muscles were larger. His face had lost that tiny bit of baby fat that had remained. And his eyes—ah, his eyes. So pure. So unclouded.

The physical was only the first change, however. What concerned Shen Yu was his soul. Rou’s soul had transmuted the most during Shen Yu’s absence. He could feel Rou’s nature. When Shen Yu had left, Rou’s cultivation had been completely undefined; a foundation without anything built atop it.

Now, little Rou had built upon his foundation a mountain—unshrouded by mist and covered in verdant green. A towering, mighty thing. Steadfast, yet full of life and brimming with vitality.

Shen Yu wanted to inspect deeper. To look upon what his grandson had built, celebrate its power, and give guidance where he saw flaws. He had been looking forward to that moment since the day he had found Rou, to test what Rou would make of himself.. He wanted to see the roots of Rou’s power even as the mountain slowly dissipated, becoming one with the world around them. As Lui Ri had said, his was a quiet, subtle power unless roused.

But etiquette demanded he desist. It would be rude to push further into Rou’s soul with his own to discover his secrets. Perhaps Rou would tolerate it because of their past relationship, but today Shen Yu would not push his luck. He did not wish to add to his ledger such an intrusion when he still had to seek forgiveness for his failure. He was not so naive to think that Rou would ever forgive him completely, for leaving him at the tender mercies of that little worm.

Shen Yu felt relief that Rou’s eyes still sparked. His soul felt uncorrupted. There were tastes of things he was not fond of. What felt like metal, welding things together. Old damage that made Shen Yu grimace internally… and the taste of something that was not Rou. Something familiar yet alien, like an ancestor guardian spirit that some cultivators had.

A handhold that stifled their growth, a poison pill that gave them power at the cost of their own might.

It could all wait, none of it was urgent nor dangerous to him.

Just as he examined Rou, he could feel the boy was examining him in return. His eyes landed on the bandages around Shen Yu’s arm and the clothes he was wearing. Rou’s Qi surrounded Shen Yu, feeling almost suspicious. Probing gently and poking slightly harder than necessary.

Shen Yu tolerated it without rebuke, and after a long moment Rou cocked his head to the side. The entire world seemed to sigh as if it had held a breath until that moment. The sound of birds returned; the trees began once more waving in the returned wind. And the earth below his feet seemed to accept him, albeit grudgingly.

The silence stretched between them. Shen Yu was one who could march fearlessly ahead into grave danger but for the first time in a long time he hesitated, unsure exactly what to say.

What could he say? What could he say to a boy who likely felt like he had been completely abandoned in a viper’s den? Who had trusted Shen Yu and his judgment, only to have that trust betrayed.

Eventually, it was not Shen Yu who spoke, but Rou.

“It's been a while, Old Man.” The words were heavy and filled with things unsaid. Shen Yu closed his eyes at them, unable to look Rou in the eyes.

“Indeed it has, little Rou.” Shen Yu replied, his words equally as heavy. He allowed his true emotions to leak into them. His regret. His fury. His sorrow.

They paused again, the heavy mood not dissipating in the slightest.

“...You didn’t let me say a proper goodbye, you know? You just told me to go to the Cloudy Sword Sect and disappeared. I thought that you would be gone forever. I didn’t even know if you were alive until you sent me that letter.” Rou’s voice was calm, distant and matter of fact as he delivered those words to Shen Yu.

Each word hurt, because it was warranted. A rebuke well earned, yet gratifying in equal measure, because Rou had been thinking of him. He still cared for Shen Yu.

The man who stood near the pinnacle of the world disliked admitting he was wrong… and hated even more apologizing. But he was no fool nor was he so blind as to let his pride lead him.

So, Shen Yu lowered his head.

“I am sorry for leaving you like that, little Rou. If the request was not what it was… I would have ignored it. I would have cast it into the fire and not thought twice about it.” Shen Yu returned. “But… I had to. It was a call that I could not refuse. So I sent you to what I thought to be the safest place in this world for you.”

Rou took a sharp breath. His brow furrowed, but no explosion of rage followed. No anger or frustration.

Instead, little Rou let out his breath with a sigh and looked towards the heavens.

“...I don’t blame you.” Rou finally said, and Shen Yu’s heart seized at the statement. “It isn’t your fault that somebody else hurt me. And… we all have things that we don’t want to do, but must.”

