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A/N: The night before the duel, Melisandre comes to Daenerys with answers~

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Google Doc Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GD5sHEaXkRDZo9rljGi6-jt8mHISF2jjiM8s_ya3hzo/edit?tab=t.0

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SquiddlyWinks

This FYREDAY, on Pay-To-View, llllLLLLETS GET READY TO RUMMBLLLE

bfoolforty

Too many delusional Dany chapters. Just get rid of her already.

JohnnyWallpaper

Something truly unprecedented has to happen at that duel in order for me to believe Daenerys would actually give up at this point. She's so determined to reach the Iron Throne that I can't really see her becoming a romantic interest.

Magnus

Time for the Fool Queen to die.

SquiddlyWinks

FIGHTING out of Dragonstone and Standing at 5’4” 155lbs of batshit crazy unresolved Trauma, with 9000 lbs of Tartare that doesn’t know it yet, the One, the Only, Daeneryyyyysss, STORRRRMMMMBOOORRRNNNN

Alun Lewis

Holy shit...I thought Melissandre was going to harm or kill the Seaworths or Missandrei and attempt to frame it on Axel as her fuck up that toppled her house of cards and revealed her machinations. But attempting to trick Dany into sacrificing her dragons to gain their power?! The Red Priestess truly fornicated the direwolf...and got her comeuppance. Though I'm surprised that Drogon would consider the charred remains appetizing 😵

SquiddlyWinks

And in the blue corner, FIGHTING out of King’s Landing standing at 6’6” and 325 lb, the One Reborn In Flames, the Demon of Demons, the Krakenslapper Supreme, the Champion of the Seven, the Reason we Read, THE LIGHT OF THE SUN GIVEN FORM, YOUR KING, AaaxelllllLLL BARATHEON!!!

Munsu

Good riddance to bad rubbish.

Sith2go

One day until Dany either commits suicide by attempted regicide, or she gets her dragons a new step-dad.

Volodya

Melisandre gets what she deserves, looking forward to how you resolve this duel.

JustAFan

Queen 3, white hair all colors of the female spectrum impregnated 🔥

Z-borb

"push your towards your destiny" I think you mean "push 'you' towards your deastiny"

Chainsword83

Well yes, but no. Time for her FOOLISHNESS to die after Axel beats it out of her.

Chainsword83

Not happening according to WoG. Resign yourself to that my friend.

Ofunu

We were on the verge of greatness. She killed the puppeteer but she remains the deluded puppet.

Chainsword83

Dany: ...Where is that voice coming from, why are there seats like at a tourney crowded with Smallfolk, and why are they booing ME?

SpankMyBeef

Maaaaaaan, I assume the dragons plus her will do a lot of damage to Axel, but I can’t wait for Axel to absolutely waffle stomp her

SquiddlyWinks

“Am I….out of touch? No. Clearly it is the Smallfolk who are being forced to boo me for fear of what the terrible bad man will do to them… even though all my information about him is from someone I just executed for misleading me…” “…” “WELL NOT GONNA THINK ABOUT THAT ANYMORE”

Chainsword83

Drogon, no! Spit that out, you'll get food poisoning!

Chainsword83

Patience, my friend. This was merely the first step. I have full faith in Cam managing a satisfying resolution to Dany having reality choke-slammed into her.

Alun Lewis

155lbs at 5'4"...did Dany keep her baby weight or something? Or did I miss the memo that this version of Daenerys is built like a brick shithouse?

Chainsword83

DING DONG THE BITCH IS DEAD!!! Which old bitch?! The Red Old Bitch! Ding dong the wicked bitch is dead! Ahhhh, satisfying. And I find it interesting that seemingly, the deeper Dany goes into her connection with her dragons she becomes a lie detector. Might come in handy when she accuses Axel of sending Jorah after her. All that said.... I will become EXTREMELY disappointed if after that, Axel kills the dragons. I'm really pulling for him to assert dominance and once the bullshit is sorted out treat the dragons like big ol puppy dogs.

SquiddlyWinks

You and I have different understandings of what a brick shithouse is built like. 175+ of lean muscle is into the shithousery zone.

Ofunu

I would rather she just died and be done with this matter so we can proceed to killing frosty zombies.

redhawktiger

Sadly it's not the whole truth....still nice to see an end to Mellisandre's continued machinations

Surge1301

So close yet so far, the problem is she’s deluded still, she doesn’t realise that to everyone on Westeros she’s a foreign heretical monster who burns people. Plus her mother was very pious towards the 7 so that doesn’t look good for her.

pavbpabv

What will happen to the nobles who betrayed him? This is the third time.

William

What does her mother have to do with anything?

William

I did a quick check just for the record, and Emilia clarke at least, I dont know if we're using her height/weight as a baseline for this, but she's 5'2" and she was around 120ibs

Chainsword83

Good question. On the one hand, they betrayed Axel. On the other hand, they did speak up for Davos. I find myself uncertain.

Alun Lewis

Similar smackdown to House Tyrell for supporting Renly's attempted coup, maybe? It's always the argument when someone in power capitulation to an invading force...stand your ground and fight to the last or try and save lives by peacefully surrendering. Honestly, I initially thought the betrayal was part of a contingency plan from either Oleanna & Margaery or Tyene to counter any failure of the trap in Dorne...but the POV change to Axel & his ladies being all "WTF?!" squashed that theory. So now Axel will be faced with doing more house cleaning, unless there's some convoluted plan related to Dany getting wife status to make any remaining Targaryen supporters docile and unlikely to rebel.

Benjamin Floyd

You have outdone Baelish’s execution, and for that I salute you. Damn that was satisfying, I was worried she’d eliminated Missandei for a moment.

Surge1301

I guess family tradition and it looks bad to noble families when you don’t follow in your parents footsteps, combined with how hostile the 7 are to different faith, they barely tolerate the old gods so it doesn’t look good. I’m just guessing though.