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A/N: Jon arrives in King’s Landing~

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thevolunteer

Nothing about the Arya situation makes sense. Arya pulling this shit when she was 9 or 11 might have made more sense, but years on? What is she, 14, 15? I don’t think she’d be that naive or stupid. Also, if Arya disappeared the same time Jon left Winterfell, a raven would have been sent to Wyman letting him know to check Jon’s luggage. Then, she doesn’t reveal herself to Jon the entire journey. Why? What purpose does that serve, it’s not like Jon can afford to turn around and take her home.

Upset B

Teenagers running away has been a thing forever now. Not saying you're making bad points or anything but just remember that this is a girl that's been left alone against her enemies(all womanly things) for years now. I can see her doing something stupid easily. Now them not guessing where she went and sending a raven is kinda iffy but there could be any kinda background stuff going on at the moment honestly.

Chainsword83

Remember that with Sansa gone and married, Arya has NO defense or distraction against her near rabid mother and Septa Mordane. Even when Jon arrives at Winterfell, Arya complains about her mother being worse than ever. She, much like the Free Folk, are DESPERATE to escape.

Chainsword83

Mmmmmm, very nice. I very much look forward to that spar; maybe Jon will be able to surprise Axel with his tricks. But regardless, Axel will get a firm sense of who Jon is. Might even ask the Night's Watch to make Jon the official envoy from the Watch to the Iron Throne. I wonder what Axel is plotting concerning the Free Folk. But considering his record with the Mountain Clans, I could see him cowing the Wildling Clans and letting them in so long as they're clear that HE is in charge; they don't have to kneel, just not fuck around in his backyard.

Lord Sesshomaru

I'll never stop loving Jon and Arya's interactions ❤️. My heart still aches seeing Jon in the Night's Watch 💔. But I guess when the Great Other dies, there'll be no need for the Night's Watch anymore, right? 😬 (It may still be a "penal colony," but whoever volunteered and fought for the living, why can't they get their freedom? 😌) First meeting between Axel and Jon 🙏🏻. Give Jon a gamma ray shot if you want him to duel Axel 😂

Sith2go

I feel like what Dorne is doing is a major breach of guest rights, which is more or less the most sacred and universally agreed upon rule in Westeros.

Cambrian

Nah, Guest Rites specifically involves the sharing of salt and bread. So long as they don't actually exchange in person guest rites before attacking Daenerys' fleet, there's no breaching of such a thing. What Dorne is doing is still underhanded and cunty, but pretty much expected of Dorne.

Sith2go

Fair enough, Dorne and the Frey are generally held to a significantly lower standard of morality than everyone else.

thevolunteer

Dorne doesn’t even care about killing those under a parley. They ambushed the Young Dragon while meeting for peace.

Potato

Noice

redhawktiger

Well, this is the setup for some exciting chapters. Im looking forward to the next

Suika Nine

Axel: You need not kneel. But remember, I can fly, so I will ALWAYS be above you.

Boyo

Axel cant stop winning. All of these calamitous threats are stacking one after another, and the king cant be happier. He is going to have so much fun against these unique foes.

Sammy the Shark

Underhanded and Cunty: A Treatise on Donte’s diplomacy through the ages

Alun Lewis

While I'm glad that Axel has a good opinion of Jon (Snow), I do wonder how much of his opinion will change if Jon's true birthright ever comes to light...especially since Jon's aunt is coming at the head of an army set to invade Westeros to reseat House Targaryen on the Iron Throne. Yeah, he's been raised as his Northern Queen's bastard half-brother...but he IS the legal heir to the throne Axel's dad usurped after being part of a rebellion against Jon's insane grandfather. Axel was OK with leaving Daenerys be in Essos when he first ascended the throne...but that doesn't meant he wasn't sold on Robert's obsession with ending the Targaryen bloodline if it posed a threat, by someone like Jon Arryn.

Chainsword83

Free Folk: You know what? Fair enough. Let's get drunk, fight some, then fuck our respective women. Axel: You're speaking my language.