Shen Yu froze at the words. At the depth of understanding, contained within.

What had he gone through in a mere few years, to know without explanation? To have the trappings of duty around him, like the mountain of his Qi?

“You’ve grown, little Rou.” Shen Yu whispered.

“I’ve had to,” was his reply.

Little Rou had grown without him.

He had grown into a man and bitter regret at missing that growth mixed with pride that he had survived. His son had never understood.

The young man before him was calm. In control. He was illuminated by dappled sunlight as he turned his green eyes back to Shen Yu.

And a small smile once more found itself on his face. “It really is good to see you, Gramps.” Rou said as he started to walk forwards and opened his arms.

An embrace. Something rarely done between men. It left you too open.

“It's good to see you too, my boy.”

Shen Yu stepped forward and wrapped his arms around Rou. Their hands thumped on each other's backs.

Rou was taller than him. Wider than him. More solid. It was not the body that Shen Yu had recommended he refine but he could not deny that it seemed to suit him like his freckles and his smile, as he pulled back.

Things were not mended. Not yet. But it was a start. Far more than Shen Yu had hoped for.

“Look at you, little Rou. I remember when you were this tall!” Shen Yu exclaimed as he held his hand down to half the boy’s height. Rou chuckled. His muscles flexed and he brought one arm up, showing off a bulging bicep.

“I always eat my meat and veggies.” He replied good-naturedly. “And I've been eating real well since I’ve left the sect.”

“Indeed. Your letter said as such and also said something about a woman!” Shen Yu dug his elbow into Rou’s side and his eyebrows waggled.

“Yeah! I, uh… Kinda got married.”

“You’re supposed to ask for your Grandfather’s permission! But I’ll allow it at this time!” Shen Yui said. “Your next woman and her father can come and kowtow before me!”

Rou flushed slightly and looked away before his face twisted slightly and he scratched his head. “Well… Let's stop standing around in the middle of the forest. Let me show you everything that I’ve built… and well, reassure the people back home. It was kinda a dick move, old man, flaring your Qi like that. Scared the piss out of us!”

Shen Yu had the grace to be slightly embarrassed. Indeed, coming so close to Rou’s home like that was terribly uncouth.

“It's just as well I have gifts! I’ll apologise to your wife for any distress I've caused her!”

If she was up to his standards, of course.

Rou shook his head and began to lead them back through the forest at a more sedate pace.

“And Rou?”

“Yeah?”

“I will explain to you everything I can. My word on it.”

Rou smiled. “Seems we both got stories to trade.”

“But first! It was quite an adventure to get to you, little Rou! Let me tell you a tale of my travels—and of the beauties I laid eyes upon!”

Rou rolled his eyes, but his smile widened.

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They walked as mortals for around half of an hour, and Shen Yu relayed the highlights of the trip to Rou. The parts he had liked… or at least tolerated when the boy Lu Ri had been in his care.

“And then, Lu Ri says, “Indeed, these were ladies of utmost skill!” That man! I dare say his stools are composed of diamonds!”

Rou’s laugh echoed through the forest.

“Come on, Senior Brother isn’t that bad.” Rou took a swig from the bottle Shen Yu had offered him and then glared at the wine. “Are you sure this isn’t horse piss, old man?”

“How dare you! It's the finest wine from Raging Waterfall Gorge!”

“I don’t believe you.” Rou deadpanned and shoved the bottle back at him.

Shen Yu took the bottle back. “Then you get me a better drink!” he demanded.

“Oh? I think I might just.” Rou said, a hint of challenge in his voice.

Shen Yu raised an eyebrow, but let the challenge go as they continued their walk. They walked side by side, like how they used to, when they roamed Crimson Crucible City.

In his mind, Shen Yu contrasted little Rou stalking resolutely forwards with a scowl on his face with the centered man before him.

The little smile wouldn’t leave Shen Yu’s lips.

They traveled until they came to a fence with an open gate. A wooden, rustic thing, with two signs upon it. One was of a maple leaf of some kind. Spikier than Shen Yu was used to and the other declared ‘Beware of Chicken’.

It would have been an utterly absurd sign, in any other case. Except that there was a magnificent red rooster perched atop the fence right by the sign.

The chicken moved faster than a mortal eye could track. Shen Yu watched with amusement as the creature landed in front of Rou.

It was one thing to be told that there was a Profound-level chicken in service to Rou. It was quite enough to see one.

“Master, you are well?” The rooster boomed, bowing low to Rou. Utter respect and deference was in the cock’s body, even as one gimlet eye fixed on Shen Yu. “We received your reassurances, but…”

The old Expert’s eyebrow rose.

Now that… that was a rarity indeed. In all Shen Yu’s life, he had never seen a chicken as powerful or able in his life; and he had supped on the fruits of Shou Taihan’s labours. The mad man who had created artificial spirit beasts although the experiment had proved unfeasible, the creatures required too many resources put into them.

Yet here, in this Qi desert, was a chicken with a solid foundation and the bearing of a true cultivator. The beast’s body and mind were clearly refined in battle. He was a naked blade as he observed Shen Yu. In this morsel, that looked to be fit only for a pot, Shen Yu saw skill and understanding eclipsing humans of the same level.

It was utterly fascinating. He knew not what Rou was doing, cultivating this creature, but he hoped to find out in the future.

“Yeah. I’m fine.” Rou told the chicken gently, like a father comforting a child. “You remember how I told you about Gramps? Well… this is the old man.”

Shen Yu’s smile widened at the simple title that Rou had called him by. Rou… Rou had never exactly figured out who Shen Yu was… and it was better that way.

What surprised Shen Yu, however, was what the rooster did next.

“Fa Bi De pays his respects to Grandfather.” The rooster intoned, sweeping into a picture perfect bow. A martial salute of unparalleled quality.

If Shen Yu had to say it… it was one of the finest and most honestly admirable bows he had ever received.

And it was from a Spirit Beast his grandson had raised.

His smile widened further.

“Oho? You’re a polite creature, are you not?”

“To be polite costs one nothing. To be impolite has the potential to cost one everything.” The rooster replied as it rose from its bow.

Wisdom from a rooster. Shen Yu had lived a long life and yet even to a man as old as him this was a new level of bizarre.

“There are others, are there not… a sibling? A niece? A Rou Tigu?” Shen Yu asked Rou pointedly.

Little Rou nodded. “I’ll explain everything when we meet everybody.” he said as he waved his hand, leading the way forward past the gate. The rooster leapt to his shoulder, though he kept glancing back at Shen Yu. “Come on in, old man.”

Shen Yu took a swig from his wine and entered the gate.

It was like getting punched in the nose.

It turned from day to night. From desert, to lush forest. From a barren waste, to Qi.

A shimmering, scintillating jewel. An oasis that would not be out of place in the wider world. He could feel the power here. The sublime peace and the near miasma of Qi that rose from the ground, utterly perfect for cultivation.

Shen Yu lapsed into silence as they crested the hill and Rou paused. Paused as he stared out over rice paddies, freshly sown fields, and gentle rolling hills.

There was in the distance a manor house, on an island between two rivers. A great barn rose up nearby, with cows and sheep gamboling around it. He could hear the sound of a crashing drop hammer, and along one of the paths lay a building that glimmered faintly in the sunlight made entirely of glass. In the saturated, waving flowers, a bee, thick with Qi, locked its compound eyes onto Shen Yu, as did thirty of its siblings before dismissing him.

“This was all rocks and dead trees two years ago.” Rou said wistfully. “I’d like to think I did a good job, eh?

“You built this?”

“With my own two hands… well, and with help,” he said with a smile, glancing at the rooster.

Shen Yu stared at the world around him. The colours were brighter. The sky was bluer.

Little Rou had found a… No. Crafted an oasis in a desert… Built a place to call his own.

Shen Yu kept walking, staring around at this farm that was not just a farm. At the fields, packed with Qi. At the presence of the earth and sky. Some of his wounds twitched—the slight amounts of demonic poison within being burned away simply from being in this place.

He took a breath. The easiest breath he had taken since he set foot in the Azure Hills.

“There's everybody waiting for us.” Rou said. “Come on, I’ll introduce you.”

Shen Yu, entranced by the sky above, returned his gaze to the earth once more.

His eyes locked onto the assembled members of Rou’s household who waited for them before the manor house. They waited patiently to present themselves. With them was a tanned, rustic looking girl, who had a resemblance to Rou. Beside her were lined up a row of Spirit Beasts: A rat, two pigs, a rabbit, a snake, a monkey, and an ox. Shen Yu nearly had to double take at the presence of the dragon, the beast nodding its head at Rou.

A dragon. Unharvested. Just what was going on here?

There were cultivators here as well as a mortal. Two men, who looked to be brothers. A woman, most assuredly a Young Mistress of some sect, stood at attention with them, too close to the monkey-ish boy to be Rou’s woman. There was a rather fetching mortal woman and a boy, both the furthest away from the center. Those who had likely sworn themselves into his service, and Shen Yu felt a spike of pride at that. Obtaining fealty from others already was he?

But they were weak, and so Shen Yu dismissed them. Instead, he looked towards the center of the formation.

His eyes ghosted over the freckled maid, who was staring at Shen Yu with mild distaste, her eyes sharp and narrow. He locked on to the other woman, standing at the ready, with swords floating around her.

This… this had to be Rou’s woman.

Shen Yu had met a great many beauties in his life—and Rou’s woman? It was no wonder she had captured him so utterly. She was truly a stunning beauty, even amongst the women Shen Yu had seen in his time.

A noble face, with plump red lips. Creamy white skin that held a slight, inviting flush. The hint of gold makeup around crystal blue eyes, as pure as the sky. A body that was lush in all the right places— or down right decadent, in the case of her chest.

For her cultivation, in the Profound Realm… She was the most beautiful woman he had ever encountered. There was no fey, ethereal allure. Her body was yet to be refined, and already she was at this level.

If she wasn’t Rou’s…

“It's okay, everybody. Sorry for the scare. But this… this is my grandfather. He's come to visit.”

Noises of surprise abounded.

“Indeed. I am Shen Yu.” He said, his eyes still on the beautiful woman. “So, you’re Rou’s… wife, eh?” he asked her, as he looked her up and down. “Not bad, boy!”

Everybody else twitched, and the beautiful fairy flinched. The one beside her cleared her throat.

His eyes turned from the great beauty to the little blemished thing, who did, on second glance, have a fantastic set of hips.

”Welcome to our home, Honoured Grandfather. This one is Hong Meiling.” She said gracefully. “Wife of Rou Jin.”

Huh.

“Rou, a wife and Mistress already?” He demanded, staring at his grandson with pride.

Rou hesitated.

“Not quite yet.” ‘Meiling’ replied under her mouth, before she reailised what she had said.

The beautiful fairy’s face turned crimson.

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The first of Shen Yu's return!

Editors: Massgamer, Brandon “Philosophysics” Zhang-Leong, Oshi

Comments

Summercat

Hah! How amusing that Gramps got it wrong just like everyone else :3

TwoSpeeds

Well then, that settles it- Gramps is gonna wake up looking like Papa Smurf.

SHADOUX9

HHhhahahahaha Boy I tell you huat, people mistaking Mei for a servant is hilarious every.single.time.

Nicholas Pankratz

“Gramps’ foot, meet your mouth. They’re gonna get reeeeeeeaaaal acquainted with one another here on Fa Ram” haha 😂

6ixfingers

Gramps, better put some respect on Mei name.

Kyfe

I find it funny that Meiling is still actively trying to build a harem for RJ. Puts little twist on expectations from us "normal" readers.

RJKY

Meiling is Gramps Mood Kindred, she truly is a Dirty Old Man.

Rodney

It ain't Jins harem, it's meis

Teh One & TrueTabi

Ah, so short, so sweet. I am like a man dying of thirst, sipping at these drops of water… Wait! Li Ru is still waiting for Shen Yu!

Kurohyo

whelp, gramps has joined the merchants

Wyatt

Gramps gonna be all meh until she fixes his demonic poison. Then he too will bow before the great healing sage!

Chad Champion

Oh no. Gramps. What have you done!? Your fate is sealed now…

AlbusScitus

"There was a rather fetching mortal woman and a boy, both the furthest away from the center." Who is this? Is Nezan managing to fool Gramps into thinking she's a mortal?

matticide FOWD

Beautifully poignant and wholesome in all the right ways, I got chills. It hit every note that the past few chapters were building up to and was just, so satisfying. I was totally lowkey "lulz it'd be funny if" expecting it but it still got me and I let out a belly deep guffaw when he thought xiulan was waifu. The first half though, when Jin had been shown to just have let go in a good way of the past and grown stronger and he didn't angst gramps about it was just "mwah" totally perfect. It really shows his level of power & degree of personal growth to be able to move on with a pure heart despite the original bullshit and the dark obstacles along the way.

Dion

I notice gramps did not properly greet Big D :C

Dwayne Parker

Keep shooting for the stars, MeiMei.

matticide FOWD

Every time I think of beware of chicken or fa ram I get in my head that song that is like "ooh heaven is a place on earth"

StarBat

Maaaaan. This is honestly the best we could hope for. Still pretty painful though.

Chimera80

Oho! He’s missed Nezan, and hasn’t noticed Tigu’s nature. Very odd that he missed Meiling’s cultivation status, though? I mean, it’s a quality he’s explicitly checking for at this moment in time. Is her Healing Qi so different he didn’t see it? For someone who brags “Little could be hidden from his gaze”, he ain’t doing so great 😂 He *did* pick up on Jin’s dual nature, though. This should be interesting

Johnnieholic

Great chapter. Possible correction from at the end, “under her mouth” to “under her breath”

Sam

"A handhold that stifled their growth, a poison pill that gave them power at the cost of their own might." Gramps is not going to be happy about Tianlan and the Path of Shennong.

Kat

🤦‍♀️ Gramps! 😂

Paul S.

Everyone makes that mistake assuming Xiulan is Jin's wife, but I'm a little surprised at Meiling's last comment there. I know she is always joking about getting Xiulan in bed for a threesome, but is she really joking at this point? In my experience, people don't joke about that kind of thing unless they are half serious (like, take it as a joke if you don't want it, but feel free to take me up on the offer as well).

Artman

From the look Jin gave Gramps I’m looking forward to the breaking out of the Empresses Mead. I foresee a rendition of the Brothel Madam and the Donkey.

carebear90

I'm kinda looking forward to Gramps' reaction to the whole refusal to become Emperor of the Azure Hills thing. At least I think that Jin means to tell him the WHOLE story? I honestly have no idea how he will take that whole thing.

Michael Fannon

So am I reading too much into lanlan blushing, or is she channeling her ancestors here?

D J Meigs

Gramps do not harvest our dragon! Do you know how much time cleaning dishes for all these people would take without him?

Ben

I'm so happy that this is finally happening God I hope he stays a whole year I want to see his reaction to ha qi and the general

SoralTheSol

The thing is, Meiling and Shen Yu are going to get on like a house on fire.

Jordan Jones

Making the choice of Jin’s monogamy ultimately up to Meiling is just smart writing. I happen to like that Jin sticks to his principles, but Jin isn’t just Jin, he’s also Rou, who is open to expanding their family in more than one way. If Meiling also pushes him in that direction he doesn’t have a chance. That said, I like that Jin’s monogamy is important to him, but if Meimei wants more...I feel like he will bend.

NoAriGuy

Its going to interesting to how gramps deals with the fact Jin hs decided on the path of shennong, and not the path of an immortal

Thunderhoof

Man, can't wait for the next chapter. Is there a tier to see the future??

Alex McGregor

So... am I the only one who thinks The Emperor may have something similar to Jin's setup, considering it was said he'd only be able to match his predecessors at the capitol, if someone else brought it up, my bad, don't exactly come back to read the comments on these /laugh

Joe

"A rat, two pigs, a rabbit, a snake, a monkey, and an ox." - I mean, when you put it like that...how did I not see this before?! (Guess we're only missing a horse? Tiger, Dragon, Cockerel are main characters. Dog has popped up elsewhere and sheep sort of already accounted for in the farm)

Guy L.

I am loving this so much. My favourite chapters since the battle of dueling peaks.

Memememe

What Meimei is doing to Lanlan is less gay chicken and more gay drifting around Lanlan in a souped up Honda Civic.

Drakenclaw

“Not quite yet.” ‘Meiling’ replied under her mouth, before she reailised what she had said. Ah Meiling, you dirty old man.

BargleNawdleZouss

I am imagining that in the meantime, back at Verdant Hill, Lu Ri has made the acquaintance of The Lord Magistrate, and they are enjoying a fascinating discussion on governing and the post office project.

Crazynorse

Pretty Sure Meiling doesn't get offended anymore, she has pointed out earlier that shes pretty much gotten used to mistaken for the maid by now (she even understands why).

Justin Ingram

Thanks for the chapter! That was a great introduction and now for the meeting. Also wonder if his nights with the trade company girl will come up?

ericksond

As I predicted, but definitely well executed, Master Wordsmith. Every layer of worrisome thoughts of Gramps getting peeled off is a relief.

Chimera80

“And I've been eating real well since I’ve left the sect.” => “since I left the sect” “One was of a maple leaf of some kind. Spikier than Shen Yu was used to and the other declared ‘Beware of Chicken’.” => these two sentences are divided in a weird place - the leaf and the spiky should be together, since one refers to the other. Perhaps “One was of a maple leaf of some kind, spikier than Shen Yu was used to. The other declared ‘Beware of Chicken’.” “It was one thing to be told that there was a Profound-level chicken in service to Rou. It was quite enough to see one.” => “quite another” (as in ‘one thing’/‘quite another thing’). Also, either “to see it” or “to see it for himself”. “To see one” is usually used when the viewer has been told about something that exists in multiples (“it was one thing to be told there were purple echidnas, it was quite another to see one”). “See it” is used when referring to a specific individual or to an overall situation “In all Shen Yu’s life, he had never seen a chicken as powerful or able in his life” => “in [Shen Yu’s] life” is repeated here. Perhaps “a chicken as powerful or able as this one” “There were cultivators here as well as a mortal.” => “As well as mortals”. There are at least two mortals present (Meihua and Bowu). In Shen Yu’s perception, three (as he mistakes Meiling for a maid) “Not quite yet.” ‘Meiling’ replied under her mouth” => “under her breath”

Daniel

Jin should totally just say Lanlan is more Meiling's mistress than his!

Fritsco

Aaaahhh, I need more. Right damn now! So, so good!

taukid

Oh no, the 2 dirty old men in this story have met...

Yanni

I think I’ve reread this chapter like 5 times already. The interaction between Jin, Shen Yu and Bi Di is a very compelling read.

nemo1986

I look forward to Shen Yu's reaction Jin has married a budding poison mistress.

Jacob Roy

I like that meimei lanlan joke but at this point it just seems like she is serious, and i hope you don't go that way with it. It feels to me like it would undermine meimei and Jin's relationship to have had meimei just openly seriously flirting with another character all this time

V01D

Sounds like it’s going to be MEILING who seduces Xulian. (Kind of reminds me of the story ‘my former Succubus’, over on McStories

HawkwardEgal

It looks like Meiling is the one building her own harem. And honestly, that's a-okay! An excellent subversion of the trope! Loving the interactions between Gramps, Jin and Bi De! I was honestly a little worried about how he'd react. Now I'm more worried about the demonic poison still in his body. Thank god just being at Fa Ram seems to be helping! Edit: I was re-reading Gramps' entire journey and realized that CF perfectly managed to instill, at least in this reader, the sort of low buzzing anxiety felt when seeing a much-loved relative for the first time in a long time. Now that most of the worry's past, I realized that the sort of rumination over "will Gramps approve of Jin's work", "will Gramps be okay with all of the Spirit Beasts" and the like are the same sort of worries I used to have when seeing my own Grandma after a while. And the way the posts were spaced out over about a week really emulates real life. If this was intentional, CF you are a genius. It'll just be a shame that this sort of buildup will be lost when it's turned into a book.

mag28

I might be wrong but I feel like lanlan is gonna end up with Gou

Jojiro

"A dragon. Unharvested." It's sentences like this that keep my anxiety up. Also, not that it's surprising at all, but holy hell is Grandpa a creep.

peak

most xianxia mc are creeps, and gramps was certainly one

jeffrey niski

Gramps better get his shit straight. Would be real bad if jin had to smack him around a bit.

Ryan Naquin

Im looking forward to Meimei demanding to treat gramps' wounds, him insisting there is nothing to be done, then Meimei just embarrassing the best healers in the empire.

BargleNawdleZouss

Wait a minute...they didn't introduce Shen Yu to Baby Rou yet. I anticipate quite the (admittedly old-school and chauvinistic) explosion of reproductive pride when they meet!

Chevron8

CasualFarmer, was it intentional for Gramps to introduce himself using his real name here? I guess Jin already knew gramps real name, he just doest use it? Because while young Jin may not have immediately connected his gramps to a 1000 year old legendary hero, Fa Ram has some smart people around and it strains credibility that not one of them will make the connection once they know how strong Gramps is.

Matt Schmauss

The question I have is if Gramps sticks around a while, does he mellow out and become more accepting in general. Its seems that anyone that comes to the farm changes for the better.

Vladerag

I can't understand all the Gramps hate. This story has well established that Spirit Beasts are commonly perceived as both rare and rarely nonviolent. Given that the vast majority of people are not cultivators, even relatively minor Spirit Beasts can cause vast destruction, so when you add the ability to gain from eating them it only makes sense to at least consider killing and eating any you come across. Is he kind of creepy for how he thinks about Meiling and Cai Xiulan? Perhaps, but that is what everyone thinks of them! People have confused Meiling for a maid and Cai Xiulan for his wife several times. Is he perfect? No, but he is hardly some monster.

SuperiorFreak

Loved it. Shen Yu’s characterization was perfect in my opinion. He is a living legend, the fact that he is as “normal” as he is should be celebrated lol. The truly powerful cultivators tend to almost become inhuman, but he has clung to his humanity well.

Imhotep

Wait....who is the other woman. There is Tigu, a mortal woman with the boy; a young mistress with the brothers and two women (his wife and the Orchid). Anyone know the other woman is? (Is it the other girlfriend of the brothers - the one who wears glasses? Did she come to visit?)

Eric Manwill

Get used to it, Fa Ram. Strangers' mistaken impression of Xiulan being the wife are probably going to continue until the end of days.

Imnebel

As probably expected, Tomorrow

Christine Thomas

So I am only asking one thing, please do not add a harem element to the story. I really enjoy this story but hate it when there is a harem element! In my opinion it just ruins everything.

paul Emmer

I see nothing wrong with it as long as it is done right but I will be fine either way it's to small of a factor to fuss over in a story such as this

Gremlin

Well since every one seems to be weighing in on poly or not. Heres my wish, continue the teasing for longer but the joke needs a punhline/end. Im happy to be surprised but a poly would be just as fine by me. I am an avid reader and enjoy leaving my baggage as I open a book. I am sort of hoping for a three way relationship but not invested. Especially because I dislike the vibe Im getting that people are trying to direct the story. I love Casuals story telling. I trust his judgement and dont think it would improve by being written by vote.

Christine Thomas

You know what was also interesting was the relationship of gramps with the emperor. Almost feels as if the emperor might visit or they might end up going to meet him. And you always wonder where some of gold rated rice and maple syrup ends up.

Laudable Effort

I don't get all the harem talk in the comments. At no point has Jin ever seemed remotely interested in the idea, and doing it just because Meiling wants to bang someone else is not a relationship. To go this long without falling prey to overused and poorly thought out tropes, I can't see Farmer suddenly tripping up here.

Donmalurkin

Say, with those memory crystals. Could Washie record a memory of him jumping over the dragon gate and pranking that immortal fishing for dragons?

paul Emmer

So is next week a rest week

Marc Cook

I hope not I need more!

ARSLOTHES

Gramps is gonna return with lots of souvenirs and knows where to get the best stuff from now on

Nemo

I can't believe it has taken me this long to think of it, but the setup of this whole story is quite well done. It allows for the convenience of every potentially dangerous cultivator (Lu Ri/ Shen Yu/ maybe Elder Ge) to feel somewhat in Jin's debt. It keeps things from escalating due to rushed decisions and bad communication. If Shen Yu wasnt feeling guilty, he might already be planning to eat Bi De. This way he is forced to actually listen to Jin's intentions.

paul Emmer

Annoyed, I have a need to read ,hopefully soon , but I will reluctantly survive if need be ; but I so want it now LOL

paul Emmer

So I realized writing can be tough at times and quality is first but it's a little late on Sunday and no word a what is going on even if it maybe tomorrow some communication would be appreciated Hopefully nothing bad has happened

AG

hey guys there was this storm in Canada recently that knocked out the power in several different areas, maybe the reason Casual hasn't uploaded anything is because of a blackout

paul Emmer

Thanks for the info 👍

KRY

"Yet?" What the fuck meimei

Alex

I really hope the yet was sarcasm. Please please please do not let this become a harem story. I don't care who xiulan ends up with as long as it's not Jin.

M0och

3 short of a full zodiac. Just Horse, Sheep, and Dog to go

Zoidberg’s Anchovies

I feel like they could get away with the multiple wives thing because of the “cultural differences” although I think Jin and Jou might argue about the ethics of it. The “before” clashing with norm of xia xia land.